28-02-2025, 10:07 PM
Super fantastic update
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Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.
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28-02-2025, 11:02 PM
This was well worth the wait. Excellent story telling.
01-03-2025, 07:34 AM
how much ever sweet coated words her wimp husband write to her, she is unstoppable hereafter. Beautiful update.
01-03-2025, 08:36 AM
Very hot update. Did patode delete the message after reading it?
01-03-2025, 01:56 PM
Blisss.......
The way present the Story is too admirable.... This is unimaginable updates... Your writing skill kill my harmone For entire body....
01-03-2025, 02:06 PM
(27-02-2025, 09:50 PM)Suraj76626 Wrote: Continued from the last post.... Really outstanding update yr): I have a lot to learn from you to improve my writing skills... :)
01-03-2025, 02:33 PM
You are on another level as a writer on the forum now. All of us eagerly await the next update and it will be a decisive one.
01-03-2025, 03:06 PM
Will shipra get to see Alok message. Will she fall in guilt after that. Waiting for her reactions. Good hot update.
02-03-2025, 10:34 AM
Great update as usual.
Now that shipra started hating her husband, patode should use his men to kill Alok, so that she will permanently stay in the same bank and be life time slut for him and give birth to his child.
02-03-2025, 12:35 PM
(02-03-2025, 10:34 AM)Vasanthan Wrote: Great update as usual. Do not agree with this suggestion..... Accidently clicked "Like"
02-03-2025, 10:08 PM
Whilst I appreciate the interest everyone shows to this fabulous and meticulous writing, some of the requests or suggestions are downright ridiculous! I would personally love for Suraj to continue in his own blissful way and make things raunchier in his exclusive style! You absolutely rock Suraj, wishing you the best buddy. Also, it's absolutely noteworthy on how you respond to foolish suggestions and comments. A Lesson on how to deal with patience and grace. yr):
03-03-2025, 01:11 AM
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03-03-2025, 01:17 AM
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One request... In next episode it would be nice if we can see more of shipra submissive side... Because even in this episode though she is getting broken she still calls patode bastard... Also she never accepts her as a slut...
When namrata says u wana get degraded, she nevee says yes... So i personally wish to see her submissive side where she agrees herself to be slut and say she want to be degraded... One more thing, just because she slept with patode.. It doesnt mean she will sleep with toppo... So need something more strong reason or attitude change |
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