[Suraj76626]

This was quite rude and high headed to say for a writer towards the readers/fans who have been "extremely patiently" following your story... Sorry to say...I am signing off too 

It was intented for only one reader who was "not extremely patient" . Not connecting to a story is one thing but keep poking the writer who is taking valuable time to give you quality content is entirely different. If you don't like an update give your suggestions, ask the writer to consider some changes which I have done when I found reader getting bored but to keep pestering him to change his writing style and calling the story repetitive is not fair either. It has been almost a year I started to this story and I have been able to continue just because readers have always supported me. Many of them have also criticised me but always in a constructive way.

Complaining and complaining without any suggestions is not called being patient.. it's called trolling.

If you can't take a joke that too on an adult site just don't comment so insensitively.  Thanks for following my story I hope you find some saint writer here.

[Suraj76626]

People really don't appreciate something given to them for free.. what a waste of my time.

[Suraj76626]

Hi Uma, I think you like the premise of this story, and in particular the theme of adultery.

But you keep on saying that you are not satisfied with how the story is now being developed or the speed at which it is progressing.

Feel free to discuss.

You were right bro when you once said I am wasting myself here.

[Umavictor32]

It was intented for only one reader who was "not extremely patient" . Not connecting to a story is one thing but keep poking the writer who is taking valuable time to give you quality content is entirely different. If you don't like an update give your suggestions, ask the writer to consider some changes which I have done when I found reader getting bored but to keep pestering him to change his writing style and calling the story repetitive is not fair either. It has been almost a year I started to this story and I have been able to continue just because readers have always supported me. Many of them have also criticised me but always in a constructive way.

Complaining and complaining without any suggestions is not called being patient.. it's called trolling.

If you can't take a joke that too on an adult site just don't comment so insensitively.  Thanks for following my story I hope you find some saint writer here.

Now this is getting too rude... Author sexypreeti came here to support me... I wish u cud have been more delicate to that person...

Also if u read my previous updates i have told good and bad abt the story... Even the recent update, the point were shipra says to patode tat her husband didnt satisfy her was masterpiece... But later half i didnt like it... Many a times i told it is getting repetitive when shipra in one episode says i dnt care abt society,  i am ready to do wat u say and next episode shows reluctance... How much time it is getting repeated..? I FELT IT NOT TO BE CONNECTED... THATS ALL...  Its my opinion... If someone comes and support me why do u shw ur attitude to that person... Thats wrong bro..

[Umavictor32]

Sorry to say this, the first line of today's update made me feel that this will not get connected to me... Reason is because in ur last episode u ended in such a place where shipra says to patode to fuck me and accept that she is under his control...
So basic mentality what a reader will have is to know wat all conversations happen between them... Wat was attitude of patode after  tat fuck because he told namrata that after today sex shipra will degrade herself than u do... So everyone will wish to hear tat emotion... How shipra degraded herself...wat happen etc... but u simply cut that scene just like tat and started writting back home which didn't work for me ..

SO TO SUM UP, I DIDN'T LIKE TODAY'S UPDATE...SORRY...WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE...

My sincere request is pls come out of tat loop...now shipra is broken...wats next ..pls shw us that .. Eagerly waiting for it ..

U were saying i am not pinpointing the place where i didnt like the story... The above message was send to u after ur update on March 9 2025...i have cleanly mentioned wat went wrong here...

MY CONCERN IN THE STORY WAS SIMPLE.. IT WOULD BE NICE TO SEE SHIPRA BEING SUBMISSIVE FOR A WHILE... ENOUGH OF SHOWING ATTITUDE... THE DAY SHIPRA SAID I DNT CARE ABT HUBBY MSG, I DNT CARE SOCIETY SHE IS BROKEN... MY OPINION WAS JUST BRING OUT THAT SUBMISSIVENESS AND CONTINUE FOR ONE OR TWO UPDATE AND LATER WHEN PATODE ASK SHIPRA TO SLEEP WITH TOPPO AND OTHERS, SHE SHD AGAIN COME. TO HER REAL SENSE... SHE CAN BE OR SHD BE RELUCTANT... ALSO WHEN IT COMES TO HER SON, SHE CAN GIVE PRIORITY TO HIM.. APART FROM THIS NOTHING ELSE.. NOW NO USE OF AGAIN SHOWING RELUCTANCE HERE TO PATODE AS SHE HAD ALREADY GOT  BROKEN IN FRONT OF HIM MULTIPLE TIMES... 


These i have mentioned many times... I may be wrong but since i cidnt see tat in ur story i cannot get connected...I never poked u... Check out my story which i posted first page.. I have given u credit... Reason is because u r my inspiration...

Anyway lets keep all this aside.. U r  a best writter... May be i am a fool who cant get the feel... Happy.... Skip it wat happen today...

[Umavictor32]

People really don't appreciate something given to them for free.. what a waste of my time.

We appreciate u tats y we r discussing in ur story page... Just go around and see others forum... Every authors are begging including me begging for likes and comments... So dnt say like tat pls

[RCF]

Now this is getting too rude... Author sexypreeti came here to support me... I wish u cud have been more delicate to that person...

Also if u read my previous updates i have told good and bad abt the story... Even the recent update, the point were shipra says to patode tat her husband didnt satisfy her was masterpiece... But later half i didnt like it... Many a times i told it is getting repetitive when shipra in one episode says i dnt care abt society,  i am ready to do wat u say and next episode shows reluctance... How much time it is getting repeated..? I FELT IT NOT TO BE CONNECTED... THATS ALL...  Its my opinion... If someone comes and support me why do u shw ur attitude to that person... Thats wrong bro..

Are you even following story? When Shipra says she doesn't care about society its when Patode's dick is in her and she wants more lol
When she turns back after the sex, she feels different as she is back in her senses and guilt, helplessness consume her again. I think you are not able to follow basic human emotions and then start complaining about the way story is headed. 

Writer will write as he intended and not based on readers suggestions. He might consider only if it fits with in his writing style or plot. I believe your suggestions to him fit neither his writing style nor the the way Shipra's character is designed. I guess you should grasp that because pestering author to change his writing and characters after every update which seems to annoy him. You think you are supporting his story but by not understanding what he is intending to tell his story through Shipra and asking him to change again and again his story is only getting more annoying.

Also please do not talk about rudeness, your every update after every post is rude and condescending. If you want me to show your rudeness, i can point to your comments earlier. As for the gif, it can be seen as insulting but it was sent in a funny sense so please do not get offended.

~RCF

[Umavictor32]

Are you even following story? When Shipra says she doesn't care about society its when Patode's dick is in her and she wants more lol
When she turns back after the sex, she feels different as she is back in her senses and guilt, helplessness consume her again. I think you are not able to follow basic human emotions and then start complaining about the way story is headed. 

Writer will write as he intended and not based on readers suggestions. He might consider only if it fits with in his writing style or plot. I believe your suggestions to him fit neither his writing style nor the the way Shipra's character is designed. I guess you should grasp that because pestering author to change his writing and characters after every update which seems to annoy him. You think you are supporting his story but by not understanding what he is intending to tell his story through Shipra and asking him to change again and again his story is only getting more annoying.

Also please do not talk about rudeness, your every update after every post is rude and condescending. If you want me to show your rudeness, i can point to your comments earlier. As for the gif, it can be seen as insulting but it was sent in a funny sense so please do not get offended.

~RCF

Last 5 -6 episode same thing is happening... Every time patode says by the time i finish her she will be more dirty than u...But again table rotates... Its like loop... Anyway as i said i may not be intelligent to enjoy it..

Secondly u said i am rude..At times when we say our POV ppl may find it rude.. Tats y i said i am packing my bags... Chapter ends there... Why to insult and be rude to ppl who supports me?? Anyway i am not interested to prolong this issue... I am keeping a full stop to it

[RCF]

U were saying i am not pinpointing the place where i didnt like the story... The above message was send to u after ur update on March 9 2025...i have cleanly mentioned wat went wrong here...

MY CONCERN IN THE STORY WAS SIMPLE.. IT WOULD BE NICE TO SEE SHIPRA BEING SUBMISSIVE FOR A WHILE... ENOUGH OF SHOWING ATTITUDE... THE DAY SHIPRA SAID I DNT CARE ABT HUBBY MSG, I DNT CARE SOCIETY SHE IS BROKEN... MY OPINION WAS JUST BRING OUT THAT SUBMISSIVENESS AND CONTINUE FOR ONE OR TWO UPDATE AND LATER WHEN PATODE ASK SHIPRA TO SLEEP WITH TOPPO AND OTHERS, SHE SHD AGAIN COME. TO HER REAL SENSE... SHE CAN BE OR SHD BE RELUCTANT... NOW NO USE OF AGAIN SHOWING RELUCTANCE HERE TO PATODE AS SHE HAD ALREADY GOT  BROKEN IN FRONT OF HIM MULTIPLE TIMES... 


These i have mentioned many times... I may be wrong but since i cidnt see tat in ur story i cannot get connected...I never poked u... Check out my story which i posted first page.. I have given u credit... Reason is because u r my inspiration...

Anyway lets keep all this aside.. U r  a best writter... May be i am a fool who cant get the feel... Happy.... Skip it wat happen today...

Shipra will say she doesn't care about her husband, she will say she doesn't care about society. She will have sex openly but all those emotions are when she is with Patode alone. When she is with Namratha and Patode she doesn't care about her job or husband nor she cares about her marriage as she is experiencing the dormant wild side of her past again and she is submitting to it, but when she is past that sexual high, she is back to her life where texts from her husband, news from her parents or video calls with her son are normal and take her back to the her original reality. She cannot ignore these and be in submissive state as both sides are part of herself.

When she is with Alok, her trying to get intimate with Alok desperately is showing her efforts to enjoy the life with Alok and to make herself believe that what she has experienced with Patode is not reality. hence she was resisting Patode. Once she realized that she is changed permanently with her experience with Patode she will become his slut but my guess is even in that state she will resist him when she thinks about her family, son and parents and society. That struggle is exactly what author is trying to show and it is in a sense an ordeal. Hope you get the patience to see how story unfolds and more changes in Shipra will eventually be revealed. It won't happen overnight as you were expecting.

~RCF

[Tamilmathi]

NOTE:
Guys, This is a erotic story.
End of the day,
we are suffers day today life.
We come relax ourself make
It comfortable ,
Please understand it just a
story that it......
Donot take serious ....

[Tamilmathi]

NOTE:
          Guys, This is a erotic story.
End of the day,
we are suffers day today life.
We come relax ourself make
It comfortable ,
Please understand it just a
story that it......
Donot take serious ....

[sapiosexual]

My humble request to both sexypreeti and umavictor and anyone else who is not liking the story or have any suggestions. Maybe you can spinoff your own thread and write your own version on how would you have thought about the character and play.  Although it should be something that Suraj needs to approve .

I think given how I perceive his quality of writing to be patiently brewing something special, he wouldn't be offended with your version . Given his confidence and belief as a writer on what he already have in his vision towards the story.
Let's all be honest , he has only done justice with each and every character so far. We need to understand having sexual encounters or wild sex scenes every moment of story or making a character all submissive just after one or two heated moments of her would have not required such marvellous story situations. Those bending of a adultery with a weak character could have been simply done like any common porn, but what Suraj is trying to build I believe is something rare both from story and characters point of view.. Let's wait to see what the writer have to offer with his so far well thought characters and situations.

I would personally not want Suraj to get carried away by any comments . I hope we understand that all have our weak moments and we shouldn't cling onto it for any longer than it is required to explain to others

Let's not bother writer too much and let him work or plan his story further .

Whatever you choose ( with a strong hope of your continuation) , thanks Suraj  for sharing your story so far

[xboard1986]

My humble request to both sexypreeti and umavictor and anyone else who is not liking the story or have any suggestions. Maybe you can spinoff your own thread and write your own version on how would you have thought about the character and play.  Although it should be something that Suraj needs to approve .

I think given how I perceive his quality of writing to be patiently brewing something special, he wouldn't be offended with your version . Given his confidence and belief as a writer on what he already have in his vision towards the story.
Let's all be honest , he has only done justice with each and every character so far. We need to understand having sexual encounters or wild sex scenes every moment of story or making a character all submissive just after one or two heated moments of her would have not required such marvellous story situations. Those bending of a adultery with a weak character could have been simply done like any common porn, but what Suraj is trying to build I believe is something rare both from story and characters point of view.. Let's wait to see what the writer have to offer with his so far well thought characters and situations.

I would personally not want Suraj to get carried away by any comments . I hope we understand that all have our weak moments and we shouldn't cling onto it for any longer than it is required to explain to others

Let's not bother writer too much and let him work or plan his story further .

Whatever you choose ( with a strong hope of your continuation) , thanks Suraj  for sharing your story so far.
Fully agreed

[Umavictor32]

My humble request to both sexypreeti and umavictor and anyone else who is not liking the story or have any suggestions. Maybe you can spinoff your own thread and write your own version on how would you have thought about the character and play.  Although it should be something that Suraj needs to approve .

I think given how I perceive his quality of writing to be patiently brewing something special, he wouldn't be offended with your version . Given his confidence and belief as a writer on what he already have in his vision towards the story.
Let's all be honest , he has only done justice with each and every character so far. We need to understand having sexual encounters or wild sex scenes every moment of story or making a character all submissive just after one or two heated moments of her would have not required such marvellous story situations. Those bending of a adultery with a weak character could have been simply done like any common porn, but what Suraj is trying to build I believe is something rare both from story and characters point of view.. Let's wait to see what the writer have to offer with his so far well thought characters and situations.

I would personally not want Suraj to get carried away by any comments . I hope we understand that all have our weak moments and we shouldn't cling onto it for any longer than it is required to explain to others

Let's not bother writer too much and let him work or plan his story further .

Whatever you choose ( with a strong hope of your continuation) , thanks Suraj  for sharing your story so far

Firstly i am already writting a story... Suraj is my inspiration for it.. I have mentioned on the first page of the story... Dnt want to say its name as ppl may feel wierd when i say it nw... So now i cant but in future same type of story i will try

[Vikramvines]

I came here to share my opinions on the latest update.. But unfortunately here a great battle has been started without any reason.. Whatever it is.. although I am not in the habit of getting in to controversies but where i feel I should take a stand I raise my voice most boldly... So i want make one thing very clear whatever the situation is, I always stand with SURAJ and will always be.. And here Siraj is right in every aspects.. One more thing.. Writers like Suraj are rarely found.. Its like a good fortune.. Don't let it lose because of your Stupidity dear READERS..

[poslednjisamuraj0202]

The story is great, you have my support my friend, keep writing as you envisioned.

[Vinty03]

Dear readers if you find the gif I posted offensive please let me know I'll delete it.

No gif are important for this story ...it's more to read whn u upload gif...u r great writer .

[sexypreeti]

It was intented for only one reader who was "not extremely patient" . Not connecting to a story is one thing but keep poking the writer who is taking valuable time to give you quality content is entirely different. If you don't like an update give your suggestions, ask the writer to consider some changes which I have done when I found reader getting bored but to keep pestering him to change his writing style and calling the story repetitive is not fair either. It has been almost a year I started to this story and I have been able to continue just because readers have always supported me. Many of them have also criticised me but always in a constructive way.

Complaining and complaining without any suggestions is not called being patient.. it's called trolling.

If you can't take a joke that too on an adult site just don't comment so insensitively.  Thanks for following my story I hope you find some saint writer here.

Hey Suraj,
I was expecting a more mature answer. The last paragraph was unnecessary. 

We both are writers, yes you are of a different genre and class. So I will not even spend time comparing... 

You have taken an existing movie script added lots of sex to it and turned it into a erotic thriller... Kudos... Brilliant idea... Maybe if the readers quickly read thru this story minus the sex then it wont be too difficult to guess the movie name too... But still a brilliant concept...

Feedback and criticism are a part of story writing, no one is perfect. Everyone needs this info to improve... But staying humble at the end despite everything is what makes a person different from the pack...

When I write my stories I am mostly 4-5 chapters ahead of what is being published because I do not want to see anyone asking for "updates". I have a schedule and I try to stick to it... Yes I have a job, a family and A personal life too... So everyone is in the same boat...

-Preeti 

[satankama]

Great update

Loved the video call aspect , that she is willing to submit even.from afar to patode

Alok isn't a dumb husband tailor made for sex stories, the suspicion filled by their conflict is very logical

[poslednjisamuraj0202]

The story is excellent, the author writes the way he imagined and so far it's going great. What you want is to realize your fantasies through this story. I have read many other stories that are not nearly as good as this one. Sexypreeti's stories are not nearly as good as yours. You have many readers who like your stories so you don't pay attention to the bad comments.