Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.

[Suraj76626]

And for the last 2 or 3 updates, it Must have been written by someone who has gone through that. Especially this phone sex episode.

Suraj, If you are patode,then who is your shipra?

I wouldn't compare myself to Patode. I am not so lucky.
But I do have a lots of experience in sexting so this update comes from that.

[Umavictor32]

Bye bye
Sorry Uma but I couldn't help myself this gif is so damn funny and apt for this situation.

On a serious note... It's sad you found the story boring. But it's also good you decided not to waste your time on a freely available content which is regularly updated and is a by far one of the most logical story on this site. I suppose you have a better taste unlike most of us. 

I hope you find something worth your time. Peace out.

Firstly being woman i felt this gif to be cheap but its ok... May be this may be your gen z attitude to treat woman.. Anyway on a serious note, i never said this story is boring.. I said i dnt feel it connected...

My problem is that i cant keep quiet.. I will say my opinion whatever i feel  if i read the story.. Tats y i said i will pack my bags...

Anyway u r my inspiration to erite story but ur character treatment is different from me

[Suraj76626]

Firstly being woman i felt this gif to be cheap but its ok... May be this may be your gen z attitude to treat woman.. Anyway on a serious note, i never said this story is boring.. I said i dnt feel it connected...

My problem is that i cant keep quiet.. I will say my opinion whatever i feel  if i read the story.. Tats y i said i will pack my bags...

Anyway u r my inspiration to erite story but ur character treatment is different from me

Come on sis it was funny.... But if you felt offended I sincerely apologise.
I am not from Gen Z either.. I am millennial... And 4 years older than you.
My comment was not in anyway to mistreat you for your critical remarks. You may have seen overtime I don't get offended by negative comments. It's just that I really don't get what are you expecting from the story?
It's moving briskly since last few updates and I have even tried to keep the erotic content a little innovative. So I am beat that's all. You can always make your suggestions like other readers to me in a private message I would love to hear them and maybe implement them.

Again, Apologies

[Suraj76626]

Dear readers if you find the gif I posted offensive please let me know I'll delete it.

[nusrattashnim]

Firstly being woman i felt this gif to be cheap but its ok... May be this may be your gen z attitude to treat woman.. Anyway on a serious note, i never said this story is boring.. I said i dnt feel it connected...

My problem is that i cant keep quiet.. I will say my opinion whatever i feel  if i read the story.. Tats y i said i will pack my bags...

Anyway u r my inspiration to erite story but ur character treatment is different from me

Dear Uma, do you know where the issue truly lies?

As readers, we view the story from a broad lens, knowing details that the characters themselves do not. We understand the motives of every individual, and we have a bird’s-eye view of events unfolding across various locations—Ambruj security officer station, Patode’s lawn, Selim’s dhaba, Alok’s home in Pune, and more. We already know Patode’s plans for Shipra, Toppo’s role in her ordeal, and even how Chetan, Alok’s friend, is present in Ambruj, having seen her photograph through Bhaivab—while Shipra is still oblivious to who Chetan is and the fact that he is a friend of her husband.

Now, step into Shipra’s shoes and consider her perspective. She is living within the story, moving forward one event at a time. She has no knowledge of the discussions between Selim and Patode concerning her, no awareness of Patode’s true intentions, and no suspicion that she is being manipulated for ulterior motives. To her, Patode appears genuine and trustworthy, as she has yet to encounter any red flags or witness anything overtly alarming. She is also unaware of the arrival of a new female SHO in Ambruj, who might play a pivotal role in her journey ahead.

But as readers, we know all of this.

And that is precisely where the fundamental difference lies—the contrast between the omniscient perspective of a reader and the limited awareness of a character. As readers, we are always several steps ahead, able to foresee potential outcomes or even anticipate the story’s ending, but Shipra cannot. She must walk through every moment, experience every twist, and endure every hardship before reaching her destination.

The writer is masterfully constructing this sequence and weaving intricate plotlines through his storytelling. Yet, in reading your comments, I must say—no offense intended—you come across as impatient and overly critical, often jumping to conclusions without considering the logic behind the narrative. Moreover, I sense a certain haste in your comments, a rush to push the story forward rather than allowing it to unfold naturally. Criticism is welcome, and of course, you have every right to share your opinions, which is absolutely fine. However, repeatedly instructing the author on what to do or how characters should behave undermines the creative process. Demanding that the author alter the course of the story disregards the beauty of a carefully woven narrative.

Let’s also acknowledge the author’s effort—despite having a full-time job, he consistently delivers updates, something few writers on this forum do. That commitment alone deserves respect. Moreover, Suraj has repeatedly clarified that this story is not about Shipra’s objectification or whorification, as seen in many other stories on this site that reduce women to mere playthings. Shipra’s journey is one of hardship, resilience, and most probably, eventual triumph. That realism is what makes this story compelling and forms the heart of its narrative.

So, patience is key. Feel free to express your thoughts, but let’s do so with consideration, ensuring our words uplift rather than discourage. After all, every writer, like every character, has a breaking point.

[val.coutinho]

Dear readers if you find the gif I posted offensive please let me know I'll delete it.

Please Suraj delete it..... Sincerely speaking I did find it offensive atleast for a female.

[eslx1212]

There is good progress in the story concerning both Shrutika and Shipra. Shipra has inched considerably towards becoming Patode's slut. Shrutika is willing to compromise morally to achieve her goals in Ambruj. Her character has also got connected to the main story in this episode. Let's see how the story moves forward from here.

[Umavictor32]

Hi

Firstly i heard there is a discussion being done using my name so i am back here... Went through all the comments and  i am answering to everyone in one message

1. Regarding the gif.. I really felt bad seeing it but i am not here to complain because this is an adultery site.. If suraj had put same gif in my insta or twitter i have rights to get offended but this being adultery site i dnt think it is valid for me to get offended.

2. With regards to my decision to stop reading this story, i would say thats my personal choice... Initially i was able to connect but now i couldn't... I feel every time patode saying by the time we finish this, shipra would be completely changed... So i feel she may get submissive or atleast be more soft than before but she again goes back to same phase... Again same things happen... Somewhere i am unable to connect... But it's my taste... I never called this as bad story etc because ppl are loving it... Also shruthika character i felt will be more dynamic than shipra and there may be a conflict appearing but now shruthika character was more like namrata character... So i am loosing interest... May be due to my age and me not in this gen z category may not be able to get connected...
3. Reason why i decided to leave is because if i keep on reading i will say my opinion and in future run tat may create issue to suraj... Because me being a writer i know the real pain.. Tat too suraj is not getting paid for this... He is alloting his time just because he want to entertain his readers.. Thats y i thought of moving from here and thought not to read it... 

Even masterpiece movies like jaani dushman ( hindi) Indian 2 ( Tamil) veersimha reddy ( telugu) etc have haters... ...So its just a matter of choice...

So my request is to skip it, enjoy the story and keep supporting suraj.. All the best for his story...

[sexypreeti]

Bye bye
Sorry Uma but I couldn't help myself this gif is so damn funny and apt for this situation.

On a serious note... It's sad you found the story boring. But it's also good you decided not to waste your time on a freely available content which is regularly updated and is a by far one of the most logical story on this site. I suppose you have a better taste unlike most of us. 

I hope you find something worth your time. Peace out.

This was quite rude and high headed to say for a writer towards the readers/fans who have been "extremely patiently" following your story... Sorry to say...I am signing off too 

[Suraj76626]

This was quite rude and high headed to say for a writer towards the readers/fans who have been "extremely patiently" following your story... Sorry to say...I am signing off too 

It was intented for only one reader who was "not extremely patient" . Not connecting to a story is one thing but keep poking the writer who is taking valuable time to give you quality content is entirely different. If you don't like an update give your suggestions, ask the writer to consider some changes which I have done when I found reader getting bored but to keep pestering him to change his writing style and calling the story repetitive is not fair either. It has been almost a year I started to this story and I have been able to continue just because readers have always supported me. Many of them have also criticised me but always in a constructive way.

Complaining and complaining without any suggestions is not called being patient.. it's called trolling.

If you can't take a joke that too on an adult site just don't comment so insensitively.  Thanks for following my story I hope you find some saint writer here.

[Suraj76626]

People really don't appreciate something given to them for free.. what a waste of my time.

[Suraj76626]

Hi Uma, I think you like the premise of this story, and in particular the theme of adultery.

But you keep on saying that you are not satisfied with how the story is now being developed or the speed at which it is progressing.

Feel free to discuss.

You were right bro when you once said I am wasting myself here.

[Umavictor32]

It was intented for only one reader who was "not extremely patient" . Not connecting to a story is one thing but keep poking the writer who is taking valuable time to give you quality content is entirely different. If you don't like an update give your suggestions, ask the writer to consider some changes which I have done when I found reader getting bored but to keep pestering him to change his writing style and calling the story repetitive is not fair either. It has been almost a year I started to this story and I have been able to continue just because readers have always supported me. Many of them have also criticised me but always in a constructive way.

Complaining and complaining without any suggestions is not called being patient.. it's called trolling.

If you can't take a joke that too on an adult site just don't comment so insensitively.  Thanks for following my story I hope you find some saint writer here.

Now this is getting too rude... Author sexypreeti came here to support me... I wish u cud have been more delicate to that person...

Also if u read my previous updates i have told good and bad abt the story... Even the recent update, the point were shipra says to patode tat her husband didnt satisfy her was masterpiece... But later half i didnt like it... Many a times i told it is getting repetitive when shipra in one episode says i dnt care abt society,  i am ready to do wat u say and next episode shows reluctance... How much time it is getting repeated..? I FELT IT NOT TO BE CONNECTED... THATS ALL...  Its my opinion... If someone comes and support me why do u shw ur attitude to that person... Thats wrong bro..

[Umavictor32]

Sorry to say this, the first line of today's update made me feel that this will not get connected to me... Reason is because in ur last episode u ended in such a place where shipra says to patode to fuck me and accept that she is under his control...
So basic mentality what a reader will have is to know wat all conversations happen between them... Wat was attitude of patode after  tat fuck because he told namrata that after today sex shipra will degrade herself than u do... So everyone will wish to hear tat emotion... How shipra degraded herself...wat happen etc... but u simply cut that scene just like tat and started writting back home which didn't work for me ..

SO TO SUM UP, I DIDN'T LIKE TODAY'S UPDATE...SORRY...WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE...

My sincere request is pls come out of tat loop...now shipra is broken...wats next ..pls shw us that .. Eagerly waiting for it ..

U were saying i am not pinpointing the place where i didnt like the story... The above message was send to u after ur update on March 9 2025...i have cleanly mentioned wat went wrong here...

MY CONCERN IN THE STORY WAS SIMPLE.. IT WOULD BE NICE TO SEE SHIPRA BEING SUBMISSIVE FOR A WHILE... ENOUGH OF SHOWING ATTITUDE... THE DAY SHIPRA SAID I DNT CARE ABT HUBBY MSG, I DNT CARE SOCIETY SHE IS BROKEN... MY OPINION WAS JUST BRING OUT THAT SUBMISSIVENESS AND CONTINUE FOR ONE OR TWO UPDATE AND LATER WHEN PATODE ASK SHIPRA TO SLEEP WITH TOPPO AND OTHERS, SHE SHD AGAIN COME. TO HER REAL SENSE... SHE CAN BE OR SHD BE RELUCTANT... ALSO WHEN IT COMES TO HER SON, SHE CAN GIVE PRIORITY TO HIM.. APART FROM THIS NOTHING ELSE.. NOW NO USE OF AGAIN SHOWING RELUCTANCE HERE TO PATODE AS SHE HAD ALREADY GOT  BROKEN IN FRONT OF HIM MULTIPLE TIMES... 


These i have mentioned many times... I may be wrong but since i cidnt see tat in ur story i cannot get connected...I never poked u... Check out my story which i posted first page.. I have given u credit... Reason is because u r my inspiration...

Anyway lets keep all this aside.. U r  a best writter... May be i am a fool who cant get the feel... Happy.... Skip it wat happen today...

[Umavictor32]

People really don't appreciate something given to them for free.. what a waste of my time.

We appreciate u tats y we r discussing in ur story page... Just go around and see others forum... Every authors are begging including me begging for likes and comments... So dnt say like tat pls

[RCF]

Now this is getting too rude... Author sexypreeti came here to support me... I wish u cud have been more delicate to that person...

Also if u read my previous updates i have told good and bad abt the story... Even the recent update, the point were shipra says to patode tat her husband didnt satisfy her was masterpiece... But later half i didnt like it... Many a times i told it is getting repetitive when shipra in one episode says i dnt care abt society,  i am ready to do wat u say and next episode shows reluctance... How much time it is getting repeated..? I FELT IT NOT TO BE CONNECTED... THATS ALL...  Its my opinion... If someone comes and support me why do u shw ur attitude to that person... Thats wrong bro..

Are you even following story? When Shipra says she doesn't care about society its when Patode's dick is in her and she wants more lol
When she turns back after the sex, she feels different as she is back in her senses and guilt, helplessness consume her again. I think you are not able to follow basic human emotions and then start complaining about the way story is headed. 

Writer will write as he intended and not based on readers suggestions. He might consider only if it fits with in his writing style or plot. I believe your suggestions to him fit neither his writing style nor the the way Shipra's character is designed. I guess you should grasp that because pestering author to change his writing and characters after every update which seems to annoy him. You think you are supporting his story but by not understanding what he is intending to tell his story through Shipra and asking him to change again and again his story is only getting more annoying.

Also please do not talk about rudeness, your every update after every post is rude and condescending. If you want me to show your rudeness, i can point to your comments earlier. As for the gif, it can be seen as insulting but it was sent in a funny sense so please do not get offended.

~RCF

[Umavictor32]

Are you even following story? When Shipra says she doesn't care about society its when Patode's dick is in her and she wants more lol
When she turns back after the sex, she feels different as she is back in her senses and guilt, helplessness consume her again. I think you are not able to follow basic human emotions and then start complaining about the way story is headed. 

Writer will write as he intended and not based on readers suggestions. He might consider only if it fits with in his writing style or plot. I believe your suggestions to him fit neither his writing style nor the the way Shipra's character is designed. I guess you should grasp that because pestering author to change his writing and characters after every update which seems to annoy him. You think you are supporting his story but by not understanding what he is intending to tell his story through Shipra and asking him to change again and again his story is only getting more annoying.

Also please do not talk about rudeness, your every update after every post is rude and condescending. If you want me to show your rudeness, i can point to your comments earlier. As for the gif, it can be seen as insulting but it was sent in a funny sense so please do not get offended.

~RCF

Last 5 -6 episode same thing is happening... Every time patode says by the time i finish her she will be more dirty than u...But again table rotates... Its like loop... Anyway as i said i may not be intelligent to enjoy it..

Secondly u said i am rude..At times when we say our POV ppl may find it rude.. Tats y i said i am packing my bags... Chapter ends there... Why to insult and be rude to ppl who supports me?? Anyway i am not interested to prolong this issue... I am keeping a full stop to it

[RCF]

U were saying i am not pinpointing the place where i didnt like the story... The above message was send to u after ur update on March 9 2025...i have cleanly mentioned wat went wrong here...

MY CONCERN IN THE STORY WAS SIMPLE.. IT WOULD BE NICE TO SEE SHIPRA BEING SUBMISSIVE FOR A WHILE... ENOUGH OF SHOWING ATTITUDE... THE DAY SHIPRA SAID I DNT CARE ABT HUBBY MSG, I DNT CARE SOCIETY SHE IS BROKEN... MY OPINION WAS JUST BRING OUT THAT SUBMISSIVENESS AND CONTINUE FOR ONE OR TWO UPDATE AND LATER WHEN PATODE ASK SHIPRA TO SLEEP WITH TOPPO AND OTHERS, SHE SHD AGAIN COME. TO HER REAL SENSE... SHE CAN BE OR SHD BE RELUCTANT... NOW NO USE OF AGAIN SHOWING RELUCTANCE HERE TO PATODE AS SHE HAD ALREADY GOT  BROKEN IN FRONT OF HIM MULTIPLE TIMES... 


These i have mentioned many times... I may be wrong but since i cidnt see tat in ur story i cannot get connected...I never poked u... Check out my story which i posted first page.. I have given u credit... Reason is because u r my inspiration...

Anyway lets keep all this aside.. U r  a best writter... May be i am a fool who cant get the feel... Happy.... Skip it wat happen today...

Shipra will say she doesn't care about her husband, she will say she doesn't care about society. She will have sex openly but all those emotions are when she is with Patode alone. When she is with Namratha and Patode she doesn't care about her job or husband nor she cares about her marriage as she is experiencing the dormant wild side of her past again and she is submitting to it, but when she is past that sexual high, she is back to her life where texts from her husband, news from her parents or video calls with her son are normal and take her back to the her original reality. She cannot ignore these and be in submissive state as both sides are part of herself.

When she is with Alok, her trying to get intimate with Alok desperately is showing her efforts to enjoy the life with Alok and to make herself believe that what she has experienced with Patode is not reality. hence she was resisting Patode. Once she realized that she is changed permanently with her experience with Patode she will become his slut but my guess is even in that state she will resist him when she thinks about her family, son and parents and society. That struggle is exactly what author is trying to show and it is in a sense an ordeal. Hope you get the patience to see how story unfolds and more changes in Shipra will eventually be revealed. It won't happen overnight as you were expecting.

~RCF

[Tamilmathi]

NOTE:
Guys, This is a erotic story.
End of the day,
we are suffers day today life.
We come relax ourself make
It comfortable ,
Please understand it just a
story that it......
Donot take serious ....

[Tamilmathi]

NOTE:
          Guys, This is a erotic story.
End of the day,
we are suffers day today life.
We come relax ourself make
It comfortable ,
Please understand it just a
story that it......
Donot take serious ....