[Salir]

It’s bittersweet to accept that you’ve chosen not to continue this story. 
I won’t ask why—you’ve explained it multiple times, of course—but it’s hard to accept that your words, 
your narration, will no longer be part of it.

On the other hand, it’s great to hear that Meena is interested in continuing the story
And we’ve already seen her exceptional writing and there’s no doubt she’ll do an incredible job.

Still, I’ll miss your narration.
The magic isn't just in the writing; It is the combination of both yours and Meena’s voices that made this story truly unique.

Dear frined,

I'll stay all time at her side and also present in this story all time as one of main charakters, but 
this will be more her story and I think this will include also her confesssions about her feelings, her emotions, her passions, and her inclinations! And believe me, it will be very interesting and exciting...

Have fun...
Nadir 

[Dallol]

Ebony And Ivory ...

[Lovecraft]

It's fantastic news that Meena will continue the story,

we've already seen glimpses of her incredible writing and narration,

but now, we’ll get to experience everything directly from her perspective—her emotions, desires, and raw, unfiltered thoughts.

[Blackdick11]

I understand and respect your decision,
but is Meena really interested in continuing this story? we would feel a bit assured if she herself confirms it.

[Salir]

I understand and respect your decision,
but is Meena really interested in continuing this story? we would feel a bit assured if she herself confirms it.

Here Meena speaks...:

Oh... No... No, please help... This monstrous, repulsive man is taking advantage of my weakness for him and my trust in him, and making me do the terrible writing for him! Such a shameless guy...

But jokes aside (except for my weakness for him... which is no joke!), I like doing this and I want to continue the story, it's fun... I liked the few times I've tried here before.

Just two points: 
firstly, up to now, Nadir's story has almost always been true, but from now on, my story doesn't have to be like that... I won't admit when and how and which part corresponds to reality and which part doesn't... So my imagination and powers of invention and fantasy should help me to write an exciting piece...

Secondly, please don't put me under pressure! I write when I want and can, I have a job and work intensively, because my dear husband doesn't want to finance my expenses! Then I have to continue working ieven n my advanced age and earn my own money! (that was also a joke, and you don't need to collect money from me!) 

I know that waiting for next update isn't pleasant but neither is writing under pressure!

With that in mind, 
let's stay in touch and I hope the first update from me will appear in the next few days...

Kisses to all my readers!
M.

[Dallol]

I Was Made For Loving You ...

[Blackdick11]

So, the truth is, from now on, you are our new author, and the story will be a mix of reality and your creative imagination... which will makes it even more exciting! 
The mystery of what’s real and what’s not will keep us all hooked,
And don’t worry, no pressure—we’ll wait (impatiently but excitedly) for each new update!

[Salir]

Dear friends, 


after a somewhat longer conversation with my life diamond, we agreed that from time to time, 
when the course of the story requires it and I and my feelings could not necessarily be 
described by the author, I will add what I think is important, but only as far as me, Nadir, 
is concerned and perhaps Meena may have no idea about it, whether my actions or my thoughts.

That means you won't get rid of me completely! 

I read her writing anyway before she upload it, and if it is necessary and the story needs adjustment, 
I will get back to you here, but as I said just to complete the narrate and not to change the course…

Enjoy,
Salir/Nadir

P.S.: I hope she had the first new update for you, today or tomorrow, I am curious, I think you too  

[Salir]

Meena Narrates: To be a good girl… (1) 

As Meena woke up, she didn’t see Nadir but a paper on her nightstand, written on it: ‘I'm 

leaving for hospital at 7:15, there are some accident injuries. I'll probably be late, love you, 

kiss,’.

Meena looked at the clock, it was 9:30 o'clock. Too late, she said quietly and stood up. 

She thought she had no time and should make breakfast for the two guests. But when she 

was in the living room in the basement, she saw no sign of life from either of them. They 

weren't in the guest house either. Then in the kitchen she found a note.

'We're leaving, we noticed that Nadir is lgoing away, and we assume that you're sleeping, I have 

to meet someone and Tahir also has plans to do and must drive away. Thanks for everything, we'll stay in 

touch, PS: you're great! Kisses, Farzan,'

Meena told herself, ‘It’s a beautiful day today, nobody wants anything from me and everyone 

is talking to me per mail!’

She took first her breakfast, then tidied up the guest house and kitchen, and finally did her 

gymnastics and fitness program.


After showering, when she wanted to eat an apple as lunch in the living room, she noticed 

that there is a message on her phone. Obviously, it was sent when she was in bathroom. It 

was from Tahir: ‘'Hello lady, I'm not so ungrateful and rude, I'll stop by for a coffee at 3 o'clock 

before I leave, I have to do something in town, say hello to your husband, Tahir'

Meena was a little worried. She didn't know what to do. Should she write back that she is not 

at home? But then she thought that Tahir should know that Nadir could be at home or could come 

back at any moment.


Meena was busy with thoughts when Nadir called and asked if everything was okay. She 

knew that Nadir would be worried about what would happen next between her and the 

two old men. She told him about the two guests, that they had left before she woke up, but 

she had a SMS from Tahir recently that said he wants to come for s coffee later. Then she 

asked him what should she do?

Nadir replied, "You don't have to do anything. You wait until he comes, then you see what 

takes place and behave as you always do. He's only coming to drink a coffee, but if 

something happens, it's no problem for me and you can behave as you wish. And Tahir is a 

friend and not a violent person, especially not an asshole like Saleh! back then!" and he laughed.

Meena was now reassured. On the one hand, Tahir didn't know when Nadir would be back, 

and on the other hand, her husband was informed. She just told Nadir that, to calm her, 

he should please call at around 3:30 p.m. to say that he would be there soon. She wants to 

be sure.


Meena deliberately changed her shorts for a long pants and put on a shirt from Nadir that 

was big and loose.


At 3:30 pm Tahir was there. He came in and first kissed her on the cheeks. Apparently, he 

wanted to kiss Meena on the lips but she pulled her face away. 

Meena obviously appeared kind of uncomfortable while led him to living room.

Tahir sat down on a chair and spoke, “I wanted just to come and ask if I or we did something 

wrong, something that you didn’t agree with,”.

Meena was surprised, “No… No, why I was…why do you ask?”.

Tahir said calmly, “Because you didn’t come downstairs to me in the morning, although you 

had promised, I was there and waited for you.”

Meena looked a bit confused and then she said, “Oh… Sorry, I was very tired, and overslept, 

I am so sorry,”

"Oh. Did we exaggerate? Sorry, but I thought you wanted it, to be honest we both thought, 

you showed that you were having a lot of fun.”

“Oh, no, I mean yes it was … It was…”, Meena was obviously muddled. 

Then Tahir got up and move to the couch on, where she sat.

“I must say baby, I was very disappointed here waiting and waiting…”,

"So, you still haven't told me when Nadir is back, have we got enough time for us?" he asked, 

smirking. 

Meena had an incredulous expression on her face and Tahir saw this. She replied, "I must 

say I don’t know exactly, but every minute he can arrive,"

“I know what you like Meena, such a beautiful girl like you…”

Meena blushed and looked at his eyes and said nothing. One could tell she was repulsed by 

his speech.

"Come on, you've known me for long now. I am straight, you know. It's just the way I was 

raised to be very blunt in such conditions. You should take it as a compliment.",

", but if you tell me to leave, I leave, do you want me to go away? You know it, we had so much 

fun yesterday and in ranch... I know what you want girl... now I know your hot body and its 

desires, exactly,".

Meena didn’t look at him but looked the other way as if she was afraid he can read her 

thoughts, while Tahir's eyes roamed her body.

Tahir awkwardly stood there while scratching his head, "Didn't mean no harm. Seeing such a 

beautiful woman like yourself, and thinking about last evening… Wow... I can’t keep 

back…"

Meena didn’t answer yet, she was in her thoughts.

Standing right next to her, Tahir edged closer before rubbing his back hand on the side of her 

nearby shoulder and arm, "Your beauty is perfect for a woman, you didn’t answer my 

question, should I go away and never come back? You don’t want me to stay?"

Maybe due to the nonthreatening gesture of using his back hand, Meena didn't flinch away 

and said in an annoyed voice, "Thank you Tahir for your compliment but I … I…”

“You don’t like me? Should I leave?” He insisted provocatively,

Meena said, “It is just because of my husband. I enjoyed our time together, really, I can’t 

deny it but … No…. I don’t want you go away…"

"Okay, but do you like me a bit? Just a small bit?", Tahir continued and smiled.

"Ye...Yes…" Meena awkwardly answered.

She was feeling many emotions; one could see it on her face.

Tahir surprisingly was smooth. He sat down on the couch next to her and gently grabbed 

Meena’s hand and brought it down to his thigh. 

Meena looked into his eyes to see if she was dreaming, she was thinking of the time in the 

farm and the last evening. In fact, she was already in an arousing state, if she wanted to be 

honest.

"I bet this look would turn on any man. Especially an old love hungry man like me,”. he 

pressed her hand on his thigh.

Meena started to feel flustered and wasn't sure how to stop him. She was not at all sure if 

she wanted to stop him.

Tahir continued rubbing his hand on hers. Slowly he took his hand and put it on her  

thigh. He was feeling her luscious legs through the thin pants fabric.

He whispers, " I don't want to hurt you but if you allow me to be honest, I have to say 

something. When I saw you for the first time, in Jalal’s villa, I sensed that you are a hot girl 

waiting to be unleashed. And you showed me in the best way, that I was right…"

He started kissing her neck.

That snapped Meena back to reality. Whimpering in her unwillingness she tried pushing him
 
away, "No! we shouldn't be doing this, not now...".

Tahir was surprised, “What do you mean girl, not now? We had had more than this, much
 
more… Why not now?”.

At this moment, her cell phone rang. She picked it up quickly. 'Hi, yes baby, okay I am 

waiting,'

Then she turned to Tahir and said, "Nadir is coming back, he will be here soon,"

Tahir smiled and said, " is OK, I'm wait for him too, can I have a coffee."

Meena pondered for a few moments, then told him, “Okay, I make a coffee,” And left for 

Kitchen.

She knew that it could take hours till Nadir is there. She didn’t know how to manage the 

Situation until then. 

What to do... Yes, Meena knew into her subconscious that she was already horny for this 

man; some hours ago, they had an incredible and for her a highly filling and satisfying sex. 

She knew herself; she knew since Mansour that she has a weakness that she had not known 

about before when it comes to men who are older, who do not necessarily look pretty and 

modern, who are tall and even misshapen, and, above all, who exude a certain dominance, 

who take what they want and see a woman as "female" and prefer the women who are really 

feminine, especially in bed. And she knew that Tahir was such one. Perhaps more than 

Mansour and certainly more than Jalal, who was more romantic and wanted her as a life 

partner or his wife.

Now she has an inner conflict. She was sexually excited; she remembered that Nadir had 

already, in their last discussions, given her permission to meet any male person her choice, 

but only under one condition: he had to be informed and know about that meeting and later 

she should tell him everything about what happened and how the meeting went, in all detail. 

Now, before that, when he was on the phone, he had no objections to getting closer and 

being more intimate with the old farmer.

Nadir was sure that no love affair would develop between Meena and the old man, only 

perhaps a wild sexual relationship at most. So, there was no danger to his love and life, and 

on the other hand, this could also be a new, more interesting chapter or variation of his 

exciting sex games.

But now, here without Nadir for first time…  She has been pounded by Tahir and even by his
 
friend, Farzan, but then Nadir was there, and she believed that she was only doing this for 

his satisfaction. but was that really so? Or she didn’t want to give in and admit that she, 

personally wanted to have sex with this old man. 

Paradoxically, the more she thought about her conscious problem, it added to her arousal.

Meena sensed, the more she thought about how wrong this all felt, the more wet she 

became.

When she came back and put the coffee cups on the table, she sat down next to him again, 

in her previous place. Tahir took that positive and as an invitation and began to kiss her 

neck again while she tried twisting and pushing him away. But after fighting with him for a few 

minutes, she finally relented. 

This was what her body wanted her to do, to let him kiss her.

Meena decided at that moment to do the most she could do, without to be regretful then, 

just let him to flirt a bit and maybe even make out with this non-giving old man and not more, 

until he gives up or Nadir appears.

She slowly relaxed her arms giving Tahir easier access to kiss her neck and chest. 

All the while his hand felt up her soft thighs just over her pants. 

Meena reluctantly leaned against him, looking down at his hand on her leg while letting him 

licking and sucking her neck making her whole body shiver. 

This old man was having his way with her and her body started to enjoy it even though she 

didn't, she thought and trembled.

She thought about Nadir, he would certainly have enjoyed that, if he were there. In their 

marriage over the years, Nadir was never as aroused as during such encounters. 

In the situation when someone else needed her, took her and wanted to possess her, he 

reached an incredibly satisfying climax. Unsure of how far Meena would let it go, he was
 
already content for what she had done. And she did everything he wanted and wished, for
 
him. At first it was extremely naughty and unlike her which drove her Nadir’s lust through the 

roof. 

Then she thought about herself and her own discovered full enjoyment to play along with his
 
crazy, morally and socially not so accepted games. At first, she was shocked how delightful 

and exciting and pleasant she found them, even if she didn’t admit that and tried not to show 

how she was delighted by those games and enjoyed them. Now, she didn't want to hurt Tahir. 

She knew that she would really like to meet him again. 

Some years ago, she couldn't imagine that someone like Tahir would seduce her like this.

At that moment the phone rang again, but this time it was a landline phone. Meena quickly 

got up and went to the phone, which was on a table next to the stairs.

Her mother was on the phone and Meena talked to her for a long time. Her mother was not 

feeling well with her heart and needed Meena's advice and perhaps wanted to talk to Nadir 

as well. When their conversation lasted a little longer, probably intentionally on Meena's part, 

Tahir got up and went to the bathroom and when he came back, he took his coat. Meena 

paused briefly while on the phone and looked at him questioningly but before she said 

anything, Tahir said, "Unfortunately I have to leave, I want to be in the ranch before dark. 

say hello to your husband, we'll talk later." And moved to door. 

Meena said to her mother to wait a minute and stopped speaking on the phone. She accompanied Tahir 

to the front door of garden and apologized that it had taken so long to make the phone call 

and told him about the sickness of her mother. 

Meena added that she will contact him to arrange some meeting. She then demonstratively 

hugged him tightly for a longer time and kissed him briefly on the cheeks. It was not her intention 

to hurt Tahir. She knew that she would really like to meet him again.

To be continued

[RCF]

We got deviated from the photos session but what an erotic update and adventure from Nadir and Meena.

As I predicted Tahir and Farzan had a fantastic time and best of their lives as far as I know...If we look at the prime Meena from the pics shared from Nadir, for a wild Tahir and reserved Farzan bulls she is clearly out of their league and spending time with her will definitely be once in a life time chance for them...and man they used it so well...Showed good time to Meena as well.

Excited to read what happened when Nadir is not at home next morning and would they use the entire house or pool but I am sure they will explore at every place since Nadir is not at home.

I have been asking for Meena's POV for a long time when she spends time with others..I am so glad we are getting it and we can clearly see how she feels about Tahir and Farzan. Though we get this now we will miss Nadir's feelings and how he sees his wife's adventures and what does he feel about it, I guess its tough to get best of both worlds but I guess it will be nice change of pace in writing style and thoughts, Meena's writing will bring new excitement for readers.

One thing that I do not know how I feel is deviation from reality...why is it necessary? All this while we have read true events and how it changed the course of life of the couple but reality mixed with fantasy could muddle waters. The guessing game will begin on whether if really Meena did this or did not do that...and would distract us from the true happenings so I am not sure how to feel about this one aspect.

~RCF

[Salir]

The second part of chapter, -To be a good girl...(2)-  is already written and will be presented in some hours 

Enjoy,
M.
 

[Salir]

...................One thing that I do not know how I feel is deviation from reality...why is it necessary? All this while we have read true events and how it changed the course of life of the couple but reality mixed with fantasy could muddle waters. The guessing game will begin on whether if really Meena did this or did not do that...and would distract us from the true happenings so I am not sure how to feel about this one aspect.

~RCF

Thank you RCF,

Why do I say that I give no "guarantee" that what is written here corresponds 100% to reality? 

Very simple! Because there are PREJUDICES that I want to avoid, I don't have the nerves for it and no patience, and I don't want to experience certain things again that we were confronted with by reading (more often via private email!) at the past, then I say that it is a fictional story, then everyone accepts it! It's crazy, right? Yes, it is a crazy world...

As a loyal, very intelligent reader who has been watching me and my movements the whole time in the course of the true narrate, you almost certainly know how I act, how I think and how I talk. If you think and you can imagine that Meena could have done this special activity, or thoughts or speaking or..., or that it suits her, then it is so, that means she did it, thought it, said it... I can't say more than that!


Have a nice time,
Meena

[Salir]

 

Meena Narrates: To be a good girl… (2) 

Later, when Nadir tired arrived home from job, his first question was about Tahir’s visit and if
 
something special had happened.
 
Meena told him briefly what was going on. Nadir didn't say much but again stressed that he
 
wouldn't be disappointed or angry if she had wanted to start something with Tahir, no matter
 
how far and intense. Nadir told her that for him, Tahir as her lover for her, is okay and
 
stressed that only she has to describe to him exactly how it was between the two of them
 
afterwards.
 
 
The next day was Monday and Meena as always had much to do. Her new responsibility
 
required her complete and full commitment especially the first days. And the next week was a
 
very busy week.
 
 
On Wednesday, afternoon as she had a cup of coffee in her room, her new secretary
 
reported a young visitor for her via the office pager. Meena asked for his name and the
 
secretary replied that he had identified himself as Mr. Cyrus Noori.
 
Meena was very surprised and told the secretary to send him in.
 
Cyrus was very respectful this time. He apologized again for the recent incident in her home

and said that he understood her and that she wanted to punish him. But now he came to
 
personally congratulate her on her career advancement and also brought his father's
 
congratulations.
 
Then he smiled and added, "He was a bit hurt that that he was not informed directly by you
 
but by me."
 
Meena spoke, "It's not really important thing, it is just a new job with more responsibility, but if
 
you talk to him, excuse me. And how did you find out?".
 
Cyrus replied, "Just yesterday evening Uncle Tahir told me."
 
Meena was a little surprised, "Was he with you? Because he was with us yesterday
 
afternoon and then wanted to go home... Is he okay?".
 
"Yes, he is okay, actually it was planned that he would only go home on Wednesday. He still
 
has a lot to do here, he said, especially with the Asian family. And he's been with me since
 
yesterday evening. He didn't want to stay with Farzan."
 
That was kind of strange for Meena. Is Tahir hurt or insulted by me because of yesterday?
 
Otherwise, why would he have lied and said he was going home? Why didn't he want to stay
 
with Farzan? What was going on between the two of them? Is she to blame for everything?
 
She said, "Cyrus, can you tell him to call me, he has my number, and we need to discuss his
 
invitation this weekend." She didn't want Cyrus becomes sceptical about what is going on
 
that she wants to talk to Tahir.
 
He said, “Is okay I tell him, but promise me that you visit me too, when you are in his farm,”.
 
While he was talking, a message came from outside, 'Professor, Dr. Kharraz is here.'
 
Meena replied, 'He should come in, please.' Then she turned to cyrus, smiled and said, “I
 
Promise to visit you in your farm hause, now I have to go on, I'm sorry,".
 
Cyrus answered, "Sure, see you then, but like I said, if you need anything or you need  
 
somebody to do something for you, anything, just call me," and then he said goodbye.
 
Meanwhile, Hamed was already inside and was watching Cyrus curiously from top to bottom.
 
When Cyrus left, he smiled and said, "Meena, what do I see? You have such attractive young
 
men visitors, I became jealous! “ and winked.
 
Meena blushed a little and said, "Oh... He… He's unfortunately only the son of a friend!",
 
then laughed and continued, "What can I do for you, dear Hamed? What is on your mind?".
 
Hamed replied, "I have a lot in my heart, but when I see you, I forget everything!", and
 
laughed and added, "But you will make me happy if you come to dinner to me on Friday.
 
We are going to celebrate with some friends and colleagues my return and also my new
 
position as vice director of faculty."
 
Meena smiled and replied, "I do it with pleasure for my deputy!"

***
 
Later, when she and Nadir were both home, she immediately told about Cyrus and her
 
conversation with him.

Nadir said, "Oh, I think you hurt someone. You must now try to get it out of his heart”, then he
 
smiled and winked, “, “you have to win his heart back, you know you can do that very well, I
 
assume, I'm with you no matter how you do it,", he taunted, again with a wink and laughed.
 
 Meena laughed, slapped his shoulder lightly with the back of her hand and said, "Stop it, you
 
nasty mister, I just hope he calls."
 
Nadir became serious and said, "If you want, but only if you want and believe, then you can
 
invite him to dinner tomorrow evening."
 
"You mean in a restaurant together?" Meena asked.
 
Nadir answered bored and shaking his head, "No, you silly, you cook for him at home. I'll be
 
in the operating room until late tomorrow evening anyway.".
 
Meena looked thoughtful for a moment but then said, "Okay, if you think so..."
 
yes, I mean. Please, he is disappointed now and doesn't know what is going on. He probably
 
doesn't understand what you want from him, pulling with one hand and pushing away with
 
your foot..."
 
Meena said, "Yes, you are right. He doesn't understand the world anymore, of course. I know
 
 and I understand that, but I couldn't do it without your presence...".
 
"Look, my baby, either you have to tell him how our game went, with me behind the door and
 
 cameras. That means that you admit that what you did was only because of me. Then he will
 
surely be insulted and break off his contact, as I know him. He is not Jalal... Or apologize in
 
another way and in the way you know best, you make up for it compensate your mistake and
 
win his heart. It is your choice and decision, I can only say I am with you and you do not have
 
to wait for my presence, do what you have to do and what you think is right and above all
 
what you want and what you feel about him.
 
I trust you and I do not want to lose his friendship either. Now I am very tired and hungry and
 
need to eat and sleep, I am sure you too, baby.”
 
 
After dinner, before going to bed, Nadir went to his study. While she was tidying up the
 
kitchen, Meena was wondering what she should do.
 
How should she react when Tahir calls? Now it wasn't Nadir and his reaction that was her
 
problem, but her behaviour towards this old lumberjack. She likes him as a man and he
 
seemed very interested in her, but how far should she let him go and give herself to him?
 
He was a rather dominant type and as she knew him, now if she asked him for forgiveness,
 
he would want the whole thing, she thought... Her problem was that she wasn't sure if she
 
wanted that and could do that far...
 
She was still busy with thoughts when she sat down briefly in the living room, then the phone
 
rang.

Tahir: Hi, Meena, everything okay?
 
Meena: Hi Tahir, for us yes, but for you too? I was worried, you said you are leaving for
 
ranch, but then…
 
Tahir: Yes, that was my intention, then I thought about it... everything else is fine. Cyrus said
 
you're coming to farm at the weekend? Have I invited you yet?
 
Meena: No…No, I wanted to speak to you but so that he doesn't get suspicious, what could it
 
Be and why, then I said something like that about farm...
 
Tahir: Okay, but you can come to me at weekend. Now I do officially invite you. I mean
 
certainly, if you like.
 
Meena: Okay, we speak about it… Now, I wanted to apologize about yesterday. I… I... was
 
afraid that my husband can arrive any moment…
 
Tahir: Look, Meena, listen... I don't want to push you... I admit, I was disappointed... After we
 
 got so close and the happenings of the night before yesterday... I was completely gone and
 
didn't know what was wrong with you. You don't need to apologize; I respect your decision
 
and I won't contact you spontaneously or expect anything... I'm not a pusher, if you don't
 
want to, then we let it be. And about your husband, I have to say, after the first time in ranch,
 
in bad weather day, when Farzan and I made an approach, your husband was there too and
 
he didn't react and was not upset, so that's not an argument for me, sorry...
 
Meena: Tahir, let me explain. That day in ranch if it had progressed further, he would have
 
definitely come forward and said something. Apart from that, I want to make it up to you... I... I...
 
Tahir: You want to meet me! Right?
 
Meena laughed and didn’t know how to answer. She was surprised by Tahir's directness.
 
Tahir: Lady, Mrs. Director, Professor, You must know what you want, without wandering
 
around, be honest with yourself and therefore with me too. Talk to me and reply.
 
Meena (quietly): Right!
 
Tahir: What?
 
Meena: I want…

Tahir: What? Do you want to see me?
 
Meena (quietly): Yes…
 
Tahir: Say it.
 
Meena: Yes, I want to see you...

 
Tahir: Then I accept you apologize.
 
Meena: Thank you, Tahir,… Do you like to come here, tomorrow? I am alone…
 
Tahir: Does it make you happy?
 
Meena: Yes, it does… It makes me happy if you come…
 
Tahir: Okay… I accept our invitation. at what time?
 
Meena: after 3 pm I am home.
 
Tahir: Just one thing, please no pants, I like you in skirt.
 
Meena: Okay, I promise…

To be continued

[ricah43165]

Alright, Meena, the pen (or keyboard) is yours now!
we’re all eyes and ears, excited for the journey you’re about to take us on.

[Blackdick11]

Whoa, the updates landed faster than I expected! before I even think about reacting, let me indulge in them properly...sip every detail like a fine wine and let the essence sink in.

[Dallol]

Purple Rain ...

[RCF]

Excellent updates and faster than Nadir. Meena has made her first mark as standalone writer and its impressive. Her feelings towards Nadir's fantasies can be understood well now. Also I started to see her hesitation before every encounter when Nadir is not around is well explained. She is not the same Meena when Nadir is inside the house which drives her desires as well.

Yet few things that stood are noteworthy!

1. Where would story take her with Hamid who is always interested in her and now him being her deputy would spend more time with her..Pleasure with professional work is always dangerous so that would be interesting arc.
2. Cyrus is turning good or Is he pretending to bide time to get into her good books? My guess is he is waiting for his time. I am sure Meena has no interest in him as other old men around her but sometimes circumstances pushes humans into situations where choice is limited.
3. I have mentioned earlier in my comments when Nadir and Meena watched Tahir in their study talking about Meena as he is some one who lets life flow as water in a stream and if it passes him he would take a cup but at that time I mentioned his actions are little aggressive and contradicting to his statements..and now here we are..I felt Tahir lets life flow as stream but when his turn comes he doesn't seem to be the one who just drinks a sip or cup...he seems to be too thirsty and seemed like he want to pave a path for the water towards himself...like a true farmer who makes water flow into this field. Where would his aggressiveness lead the couple into in future? Would it be too much to handle? Nadir thinks he can handle anything other than some one who steals Meena from his love..but can he handle some one stealing his time with Meena?
4. Another thing noted is Tahir came uninvited, and he expected Meena to serve him a quickie and when resisted he felt bad...why? This behavior explained my above statements...He as of earlier episode seems intelligent and mature but now not so much..Him feeling bad doesn't even make sense to me.
5. What's going on with Farzan and Tahir? Why is he not staying with Farzan? My bet is Farzan might have mentioned to Tahir that he did not give him ample time with Meena and his aggressiveness might be too much for lady to handle for too long. Maybe his suggestion did not sit well with Tahir as he might think as Farzan got chance with Meena because of his this very aggressiveness and now he is complaining. Anyways let's see what's the suspense here.
6. So there is a weekend at farm and then there is a invitation from Cyrus to his house and another invite from Hamid to his party...where would each part end up with and how would Meena trade these waters...
7. How many of these invites can Nadir attend and be part of it or would fate continue to keep him busy so Meena slowly gets accustomed to flirts and erotic adventures without Nadir? Clearly she was very uncomfortable the first time with out Nadir, But if this repeats she could slowly get used to these adventures with out Nadir.

All in all highly entertaining episode that throws lot of questions...very much excited to read next chapters.

~RCF

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Bohemian Rhapsody ...

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Sorry,
accidentally posted !

[RCF]

A few thoughts I would like to get off my chest include that with each new chapter I have developed a certain 
dislike for the character of Tahir, he is degenerating into a manipulative, pushy con man in my eyes.

I do not think he is a conman but he is definitely pushy and thinks he deserves her time in abundance and Meena should be his beckon call. Its good that Meena set him right the very first time that she is not comfortable but yet we see she gave in last min that she will make up to him...so we have to see in future how Meena will handle his requests.

Tahir uses them very well and is successful, because Meena seems dazzled and loses herself over the
time she spends with him...

** Meena looked a bit confused and then she said, “Oh… Sorry, I was very tired, and overslept, I am so sorry,” **

I do not understand why the apology? 
For what and why? You were or are not his property or his escort girl.

Yes he is successful for the time being because he guilt tripped Meena by stating that he waited for her in the morning..Meena is host here so it would be really rude not to see off her guests in the morning so she said sorry I do not see anything wrong with her apology. In fact it shows she cares for them...for women when they are involved with men even though its not love, they develop certain feelings like caring and intimacy so its natural for her to pacify him...if she wants she can throw him out of house anytime but things should really come to that for her to take that step and I do not feel Tahir's aggressiveness is yet so overwhelming for the couple but i could foresee him trying to spend too much time with Meena and in turn could become more aggressive. 

In the end, he was the guest, just like Farzan, so he should behave like a guest, decently and without
‘demands’, just like Farzan.
But here we see the difference between an educated and cultivated man of the world like Farzan and 
the coarse, possessive Tahir.

Yes his blunt nature and his immaturity is shown in latest episode. Maybe he never could get a chance with fine woman like Meena before and this fact that he can now spend time with some one who is miles out of his league could be forcing him to be aggressive and making him frustrated.


~RCF