Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.

[Vasanthan]

Great update as usual.
Now that shipra started hating her husband, patode should use his men to kill Alok, so that she will permanently stay in the same bank and be life time slut for him and give birth to his child.

[fanofallnature]

Great update as usual.
Now that shipra started hating her husband, patode should use his men to kill Alok, so that she will permanently stay in the same bank and be life time slut for him and give birth to his child.

Do not agree with this suggestion.....

Accidently clicked "Like"

[dineshnair5555]

Whilst I appreciate the interest everyone shows to this fabulous and meticulous writing, some of the requests or suggestions are downright ridiculous! I would personally love for Suraj to continue in his own blissful way and make things raunchier in his exclusive style! You absolutely rock Suraj, wishing you the best buddy. Also, it's absolutely noteworthy on how you respond to foolish suggestions and comments. A Lesson on how to deal with patience and grace.

[dindigul]

tzzzzzz

[Umavictor32]

One request... In next episode it would be nice if we can see more of shipra submissive side... Because even in this episode though she is getting broken she still calls patode bastard... Also she never accepts her as a slut...
When namrata says u wana get degraded, she nevee says yes... So i personally wish to see her submissive side where she agrees herself to be slut and say she want to be degraded...

One more thing, just because she slept with patode.. It doesnt mean she will sleep with toppo... So need something more strong reason or attitude change

[dindigul]

Shipra’s submission to patode has reached its zenith. It was perfectly strategized & executed by patode. My salutations to the writer for his creativity and hard work to ensure regular and excellent updates of this fantastic tale of debauchery & depravity.

I have a few thoughts (read apprehensions) about future progression of the story.

1. Shipra’s reluctance
Most erotic aspect of the story has been the reluctant involvement of shipra in patode’s sex games. Her apparent unwillingness made the story very real & created the sexual tension needed to propel the erotic engine of this story

Would shipra’s total surrender mean end of reluctance on shipra’s part? This would be tragic. It would be interesting to see how the writer takes this element forward.

2. Patode’s dark turn

This episode for the 1st time shows a glimpse of patode’s dark side. It has scared & worried namratha as well. The erotic tension of the story is rests on the fact that patode never forced shipra. She did everything reluctantly but consensually. I hope this ultra-dominant version of patode does not run roughshod over shipra.
(also hope that blackmailing techniques are never used and those recordings were just a misdirection for readers from a very clever writer)

3. Involvement of Toppo

Erotica’s can be blended with many literary genres. It famously goes togather with horror, thriller & drama elements. This story has also so far blended thriller & mystery elements with erotic narrative with great success.

But one genre that cannot go along with erotica is melancholy or sad melodrama. In my experience, one cannot be hard (aroused) and heartbroken/sad at the same time.

Shipra’s submission to toppo would be tragic/sad for following reasons-

• Toppo is a purely evil character with no redeeming qualities. He engages in financial corruption & sexual harassment 
In comparison, Patode has some redeeming qualities. He is charming, sometimes even genuinely concerned for shipra’s wellbeing. He rescues the village woman and shipra, even though for his own selfish interests. Readers can still relate to this morally grey character & his quest to conquer shipra.


• It would also be unfair to alok. Alok might be floundering in his personal life as a husband but in his professional life, he was a competent and honest person.
Shipra’s submission to patode can still be rationalized as punishment for his failures as husband. So, we do not feel too bad for him.

But shipra’s involvement with Toppo would only be perceived by readers as punishment for a young man who dared to stand against systemic corruption.

PS
Above criticism/ apprehensions are only valid if one views the story from an exclusively erotica point of view. If one analyzes this story, as a thriller/ mystery, the direction of this story could not be any better.
I am curious to see how Suraj juggles various genre elements in this story without compromising on the erotic quotient.

This post is not a request to change course. i shared my thoughts in the spirit of open & honest discussion. Suraj should progress with his version of the story as he is the master of Ambruj universe. He knows how these intersecting story threads would develop in future. many plot points that we see unfolding might just happen to be clever misdirections meant to guise something even more riveting.

I look forward to the writer’s response.

[eslx1212]

The author Suraj has taken the suggestions earlier given and shown definite improvement in the latest update. I would prefer to leave the story delineation to his own choice.

[rkamini006]

Next update sir

[Suraj76626]

Great update as usual.
Now that shipra started hating her husband, patode should use his men to kill Alok, so that she will permanently stay in the same bank and be life time slut for him and give birth to his child.

Thanks man.
Let me clear few things-
1. Hate is a strong word... I wouldn't describe Shipra's feeling of discontent and neglect as hatred towards Alok.
2. Patode doesn't need to kill Alok. He's not a gangster like Saad Hasan. He is a shrewd and cunning opportunist who uses his psychological tricks to get his way.

[Suraj76626]

Next update sir

Next update will be delayed. I have been sick since Friday and started to feel a little better since yesterday. I have completed 50% of the next chapter and will need few more days to finish it.

Most probably will post Chapter 31 on Saturday night or Sunday.

[Suraj76626]

One request... In next episode it would be nice if we can see more of shipra submissive side... Because even in this episode though she is getting broken she still calls patode bastard... Also she never accepts her as a slut...
When namrata says u wana get degraded, she nevee says yes... So i personally wish to see her submissive side where she agrees herself to be slut and say she want to be degraded...

One more thing, just because she slept with patode.. It doesnt mean she will sleep with toppo... So need something more strong reason or attitude change

Wait for upcoming few chapters everything will clear up. 
Whether Shipra will sleep with Toppo or not. If she does what would be the circumstances and what will be the aftermath. Soon every sidestory will merge into a total chaos. Stay tuned.

[Suraj76626]

Whilst I appreciate the interest everyone shows to this fabulous and meticulous writing, some of the requests or suggestions are downright ridiculous! I would personally love for Suraj to continue in his own blissful way and make things raunchier in his exclusive style! You absolutely rock Suraj, wishing you the best buddy. Also, it's absolutely noteworthy on how you respond to foolish suggestions and comments. A Lesson on how to deal with patience and grace.

Thanks man... Once you understand the fact that everyone thinks and act as per their perspective which has nothing to do with you, it doesn't affect you that much. But having said that, encouraging comments are always helpful.

[Suraj76626]

Great update.But,honestly,dislking where this is going,into whorification of the main character,which is a fairly intelligent character,when compared to many women.
But it is the writer's story.The subject maybe is such that,this has to happen.Readers like me have to make their peace with it,I guess.
His prerogative to take the story wherever he wants.
Loved the choking,domination and passion in this update.Mentioning Sweaty sex too was good.

Stick around for next few updates... Things won't be similar to the usual stories you find here on female whorification.

[Suraj76626]

Sorry.. Was die hard busy so couldn't make comments earlier.. The recent update of part 3 is just an epic...after this I hv nothing left to say about its glory..However Patode became a bit too violent but if it is happening thn there must b some reason behind it.. Keep rocking... And finally.. Plz don't make TOPPO wait any longer to bring SHIPRA on bed... Plz plz plz make her his slut too.. Its been years since my request of this..
One more thing.. You have another(brand new) very strong character named Shrutika... Will we ever get to see her sexual encounters.. Plz reply regarding this as if this happens... Would be a great mile stone for story..
GBU...

Thanks man.
Toppo will soon come into the picture.
As far as Shrutika is concerned I can't disclose anything yet. It will spoil the fun.

Keep reading

[Suraj76626]

Will shipra get to see Alok message. Will she fall in guilt after that. Waiting for her reactions. Good hot update.

Find out in next update.

[Umavictor32]

Wait for upcoming few chapters everything will clear up. 
Whether Shipra will sleep with Toppo or not. If she does what would be the circumstances and what will be the aftermath. Soon every sidestory will merge into a total chaos. Stay tuned.

Thanks for ur reply  suraj.... Just want to say one thing... By next week i am planning to write a story... Tell u cleanly, the story format and some of the plot will be inspired from ur story... Thanks for being an inspiration bro...

[Suraj76626]

But one thing is that...
Shipra is just reacting to patode..
I wish in next episode, shipra is speak and degrade herself by her own...
Because in this whole update we can still see shipra has not broken completely like namrata as she calls patode bastard... So tat shd change...

Shipra's involvement will gradually increase

[Suraj76626]

Thanks for ur reply  suraj.... Just want to say one thing... By next week i am planning to write a story... Tell u cleanly, the story format and some of the plot will be inspired from ur story... Thanks for being an inspiration bro...

Will be looking forward to read it. All the best

[Umavictor32]

Shipra's involvement will gradually increase

Really wish to see it..
Namrata  will never call patode bastard
But shipra even broken still have tat ego head..
Atleast for one episode that ego shd break...
Badly waiting for ur future episodes

[Suraj76626]

Shipra’s submission to patode has reached its zenith. It was perfectly strategized & executed by patode. My salutations to the writer for his creativity and hard work to ensure regular and excellent updates of this fantastic tale of debauchery & depravity.

I have a few thoughts (read apprehensions) about future progression of the story.

1. Shipra’s reluctance
Most erotic aspect of the story has been the reluctant involvement of shipra in patode’s sex games. Her apparent unwillingness made the story very real & created the sexual tension needed to propel the erotic engine of this story

Would shipra’s total surrender mean end of reluctance on shipra’s part? This would be tragic. It would be interesting to see how the writer takes this element forward.

2. Patode’s dark turn

This episode for the 1st time shows a glimpse of patode’s dark side. It has scared & worried namratha as well. The erotic tension of the story is rests on the fact that patode never forced shipra. She did everything reluctantly but consensually. I hope this ultra-dominant version of patode does not run roughshod over shipra.
(also hope that blackmailing techniques are never used and those recordings were just a misdirection for readers from a very clever writer)

3. Involvement of Toppo

Erotica’s can be blended with many literary genres. It famously goes togather with horror, thriller & drama elements. This story has also so far blended thriller & mystery elements with erotic narrative with great success.

But one genre that cannot go along with erotica is melancholy or sad melodrama. In my experience, one cannot be hard (aroused) and heartbroken/sad at the same time.

Shipra’s submission to toppo would be tragic/sad for following reasons-

• Toppo is a purely evil character with no redeeming qualities. He engages in financial corruption & sexual harassment 
In comparison, Patode has some redeeming qualities. He is charming, sometimes even genuinely concerned for shipra’s wellbeing. He rescues the village woman and shipra, even though for his own selfish interests. Readers can still relate to this morally grey character & his quest to conquer shipra.


• It would also be unfair to alok. Alok might be floundering in his personal life as a husband but in his professional life, he was a competent and honest person.
Shipra’s submission to patode can still be rationalized as punishment for his failures as husband. So, we do not feel too bad for him.

But shipra’s involvement with Toppo would only be perceived by readers as punishment for a young man who dared to stand against systemic corruption.

PS
Above criticism/ apprehensions are only valid if one views the story from an exclusively erotica point of view. If one analyzes this story, as a thriller/ mystery, the direction of this story could not be any better.
I am curious to see how Suraj juggles various genre elements in this story without compromising on the erotic quotient.

This post is not a request to change course. i shared my thoughts in the spirit of open & honest discussion. Suraj should progress with his version of the story as he is the master of Ambruj universe. He knows how these intersecting story threads would develop in future. many plot points that we see unfolding might just happen to be clever misdirections meant to guise something even more riveting.

I look forward to the writer’s response.

Thanks for your continuous encouraging and interesting comments.

To answer your apprehensions or curiosity please find the below responses

1. The character of Shipra which I have portrayed will always be reluctantant but at the same time as her wild side takes over her, she will surely act like a slut. So we will see both sides in the future chapters.

2. Patode has a bigger plan for Shipra. She is the most beautiful and sexy women he has ever bedded so he won't be satisfied so soon. He will push her even further but how Shipra will handle him is the interesting part of story. For which you'll have to keep reading.

3. As far as Toppo is concerned, he is definitely play a important role in upcoming chapters. Yes involving him with Shipra will be tricky and downright humiliating for Shipra's Character but that is what the essence of this story is. Shipra's ordeal. What I have in mind regarding this part of the storyline is quite interesting and unconventional. I am sure readers will love the twist and turns.

Keep reading.