Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness

[Speedy21]

I wonder y good stories doesn't get appreciated that deserve xossipy all about cuck stories

[Harry Jordan]

I wonder y good stories doesn't get appreciated that deserve  xossipy all about cuck stories

I mean , its one of the flaws of Xossipy. It has one of the best and largest collection of Indian themes sex stories and erotica but roughly 85% of them are "wimp husband" stories or "cuckold" ones. I guess Indians are too wimpy with mindsets like that 

[Paty@123]

అంటే, ఇది Xossipy యొక్క లోపాలలో ఒకటి. ఇది సెక్స్ మరియు ఎరోటికా అనే భారతీయ ఇతివృత్తాల యొక్క ఉత్తమ మరియు అతిపెద్ద సేకరణలలో ఒకటి, కానీ వాటిలో దాదాపు 85% "వింప్ హస్బెండ్" కథలు లేదా "కోకోల్డ్" కథలు. భారతీయులు అలాంటి మనస్తత్వాలతో చాలా వింపీగా ఉంటారని నేను అనుకుంటున్నాను. 

This kind of opinions are wrong they will be mostly dominant, but the people who follow  western and uropian erotic literature the may be influenced by this

[Harry Jordan]

This kind of opinions are wrong they will be mostly dominant, but the people who follow  western and uropian erotic literature the may be influenced by this

Honestly I want it to be wrong. I mean places like Literotica and ArchiceOfOurOwn have so much rich stories that tackles even cuckolding in a better way. But for some reason Xossipy has only one approach to cuckold stories , and that is  "Husband is wimp" and "Loser Husband" trait along with lack of improvement in character. Stories end the same way it begins with not a single character evolving or changing. I hope my story gives other authors to start brining different ideas like this. I just want this site to be good , because it has a lot of Indian themes and the quality of literotica should be implemented on Indian themes in this site which will improve it.

[Speedy21]

This kind of opinions are wrong they will be mostly dominant, but the people who follow  western and uropian erotic literature the may be influenced by th

Xossipy lo full ga cuck stories a kada bro malie endhuku literotcia tho compare chastavu a site better anipistundi eduku andaru cuck stories kavali

[Paty@123]

Xossipy lo full ga cuck stories a kada bro malie endhuku literotcia tho compare chastavu a site better anipistundi eduku andaru cuck stories kavali

Sir, I have not compared with any site, but, majority of the stories are being copied from Literotica here by writers, is it not, I am sorry if any body hurts with this comment

[Speedy21]

Sir, I have not compared with any site, but, majority of the stories are being copied from Literotica here by writers, is it not, I am sorry if any body hurts with this comment

 It's  what it's  Indian erotic reader like cuck and wimp  stories  more than oneone in the world  I hope this kinda mindset doesn't hurt their realife ...

[rp7575]

How many Days Are You Getting Update I think You Narrate Great Story But Please Update Early As Possible

[Speedy21]

Update mate!?

[Jyoti1988]

My favourite second story but not update regurly That was sad for me

[Rocky@handsome]

OMG, Bro!! It finally happened!!! Vikram succeeded in seducing Sonarika and she ended up cheating Hemant.

Very well written and seriously i enjoyed every bit of it.

I'm loving this series thoroughly--can't wait to see how Sonarika  relationship with her husband (Hemant)changes and grows!!

Hey Harry Bro!! I just don't have enough words to describe how much I've loved your writing.

More than anything, I think I appreciate the consistency of Hemant's character, how you've drawn us through his struggle between past and present, longing and fear.I think there's a lot to be said for maintaining the integrity of the narrative as you have.

For me, the one thing which makes this series stand head and shoulders above most writing on xossipy has  been, the rebuilding husband's (Hemant)  character for future intensifying drama!!

This is surely going to be  a great series with many twists and turns! Honestly I'm not sure where I want this story to go...but one thing I'm sure that this story of yours will change the perspectives of most the readers who thinks that husband's are losers or wimp and can't compete with lover's of cheating wife.

I think this would be a start of audiences who would really appreciate husband to be strong - mentally and physically

I would love hemant to remain loyal--atleast till he founds out the truth of cheating wife,so that he have high moral grounds when he takes a perfect revenge/or make her suffer with same pain of cheating before reclaiming Sonarika back

However the sex scene between (Vikram and Sonarika ) intense weren't over the top as too many stories are lately. I'll look forward to the further adventures of Sonarika and Vikram where ever life takes them!

Your writing is Undoubtedly superb and knowing that some of it is from your reading experiences is even more fascinating.

You definitely are perfect skillful Author(as all the criteria's to be good author are naturally presented in your creative brain) and not just a simple writer.

Thanks again harry  for marvellous writing.

Will be eagerly waiting for your next update?❤️

[Harry Jordan]

Thank you all for the kind words and appreciation for the story. As for the update goes , the next one will take time as I am only halfway there. Turns out I do like writing lengthy updates because I do intend to cover a lot of development and story with each chapter. And since I have already said Age Of Darkness will only have 10 chapters , we are almost halfway done with it. The reason I am taking this much time is I need to work on the sex scenes and spoiler alert the next chapter will have A LOT OF IT!  



I feel honored that some of you have liked the characters I have written and that makes me feel motivated. There is still a lot of character exploration that will come eventually. I have intentionally hidden some of the past story arcs because I am writing the story to a point of time where that can be revealed and the impact of it to the whole narrative to be monumental. For me the most interesting part of my story begins because I will be indeed exploring some other themes like action and drama in the upcoming chapters. For now , Chapter 5 will be heavily based on romance. Which means there will be moderate amount of sex scenes , which is why I need time to polish it because I need to make sure the chemistry between characters and their dynamic works.


So , the next update might take a week more probably next Thursday or Friday. But If I managed to complete it before that , then you can expect an early surprise like Chapter 4 was. I know a lot of you are curious , but I write lengthy chapters and thus I need more time in writing it so I hope you understand the long intervals between chapter updates. However , I still follow the two week interval between each chapter as my ideal timeline because that helps me polishing the story

Hope you all are having a good time.

 Wishing You All A Good Day.

          Your's Truly

 HARRY JORDAN   

[Speedy21]

Thank you all for the kind words and appreciation for the story. As for the update goes , the next one will take time as I am only halfway there. Turns out I do like writing lengthy updates because I do intend to cover a lot of development and story with each chapter. And since I have already said Age Of Darkness will only have 10 chapters , we are almost halfway done with it. The reason I am taking this much time is I need to work on the sex scenes and spoiler alert the next chapter will have A LOT OF IT!  



I feel honored that some of you have liked the characters I have written and that makes me feel motivated. There is still a lot of character exploration that will come eventually. I have intentionally hidden some of the past story arcs because I am writing the story to a point of time where that can be revealed and the impact of it to the whole narrative to be monumental. For me the most interesting part of my story begins because I will be indeed exploring some other themes like action and drama in the upcoming chapters. For now , Chapter 5 will be heavily based on romance. Which means there will be moderate amount of sex scenes , which is why I need time to polish it because I need to make sure the chemistry between characters and their dynamic works.


So , the next update might take a week more probably next Thursday or Friday. But If I managed to complete it before that , then you can expect an early surprise like Chapter 4 was. I know a lot of you are curious , but I write lengthy chapters and thus I need more time in writing it so I hope you understand the long intervals between chapter updates. However , I still follow the two week interval between each chapter as my ideal timeline because that helps me polishing the story

Hope you all are having a good time.

 Wishing You All A Good Day.

          Your's Truly

 HARRY JORDAN   

U have long to update i hope the update worth waiting foor

[DeanWinchester00007]

[DeanWinchester00007]

Ah Man , what is this ? Who wrote this ? Is it the same Harry ? 

I remember , while ago we were talking about ending of this specific story and Harry said that he was thinking to re write the ending of that story just for our satisfaction , and then few days later , He said He was thinking to write his own story . I thought that since its gonna be his first story , It would be short one , or something like any other stories , But Boy this , I never expected this . I read the opening of the story few weeks ago , and I stopped reading further , I saved this story for later . Now that i have completed it . 

Man ,I Have to say this what a story , I just could not express it in words , How fresh it felt after reading so many stories filled with the same plot again again again  , Finally we have something Fresh and Unique . The whole concept , Characters, Suspense , Thriller and So many Plot in just one story that's very commendable . 

You created an Intricate Plot , So many characters , and many plots yet there is no confusing. The pacing is great and while reading the story everything is clear , I mean that there is no confusing , The story is well thought out and written in a way that it does not create any confusion and there is no plot holes also . 

As someone who claimed that this is his first Attempt , You, Sir Harry is big Liar .   If this is your first attempt , and this is your first story then I am thinking what's your 3rd or 5th story gonna looks like.

I dont think there is hardly any member in XOSSIPY who does not know you . Harry is well known who his detailed analysis of the stories and For his comments . His comments always gives fresh perspective about the stories , and they always varies too . He has great knowledge of pop culture too. Often his comments Filled with references from Literature to Movies   which also helps others reader to read about those books or movies . Sometimes his comments are better than stories and Also longer than some stories 
but Its always fun to read his comments after every update . 

Many Writers create only One plot in the story , But here you have created so many plots and they are all connected with each other .

Will write more about story , Later . I wanna re read some parts 

 Harry . Kudos to you . Its so interesting and exciting . 


The only Criticism i have is *UPDATE* *UPDATE* *UPDATE*   ( Mujhe Update do Mujhe Update do Mujhe Update do )

[DeanWinchester00007]

[DeanWinchester00007]

[DeanWinchester00007]

Many Many Congratulations to Harry ! 

One of the great thing about this story is THE CHARACTERS . All the characters are so interesting and with having some background it makes really easy to understand their motive . 

Every Character and their action and their motive can be understand . 

Like for Example Sonarika . Sonarika cheating on her husband was not even surprising . Its feels natural that she is gonna cheat on her husband . Her Interaction with Meghna ( fucking bitch , I just hate her   Writer did great job in creating a character like her , its too good ) and Her explanation why did she married to Husband . 

While I was reading the earlier chapters , Her interaction with Meghna , And the way Meghna just talking shit about Sonarika's husband , Sonarika was not even bothered , Instead of Shutting her up , She was defending her husband giving unnecessary explanation  , How can you hear something so bad about the person who you claimed to be in love . Then I thought She is gonna cheat , Why ? Later in chapters She accepted that While husband loved her she made herself to fall in with her husband , Why she married ? because she always had some Husband Image in her mind , And her husband was best choice who fullfill her idea of Ideal Husband , that's it . There was no love . 10 years of marriage goes down the drain . Worst thing is That Vikram did not even do much , She just gave herself up because She never loved her husband ( and also explains the stereotype that women do anything for the man she loves    ), She also thinks that she loves Vikram but no She still chasing the Silhouette . So i knew she is gonna cheat and she did . Meghna What a character , Its good , Its kind of rage baiting. I think she is better than Sonarika , Atleast she is honest about her opinion . Sonarika has no respect for her Husband , No fear of her husband, and hemant is partially responsible for this too , He just asleep for too long to see , He is predator and he suppressed his instinct . That is why i think Sonarika felt some king burden on her shoulders and and that is why she might be fed up with his attitude and also because He never was her Prince Charming . So You see her character was written or created in way that you dont feel shock but her cheating is well justify and its not bad thing may be this turn out good thing for her , I used to hate these thing but after reading her side of story it seems fine she cheated on her husband  . This is thing i felt that Characters action can be understood with given back story and with well written dialogue .
But The thing that Surprised me is that She cheated too soon . I thought The First Part , There is gonna be 10 chapters so maybe in chapter 6 or 7 we gonna see this . In just 4 chapters it feels like that writer revealed everything but no there are 6 chapters left ,I cannot imagine if these 4 chapters contains so much content what those 6 chapters gonna have   .


And the side characters does not even feel side characters , at this point there is so many plots that the story can turn to any direction , Anyone at this point can become the Main character and at any given point we can explore the backstory or can focus on story of any character be it Kunal's Parinitha's or Shepherd or Sidharth's etc etc . I mean Harry can create the multiverse here 

And also Kunal's character was also good . i like your take . Yes Kunal is cuckold and he should not get punished for it , He is successful businessman , Apart from his kink , He is a capable Human being not some losers like Every other Husband character in Indian Erotic forums. There was this story every thing was going great but suddenly writer decided to turn the husband Impotent , See if you cuck then its end for you, you deserve worst fate possible .

And now My Favorite  HERO 


                                                                                      HEMANT 

Finally After so many Stories We Finally have a Husband Character who is not born cuck , Who is not pathetic loser , Who does not deserve the worst fate because you got married . Hemant Character feels so natural . Best Character Ever .

The creation of Hemant Character was so great , The backstory , The PTSD, His calm demeanor , His attitude, His dad body , and him not realizing his true potential , and His reluctance to let the real Hemant out . Everything is understandable because his backstory explained so well . This is perfect example of Natural Character . 

Finally We have something so positive in Indian Erotic Forum . After reading Hemant part of the story , I dont even feel sad that his wife cheated on him , I was happy because He deserves much better than her and he will get someone so much better her . The thing is in Many stories there always be imbalance where wife character gets so praise but husband get downgraded so bad that there is no scope for Husband Character . 

Here if Sonarika is 6 then Hemant is 10    . Finally some balance , both are equals . 

I dont know what plans you have for Hemant , But for me The moment there i see some sign of Hemant's cuckoldness or Him forgiving her wife adultery , I will take my exit . Both of these things Hemant character is never gonna do . 

Also I am bit worried because there are too many Villains and Hemant is kind of Alone , Its gonna be hard for Hemant . There is gonna be too much pressure on Hemant's character . Those thugs , Then this Shepherd's guy , Then Parintha's shaddy business ( Human trafficking ), Then I am afraid if his Mentor Roy ( if am not wrong ) gonna backstab him , Then this fucking basterd Vikram ( I wish hemant shows him What kind of beast he is , Like Collar pakad ke hawa me utha de   ) and Then small time villains Meghna , I am against the any kind of violence but I need some female character to just punch her in the face ( Sorry ) . All of this too much for Hemant , Then his wife infidelity and then his son . To be Honest I always discourage the idea of including kids . Kids in the story makes harder for couple to split up . 

And Now he is Transforming , The beast in Him , when wakes will tear and eat every one . 

And also I wanna praise your creativity    to Include the bollywood in the story and its kind of logical too , He lives in mumbai and surrounded by high profile people and that Manish Malhotra's cameo made me chuckle , And your choice to include out of all bollywood heroines you choose  Mrunal thakur just wow hahahahahah . This is incredible . 


I am eagerly waiting and kind of scared If something gonna happen to Hemant . I just wanna see the Beast in him for once . 
Man , the opening paragraph was too good , It can used for Movies . I really wanna know what happened back there . 


I have so many thoughts but at this point I cannot articulate all of them , Will make another post.


Again , Hats off to Harry  , I mean what i can add more in your praise . Kudos to you . 

And again *Calender Update do* *Calender Update do*  *Calender Update do* *Calender Update do* . lol 

( Take your time , And if possible can you please post Update on weekends )

[rp7575]

We are waiting for story update man

[Speedy21]

Update harry !?