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I think next step, PAtode should bring in the exhibitionst in Shipra..
Make her nude in front of others.. In open.. Let her feel the shame and humiliation..
Then she would become submissive to become nude at his command, anywhere and in front of anyone he wants..
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Shipra is just getting started on her journey in complete slutdom. Take the sex sessions to a wholly different level now, Suraj.
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Shrutika in her tight khaki uniform is not getting enough attention, she deserves a whole chapter on her own.
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update brother with hot and sex seducee and chat online what'sup
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The beauty of this story writing is people discuss character development as much as sex and erotica... Its a big compliment to author from community.
Let's not ping Suraj continuously for updates, he has been committed to the story in best way possible for him, and also wonderful updates like this will take time, thank you Suraj !!
My request: you can completely ignore it if not interested, at one point of time, make sure you make Patode and Toppo humiliated or fucked mentally by someone(pref shipra), as life fucks everyone and they should not run away with all booty . Thanks
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suraj sir tell us when will the next update comes
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Pls confirm next update release date
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I hope some writer,at least this story's writer,writes a sex scene in a car.
Dont know why no one attempts such a scenario,it is very hot.
Public,cramped space,intimate and rough.
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kuch bhi ho bas Shipra ka apna maan samman bhi hona chahiye agar wah apni harkate ek sasti (Cheap) Randi ki tarah karegi to phir story me dam hi nahi rahega..
or uska pati use chhod dega.
tab kya uske jeevan me rah jayega. or story end..... hi ho jayegi.. kyonki ek hi insaan se sex karke update boaring ho jate hai...
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Suraj bro, please check GChat message at your convenience...
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(10-05-2025, 08:43 AM)bittu0211 Wrote: The beauty of this story writing is people discuss character development as much as sex and erotica... Its a big compliment to author from community.
Let's not ping Suraj continuously for updates, he has been committed to the story in best way possible for him, and also wonderful updates like this will take time, thank you Suraj !!
My request: you can completely ignore it if not interested, at one point of time, make sure you make Patode and Toppo humiliated or fucked mentally by someone(pref shipra), as life fucks everyone and they should not run away with all booty . Thanks
I totally agree with you. The author should be allowed to tell the story as he envisioned it. I think the stories about the subjugation of Shipra are getting boring. I also agree that both Topo and Patode should be made to suffer for their actions. Suraj, you are the best, long live.
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Delay alert:
Hey guys... Thank you all for encouraging comments and support.
The story is at a crucial juncture right now and is almost 75% complete.
I had planned to give multiple updates by end of this month and speed up the story a bit but unfortunately I won't be able to do so because of unexpected circumstances that developed at work.
My job role has been changed and I am being transferred 1200km away from my present location.
This has caused a lot of inconvenience and I won't be able to able to give the next update anytime soon.
The shifting and adjusting to new location and job role is quite stressful and time taking. Hopefully by end of this month things will come back to normal. I'll keep on writing whenever I get the time but like always I cannot give you all a final deadline as of now.
I understand it's quite frustrating for a reader to reach such a thrilling part of the story and wait indefinitely for knowing the rest. I will try my best to give you all the next update as soon as possible.
Sorry for the inconvenience and thank you for all the support.
-Suraj76626
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(10-05-2025, 11:50 PM)hotandluking Wrote: I hope some writer,at least this story's writer,writes a sex scene in a car.
Dont know why no one attempts such a scenario,it is very hot.
Public,cramped space,intimate and rough.
You'll find that in the next update
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(08-05-2025, 06:35 AM)Vikramvines Wrote: First of all congratulations SURAJ to push one of his most admired reader in to despair..people read stories as there are lots of things of their interest on tht SAGA... Sorry.. but I M getting depressed after reading the last few updates.. I was expecting SHIPRA to play the role of a seductress.. But Alas! SHIPRA is continuously being broken without any reason.. Tht too on someones special request.. Shipra has became nothing but Ptodes personal whore.The only thing left is for PATODE to fuck her ass.. which he will definitely do in next few updates..I had became emotionally attached to this Story.. I used to wait for every update very eagerly.. but now i have to say with great sadness tht I am leaving this all time favourite story of mine.. Because I am tired of being disappointed over and over again.. You hv finally made SHIPRA someones personal slut.. atleast you could hv made SHO Shrutika a Seducing character..one more my heartest desire was to see Shrutika as a Seductress.. who seduce criminals for her work done with purposes... But unfortunately tht will not possible in this life span of mine..
Ok Good Bye..
Take Care...
God Bless U,
Thank you for sticking around till now my friend and,
All the best finding a story of your taste bro.
Good bye.
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(07-05-2025, 02:27 PM)Hornytamilan23 Wrote: I want to Highlight a thing for you suraj,
The success behind the story is Shipra, the way you developed her character.
So don't break her character, she likes to get fucked to orgasm, but remember patode taking videos and pictures everytime, seems a bit odd.
Is Shipra in trance state, or she is reckless? Nope I think not.
The story will be over, when Shipra starts to fuck others.. you remember the my wife with construction guys, they made her a rand in that story. And no longer people interested in that story. Hope you got the point.
The videos and pics have a purpose to play in the story.
And be assured Shipra won't become a whore like in numerous other stories.
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12-05-2025, 03:55 PM
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(12-05-2025, 02:51 PM)Suraj76626 Wrote: The videos and pics have a purpose to play in the story.
And be assured Shipra won't become a whore like in numerous other stories. Tq
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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(12-05-2025, 02:45 PM)Suraj76626 Wrote: Delay alert:
Hey guys... Thank you all for encouraging comments and support.
The story is at a crucial juncture right now and is almost 75% complete.
I had planned to give multiple updates by end of this month and speed up the story a bit but unfortunately I won't be able to do so because of unexpected circumstances that developed at work.
My job role has been changed and I am being transferred 1200km away from my present location.
This has caused a lot of inconvenience and I won't be able to able to give the next update anytime soon.
The shifting and adjusting to new location and job role is quite stressful and time taking. Hopefully by end of this month things will come back to normal. I'll keep on writing whenever I get the time but like always I cannot give you all a final deadline as of now.
I understand it's quite frustrating for a reader to reach such a thrilling part of the story and wait indefinitely for knowing the rest. I will try my best to give you all the next update as soon as possible.
Sorry for the inconvenience and thank you for all the support.
-Suraj76626
So no need to visit xosippy for next few days.... Superb....
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We will be waiting for next update Suraj.....take your time but don't leave the story without a finish....hope the waiting is not long......
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12-05-2025, 07:06 PM
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(12-05-2025, 02:46 PM)Suraj76626 Wrote: You'll find that in the next update
Thanks for that in advance.
Long Foreplay with the woman sitting halfnaked,next seat to the driver
sex in a longdrive or sex in an abandoned old house or in a remote place which can be reached by a small dirtroad.....
There are plenty of scenarios for that,dont know why other writers dont explore such ideas.
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(12-05-2025, 02:45 PM)Suraj76626 Wrote: Delay alert:
Hey guys... Thank you all for encouraging comments and support.
The story is at a crucial juncture right now and is almost 75% complete.
I had planned to give multiple updates by end of this month and speed up the story a bit but unfortunately I won't be able to do so because of unexpected circumstances that developed at work.
My job role has been changed and I am being transferred 1200km away from my present location.
This has caused a lot of inconvenience and I won't be able to able to give the next update anytime soon.
The shifting and adjusting to new location and job role is quite stressful and time taking. Hopefully by end of this month things will come back to normal. I'll keep on writing whenever I get the time but like always I cannot give you all a final deadline as of now.
I understand it's quite frustrating for a reader to reach such a thrilling part of the story and wait indefinitely for knowing the rest. I will try my best to give you all the next update as soon as possible.
Sorry for the inconvenience and thank you for all the support.
-Suraj76626 Suraj bro,
Please be connected in Xossipy and Google Chat.
It is not about update..
Every day 5/10 minutesbin Xossipy / Google Chat might help you release a little bit of work stress..
Anywaybdo what you feel better...
First get used to new kob role...
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