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Can't believe this thread is getting so much negativity. Guys, this is only a work of fiction. If you must criticise, try doing it constructively, if that's possible for you.
Among the authors in this forum, Suraj is one of the best. This story deserves better quality responses than it is generally getting.
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(14-04-2025, 11:29 PM)Suraj76626 Wrote: Chapter 32: Awakening to a dual life: Part 2
Today update was good... Mainly, nice to see story is moving forward... Anyway waiting for shipra namrata and patode encounter now... A threesome... Want to see how submissive shipra now changed.. Also one request, make shipra say more submissive... Wish to see it
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This is good one. Since Saad chapter is over Salim is going to ask for his reward. Looks like Shipra will be back in Ambruj soon that to without any guilt on cheating Alok. Shipra also getting excited on someone watching her nude. Seems Patode will soon share her with Salim.
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Great update. Moves the story forward.
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What a great story. Shrutika story is getting very interesting now. She is such a great character - very arrogant and dominating.
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Suraj bhai, please check your mail
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Bro, please next update...
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Great update........................
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Suraj bro, please check Google Chat message once you are free...
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The next episode could be a showdown between Alok and Shipra. Final step in her transformation might follow. When is the next episode to be expected?
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Eagerly awaiting for the next update. Hope it's a sizzling long one without any KLPD.
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Please share tentative date for next update
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Hey guys sorry for the delay. I am a bit occupied with work this week and hopefully will be able to provide the next update by the 26th. Thank you for your patience.
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Hi suraj,
It's natural to be unhappy with the delay in updates, later on.
As now Shipra agreed to be patode's fuck buddy. Introduce bdsm and sex toys.
In the scheme of things, sex should be more machochistic. Its in the template of this story.
Don't turn Alok as cuckold, let him be disappointed with Shipra. Let Alok cheat with Namrata, or she can seduce alok in such a way that, he gets to know what he is capable of satisfying women. And what he missed with Shipra because of his ego and because of his narcissistic nature.
Let Shipra know what Alok has.cheated her with her close Namrata. So that she can lose the connection between her and Namrata, alok together.
So without any guilt, Shipra can cheat alok. Since no guilt, Shipra can comply with patode and his fantasies.
Write long sex sessions, but don't say what the characters are thinking rather try to say how they are enjoying like how the dick is pulsating, how Shipra is squirting endlessly and drenching the bed. Hope you get it.
Thanks a lot for your untiring contribution to xossipy, don't bring feministic thoughts in the story. Let the story continue as actions and consequences.
What about anal suraj? Two dicks in two holes? Any thoughts?
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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Sorry 3 Dicks, 3 holes, forgot Shipra is capable of giving long blowjob, throat job, headjob. She is a expert in that right?
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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(21-04-2025, 09:04 PM)Suraj76626 Wrote: Hey guys sorry for the delay. I am a bit occupied with work this week and hopefully will be able to provide the next update by the 26th. Thank you for your patience.
Thanks for the update Suraj  , hope we get to read the anniversary bang :)
1 Year of same level of updates and commitment to the story is Great Suraj
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(This post was last modified: 23-04-2025, 02:17 AM by hotandluking. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
(21-04-2025, 09:04 PM)Suraj76626 Wrote: Hey guys sorry for the delay. I am a bit occupied with work this week and hopefully will be able to provide the next update by the 26th. Thank you for your patience.
One thing I hope the writer makes a little change with,is the reduction of poetic description of the moods of sexual participants and increase in description of the actual sexual act.
We get it,that former needs to be written but latter is preferred more by readers and story gets interesting with latter.
Just a suggestion.
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Good work.....waiting for next update......
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Hi suraj,
I know the urge to fuck as a man, but tell me about the urge to get fucked from women pov
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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