12-02-2025, 09:34 PM
Great story .....
Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.
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13-02-2025, 12:15 AM
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13-02-2025, 12:21 AM
(08-02-2025, 05:56 PM)iCuby Wrote: The whole idea in this update is great but it could be more crispy and the story should move forward more. Just for the sake of making the story longer don't drag. You're dragging too much just to make the story long. Rather the sexual parts should be longer and kinky. Will definitely make the next updates more crispy but having said that, this story is more about the journey than the destination.
13-02-2025, 05:16 AM
The only punishment Esha and Aniket deserves for adultery is rajm.
13-02-2025, 12:08 PM
(13-02-2025, 12:21 AM)Suraj76626 Wrote: Will definitely make the next updates more crispy but having said that, this story is more about the journey than the destination. I like your style of writing... I am a writer too so I know what it takes to write something like this. I joined this site recently hence commenting now ![]()
13-02-2025, 11:31 PM
Hi suraj, looking forward for your update. Waiting to watch how things gets unfold. And how our lovable Shipra turns into a bitch in heat.
-Pickup, drop, escape.
14-02-2025, 12:01 AM
A small suggestion to the writer,if he hadnt already considered that possibility.
Dont make Patode into a super sexgod type of a guy,which goes into the unreal realm,as everyone knows men's problems. And to top it off,he is coming off as a mastermind clairvoyant too. Show some vulnerability from his side too. Just a suggestion.
14-02-2025, 03:23 AM
15-02-2025, 12:11 PM
Hello Suraj, I am eagerly anticipating the update to be quite exciting and furthermore, I would like an early update if possible.
15-02-2025, 11:36 PM
16-02-2025, 10:43 AM
16-02-2025, 12:56 PM
Apologies dear readers.
Part 2 of Chapter 30 will be a little delayed. I had to change the flow of the story a little and thus have to rewrite the last section of part 2. It will take a day or two to complete it. So please bear with me, it's going to be worth the wait I promise. Suraj
16-02-2025, 12:59 PM
16-02-2025, 01:24 PM
Shipra is at the crossroads, one road leading to her son's welfare, and the other to further depravity. Let's wait and see which road she takes on that fateful night.
16-02-2025, 04:17 PM
16-02-2025, 07:00 PM
(16-02-2025, 12:56 PM)Suraj76626 Wrote: Apologies dear readers. Koi nai bro.. Take your time.. Lets see how Toppos fortune turns out... as he is desperately waiting for Shipra...
18-02-2025, 02:00 AM
I have a nice idea for the story. It's just a suggestion. Toppo should apologise for his earlier behaviour to Shipra and as a good gesture grant her leave. Then toppo should come with Shipra as visiting faculty or something. Toppo then stay at hotel. Toppo should play good. Then Patode should convince Shipra as a good gesture Shipra should invite toppo to stay with her as Namrata leaving the place so one room is empty. All the while toppo showing good manners. So Shipra invites toppo to stay with her. Slowly toppo manipulating Shipra into sex by supporting her and making her comfortable... It is just a suggestion... As a author you can consider this
18-02-2025, 03:02 AM
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(18-02-2025, 02:00 AM)iCuby Wrote: I have a nice idea for the story. It's just a suggestion. Toppo should apologise for his earlier behaviour to Shipra and as a good gesture grant her leave. Then toppo should come with Shipra as visiting faculty or something. Toppo then stay at hotel. Toppo should play good. Then Patode should convince Shipra as a good gesture Shipra should invite toppo to stay with her as Namrata leaving the place so one room is empty. All the while toppo showing good manners. So Shipra invites toppo to stay with her. Slowly toppo manipulating Shipra into sex by supporting her and making her comfortable... It is just a suggestion... As a author you can consider this I dnt think this will be a good idea bro... Shipra is an intelligent woman.... Patode was able to use her and manipulate her was not because he was more intelligent than her... It was due to situation and also due to involvement of namrata... To be more precise it was namrata who made her to sleep with patode hitting her ego and playing with words... If again shipra gets carried away by toppo's words then we shd have to consider her as dumb woman which i dnt think she is...
18-02-2025, 03:40 AM
(18-02-2025, 03:02 AM)Victorjohnson Wrote: I dnt think this will be a good idea bro... Shipra is an intelligent woman.... Patode was able to use her and manipulate her was not because he was more intelligent than her... It was due to situation and also due to involvement of namrata... To be more precise it was namrata who made her to sleep with patode hitting her ego and playing with words... But now she is in a different spelling. She is now emotionally heightened condition and in kind of situation clearity about thought process is not possible. It doesn't mean she is dumb. There's a sentence that "he/she is not thinking straight", that doesn't signify anyone as dumb. We normal people made silly mistakes when we're in sexually heightened condition. So why not Shipra. You're reading the story, not in her shoes... so it is difficult for you to understand. I give the one liner idea, the author has to build up on the idea gradually. He is a genius. He can make the idea believable. When a woman in sexually liberated then her thinking also change, don't forget. |
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