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Sorry to say this, the first line of today's update made me feel that this will not get connected to me... Reason is because in ur last episode u ended in such a place where shipra says to patode to fuck me and accept that she is under his control...
So basic mentality what a reader will have is to know wat all conversations happen between them... Wat was attitude of patode after tat fuck because he told namrata that after today sex shipra will degrade herself than u do... So everyone will wish to hear tat emotion... How shipra degraded herself...wat happen etc... but u simply cut that scene just like tat and started writting back home which didn't work for me ..
SO TO SUM UP, I DIDN'T LIKE TODAY'S UPDATE...SORRY...WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE...
My sincere request is pls come out of tat loop...now shipra is broken...wats next ..pls shw us that .. Eagerly waiting for it ..
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09-03-2025, 05:13 AM
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Perfectly written.
The devil made Shipra believe that, she can be both, a whore to patode as well as homemaker to Alok.
There comes endless possibilities. It brings the concept of Shipra cheating her husband behind his back, and the erotic play that comes with that scenario.
Think about Shipra sexting to Patode while lying in the same bed with alok. Or recording a bath video or stripping for Patode when alok is in bath.
Shipra now decided that she needs both men in her life, one for her pussy and another one for the society. Thanks to Namrata, the devil played her part very well.
Submission, yes patode had sown the seed in Shipras mind. Normal sex won't be enough for Shipra now. To be satisfied she has to break the barriers each time.
Making Shipra to end her marriage or stopping her from being the proper high class work going bank women, will take the essence of the story. She needs to be the women what she is now, yet lust makes her to cross the limits. Stick to this, and build scenes around that.
... continue
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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09-03-2025, 05:25 AM
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In everyone's life there will be friend, whether it's drinking, smoking or even porn will be introduced by a friend.
Even when that friend is no longer with us, but that bad habit will continue to be with us.
Whorification of Shipra isn't the ordeal, the ordeal is being a proper women, how low she descends to be satisfied.
There will be a point, when she can pick any men as her wish for the night, not just patode.
The mind changes when you taste the forbidden fruit. Looking forward for patode's plan for making Shipra a whore.
How she struggles mentally and finally breaking out of it
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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Nowadays feminism is like
My Husband slapped me, I need a divorce.
Also her
I slept with another man, that's a mistake.
And social norms nowadays are
Don't loose a good women, just because she slept with another man.
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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Story is going great as usual. Shipra already knows that Alok is a wimp and he can never match patode. I still wonder whether she felt his tiny cock inside her after being fucked multiple times with monster dick. Even Alok should have noticed that her vagina is loose and something wrong about it. After the intense fuck with patode previous night, she should have multiple hickeys in her body and that too went unnoticed by this useless husband. ??
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I thought she would finger herself seeing the cock of patode.
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Poor lady shipra is going to suffer till the time she is with Alok.
Wonderful narration
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Let patode make her orgasm through video call in the night.
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Alok should pay the price for not satisfying his wife.
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Now shipra understood what she wants in life.
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Great!
story fulfills the
exceptions of
( love,lust,life) ... In human day today life.
Shirpa a normal wife turned a slut, due to
Past love boyfriend,
Present lust with patode,
Future , the life her giving lots of suprise lessons .
Who knows that, what happen next,
I love your writing the way of express women of view...
I know ,read lots of stories but your are "ghost"...
Like,
1) shirpa narmatha conversation
2)pathode and salim conversation
3) shruthika arriving
4) alok shipra sex
5) finally , shipra realize what was she and know who findout her slutiness....
Thanks a lot spending your valulable time for us...
Im eagerly waiting for your next shows of shipra..........................
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09-03-2025, 05:34 PM
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point of no return. patode so far has been trustworthy. will he maintain the same and continue as hero of the story or turn villain by playing a pimp making both his sluts sleep with his bosses.
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This update is awesome and on point. It is less erotic but necessary for the story to moving forward. Really nice update.
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(10-03-2025, 02:11 AM)iCuby Wrote: This update is awesome and on point. It is less erotic but necessary for the story to moving forward. Really nice update.
I totally agree with you
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10-03-2025, 10:29 AM
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Many new users are logging in and commenting.. good..
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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11-03-2025, 07:58 AM
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Good update.. I like all the scenes specially when SALIM was getting impatient for SHIPRA in front of his first predator.. but friend about Shrutika I am very much wondering about one thing... You didn't even reveal her figure atleast.. It seems you hv hidden her inside a burqa.. Another thing tht was still missing was conversation between SHIPRA and TOPPO..
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