Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.

[Umavictor32]

My humble request to both sexypreeti and umavictor and anyone else who is not liking the story or have any suggestions. Maybe you can spinoff your own thread and write your own version on how would you have thought about the character and play.  Although it should be something that Suraj needs to approve .

I think given how I perceive his quality of writing to be patiently brewing something special, he wouldn't be offended with your version . Given his confidence and belief as a writer on what he already have in his vision towards the story.
Let's all be honest , he has only done justice with each and every character so far. We need to understand having sexual encounters or wild sex scenes every moment of story or making a character all submissive just after one or two heated moments of her would have not required such marvellous story situations. Those bending of a adultery with a weak character could have been simply done like any common porn, but what Suraj is trying to build I believe is something rare both from story and characters point of view.. Let's wait to see what the writer have to offer with his so far well thought characters and situations.

I would personally not want Suraj to get carried away by any comments . I hope we understand that all have our weak moments and we shouldn't cling onto it for any longer than it is required to explain to others

Let's not bother writer too much and let him work or plan his story further .

Whatever you choose ( with a strong hope of your continuation) , thanks Suraj  for sharing your story so far

Firstly i am already writting a story... Suraj is my inspiration for it.. I have mentioned on the first page of the story... Dnt want to say its name as ppl may feel wierd when i say it nw... So now i cant but in future same type of story i will try

[Vikramvines]

I came here to share my opinions on the latest update.. But unfortunately here a great battle has been started without any reason.. Whatever it is.. although I am not in the habit of getting in to controversies but where i feel I should take a stand I raise my voice most boldly... So i want make one thing very clear whatever the situation is, I always stand with SURAJ and will always be.. And here Siraj is right in every aspects.. One more thing.. Writers like Suraj are rarely found.. Its like a good fortune.. Don't let it lose because of your Stupidity dear READERS..

[poslednjisamuraj0202]

The story is great, you have my support my friend, keep writing as you envisioned.

[Vinty03]

Dear readers if you find the gif I posted offensive please let me know I'll delete it.

No gif are important for this story ...it's more to read whn u upload gif...u r great writer .

[sexypreeti]

It was intented for only one reader who was "not extremely patient" . Not connecting to a story is one thing but keep poking the writer who is taking valuable time to give you quality content is entirely different. If you don't like an update give your suggestions, ask the writer to consider some changes which I have done when I found reader getting bored but to keep pestering him to change his writing style and calling the story repetitive is not fair either. It has been almost a year I started to this story and I have been able to continue just because readers have always supported me. Many of them have also criticised me but always in a constructive way.

Complaining and complaining without any suggestions is not called being patient.. it's called trolling.

If you can't take a joke that too on an adult site just don't comment so insensitively.  Thanks for following my story I hope you find some saint writer here.

Hey Suraj,
I was expecting a more mature answer. The last paragraph was unnecessary. 

We both are writers, yes you are of a different genre and class. So I will not even spend time comparing... 

You have taken an existing movie script added lots of sex to it and turned it into a erotic thriller... Kudos... Brilliant idea... Maybe if the readers quickly read thru this story minus the sex then it wont be too difficult to guess the movie name too... But still a brilliant concept...

Feedback and criticism are a part of story writing, no one is perfect. Everyone needs this info to improve... But staying humble at the end despite everything is what makes a person different from the pack...

When I write my stories I am mostly 4-5 chapters ahead of what is being published because I do not want to see anyone asking for "updates". I have a schedule and I try to stick to it... Yes I have a job, a family and A personal life too... So everyone is in the same boat...

-Preeti 

[satankama]

Great update

Loved the video call aspect , that she is willing to submit even.from afar to patode

Alok isn't a dumb husband tailor made for sex stories, the suspicion filled by their conflict is very logical

[poslednjisamuraj0202]

The story is excellent, the author writes the way he imagined and so far it's going great. What you want is to realize your fantasies through this story. I have read many other stories that are not nearly as good as this one. Sexypreeti's stories are not nearly as good as yours. You have many readers who like your stories so you don't pay attention to the bad comments.

[Suraj76626]

Hey Suraj,
I was expecting a more mature answer. The last paragraph was unnecessary. 

We both are writers, yes you are of a different genre and class. So I will not even spend time comparing... 

You have taken an existing movie script added lots of sex to it and turned it into a erotic thriller... Kudos... Brilliant idea... Maybe if the readers quickly read thru this story minus the sex then it wont be too difficult to guess the movie name too... But still a brilliant concept...

Feedback and criticism are a part of story writing, no one is perfect. Everyone needs this info to improve... But staying humble at the end despite everything is what makes a person different from the pack...

When I write my stories I am mostly 4-5 chapters ahead of what is being published because I do not want to see anyone asking for "updates". I have a schedule and I try to stick to it... Yes I have a job, a family and A personal life too... So everyone is in the same boat...

-Preeti 

Dear Preeti,
I was not planning to continue commenting but you went out of your way to call the story a copy of a movie script.  I don't know what your problem is but I would request you to please enlighten the fellow readers from which movie I copied my story.


Waiting for your reply.

- Suraj

[kuttoosan009]

Dear Suraj, I am a fan of this wonderful story...... As a writer in this forum, I dont care about bad comments...... we can't satisfy everyone.... but there will be genuine & understanding readers..... and my simple suggestion for you...... Don't commit more to this... Write this story for your enjoyment and satisfaction only..... from here, you will not get any financial benefit..... So here, the priority is for the writers, not for the readers..... So avoid negative comments and move forward..... 

[Umavictor32]

The story is excellent, the author writes the way he imagined and so far it's going great. What you want is to realize your fantasies through this story. I have read many other stories that are not nearly as good as this one. Sexypreeti's stories are not nearly as good as yours. You have many readers who like your stories so you don't pay attention to the bad comments.

Ya ya i think u were the person who had written script for Christopher nolan...... Sir.. Everyone are writting stories here for entertainment... U have all rites to support ur writter but dnt compare with any other writters.... Tats really cheap

[Tamilmathi]

Suraj pls ignore negative people..
Go with your flow .....

[Ultramild2680]

The million $ question.... When can we expect the update

[dineshnair5555]

Can't believe the immaturity being displayed here. Just don't understand why we have a bunch of crybabies suddenly! Are we really serious?? We have a person dedicating his personal time for our entertainment and fun and people are trying to do what??? It's just beyond my understanding on what a person can be happy with, that's what I can say after looking at all these negative comments. I have just one statement - People who are unhappy, request you guys to leave peacefully without creating unnecessary ruckus. Let the writer do what he aims to and let the rest have their fun. ✌️

[dineshnair5555]

Can't believe the immaturity being displayed here. Just don't understand why we have a bunch of crybabies suddenly! Are we really serious?? We have a person dedicating his personal time for our entertainment and fun and people are trying to do what??? It's just beyond my understanding on what a person can be happy with, that's what I can say after looking at all these negative comments. I have just one statement - People who are unhappy, request you guys to leave peacefully without creating unnecessary ruckus. Let the writer do what he aims to and let the rest have their fun. ✌️

Just a one liner to our dear Suraj - I have said this earlier and I repeat, you are THE Author, we stand by you and honour your judgement and perspective. Please don't get influenced by negativity. You have been patient so far and please continue to be. Thanks man, you ROCK!!!!

[Hornytamilan23]

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[Hornytamilan23]

 

[sexypreeti]

Dear Preeti,
I was not planning to continue commenting but you went out of your way to call the story a copy of a movie script.  I don't know what your problem is but I would request you to please enlighten the fellow readers from which movie I copied my story.


Waiting for your reply.

- Suraj

I was not in the mood to pursue this argument any further either, but since you called me out. Let me tell you something. I am not vaila to go searching a billion movies made to find which movie script you copied or which inspired you...

Yes I read the comments of all your fans who told you to simply ignore and move forward..

My time is precious and belongs to my readers and my fans and my family... So I will not waste it on finding your answer and instead spend it on writing future chapters so my readers don't have to send me reminders for "updates" about my stories... 

Yes I have a job to do, a family to take care off, a life to lead and stories to write...

So peace be there from here on... I expected you to respond with maturity the first time but it is never too late...

Good Night 

[poslednjisamuraj0202]

Please leave the writer to write as he imagines, you are obviously idle. Your stories are not nearly as interesting as suraj's stories. Please don't read if you don't like it.

[RCF]

I was not in the mood to pursue this argument any further either, but since you called me out. Let me tell you something. I am not vaila to go searching a billion movies made to find which movie script you copied or which inspired you...

Yes I read the comments of all your fans who told you to simply ignore and move forward..

My time is precious and belongs to my readers and my fans and my family... So I will not waste it on finding your answer and instead spend it on writing future chapters so my readers don't have to send me reminders for "updates" about my stories... 

Yes I have a job to do, a family to take care off, a life to lead and stories to write...

So peace be there from here on... I expected you to respond with maturity the first time but it is never too late...

Good Night 

Some crazy shit going on here in this story comments section..started by two readers.

First of all with some background...After every update from Suraj, this reader started to comment same statement over and over : "I did not like this update" " I couldn't connect to this update" , "I would like you to write this way" , "This is shit writing, why would Shipra behave this way" and then she uses woman card regularly in her comments saying as a woman I know how Shipra should behave and this constant rude commenting and relentless pestering to write story as per her whims and wishes and if not then she will comment I didn't like this update. Until when you will repeat this same update.

Imagine how writer needs to take this shit now...I do not think giving feedback and criticism is the problem here, as its been already given since last 8 episodes, the real problem is unless writer agrees to her and changes his writing style she won't agree that the character would behave that way. So when you have a perspective and writer doesn't agree to your perspective then you need to step back and leave the story as is and if still interested you can read it silently. Perspectives can be very different, doesn't mean other person needs to agree with your thoughts and change his style. It's not your story to command, then our reader wanted to pack the bags because she could not connect and got offended because writer asked her to leave with a funny GIF...yes GIF was rude but he mentioned it was sent on a funny note not to offend her...

So why would you come into this mess and start throwing your hat? What is your problem? Who asked you to give your advise on which movie this is copied from and how he writes it? You want to stand up for fellow reader, then you need to know the full context otherwise you would only be clueless. Now since you mentioned this is a copied story, now you are saying you don't have time to search billions of movies to find the title..then why did you throw statements that every one knows the movie if they read the story without sex scenes. Girl get your shit right before you step in here to give your 2 cents. and oh Yess, every one here including reader, writer has families, personal life, professional life and you are not alone who has responsibilities.

I wish you all the best in your stories and I ask other readers not to insult writers by comparing the stories and writer's capabilities. Every writer here is precious and their time invested is valuable.


~RCF

[sapiosexual]

As much as I don't want to get into this , I have some key observation which I think can help people to decide and refrain from making more comments on arguing topics

1. The girls are here for their own story promotions and that's what they have been doing since their most previous comment .

Probably it hurt their ego with some sharp or bold comment from the writer before ( sorry I didn't see the gif , but seems it was acceptable by uma sensibly at first. And probably the writer removed it too ). On any other forum probably that wouldn't have been called for, but it's an anonymous forum and we are expressing our thoughts more openly than ever

2. Sexypreeti doesn't sound reasonable or sensible , calling out the script to have been copied from movie but then saying I have my own work to do and people will understand on their own; contradicting to beat around bushes with long messages but not having time to post the name .I think people did understand on their own about her immature desperation to throw accusations when she couldn't sway the writer . she still continues to waste her time with her illogical argument and her approach towards story. Probably desperately trying to get audience towards her own writing . It's more like she doesn't really care actually about uma but with her agenda aligning to bring writer down somehow and get back some audience for her own story , she seems to be using the opportunity

3. Uma saying I am packing things , peace out and this being my last comment .and end up making every other comment sounds like she is not peacing out in true sense and want to throw her desperate theory to boost her own ego that all the comments are nothing more than the writer using his own multiple accounts.

Both sides of people need to basically observe and let it through now . As people with their right mind can see and those who cannot are at their own loss . We are here to enjoy this intellectual beauty and I don't think there is going to be any lose of audience for this story even when some say they are offended by something here but keep coming back to peace out with every other new comment

I try to balance and be fair to both side of people. But tbh some here are actually at fault , trying to pursue a petty fight without any logic but desperation for their own bubble of dreams. Trying hard to be able to move people in the wave of girl power with their assumed theories and insecurity on accepting others perspective on story.