Adultery My Loving Hotwife Meena
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I do not think anything that Nadir is requesting is beyond something that has not happened already so there is no need for punishment.

Had he not seen Meena and Mansour that day, we would not be seeing this side of Nadir ever...Do you agree? So a side of him is born that day and it grew over time..and he enjoyed that side of him as long as it won't hurt his love for Meena and her love for him, Only time we saw that come close is with Jalal and we saw his reaction that you were expecting so why the change in stance now my friend.

Nadir is perfect in his sense and Meena understands him well..The couple knows that their adventures are above and beyond their love and marriage and this is only for fun. At this point I would even come out and tell that Nadir is not even forcing Meena into anything, she wants Tahir and she likes enjoying with him, yes she will stop it if Nadir says no, but she is enjoying with his plan and her plan together so we as readers should too.

Reading this story thinking as Meena and Nadir as any other couple after reading so much of their story would be an insult, infact read them as they are and understand them as they are wishing us to understand them, I know you mean well and care for them but they are in this together so there is nothing to lose.

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(18-03-2025, 11:50 AM)RCF Wrote: I do not think anything that Nadir is requesting is beyond something that has not happened already so ... Reading this story thinking as Meena and Nadir as any other couple after reading so much of their story would be an insult, infact read them as they are and understand them as they are wishing us to understand them, I know you mean well and care for them but they are in this together so there is nothing to lose.

~RCF

What excellent and profoundly enlightening words... incredibly sharply seen , 
very precise, yet at the same time gentle and understanding... I'm overwhelmed... 

Thank you, my friend, you understood us, and that is worth a lot and deserves respect...

Salir/Nadir
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Meena Narrates: To be a good girl… (5) 

 
A little nervous flash of thought went through her. Very rarely in her life had she ever not
 
been in control. Here on the sofa, in her own house, she knew she was not in control
 
completely. This was one of those rare situations and of all people with this old, not
 
particularly handsome man.
 
Sensations were wracking through her body. Pleasurable sensations. She gave up the last
 
reluctance, when she thought about Nadir. He wanted this, she was not betraying her
 
husband. A finger pushed aside the gusset of her panties and slipped into her wet
 
feminine centre.
 
She flushed in embarrassment as she realised just how wet she had become.
 
That Tahir should be able to discover the level of her excitement was deeply embarrassing.
 
Her hand dropped to exploring hand seeking to hold it. Tahir caught her hand by the wrist
 
and guided her hand between his own legs, and her fingers brushed the hot, hard length of
 
his exposed manhood. Her hand jerked away, she was startled by the heat and hardness of
 
his member. She had been unaware of him releasing his cock from his trousers.
 
Tahir however, retained his grip on in her hand brought it back to his aroused and excited
 
dick and big cock. At the second contact as his hand seemed to push her slim hand along its

length. Meena found her hand had grasped its thickness.
 
She was amazed at his girth every time she touched him. Today she had more time to touch
 
and feel it. The thick pulsing veins seemed to throb in her soft hand. She struggled to grasp
 
its thickness and her hands squeezed it. She realised with a sense of a certain dread that her
 
fingers could not meet when they closed around it, at least not at the base of the rod. It was
 
too thick, and astonished that she had that thickness in her body.
 
Tahir's hand was back on her wrist, and he guided her hand up and down hard length of his
 
Member.
 
His dick had a special form. It was longer than Nadir’s, for sure but even thicker than a
 
normal penis, but it was much thicker in the base.
 
She tried to look down at it but the pressure of his heavy body in hers prevented her from
 
doing so.
 
At that point Tahir pushed a thick finger into her body.
 
"Let me up!" She demanded. Tahir ignored her. His lips busy nibbling on the soft white skin of
 
her slender neck. His finger pushed deeper.
 
Tahir remembered that the delightful curvy body of this younger woman, seeking to wriggle from
 
 beneath him, belonged to another man, but it calmed him at the same time, that no matter
 
 how unique and amazing this body was, he never wanted to possess it, at least not forever.
 
He circled his finger in the hot, wet, tightness of her married pussy and thrust his finger in a
 
bit further.
 
As his finger slid deeper Meena found her hand gripping his cock tightly in response. She
 
tried again to playfully surround it but found again that was her fingers could hardly connect
 
around it. The cock throbbed in her hand. She could feel knotting veins throb and pulse with
 
blood and eager sperm.
 
Tahir withdrew his finger and shifted in position. His weight lifted from her, and she was able
 
to look down at his cock. Her eyes admired the piece her hands had explored.
 
Tahir grinned. Meena was staring at his cock with fascination and Tahir noticed this.
 
He was enjoying the conflicting her emotions.
 
Meena looked at his face and if reading his desire for her, his plan to occupy her, she
 
flushed. The pink glow penetrated her cheeks and descended to her breasts.
 
As Tahir shifted in position and both his hands went up under her loose robe. Her breathing
 
had become heavy. There was a tension in her throat, and a heat in her loins. As his body
 
shifted more of his cock slid out of his trousers, and she stared at it as its full length became
 
 apparent. "Oh… My ..." her words came out in gasps.
 
Tahir pulled at her panties; her hips rose slightly allowing him to ease her panties down.
 
She was his, for now at least, they both knew that and each of them knew that the other
 
knows it too!...
 
"Oh God...", Meena moaned.
 
Tahir grinned and his mouth dropped to close her pleas with another kiss. His tongue licked
 
her lips as his hands worked under her dress, enjoying the feel of the shapely full thighs of
 
young woman.
 
He could feel her breasts surge and push against him in response to the sensations she
 
could not avoid as his tongue excited her. His hands pushed her shapely white thighs apart,
 
her dress opened sideways around her waist.
 
He positioned himself between her legs.
 
The teasing of his tongue was merciless, and exciting. He really knew how to excite her! She
 
jerked her head free of his tongue and looked up into his eyes. Eyes that were full of passion
 
and desire. Desire for her...
 
Her heart raced and her senses seemed to pulse, but when his mouth dropped to hers again,
 
 she did not resist.
 
She humped her hips and flushed with shame at her action. Her mouth opened in response
 
to the passionate demand of his kiss.
 
When his tongue slid between her lips, her own tongue darted to meet his and locked with
 
his in a passionate wrestling match.
 
Then his cock pushed the gate of her feminine centre. Meena stared up into the powerful
 
passion filled eyes of the older man above her.
 
Tahir met her gaze. He loved that gaze, the gaze of the moment of the waiting in a woman's
 
eyes as she realises a male rod is about to enter her. He thrust his hips and broke free of her
 
eagerly kissing lips.
 
"Oooooooohhh!... Tahir!"
 
Tahir thrust again and he passed through the portals to Meena’s womanhood.
 
He paused. It was so surprising for him, how tight she still was, just like a virgin.
 
Her pussy clasped his cock tight. He enjoyed the hot tight grip on his cock, leaned forward
 
and thrust deeper. Another part of his thick manhood slid into her, and her legs flew wide in
 
reaction. He grasped the hot warm curves of her hips and lifted, as he thrust. His cock was
 
motre than half into her, and past the restricting grasping portal. He thrust again, sliding a
 
further few centimeters into her.
 
"Ooooooh... too much…!", Meena moaned.
 
He thrust again. Her hips started jerking spasmodically beneath him, her legs grasped him
 
then released him.
 
Tahir held himself in position, while she wriggled and struggled. He enjoyed the feel of his
 
 cock as is it slithered deeper in her well-lubricated canal.
 
He was too well embedded inside her how.
 
Meena realized that she was his now. Tahir was going to have his way with her. And she
 
admitted to herself that she was going to let him to do that.
 
A warm tingling overcame her at the thought she was helpless to prevent this old lumberjack
 
taking his pleasure between her legs.
 
Exciting sensations swept from her loins as she became accustomed to his thickness. Her
 
abused pussy seemed to be clinging to his cock, but already it was relaxing and adapting to
 
its size. She realised that he had stopped thrusting into her. She looked up at his face and
 
realised he was enjoying the pleasure of being inside her. Without conscious thought her
 
pussy squeezed on his cock sending further excitement shooting through her. To her
 
pleasure the muscles in her sheath seemed to caress his cock.
 
Then she looked back up at him. He was gazing down at her. Meena flushed under his gaze.
 
"You are deep inside me… My…", Meena looked at him and whispered.
 
Tahir grinned and said "No, not yet… Not really…"
 
Then he ran his hands up from his grip on her Curvy butt, sliding them along the soft skin so
 
that he could secure a firm grip on her shoulders.
 
"No, that is not all so deep," he laughed and thrust again.
 
Tahir enjoyed the pleading look on her face as he thrust and thrust again. This time firmly
 
holding her shoulders to keep her in position as he pushed deeper. He was enjoying the grip
 
on his cock.  It seemed finally he reached deeper and pushed against her uterus barriers.
 
"Ooooooh... Oh God... Oooooh."
 
Meena thought that she was never so full. The length and thickness of Tahir’s cock was just
 
the perfect suitable
 
filling in this position for her womanhood. More than anybody she knew.
 
Tahir freed one of his hands and reached up to grasp her dark hair in his grip. He jerked
 
softly her head back.
 
Meena felt a little uncomfortable, but the just sensing of his strength seemed to send further
 
powerful Overvoltages down her loins. She grasped his cock with her vaginal sheath
 
instinctively. She felt the slap of his balls against her bottom. It was all in, she realised! If his
 
balls were slapping against her bottom; he must be all the way in!
 
Tahir looked down at her pretty face. He enjoyed the sight of her pale slender neck. He noted
 
the dilated eyes, her gasping breath. Her unfocussed eyes, he gave her time to recover.
 
When her deep eyes finally focussed on him again, he grinned down at her. She smiled
 
faintly back at him.
 
"Now," he said, "I am going to fuck you!"
 
Meena expressed her agreement by nodding her head. Then he felt her legs wrap around
 
him.
 
Tahir grinned; she smiled nervously back at him.
 
Then he started to fuck.
 
She moaned and wailed as he withdrew then thrust.
 
He was enjoying the silky softness as the inner thighs of Meena clasped him to her.
 
Tahir was delighted to feel that she is lost in passion beneath him. Was there any greater
 
pleasure? He asked himself.
 
Yes, of course, there was, he answered, the pleasure of his seed spurting up inside this
 
young wife’s clinging tightness.
 
He gripped her shoulders and took his pleasure, thrusting and driving his manhood deep
 
inside. Enjoying the exquisite pleasure of her tight womanhood.
 
Her excited cry betrayed her orgasm beneath him as she shook and shivered beneath him.
 
Tahir paused briefly. Then resumed his efforts.
 
"Please Tahir, I… I… need..."
 
Tahir smiled and pausedagain for short moments, then said, “Enough… Girl,”, then renewed
 
his urgent thrusting.
 
Meena wriggled and squirmed. It was too intense, too powerful, the feelings too strong.
 
Then to her shock a second orgasm overtook her, she jerked and throbbed in spasms
 
beneath him. Shocked, disbelieving, this could not be happening she had never had two
 
orgasms before, immediately one after the other!
 
She collapsed in his arms defeated and subdued. There was no point resisting. Tahir above
 
her continued his thrusting and commanding between her legs which still eagerly clasped
 
around him.
 
Now, to her astonishment, a rolling wave of orgasms seemed to overcome her as she
 
abandoned the struggle and devoted to him, and let the old big farmer use her as he wished.
 
Tahir was a strong man who took what he wanted and with a thrill of excitement, Meena
 
realised that she was glad he wanted her...
 
increasing heat rose in her loins and she suddenly felt he is ejaculation in an eruption inside
 
her. The feeling and thought about it, seemed to trigger another even more heated orgasm. It
 
was as though her body was eagerly searching and trying to receive his seed!
 
Tahir broke free from her pussy and look at his conquest kneeling before him. His cock still
 
very hard and slick with her juices glided out of her and she looked admired at it. and.
 
Meena caught her breath while she struggled to pull her robe over her breasts.
 
She pushed it back down from her waist. Meena still a little out of breath, nodded her head
 
with an embarrassed expression then looked up still lazily at Tahir and said, " I have to take a
 
shower,“, she looked still embarrassed at him whether she asks for permission.
 
Tahir replied, smiling, “"Yes, of course, me too. Can I use the downstairs bathroom?"
 
Meena said, "Yes, of course," and headed for the stairs.
 
Tahir asked, "Do you want to come with me?"
 
Meena replied, "No, better not! We have to be quick..." and went up the stairs.
 
She saw her panties lying discarded on floor and snatched them up.
 
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Meena Narrates: To be a good girl… (6) 
 
After the shower, they both went back to the living room to drink juice. Meena wore a short
 
fluffy pink bathrobe with drawstring belt.
 
Tahir sat down on the couch again, while Meena continued standing and drinking her juice.
 
Tahir sipped his juice, looked at his watch and said," I hope you can visit me this
 
weekend."
 
Meena said, "I hope too, it is certainly a beautiful beginning of spring at the ranch. To observe
 
the growth of the plants. But we'll wait and see what Nadir says."
 
Tahir didn't want to stay until Nadir arrived. He spoke, "Now I have to go. Thank you for
 
everything, my girl. It was lovely, as always and you were a goofd girl for your old daddy…"
 
Meena blushed and smiled, "Yes, thank you, Tahir...".
 
Tahir just smiles at her, "What's on your mind baby? You seem to be in deep thought."
 
"Well, I feel somehow a bit guilty what I have done…”, she replied and after s short pause
 
added, “,but to be honest, I definitely didn't hate it as much as I thought earlier, I
 
would." Meena said truthfully. She meant actually, what she has done without Nadir being
 
there or around.
 
“I'm glad, we and our bodies understand each other so well, then there's nothing against it if
 
we meet again,", Tahir spoke.
 
Meena blushed again and smiled just looking down, but did not reply.
 
“We're a good match, right? I mean sexually and physically. I know your desires and how to
 
satisfy you, right?"
 
Meena blushed more and nodded.
 
“Can we do this again, girly? Do you want to meet your old daddy again?" Tahir's voice was
 
hopeful.
 
"Probably," Meena answered shortly and quietly.
 
"I mean I like to…“, then it seemed if she didn’t want to admit, added,“ Just keep it between
 
us please…", after a short thinking, ”Yes, I like to, just you and me…“, Meena pleaded.
 
"You don’t like to have somenody else? Farzan? ", Tahir asked curiously.
 
"I like him, but..." Meena answered, blushed again.
 
"Okay… I understand, it is too much. Of course I keep it between us, but one thing before I
 
 Leave…",
Tahir said and smiled, "Here, sit down on my knee and give me a kiss like you would give
 
 your husband. If I don't feel the passion I won't hold my promise, game?"
 
Meena got up quietly and sat on his lap. She grabbed his face with her hands and gave him
 
a deep kiss.
 
He pulled her closer to his body and grabbed two handfuls of her butts that got a whimper
 
from her until she was straddling him. They continued to kiss for a few minutes slowly
 
becoming more passionate. Tahir raises his hand and smacked Meena's perfect ass. Meena
 
let out a deep moan and started grinding her body even harder against him.
 
It seemed she would stop him immediately! Earlier she stopped even Nadir just from
 
grabbing her ass too hard, she thought. She was but surprised that she didn't react now and
 
on the contrary continued to kiss and grind on him more. Her ass literally became red while it
 
jiggled on his lap.
 
She admitted that Tahir has taken more liberties with her in a short time, than everybody
 
else!
 
Tahir opened her belt, while kissing and reached for her red thong, then he moved her thong
 
to the side and started fingering her. Meena who was from deep kissing already slightly wet,
 
literally started moaning in his mouth while he stuffed his fat fingers in her pussy. Every so
 
often, he gave her a spank while he kissed her all the while.
 
Meena couldn't believe the way she was acting. She has never been more sexually charged
 
in a short time after at least two orgasms, her whole life. She was grinding her body on top of
 
this old large farmer, while her husband was not around and couldn’t watch and control! She
 
was starting to become too worked up. She felt one of his hands massage and spank each of
 
her hot ass cheeks. While the other hand slid its fingers out of her pussy making her gush
 
fluids all over his pants.
 
Meena's body was starting to heat up. She knew what was coming as much as she didn't
 
want it to, again. She started to slowly grind her pussy even harder on Tahir's hand and
 
moan louder when he spanked her. She didn't realize how much she was enjoying getting
 
spanked, something she never let her husband do. She stopped kissing him and breaths into
 
his face while she moaned and grinded into him.
 
"Ohhh my godd… Tahir … You're going to… I‘ll cum again… Don't stop...please don't stop!"
 
Meena said deliriously while almost out of breath.
 
"Yeah? You want to cum for me? Cum Meena, cum for me my girl … Cum for Tahir,".
 
"Ohhh… God… I'm your little girl!! What are you doing to me!? I'm Cumming! I'm
 
 Cu...Ohhhh… My God..."
 
Meena started to move wildly and then he saw that young wife actually cumming in his
 
hands…
 
 Her body shook uncontrollably for a minute before finally calming down. He gave her a few
 
 more kisses and a couple more spanks, Meena couldn't believe how good Tahir was making
 
her feel.
 
immediately afterwards, Meena knew it was time, she slid herself off him and got her robe in
 
order. She looks quickly back at Tahir still not believing what she just did.
 
She didn't know why but she wanted to show him gratitude there and said in a shy voice,
 
"Thanks Tahir..." Then stood up.
 
Tahir had a big grin on his face watching Meena. He knew that she is not his property, but
 
she belonged to him, every time they were alone, just the two of them…
 
While at the door, Meena asked, "Are you leaving to farm? “.
 
Tahir answered, „Not, today but tomorrow morning, if you like and want I can stay here, in
 
your guestroom, “.
 
Meena said quietly, „No, I mean I don't mind, but not today. My husband is working, and
 
maybe Cyrus will think of something if you don ‘t go to him, next time for sure…".

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A playful thing between a couple who have no barriers between them.....
Everything should be free, as long as the type of dialogue and statements of one of them, is acceptable to the other. In my opinion, that's fine, no matter how intense, negative, or provocative. I think it's barrier-free between two who love each other, and I have to say, no censorship, no matter what it is is, between them, is allowed and legitimate!

I would say that morality and social courtesy in the world of two lovers, truly loving ones, have nothing to lose as long as they accept each other in their own world...


This world has its own morals
 and its own boundaries of respect, and these, are set by both of them. And that is not and must not be determined by society.
 

General social morality has no place in this world!

If something is wrong, and one person doesn't agree with the other, or with what they say or do, then they will definitely receive punishment, if necessary!

Don't forget, I'm talking about love and the unity of lovers, not a partnership in society, which doesn't necessarily involve love as a component! 


This partnership has its own socially necessary laws! This isn't the world of love, so I'm not talking about it...

Cheers,
Salir,
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1. Mansour wanted Meena, but not as his wife or partner; he took a completely reserved stance in that regard. Perhaps because he knew he was incapable (socially and societally, not least because of Meena's attitude toward him), that he couldn't even dream of having her as his partner. It was all just a physical and somewhat psychological dominance, because of his nature and personality. 


Mansour considers Meena, his niece, still as a young, inexperienced girl who can be easily exploited.

2. Jalal wanted Meena for himself, physically and as a life partner. Not enough, he wanted to take her and cut off all contact with her home, her homeland! He wasn't a dominant type, but an insidious, even cunning type. This goal of his was a much greater irritant, even a real rage factor, for Nadir. Especially the fact that he took advantage of Nadir's absence to achieve his goals caused Nadir to feel very angry, which we observed.

Jalal considers Meena, a young, beautiful woman who is suitable to be at his side as a partner for the rest of his life.


3. Tahir is what he is! He wants Meena, but only in the way Meena gives herself to him, no more and no less. His behaviour changes depending on Meena's reaction, and he does so honestly! He doesn't want to possess her, and he emphasize it too. When he says, 'I speak once and for all and not repeat myself...', this statement is neither didactic nor dominating, but means, 'I won't bother you with this topic anymore!', or when he says girly or girl, he knows that she likes this way of speaking and she enjoys calling her so (not in , his impression is that she loves his daddy figure! (not only in relation to his physique or age).

Tahir considers Meena, a young, pretty playmate and nothing more, who wants to freely participate in his erotic games, and if one of them no longer wants to, the game ends. He takes into account her will and her inclinations, much more than the other two!

Cheers,
Salir
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Earlier we both saw how Nadir was out of line in a party when some one like Cyrus misbehaved with Meena, so we both criticized Nadir, and I agree at that time Nadir was not thinking straight, but here everything that is happening with Tahir was a pre-planned game and a well played match. If you think Tahir is in more control than Meena and Nadir here, then you are completely misinterpreting the circumstances based on purely the dominating persona of Tahir. Yes he is a dominating personality but he knows his limits and the moment he crosses the line beyond the bedroom, he will be put in his place by Meena. 

His words "girl" or "girly" are merely his slang used by a farm guy compared to the sophisticated city men, but that doesn't mean he is owning Meena here....

Nadir either becomes water carrier or a mere spectator or anything for that matter is because he chooses to be so for his happiness and his wife's happiness..if the couple finds happiness in their experiments and adventures and with in their realm (that means their life) I do not think I or you have no right to call Nadir a water boy...In fact I feel he is giving his wife a unique experience that she will cherish for a long time.

How can you say he is no longer pulling the strings?

Do you see anywhere here that depicts a picture that Nadir doesn't know anything that is happening in his home or in the farm?

When a series of events happen and those events are discussed before between Meena and Nadir, then how can you imply that its not in his control? Also why do we talk about control? Isn't Meena adult enough to take her own decisions? If she thinks Tahir is a problem for her and Nadir, she will address it herself and there is no need for intervention from Nadir. She hesitates sometimes when she is with people she likes in general but once she knows they are different persons altogether and they mean harm to her and her family, do you think Meena will hesitate and let Tahir control her? 

Also what is reality? Why do you think Nadir is far from reality? Do you think giving his wife to another man for night and subsequent nights or maybe initiating an affair between them means they are far from reality? How? I see no signs so far that this affair caused any damage to the couple, emotionally or physically so why are they far from reality? When you say reality, does that reality mean a picture perfect family that you have formed in your mind? And if Nadir and Meena does not match with that picture then they are far from the reality?


~RCF
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Who gets to decide what is common or natural? I will only criticize a couple if their actions are hurting each other and otherwise how they lead their life and on what terms and in what terms they find happiness, no one gets to judge them...or has any right to define what is right or wrong.

If Meena is happy, Nadir is happy when Meena is spending time with Tahir then I do not see why readers should be upset lol

As for Tahir, I found him interesting and its too early to say he manipulated Meena, yes he came unannounced to the house and wanted private time with her and when she hesitated he was upset, but did he use his disappointment to manipulate Meena? He simply left and stayed with Cyrus but Meena accidentally found out that he is still in the city, so she felt bad and invited him back but did he make her invite to her home by manipulation? I do not think so

As for arrogance, yes his dominating behavior sometimes gives that impression, and we will see if its only limited to private time or if his behavior will exceed beyond closed walls, if he behaves as he own Meena then I will agree with you.

~RCF
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Common man, where's the fun in not commenting, Fun is in arguing our perspectives in a friendly manner and if we have disagree then we should agree to disagree. Not commenting will only make author to abandon the story and make it boring. 

~RCF
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Common guys, every time some one misinterprets the story, you guys cannot abandon the story like this...judgements and misinterpretations are part and parcel for a writer and readers who are reading it...how many books or movies receive negative comments though its just a perspective of some one misinterpreting it. Doesn't mean it becomes the truth, when you guys know the truth then why get offended? Instead we explain to our friend how it works through the story.

I have been asking you guys over and over to keep continuing and this leaving the story in the middle again and again is repeating. We are all adults here and lets not be offended so easily, we need to argue but its only to talk about different perspectives. Do you guys know how many times I have fought with other readers in this portal over the years over perceptions, but its all fun at the end.

I request Meena mam to continue the story and entertain us.

~RCF
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Alright you win guys!

I wish all the best for Nadir and Meena! Thanks for the story so far and we enjoyed it thoroughly.

Take care!

~RCF
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(19-03-2025, 10:24 PM)RCF Wrote: Alright you win guys!

I wish all the best for Nadir and Meena! Thanks for the story so far and we enjoyed it thoroughly.

Take care!

~RCF

Dear RCF and other friends!

A very delicate phase has entered our narration here, strangely enough not directly in the Story but next to it!


She, my Meena, no longer wants to be next to me here, and in my opinion she is right! One shouldn’t verbally attack the 
protagonist directly at a true story, it is just not legitimate!

As she writes, it is not a fiction with thought -out people but people with flesh and blood!

As far as time is concerned, she is also right. We are not other than years ago and I don't see that as an excuse either!
 
Everyone can go into this, imagine himself as Nadir or Meena (Lollo included!), and judge whether this is pleasant ... 
We saw you readers as friends and spoke with you about over lives, the paths we've taken, our friends and companions, 
our feelings, our joyful moments, our differences and sad moments, our inclinations, our passions, joys and pleasures, 
and our ecstasies...
 
If we expect criticism, it's not directed at us or to them who were there, next to us, personally, but at the way we tell it and 
how the story is presented...
 
Who gives one the right to judge? The right to play the role of the educator here? And ultimately condemn, and do so with 
such self-righteousness and such labels?
 
I do not know if I’ll continue the narration, this is what I told “her” too… Whether I will have the desire and time to continue, I do not know at all if I stay here in this portal…
 
I’ll decide in next days…
 
thank you for the accompaniment,
 
Cheers,
Nadir
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