Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness
Wonderful update, buddy.
It seems like Hemant and Sonarika are each battling their own inner conflicts, and there’s a storm brewing inside hemant—his past self refuses to stay buried.
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(23-06-2025, 02:25 PM)Blackdick11 Wrote: Wonderful update, buddy.
It seems like Hemant and Sonarika are each battling their own inner conflicts, and there’s a storm brewing inside hemant—his past self refuses to stay buried.

An Astute Observation. Sonarika is fighting a war of her heart and desires. Vikram is that forbidden fruit that came to her life a bit late , but since she had already tasted it , she is being tempted to make him a part of her. But choosing him means destroying her married life and wrecking the family she had built all these years. Sonarika's arc is her war for her sanity , a part of her wants to choose Vikram as her present and bind him with herself , while the other part wamts to fight back his allure and seducing energy , seeing him as an addiction that will ruin her. But then add Meghna to the twist and her own psychotic revenge and her manipulative nature and we have Sonarika fighting a loosing fight. The odds are against her but this is a battle she has to fight but who knows maybe an unlikely ally will soon come for her aid.


As for Hemant , his war is the most dangerous one. He has a past he long buried , something  none of his family knows. But just like the advices his trusted friends said , burying the past made Hemant repress himself which is why he lost himself becoming a lousy version of himself. Someone that was mocked , insulted , and an embarassment. But now , he got his awakening , not to bury , but to find closure. And to achieve that,  he has a motive , his family. By bringing closure to his past , he can finally be his own self and be true to his family. But for that to happen , for that closure , he might have to embrace his darker self. Like the great proverb goes , "If you want Peace , Prepare For War" , that is Hemant's motive , whatever his plan is , whatever his intention is , its only meant to achieve one thing , to tie up loose ends , to closure his past , to end an unfinished business so that the Legend Of Michael King can finally rest. But does fate has that in favor for him? Or will Hemant be consumed by his darkness resulting in the return of his Darker and Destrucutive Archangel. Or does the influence of Garuda mold him into something much more powerful , a blend of both past and present. Only time will tell.

Both these characters have their own conflicts , but both of them are unaware that their greatest strength is actually right before them , which is fighting together. Hemant is the best strength in Sonarika to fight her inner conflicts , while Sonarika is that perfect anchor for Hemant to not loose himself to his darkness. The question is will that happen? Or are they going to succumb to their turmoils and fall in this Age Of Darkness. WAIT AND READ! 

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Wow.. One of my fvrt story.. ?
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Dear writer plz keep some naughty stuff for Delower and rafiq with our queen senorika and loveing sistee anjali
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Fascinating Update.
NOW she’s torn in two.
one half whispers,
"hold on to what matters... your family, your vows, your identity."

the other half?
It burns.
"don’t lie to yourself. You want more. You are more. and you tasted it already."

and that’s the storm inside her...
not just a choice between two men...
but between two versions of herself.
the woman she’s always been…
and the woman she could become.

In the quiet war between her heart and desire,
sonarika knows exactly which side whisper louder in the dark.

From this point, the story seems to be heading into even more thrilling territory.
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(24-06-2025, 05:30 PM)ricah43165 Wrote: Fascinating Update.
NOW she’s torn in two.
one half whispers,
"hold on to what matters... your family, your vows, your identity."

the other half?
It burns.
"don’t lie to yourself. You want more. You are more. and you tasted it already."

and that’s the storm inside her...
not just a choice between two men...
but between two versions of herself.
the woman she’s always been…
and the woman she could become.

In the quiet war between her heart and desire,
sonarika knows exactly which side whisper louder in the dark.

From this point, the story seems to be heading into even more thrilling territory.

A Thousand Cheers To You For That Excellent Observation

You perfectly captured Sonarika's arc with these words and yes the future is uncertain.

But this is her War that she has to fight. Whatever her decision is , it will affect everyone. On top of that , she has no idea of the hidden motives behind Meghna who has a personal vendetta against her. Sonarika is unaware of her enemy , while Meghna knows what she wants.
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(24-06-2025, 06:14 PM)Harry Jordan Wrote: But this is her War that she has to fight. Whatever her decision is , it will affect everyone. On top of that , she has no idea of the hidden motives behind Meghna who has a personal vendetta against her. Sonarika is unaware of her enemy , while Meghna knows what she wants.

Bro, this meghna has a solid influence not just on Sona’s life, but also on her decisions....In such a situation, will she be able to uncover her real motive before it’s too late? 
Because now, I think she’s finally beginning to sense something—she’s low-key worried, maybe even a little suspicious, especially with the way meghna’s been acting so obsessed lately.
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(25-06-2025, 05:25 AM)ricah43165 Wrote: Bro, this meghna has a solid influence not just on Sona’s life, but also on her decisions....In such a situation, will she be able to uncover her real motive before it’s too late? 
Because now, I think she’s finally beginning to sense something—she’s low-key worried, maybe even a little suspicious, especially with the way meghna’s been acting so obsessed lately.

Sonarika is worried about Meghna because she knows some details about her not so long past. That detail will be revealed in the next chapter. As for the motive , Sonarika is oblivious , unaware. Her actions right now is in defense of her awareness of what type of a person Meghna is. Sonarika knows Meghna is a bit pushy and possessive and sometimes show pyschotic behavior , but she also believes that Meghna cares for her and she won't do any long lasting harm on Sonarika. So Sonarika's action right now is to convince Meghna that she is not serious about Vikram and that Hemant will forever be her life. But Sonarika unfortunately is unaware the real motive behind Meghna , and Meghna doesn't care Sonarika is happy or ruined with Vikram , she just wants to wreck her life for her personal revenge to Sonarika's father. She waited this long so that Sonarika builds a life of her own so she can destroy it. But the problem is Sonarika's struggle with Vikram , she is being tempted by his presence , an addiction too good to ignore , and there is no Ragini around to give her a helping hand. So this few chapters will be Sonarika's lone fight to protect her family and life against the unsuspecting Meghna and a seductive and tempting Vikram. Question is will she win this fight or will she succumb to it. Only time will tell.
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(25-06-2025, 08:09 AM)Harry Jordan Wrote: Sonarika is worried about Meghna because she knows some details about her not so long past. That detail will be revealed in the next chapter. As for the motive , Sonarika is oblivious , unaware. Her actions right now is in defense of her awareness of what type of a person Meghna is. Sonarika knows Meghna is a bit pushy and possessive and sometimes show pyschotic behavior , but she also believes that Meghna cares for her and she won't do any long lasting harm on Sonarika. So Sonarika's action right now is to convince Meghna that she is not serious about Vikram and that Hemant will forever be her life. But Sonarika unfortunately is unaware the real motive behind Meghna , and Meghna doesn't care Sonarika is happy or ruined with Vikram , she just wants to wreck her life for her personal revenge to Sonarika's father. She waited this long so that Sonarika builds a life of her own so she can destroy it. But the problem is Sonarika's struggle with Vikram , she is being tempted by his presence , an addiction too good to ignore , and there is no Ragini around to give her a helping hand. So this few chapters will be Sonarika's lone fight to protect her family and life against the unsuspecting Meghna and a seductive and tempting Vikram. Question is will she win this fight or will she succumb to it. Only time will tell.

My inner demon wishes that it would be sexy if Sonarika lost in this fight ?
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(25-06-2025, 12:18 PM)SMOD-P Wrote: My inner demon wishes that it would be sexy if Sonarika lost in this fight ?
I mean , it may or may not happen. After all the stakes are against her. The odds are against Sonarika , and she will have to fight this battle alone. Only time will tell whether she survives this battle and be with her family or succumb to it and become one with Vikram.
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First of all, I must commend you on this latest update—it’s truly captivating and brilliantly written.

I am genuinely intrigued and eagerly awaiting Hemant’s reaction upon discovering Sonarika’s infidelity.
Unlike the typical portrayals on this platform—where husbands are often shown as timid, lacking the courage to confront their unfaithful wives, or passively accepting the role of a cuckold—I firmly believe Hemant’s strength, integrity, and self-respect set him apart. His character, as you have crafted, is marked by quiet dignity, emotional intelligence, and an unwavering sense of justice.

Still, the possibility lingers that Hemant, even after learning of Sonarika and Vikram’s affair, might choose to turn a blind eye, perhaps out of deep love or misplaced hope.

Yet, I would much rather see Hemant embody true resolve—confronting Sonarika without hesitation and making decisive, bold choices, rather than succumbing to self-pity or indecision.

In fact, I would relish witnessing Hemant mete out to Sonarika the full measure of suffering she so justly deserves for her betrayal. It is only fitting that Hemant, embodying unwavering strength and moral fortitude, ensures Sonarika faces the consequences of her actions without mercy or compromise. He should not only confront her with the gravity of her deceit but also make her endure the anguish and regret that comes from losing the trust and love she so carelessly shattered.

Let Hemant’s response serve as a powerful example to all those who betray their partners, a stark reminder that infidelity carries consequences and that dignity and self-respect must always prevail. In doing so, Hemant would inspire others to stand firm against betrayal and never allow themselves to be diminished by the actions of the unfaithful.

Once again, hats off to you for your exceptional storytelling and the depth you bring to your characters. Your writing always leaves readers eagerly awaiting the next twist!

Keep rocking Harry Bro!!❤️

Best regards
Rocky❤️
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(25-06-2025, 02:27 PM)Rocky@handsome Wrote: First of all, I must commend you on this latest update—it’s truly captivating and brilliantly written.

Keep rocking Harry Bro!!❤️

Best regards
Rocky❤️

Thank you for the kind words.

            I get your take on the arc of Hemant , but you must also notice Hemant has another personal arc of his own. He has a long dark past that he is slowly building to avenge. There is a reason he is planning something big and dangerous against a certain someone because that someone has a connection to that troubled past. Hemant's backstory revelation will reveal more truth which will happen in due time because that backstory will introduce a big character that will be a big part in the overall structure of the whole saga.


    Yes , on a storyline standpoint , Hemant will be shattered when he finds out the truth , but how will he react , that only time will tell because for one thing , he has his own personal vendetta, and he also has expressed his deep love for Sonarika. Despite charming women like Tamanna and Pranitha and their close moments with him , Hemant had stayed faithful and connected to Sonarika. Hemant credits his good heart and kind nature to his relation with Sonarika , but what happens if that same Sonarika chooses a certain someone over him?

Obviously it will break him in that scenario , but what happens next. Does he fall into his own self pity? Or does he embraces his darker self and embraces his darkness? Or does Hemant embrace the words that his friends and family want for him and embrace both his past and present and become a better and stronger version of him , merging Michael and Hemant together to form a more tactical , cold blooded , ruthless individual. Whatever happens , The Age Of Darkness is clouding over them , and they will have to fight their conflicts to survive the coming War!  horseride
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Certainly Harry!!! can't agree more!!

Hemant’s character is truly enthralling—a rare amalgamation of indomitable strength, profound warmth, and a shadowed past that irresistibly captivates the soul.

His unwavering loyalty and emotional depth, entwined with his internal tumult and the encroaching “Age of Darkness,” render his odyssey nothing short of mesmerizing.

The intricate tapestry you weave for Hemant, laden with vengeance, anguish, and moral complexity, elevates his struggle far beyond the realm of Sonarika alone.

Sonarika’s journey is an intimate battle with her own fractured psyche, but Hemant’s is a monumental saga—he entrusted her with the very essence of his being, making her betrayal a cataclysm that threatens to shatter his core.

The prospect of Hemant reconciling his tormented past with his present self, forging a formidable new identity, is utterly compelling, and I eagerly await the tempest that the Age of Darkness will unleash upon these characters.


Yet, an unrelenting sense of injustice gnaws at me—should Sonarika be absolved without consequence, it would constitute a profound travesty against Hemant, a desecration of the loyalty and devotion he so unreservedly bestowed.

The emotional maelstrom ahead promises an unforgettable odyssey for the audience!!!

Best regards
Rocky ❤️
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(25-06-2025, 08:19 PM)Rocky@handsome Wrote: Certainly Harry!!! can't agree more!!



The emotional maelstrom ahead promises an unforgettable odyssey for the audience!!!

Best regards
Rocky ❤️

Nice Wordplay!  Big Grin

Regardless , I agree , like I've said before , I initially wanted Hemant and Sonarika to co-lead the story but turns out Hemant has a slight advantage over the amount of arc he brings in the story. And to me that is the interesting part with the characters. For Sonarika , its a simple arc of life choices , a struggle of her actual identity. But for Hemant , its a saga of redemption , the path to overcome a trauma. 

These two arcs will occasionally cross lines with each other and eventually it will culminate in the Part 1 Finale where judgement will be revealed. And yes , like I have said before , there will always be a consequence. Even Hemant's actions itself will be putting a lot of lives in danger. What I cannot guarantee is that will the consequence be strong? That only time will tell.

But this is a story that will soon move to a more dangerous territory and I warn the readers , many of the characters in this story , they might just not make it!

Character deaths will happen in the future , and in that regard , even the lead characters aren't safe. Anything can happen.

So the story can either go a predictable way or an unexpected twisty. Regardless , I assure all readers , you will be entertained.

The next chapter is coming up great and will feature more Sonarika so lets Wait and Read this Weekend!  Cool
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(25-06-2025, 09:00 PM)Harry Jordan Wrote: Nice Wordplay!  Big Grin

Regardless , I agree , like I've said before , I initially wanted Hemant and Sonarika to co-lead the story but turns out Hemant has a slight advantage over the amount of arc he brings in the story. And to me that is the interesting part with the characters. For Sonarika , its a simple arc of life choices , a struggle of her actual identity. But for Hemant , its a saga of redemption , the path to overcome a trauma. 

These two arcs will occasionally cross lines with each other and eventually it will culminate in the Part 1 Finale where judgement will be revealed. And yes , like I have said before , there will always be a consequence. Even Hemant's actions itself will be putting a lot of lives in danger. What I cannot guarantee is that will the consequence be strong? That only time will tell.

But this is a story that will soon move to a more dangerous territory and I warn the readers , many of the characters in this story , they might just not make it!

Character deaths will happen in the future , and in that regard , even the lead characters aren't safe. Anything can happen.

So the story can either go a predictable way or an unexpected twisty. Regardless , I assure all readers , you will be entertained.

The next chapter is coming up great and will feature more Sonarika so lets Wait and Read this Weekend!  Cool

Eagerly waiting for Rollercoaster ride !!
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Waiting for the update
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Sir, when are you gonna drop the next update?
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Waiting?
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Please update
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Waiting bro
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