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Hi suraj, looking forward for your update. Waiting to watch how things gets unfold. And how our lovable Shipra turns into a bitch in heat.
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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A small suggestion to the writer,if he hadnt already considered that possibility.
Dont make Patode into a super sexgod type of a guy,which goes into the unreal realm,as everyone knows men's problems.
And to top it off,he is coming off as a mastermind clairvoyant too.
Show some vulnerability from his side too.
Just a suggestion.
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Hello Suraj, I am eagerly anticipating the update to be quite exciting and furthermore, I would like an early update if possible.
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Apologies dear readers.
Part 2 of Chapter 30 will be a little delayed. I had to change the flow of the story a little and thus have to rewrite the last section of part 2. It will take a day or two to complete it. So please bear with me, it's going to be worth the wait I promise.
Suraj
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Shipra is at the crossroads, one road leading to her son's welfare, and the other to further depravity. Let's wait and see which road she takes on that fateful night.
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I have a nice idea for the story. It's just a suggestion. Toppo should apologise for his earlier behaviour to Shipra and as a good gesture grant her leave. Then toppo should come with Shipra as visiting faculty or something. Toppo then stay at hotel. Toppo should play good. Then Patode should convince Shipra as a good gesture Shipra should invite toppo to stay with her as Namrata leaving the place so one room is empty. All the while toppo showing good manners. So Shipra invites toppo to stay with her. Slowly toppo manipulating Shipra into sex by supporting her and making her comfortable... It is just a suggestion... As a author you can consider this
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People can always, be it men or women, carried away in sex related subjects. It is always happening, in real life. Intelligent people act dumb in these things. Kings, queens, princess in history did these kind of things. The famous people, celebrities did many carried away things (in your word dumb things). In real life, real people intelligent people, be it teachers, doctors, engineers, bankers, housewives can always get carried away or make mistakes, because they in in sexually vulnerable position, emotionally heightened condition, not because they are dumb.
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As Namrata leaving the town, and if a man other than Patode stays in the same house with Shipra, it will become very interesting. Because Shipra is already in sexually vulnerable condition. She possibly cannot be thinking straight always not possible. So it will become easy to manipulate and seduce her in sexual acts. A man in close proximity of a woman who recently got taste of adultery is dangerous.
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According to me if shipra have to bend to toppo, two things should happen
1. Patode should make shipra feel she is just meant for fucking... Patode should break her ego... Make her believe she is a slut by nature... Just talking will be of no use... Treat her dirty.. Also make her drink smoke etc which will make her dumb by thoughts... Then once she is broken... Patode can make any tom dick or harry fuck shipra... Once you break a girl self respect and make her accept she is waste, she will be in control....
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The author is so talented that I am living the story. As a woman, I'm feeling Shipra. The ordeal with Patode is like "Patode by saying I want to have sex with you, he fucked Shipra". Not it is needed a man who not saying that he wanted to have sex, manipulates her into sex by his act. And toppo is right man for that by helping her when her son is ill. And the vacant room created by Namrata leaving can play a huge role in that. And Shipra is her most vulnerable state of mind right now is the right time to done it. Because she cannot possibly thinking straight right now.
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If not step 2
Bring sacrifice angle into the story... Bring some problem for the son and for the sake of son shipra bend to toppo... Otherwise i dnt think it would work out... Also blackmailing her will be a bullshit because a girl like shipra with her current ego will never give up for blackmail...
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I am a woman. I don't think It is always one have to break women or treat women dirty to push women into adultery. You said basic nature of women is they don't do mistake alone. But it is not true, they always do what they wanted to do. As a woman I can assure you that. I am just putting a woman's point of view in this
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