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11-03-2025, 07:58 AM
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Good update.. I like all the scenes specially when SALIM was getting impatient for SHIPRA in front of his first predator.. but friend about Shrutika I am very much wondering about one thing... You didn't even reveal her figure atleast.. It seems you hv hidden her inside a burqa.. Another thing tht was still missing was conversation between SHIPRA and TOPPO..
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Dear Friend.. When will you bring TOPPO in to action.. It seems SHIPRA will not hv any intimate relationship with TOPPO or SALIM.. And even if she had then due to your so much kindness all of us readers would hv stopped getting erection because of बुढ़ापा...plz save something for these two atleast as PATODE has almost eaten everything of SHIPRA..
G. B. U
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Need this treatment for shipra
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The latest is one of the best updates, even if it has only little sex. It focuses on Shipra's conflict while in the company of her husband. The meeting and sex with Alok was necessary at this point. Now she will be clearer in the next stage in her transformation.
Suraj could work on describing the clothes she wears at different times in more detail.
Along with Salim, he could introduce other characters, so that a gangbang could happen.
Wonder when we may expect the next episode.
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When are we getting next update
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13-03-2025, 09:11 PM
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Hi suraj,
Kaise ho? Sab tek Hai?
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Shipra is enjoying her stay with husband and son. Cute little family of theirs. Or may be she needs some rest after that relentless pounding from patode.
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Patience has its virtue. Fingers crossed.
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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When we except next update
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Patode should make shipra show her husband wimp dick and make her compare with him in the video call and humiliate it and make her beg and masturbate herself. it is how he can take a complete control. Awesome.
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Hai suraj... Due to holi i guess there wont be any update..
But can u pls tell us when is the next update
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Next update will be somewhere around Thursday next week. I am at home for Holi hence the delay.
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(14-03-2025, 09:30 PM)Suraj76626 Wrote: Next update will be somewhere around Thursday next week. I am at home for Holi hence the delay.
Take ur time but one request... Atleast in next update shw shipra submissive side through attitude and words pls... Just a request... Ur wish to take or leave it
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(14-03-2025, 09:30 PM)Suraj76626 Wrote: Next update will be somewhere around Thursday next week. I am at home for Holi hence the delay.
No issues bro.. Enjoy your precious time with your beloved family.. But update must be exactly as expected....
Happy Holi..
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Suraj your writing have been top class. The way you build it up , poise it with constant dubcon with shipra and patode. I read some post saying it is repetitive but I think they are simply looking for change of new sexual unfolding ways . But tbh I completely understand and feel through the turmoil of emotions you have potrayed so far for your characters . and it is only justified and realistic with life we look around, the high moral ground people hold for society with an expectation or fantasy stirred within of their own . Your description and details that lead to voyeurism, edging and drama fit each scene justified with a mix of realism and yet rewarding of various fantasy a person may dream to live or participate through.
Thanks for letting me live through all these intellectual beauty of your words and ideas. I have many more for myself probably we could discuss those sometime to create more high quality stories with perfectly curated top class characters ( not saying you haven't created some already but I am just suggesting I might have some more beautiful ways of getting more of them together to paint the crazy scenes and situations with them together)
I am sensing some link for shrutika n patode here .
one of the idea I have atm given the season and your characters is to possibly down the line have a political wild holi party . Maybe with patode gaining political heights after saad. Shrutika having the story of her own from past , now also being under his political control as an sho of the town . Shipra already the submissive he has tamed and namrata gaining the first hand experience of something so raw and special that she is awed to all the marvellous powershift and polygamy unfolding at the town with rising heat and levels of their ordeal . You also have bhiva and his gang to make arrangements, toppo can come along too.
I hope I just didn't jump too much with my first ever comment in this forum.
Just take what you feel right and leave all other noise , you are already doing so good brother .
Keep up the ecstasy and tease with your beautiful characters .
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Badly waiting for the next update
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Bro when can we expect next update..??
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So no update today.. Because you said there will be update today. Anyway no issues... Take ur time.. We r waiting
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21-03-2025, 06:35 PM
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Sorry for the delay guys... Returned from home on Tuesday and was busy with pending work. Will try to finish the chapter in the upcoming weekend. Will let you know with the progress.
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