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07-05-2025, 02:01 PM
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(06-05-2025, 08:16 PM)Suraj76626 Wrote: We don’t want a repeat of what happened with Rakhi, do we?"
There was a momentary silence on the other end, followed by Toppo’s angry response. "Rakhi ran off only because of that hot-headed fool, Bhiva. If it weren't for him, we’d still be enjoying her. Such a nubile, obedient little bitch she was..."
Quote:“And this,” Nivedita said, stepping aside and gesturing toward Namrata, “is your maybe-soon-to-be roommate—Namrata, I told you over the phone about. I really hope you two hit it off.”
“Hi, Namrata, I am Rakhi,” she said, extending a hand in a welcoming gesture as she stepped back to let them in. “It’s nice to meet you. Come on in, make yourself at home."
Whoa! No way… Rakhi—the enigmatic figure from Toppo and Patode’s shadowy past, the very girl who once fell victim to their dirty twisted games—is now stepping into Namrata’s life as her flatmate??!! If it’s that same Rakhi, Suraj, my man, you’ve just dropped a narrative bomb out of nowhere!
This trio—Shipra, Namrata, and Rakhi—feels like a ticking time bomb laced with secrets, emotional landmines, and unspoken history. The tension is palpable. The layers you’re building are absolutely spine-chilling.
First came Shrutika, and now this? Each reveal is leaving me breathless. I can already sense emotional whirlwinds, buried truths, and explosive confrontations just waiting to erupt.
This isn’t just suspense—it’s storytelling with a pulse. You’re weaving a psychological thriller that’s gripping us tighter with every chapter. Hats off, man!
Quote:Then, dropping his voice slightly, he asked, "And bhau, did you get the package I sent?"
Patode let out a low, amused chuckle. "Yes, I received it. Don’t worry. These two weeks will give me enough time to get her well-accustomed with them. You know I always deliver."
& What’s lurking inside that parcel, bro? You’re definitely cooking up something. The air’s thick with mystery, and it feels like things are about to take a seriously wild turn.
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Hi suraj,
This story is Already a hit, it is almost reached pre climax.
No more suggestions, just gonna enjoy the ride. You are on full throttle bro with this update.
Comments and likes are gonna shower you. Its almost a year, congratulations.
P.S. you are a good listener, you took every suggestion, and pleased everyone with this update.
A lot to say, but you are Already soo good that... rest is left to you.
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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I want to Highlight a thing for you suraj,
The success behind the story is Shipra, the way you developed her character.
So don't break her character, she likes to get fucked to orgasm, but remember patode taking videos and pictures everytime, seems a bit odd.
Is Shipra in trance state, or she is reckless? Nope I think not.
The story will be over, when Shipra starts to fuck others.. you remember the my wife with construction guys, they made her a rand in that story. And no longer people interested in that story. Hope you got the point.
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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Shruthika
Vikranth
Namrata
Rahki
Chetan
Salim
Toppo
Alok
What happened to Alokk?
And patode..
They spin the web around Shipra, how she is still unaware of the situation?
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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Well well, as Vikranth mentioned if shrutika can compensate her morality for greater goods.
Will she make Shipra her pawn to get patode, or is she gonna be in bed with patode, she is Already sex starved.
Or there is gonna be a threesome, some thing very hot is brewing. Let's see suraj, what you are gonna deliver
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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Let us not forget that Shipra is 100% genuine about helping the village women. In that respect, she's a heroine and should emerge a winner at the end. Otherwise I would think it unjust for her.
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Great update without any doubt...... namrata and rakhi didn't expect that.....when will be the next update Suraj....
can't wait.....
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Namrata who initially pushed Shipra into this hell hole will be the one to save the day once she knows the true face of Toppo and Patode from Rakhi but i guess it will be too late by then with Toppo hellbent on insulting Alok by taking Shipra before his eyes.
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The more he humiliates her husband more wild she becomes.
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Excellent update as usual. You keep raising the bar, my friend!!! BTW was expecting Salim to be a live witness, next time is it??
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I can see many saying toppo should have shipra.. Everyone over here waiting for that to happen... But my question is that shipra didnt learn to be submissive to patode... You can say s
Patode cummed inside shipra and patode is abusing shipra... But real fact here is that, even now shipra is setting her yardstick... Even in the end, patode cummed inside shipra in nick of the time... So the concept is first shipra's submission level should be to the maximum... Shipra should not be in deciding end... At that time only fucking with toppo can be imagined....
Just forcing suraj to make toppo and shipra to get fucked soon, i would say is a wrong thing...
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hi bro...
next update ka to bata do yaar..
10 din back update ke kaise nikale hai ye me or apka update hi jante hai...
padeto use courier or Pizza wale se free me saaman mangwaye uski adao par .. dosro ke saamne open karwaye..
or koi Nokar ya hotel survent ke samne bhi open or double meaing chat karwaye thoda show bhi semi nude..
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Shipra ko pahle or kai anjaan logo ke samne seminude or nude kiss karte dikhaye use open kare ki wo dosro ke samne thoda thoda karke open ho jaye khud ko show off karne ke liye..
or phir phir samarpan dikhega par poori tarah se nahi uske bhi apni hawas or desire honi chahiye kewal sex ki gulaam uske baad wah phir se ek Bank stick manager jo apne attitude me or dosro ko unki aaukaat me rakhti hai par jab sex seduce hota hai to wo ek wild sex bitch ban jati hai... jo patedo bhi janta hai...
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08-05-2025, 06:35 AM
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First of all congratulations SURAJ to push one of his most admired reader in to despair..people read stories as there are lots of things of their interest on tht SAGA... Sorry.. but I M getting depressed after reading the last few updates.. I was expecting SHIPRA to play the role of a seductress.. But Alas! SHIPRA is continuously being broken without any reason.. Tht too on someones special request.. Shipra has became nothing but Ptodes personal whore.The only thing left is for PATODE to fuck her ass.. which he will definitely do in next few updates..I had became emotionally attached to this Story.. I used to wait for every update very eagerly.. but now i have to say with great sadness tht I am leaving this all time favourite story of mine.. Because I am tired of being disappointed over and over again.. You hv finally made SHIPRA someones personal slut.. atleast you could hv made SHO Shrutika a Seducing character..one more my heartest desire was to see Shrutika as a Seductress.. who seduce criminals for her work done with purposes... But unfortunately tht will not possible in this life span of mine..
Ok Good Bye..
Take Care...
God Bless U,
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(07-05-2025, 07:45 PM)RCF Wrote: Namrata who initially pushed Shipra into this hell hole will be the one to save the day once she knows the true face of Toppo and Patode from Rakhi but i guess it will be too late by then with Toppo hellbent on insulting Alok by taking Shipra before his eyes.
Yes,thats a good point.
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One of the best sexy story.
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so much analysis and psychoanalysis of each character.. lol
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Great update...............
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HI BRO...
NEXT UPDATE COME FAST MAI KUCH NAHI KAHOONGA
JAISA APKO ACHCHHA LAGE
PAR AAP BATA DO BHAI
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IS STORY KI MAIN NAYIKA SHIPRA KO HI HIROEN RAHNE DENA NAHI KI DUSRON KI GULAAM AKHIR USKI BHI APNI MARJI HO OR WO PATODE KE USKI AUKAT ME RAKHE..
OR PADETO BISTAR PAR USE USKI AUKAAT ME RAKKHE...
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