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hi bro...
mujhe ye nahi pata ki aap best writer ho.. .inta achchha plot creat kiya ki maza a gaya kya koi itna achchha feel kar sakta hoon..
first time read ki hai bro...
mere exam bhi chal rahe the to kitaab se jyada apke update me study kar raha tha..
next update threesome sex with shipra saleem bro...
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apki first tread hot to hot hai bro.
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Shipra on a slippery slope, looks like there is no going back into this marriage at the end. She is breaking barriers here in terms of sliding into a role of not only cheating Alok with Patode but taking stupidest advise from Namrata and cheating herself by truly believing in bullshit fed into her brain by Namrata. Not once since story started did Shipra had a decent conversation on her side of story with Alok to make him see her sadness. All this is just a cover up to make herself feel better for the cheating. She thinks she can happily enjoy dual life but fate has other plans, its not a coincidence that Alok's friend's village is also Ambruj, he would be the eyes for Alok though he will humiliate Alok but he will take him to the truth by showing pictures or videos in future.
I guess there is no going back from here but be a slut for every one in Ambruj before she realizes her fall. I give credit to Namrata more than Patode in her fall. As for Patode, I think the end game would be to fail the plans of MLA and make him lose, Shipra should make it happen as her revenge with the help from Shrutika.
~RCF
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The story is going great without a doubt......when will be the next update Suraj....keep writing
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Fingers crossed on having a session between Shrutka and Chetan... ??
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Great going... ???
Writer's vision matters... Enjoying the flow...
If you can fasten up the updates to weekly.. It would be perfect...
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Suraj, think about exploring various location scenarios. Except for that sex at the Dhaba, all were in the houses so far. Of course there was one outdoor sex but still in the premises and one inside the office but still inside a room. Choices are numerous, explore them. Similarly, explore clothing varieties of the girls and describe them in sufficient detail. And if you plan a sexual encounter between Shipra and Shrutika, which I hope you will, make the run up to it and the settings in which it happens really, really good. That should be one of the most erotic scenes in your story.
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Great going.. Kudos to your efforts in creating chat images. It shows a great dedication.. really a great work. Waiting for the promised bang in next chapter
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Plz share the next update date
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Waiting for next hot update...................
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next update with hot pics and threesome
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waiting for the next update
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Please confirm on next update tentative date
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Hii SURAJ.. Sorry.. but..was damn busy so couldn't respond properly... All recent updates were outstanding..People can easily feel how much effort you put in to each update.. I would like to make a request.. Plz consider my reply seriously..Everything else is fine.. But I don't see any seductress like qualities in SHIPRA..Dont know When will She seduce people like SALIM and TOPPO with her deadly beauty..This time also it seems tht SALIM will only masturbate after watching the live sex session of SHIPRA and PATODE.. This time too SALIM won't get anything..
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When will be the next update Suraj.......
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Waiting for next update with humiliations...
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