Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.

[sapiosexual]

My humble request to both sexypreeti and umavictor and anyone else who is not liking the story or have any suggestions. Maybe you can spinoff your own thread and write your own version on how would you have thought about the character and play.  Although it should be something that Suraj needs to approve .

I think given how I perceive his quality of writing to be patiently brewing something special, he wouldn't be offended with your version . Given his confidence and belief as a writer on what he already have in his vision towards the story.
Let's all be honest , he has only done justice with each and every character so far. We need to understand having sexual encounters or wild sex scenes every moment of story or making a character all submissive just after one or two heated moments of her would have not required such marvellous story situations. Those bending of a adultery with a weak character could have been simply done like any common porn, but what Suraj is trying to build I believe is something rare both from story and characters point of view.. Let's wait to see what the writer have to offer with his so far well thought characters and situations.

I would personally not want Suraj to get carried away by any comments . I hope we understand that all have our weak moments and we shouldn't cling onto it for any longer than it is required to explain to others

Let's not bother writer too much and let him work or plan his story further .

Whatever you choose ( with a strong hope of your continuation) , thanks Suraj  for sharing your story so far

[xboard1986]

My humble request to both sexypreeti and umavictor and anyone else who is not liking the story or have any suggestions. Maybe you can spinoff your own thread and write your own version on how would you have thought about the character and play.  Although it should be something that Suraj needs to approve .

I think given how I perceive his quality of writing to be patiently brewing something special, he wouldn't be offended with your version . Given his confidence and belief as a writer on what he already have in his vision towards the story.
Let's all be honest , he has only done justice with each and every character so far. We need to understand having sexual encounters or wild sex scenes every moment of story or making a character all submissive just after one or two heated moments of her would have not required such marvellous story situations. Those bending of a adultery with a weak character could have been simply done like any common porn, but what Suraj is trying to build I believe is something rare both from story and characters point of view.. Let's wait to see what the writer have to offer with his so far well thought characters and situations.

I would personally not want Suraj to get carried away by any comments . I hope we understand that all have our weak moments and we shouldn't cling onto it for any longer than it is required to explain to others

Let's not bother writer too much and let him work or plan his story further .

Whatever you choose ( with a strong hope of your continuation) , thanks Suraj  for sharing your story so far.
Fully agreed

[Umavictor32]

My humble request to both sexypreeti and umavictor and anyone else who is not liking the story or have any suggestions. Maybe you can spinoff your own thread and write your own version on how would you have thought about the character and play.  Although it should be something that Suraj needs to approve .

I think given how I perceive his quality of writing to be patiently brewing something special, he wouldn't be offended with your version . Given his confidence and belief as a writer on what he already have in his vision towards the story.
Let's all be honest , he has only done justice with each and every character so far. We need to understand having sexual encounters or wild sex scenes every moment of story or making a character all submissive just after one or two heated moments of her would have not required such marvellous story situations. Those bending of a adultery with a weak character could have been simply done like any common porn, but what Suraj is trying to build I believe is something rare both from story and characters point of view.. Let's wait to see what the writer have to offer with his so far well thought characters and situations.

I would personally not want Suraj to get carried away by any comments . I hope we understand that all have our weak moments and we shouldn't cling onto it for any longer than it is required to explain to others

Let's not bother writer too much and let him work or plan his story further .

Whatever you choose ( with a strong hope of your continuation) , thanks Suraj  for sharing your story so far

Firstly i am already writting a story... Suraj is my inspiration for it.. I have mentioned on the first page of the story... Dnt want to say its name as ppl may feel wierd when i say it nw... So now i cant but in future same type of story i will try

[Vikramvines]

I came here to share my opinions on the latest update.. But unfortunately here a great battle has been started without any reason.. Whatever it is.. although I am not in the habit of getting in to controversies but where i feel I should take a stand I raise my voice most boldly... So i want make one thing very clear whatever the situation is, I always stand with SURAJ and will always be.. And here Siraj is right in every aspects.. One more thing.. Writers like Suraj are rarely found.. Its like a good fortune.. Don't let it lose because of your Stupidity dear READERS..

[poslednjisamuraj0202]

The story is great, you have my support my friend, keep writing as you envisioned.

[Vinty03]

Dear readers if you find the gif I posted offensive please let me know I'll delete it.

No gif are important for this story ...it's more to read whn u upload gif...u r great writer .

[sexypreeti]

It was intented for only one reader who was "not extremely patient" . Not connecting to a story is one thing but keep poking the writer who is taking valuable time to give you quality content is entirely different. If you don't like an update give your suggestions, ask the writer to consider some changes which I have done when I found reader getting bored but to keep pestering him to change his writing style and calling the story repetitive is not fair either. It has been almost a year I started to this story and I have been able to continue just because readers have always supported me. Many of them have also criticised me but always in a constructive way.

Complaining and complaining without any suggestions is not called being patient.. it's called trolling.

If you can't take a joke that too on an adult site just don't comment so insensitively.  Thanks for following my story I hope you find some saint writer here.

Hey Suraj,
I was expecting a more mature answer. The last paragraph was unnecessary. 

We both are writers, yes you are of a different genre and class. So I will not even spend time comparing... 

You have taken an existing movie script added lots of sex to it and turned it into a erotic thriller... Kudos... Brilliant idea... Maybe if the readers quickly read thru this story minus the sex then it wont be too difficult to guess the movie name too... But still a brilliant concept...

Feedback and criticism are a part of story writing, no one is perfect. Everyone needs this info to improve... But staying humble at the end despite everything is what makes a person different from the pack...

When I write my stories I am mostly 4-5 chapters ahead of what is being published because I do not want to see anyone asking for "updates". I have a schedule and I try to stick to it... Yes I have a job, a family and A personal life too... So everyone is in the same boat...

-Preeti 

[satankama]

Great update

Loved the video call aspect , that she is willing to submit even.from afar to patode

Alok isn't a dumb husband tailor made for sex stories, the suspicion filled by their conflict is very logical

[poslednjisamuraj0202]

The story is excellent, the author writes the way he imagined and so far it's going great. What you want is to realize your fantasies through this story. I have read many other stories that are not nearly as good as this one. Sexypreeti's stories are not nearly as good as yours. You have many readers who like your stories so you don't pay attention to the bad comments.

[Suraj76626]

Hey Suraj,
I was expecting a more mature answer. The last paragraph was unnecessary. 

We both are writers, yes you are of a different genre and class. So I will not even spend time comparing... 

You have taken an existing movie script added lots of sex to it and turned it into a erotic thriller... Kudos... Brilliant idea... Maybe if the readers quickly read thru this story minus the sex then it wont be too difficult to guess the movie name too... But still a brilliant concept...

Feedback and criticism are a part of story writing, no one is perfect. Everyone needs this info to improve... But staying humble at the end despite everything is what makes a person different from the pack...

When I write my stories I am mostly 4-5 chapters ahead of what is being published because I do not want to see anyone asking for "updates". I have a schedule and I try to stick to it... Yes I have a job, a family and A personal life too... So everyone is in the same boat...

-Preeti 

Dear Preeti,
I was not planning to continue commenting but you went out of your way to call the story a copy of a movie script.  I don't know what your problem is but I would request you to please enlighten the fellow readers from which movie I copied my story.


Waiting for your reply.

- Suraj

[kuttoosan009]

Dear Suraj, I am a fan of this wonderful story...... As a writer in this forum, I dont care about bad comments...... we can't satisfy everyone.... but there will be genuine & understanding readers..... and my simple suggestion for you...... Don't commit more to this... Write this story for your enjoyment and satisfaction only..... from here, you will not get any financial benefit..... So here, the priority is for the writers, not for the readers..... So avoid negative comments and move forward..... 

[Umavictor32]

The story is excellent, the author writes the way he imagined and so far it's going great. What you want is to realize your fantasies through this story. I have read many other stories that are not nearly as good as this one. Sexypreeti's stories are not nearly as good as yours. You have many readers who like your stories so you don't pay attention to the bad comments.

Ya ya i think u were the person who had written script for Christopher nolan...... Sir.. Everyone are writting stories here for entertainment... U have all rites to support ur writter but dnt compare with any other writters.... Tats really cheap

[Tamilmathi]

Suraj pls ignore negative people..
Go with your flow .....

[Ultramild2680]

The million $ question.... When can we expect the update

[dineshnair5555]

Can't believe the immaturity being displayed here. Just don't understand why we have a bunch of crybabies suddenly! Are we really serious?? We have a person dedicating his personal time for our entertainment and fun and people are trying to do what??? It's just beyond my understanding on what a person can be happy with, that's what I can say after looking at all these negative comments. I have just one statement - People who are unhappy, request you guys to leave peacefully without creating unnecessary ruckus. Let the writer do what he aims to and let the rest have their fun. ✌️

[dineshnair5555]

Can't believe the immaturity being displayed here. Just don't understand why we have a bunch of crybabies suddenly! Are we really serious?? We have a person dedicating his personal time for our entertainment and fun and people are trying to do what??? It's just beyond my understanding on what a person can be happy with, that's what I can say after looking at all these negative comments. I have just one statement - People who are unhappy, request you guys to leave peacefully without creating unnecessary ruckus. Let the writer do what he aims to and let the rest have their fun. ✌️

Just a one liner to our dear Suraj - I have said this earlier and I repeat, you are THE Author, we stand by you and honour your judgement and perspective. Please don't get influenced by negativity. You have been patient so far and please continue to be. Thanks man, you ROCK!!!!

[Hornytamilan23]

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[sexypreeti]

Dear Preeti,
I was not planning to continue commenting but you went out of your way to call the story a copy of a movie script.  I don't know what your problem is but I would request you to please enlighten the fellow readers from which movie I copied my story.


Waiting for your reply.

- Suraj

I was not in the mood to pursue this argument any further either, but since you called me out. Let me tell you something. I am not vaila to go searching a billion movies made to find which movie script you copied or which inspired you...

Yes I read the comments of all your fans who told you to simply ignore and move forward..

My time is precious and belongs to my readers and my fans and my family... So I will not waste it on finding your answer and instead spend it on writing future chapters so my readers don't have to send me reminders for "updates" about my stories... 

Yes I have a job to do, a family to take care off, a life to lead and stories to write...

So peace be there from here on... I expected you to respond with maturity the first time but it is never too late...

Good Night 

[poslednjisamuraj0202]

Please leave the writer to write as he imagines, you are obviously idle. Your stories are not nearly as interesting as suraj's stories. Please don't read if you don't like it.