Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.

[xboard1986]

What's next bro

[sexypreeti]

A small correction here Suraj 

" dressed in a crisp salwar paired with jeans, a combination that subtly blended traditional elegance with modern practicality"

A salwar is nothing but what is worn alongside a kurta like a loose trouser. 

So Kurta would have been the correct word to use...

[poslednjisamuraj0202]

The story goes downhill, it goes in circles, I think the author went a bit astray with the subjugation of Shipra in the last 10 chapters, the story is stopped and becomes boring. I think you ran out of ideas.

[Hornytamilan23]

Hi suraj,

FANTASTIC. Post the next update asap. Next one, this one and the previous one together can make any wank his dick.

P.S If you follow from the beginning, this story already is nearing it's end. Moving towards climax. If not for Toppo and political subplot,this story is Over

[dindigul]

tzzzzz

[Suraj76626]

The story goes downhill, it goes in circles, I think the author went a bit astray with the subjugation of Shipra in the last 10 chapters, the story is stopped and becomes boring. I think you ran out of ideas.

Sorry you feel that way my friend. But if the update don't please you it doesn't mean the story has stopped. Last 10 chapters weren't just about Shipra's subjugation. I don't think you comprehend what I am trying to portray here.

Readers here have been treated to illogical nonsense where a women cheats on her husband just because the other guy has a big dick. And this they think it is all there is to it. So it is not surprising to see people getting bored with a narration where a mental picture of women is brought in focus. Yes I agree I may have gone a little overboard with the narration making it sound repetitive but it's my first time writing a story that too an erotica so cut me some slack.

What I have written here is not just to make the story lengthy or I am out of ideas. People who are in touch with me over telegram or gmail know my plans with the story and what all choas is going to come in the next few chapters.

So I would like to thank you all for following this story and I know your comments here are only due to your interest in the story. These last few chapters may be repetitive but we're absolute necessity for the storyline. Hence please be patient good things take time.

-Suraj

[Walker6]

Sorry you feel that way my friend. But if the update don't please you it doesn't mean the story has stopped. Last 10 chapters weren't just about Shipra's subjugation. I don't think you comprehend what I am trying to portray here.

Readers here have been treated to illogical nonsense where a women cheats on her husband just because the other guy has a big dick. And this they think it is all there is to it. So it is not surprising to see people getting bored with a narration where a mental picture of women is brought in focus. Yes I agree I may have gone a little overboard with the narration making it sound repetitive but it's my first time writing a story that too an erotica so cut me some slack.

What I have written here is not just to make the story lengthy or I am out of ideas. People who are in touch with me over telegram or gmail know my plans with the story and what all choas is going to come in the next few chapters.

So I would like to thank you all for following this story and I know your comments here are only due to your interest in the story. These last few chapters may be repetitive but we're absolute necessity for the storyline. Hence please be patient good things take time.

-Suraj

Can you please say when we can expect next update?

[Karmayogee]

Patode proved that he is a master in bedding any chaste housewife. Once arrongant shipra has now become like his pet dog. How can a woman like her turn so cheap like this just for few minutes of dick pleasure. She accept hersef as slut, forgot about why she came to the branch and enjoy everything in a day that she missed so far.?

[behka]

The update is intended for a specific purpose for later part of the story. So if you don't get it right now, it's unfortunate but thanks for reading.

Bro please continue as per your original plans for the characters. There are too many comments criticizing now but please don't change your original vision because of that.

[Shriya George]

wonderful updates

[dindigul]

I discovered this story last month, since than I have been obsessed with it. I wanted to write a detailed post about various character evolution & motivations, clashing perspectives on society and marriage portrayed in this story. But I have been too busy for that.
The latest chapter of this wildly popular erotica has come under some criticism. So I decided to write a post about this episode. I will write my full review later as and when I get the time.
Here are my views on the recent criticism and how I see the story progressing.

1.The story is getting Repetitive. I disagree with this for following reasons-

• Formatting of the story

This story is essentially a single erotic novel as the writer has the broad structures along which the story would develop. But the story is being presented in a serialized format with episodes releasing at frequent intervals.
If you read the entire story in one go, the reader will be able to perceive subtle shifts in character motivation & their evolution. But in a serialized format this might appear repetitive.

• Writer’s choice of hyper-realism while portraying the gradual turning of shipra from a doting wife to a promiscuous slut.

It takes time for a woman like shipra to turn into a full blown slut. She constructed her life since marriage with the specific purpose to bury her wild past. It will take some time for those barriers to completely break down.

That is why we see shipra oscillating b/w being a horny slut during the highs of sex and but reverting to her carefully constructed persona of a docile & loving wife when the sexual high finally comes down.

That is the reason patode humiliates her during sex, especially in the recent episode. He wants to leave such an imprint on her psyche that the naturally promiscuous slut in her permanently free from artificially constructed persona that she has created for herself. It has built great anticipation for the next chapter. What will patode do?

Reality can be boring sometimes. But there is beauty in monotony if u look closely enough. The subtle shifts in behavior described over last several chapters is just perfect if read in one go. In hindsight, this story will be a master piece.



• Future plans
Writer is laying grounds for future unravelling of shipra. Suraj has promised wild sexual adventures for shipra in the future. He has to build up to it so that it appears natural and not forced & sudden.


2.Namratha being dominant

Namratha’s reaction in this episode is similar to a parent’s reaction who is tired of her child throwing away her potential. It is a manifestation of her exasperation with shipra’s constant reversion to guilt and doubt after each sexual episode. Namratha just wants shipra to fully explore her sexuality.  So she hits shipra, dominates & verbally humiliates her.

This story is not just about shipra. It gives weight to other characters as well. It is 1st time we see the truly mean self of namratha which was lurking behind the façade of a concerned friend. We see her as a more ambiguous character, who is just not concerned about her friend but also wants to direct her life, so that she can justify her life choices about not pursuing a family.

Namratha being dominant over shipra was a hot twist. I hope she returns back after her office trip. I liked to read about her more overtly dominant persona not just the subtly manipulative version of her character.

Down the line, Will we see namratha dominate alok as well? Manipulating and goading him into accepting a changed relationship dynamic with shipra. If her chats with alok over phone call are any indication, her sessions with alok will be fire. Looking forward to some femdom as well.

3.There was nothing new in this episode. I disagree due to following reasons-

• We gained clarity about how shipra sees alok and patode, how she differentiates b/w her feelings for both.
Shipra’s feelings for patode are not love but excitement, adventure, escape mixed with gratitude for his genuine efforts.
Deep down she still loves alok due the bond of marriage and family she shares with him. Though, this bond has weakened due alok’s selfish behavior

Are we inching towards an open cuckold relationship where a reformed and humbled alok fulfills shipra’s emotional & familial needs while patode fulfills her physical needs?

• Introduction of shrutika arora. As far as I can tell, she seems to be the new SP overseeing ambruj introduced some episodes ago. Suraj has teased such an interesting character with limitless potential for sex, drama and political intrigue.

 How will she take down the political- criminal nexus?
 What will her relationship with shipra and patode develop?
 Will she be part of the sexual games afoot in ambruj?
 Also she has met up with chetan who has vowed revenge against alok and expose him as wimp.

How all these disparate story strands come togather will be interesting to read.


P.S.
My predictions about the future progression of the story are in no way a wish list. It is just an educated guesswork based on my reading of the story. But i would love to know what suraj thinks about my predictions
Suraj is a supremely talented writer. I would prefer to read how he decides to take the story forward even if I may not like parts of it. That’s why its important Suraj should not alter the progression of the story due to populist demands.

[Suraj76626]

A small correction here Suraj 

" dressed in a crisp salwar paired with jeans, a combination that subtly blended traditional elegance with modern practicality"

A salwar is nothing but what is worn alongside a kurta like a loose trouser. 

So Kurta would have been the correct word to use...

Thanks for pointing out the goof up 

[Suraj76626]

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P.S.
My predictions about the future progression of the story are in no way a wish list. It is just an educated guesswork based on my reading of the story. But i would love to know what suraj thinks about my predictions
Suraj is a supremely talented writer. I would prefer to read how he decides to take the story forward even if I may not like parts of it. That’s why its important Suraj should not alter the progression of the story due to populist demands.
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 Thanks for your detailed comment my friend. You have brought out what I intended with the story very beautifully.

Your predictions are more or less spot on. I would not go in details as it will spoil the story.
Keep supporting and reading in means a lot to me. I will surely try to make the story more interesting for all readers.

[Suraj76626]

Next update most probably by Friday.

[Deepak Sanjeev]

Namrata should next change the mind of Alok that his wife deserves good things in life and make him a cuckold and lick and drink the patode juices flowing from shipra vagina. Also accept the child born to him and father it. It is best help that Namrata can do her friend Shipra.

[RANA ROY]

Awesome...........waiting

[Urupudathavan]

Killing updates

[Dumeelkumar]

super update

[Suraj76626]

Next update dropping Tomorrow.

[qazmlp]

Yess Yes Yes