28-02-2025, 10:16 AM
Hi bro
Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.
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28-02-2025, 11:25 AM
Make Shipra talk to her husband while getting fucked
28-02-2025, 02:17 PM
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(27-02-2025, 09:20 PM)Suraj76626 Wrote: Chapter 30: An Illusion of Escape: Part 3Great update.But,honestly,dislking where this is going,into whorification of the main character,which is a fairly intelligent character,when compared to many women. But it is the writer's story.The subject maybe is such that,this has to happen.Readers like me have to make their peace with it,I guess. His prerogative to take the story wherever he wants. Loved the choking,domination and passion in this update.Mentioning Sweaty sex too was good.
28-02-2025, 09:19 PM
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Sorry.. Was die hard busy so couldn't make comments earlier.. The recent update of part 3 is just an epic...after this I hv nothing left to say about its glory..However Patode became a bit too violent but if it is happening thn there must b some reason behind it.. Keep rocking... And finally.. Plz don't make TOPPO wait any longer to bring SHIPRA on bed... Plz plz plz make her his slut too.. Its been years since my request of this..
One more thing.. You have another(brand new) very strong character named Shrutika... Will we ever get to see her sexual encounters.. Plz reply regarding this as if this happens... Would be a great mile stone for story.. GBU...
28-02-2025, 11:02 PM
This was well worth the wait. Excellent story telling.
01-03-2025, 07:34 AM
how much ever sweet coated words her wimp husband write to her, she is unstoppable hereafter. Beautiful update.
01-03-2025, 08:36 AM
Very hot update. Did patode delete the message after reading it?
01-03-2025, 01:56 PM
Blisss.......
The way present the Story is too admirable.... This is unimaginable updates... Your writing skill kill my harmone For entire body....
01-03-2025, 02:06 PM
(27-02-2025, 09:50 PM)Suraj76626 Wrote: Continued from the last post.... Really outstanding update ![]() I have a lot to learn from you to improve my writing skills... ![]()
01-03-2025, 02:33 PM
You are on another level as a writer on the forum now. All of us eagerly await the next update and it will be a decisive one.
01-03-2025, 03:06 PM
Will shipra get to see Alok message. Will she fall in guilt after that. Waiting for her reactions. Good hot update.
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