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I thought she would finger herself seeing the cock of patode.
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Poor lady shipra is going to suffer till the time she is with Alok.
Wonderful narration
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Let patode make her orgasm through video call in the night.
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Alok should pay the price for not satisfying his wife.
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Now shipra understood what she wants in life.
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Great!
story fulfills the
exceptions of
( love,lust,life) ... In human day today life.
Shirpa a normal wife turned a slut, due to
Past love boyfriend,
Present lust with patode,
Future , the life her giving lots of suprise lessons .
Who knows that, what happen next,
I love your writing the way of express women of view...
I know ,read lots of stories but your are "ghost"...
Like,
1) shirpa narmatha conversation
2)pathode and salim conversation
3) shruthika arriving
4) alok shipra sex
5) finally , shipra realize what was she and know who findout her slutiness....
Thanks a lot spending your valulable time for us...
Im eagerly waiting for your next shows of shipra..........................
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point of no return. patode so far has been trustworthy. will he maintain the same and continue as hero of the story or turn villain by playing a pimp making both his sluts sleep with his bosses.
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This update is awesome and on point. It is less erotic but necessary for the story to moving forward. Really nice update.
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Many new users are logging in and commenting.. good..
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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Good update.. I like all the scenes specially when SALIM was getting impatient for SHIPRA in front of his first predator.. but friend about Shrutika I am very much wondering about one thing... You didn't even reveal her figure atleast.. It seems you hv hidden her inside a burqa.. Another thing tht was still missing was conversation between SHIPRA and TOPPO..
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Dear Friend.. When will you bring TOPPO in to action.. It seems SHIPRA will not hv any intimate relationship with TOPPO or SALIM.. And even if she had then due to your so much kindness all of us readers would hv stopped getting erection because of बुढ़ापा...plz save something for these two atleast as PATODE has almost eaten everything of SHIPRA..
G. B. U
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The latest is one of the best updates, even if it has only little sex. It focuses on Shipra's conflict while in the company of her husband. The meeting and sex with Alok was necessary at this point. Now she will be clearer in the next stage in her transformation.
Suraj could work on describing the clothes she wears at different times in more detail.
Along with Salim, he could introduce other characters, so that a gangbang could happen.
Wonder when we may expect the next episode.
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When are we getting next update
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Hi suraj,
Kaise ho? Sab tek Hai?
....
Shipra is enjoying her stay with husband and son. Cute little family of theirs. Or may be she needs some rest after that relentless pounding from patode.
...
Patience has its virtue. Fingers crossed.
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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