Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.

[Suraj76626]

The whole idea in this update is great but it could be more crispy and the story should move forward more. Just for the sake of making the story longer don't drag. You're dragging too much just to make the story long. Rather the sexual parts should be longer and kinky.

Will definitely make the next updates more crispy but having said that, this story is more about the journey than the destination.

[Bulbul Sheikh]

The only punishment Esha and Aniket deserves for adultery is rajm.

[sexypreeti]

Will definitely make the next updates more crispy but having said that, this story is more about the journey than the destination.

I like your style of writing... I am a writer too so I know what it takes to write something like this. I joined this site recently hence commenting now  :)

[Hornytamilan23]

Hi suraj, looking forward for your update. Waiting to watch how things gets unfold. And how our lovable Shipra turns into a bitch in heat.

[hotandluking]

A small suggestion to the writer,if he hadnt already considered that possibility.
Dont make Patode into a super sexgod type of a guy,which goes into the unreal realm,as everyone knows men's problems.
And to top it off,he is coming off as a mastermind clairvoyant too.
Show some vulnerability from his side too.
Just a suggestion.

[iCuby]

Hi suraj, looking forward for your update. Waiting to watch how things gets unfold. And how our lovable Shipra turns into a bitch in heat.

Yes I am also waiting for that..

Shipra should be a bitch in heat

[damien123456]

Hello Suraj, I am eagerly anticipating the update to be quite exciting and furthermore, I would like an early update if possible.

[sexypreeti]

Hello Suraj, I am eagerly anticipating the update to be quite exciting and furthermore, I would like an early update if possible.

Are you Ordering or asking?

[damien123456]

Are you Ordering or asking?

I am not asking or ordering; I simply requesting the writer.

[Suraj76626]

Apologies dear readers.

Part 2 of Chapter 30 will be a little delayed. I had to change the flow of the story a little and thus have to rewrite the last section of part 2. It will take a day or two to complete it. So please bear with me, it's going to be worth the wait I promise.

Suraj

[Suraj76626]

The only punishment Esha and Aniket deserves for adultery is rajm.

You seem to have lost your way my friend.

[eslx1212]

Shipra is at the crossroads, one road leading to her son's welfare, and the other to further depravity. Let's wait and see which road she takes on that fateful night.

[hotandluking]

 So please bear with me, it's going to be worth the wait I promise.

Suraj

That is great to hear.
This story has a long way to go and a lot of pages to be filled with erotic content.....

[Vikramvines]

Apologies dear readers.

Part 2 of Chapter 30 will be a little delayed. I had to change the flow of the story a little and thus have to rewrite the last section of part 2. It will take a day or two to complete it. So please bear with me, it's going to be worth the wait I promise.

Suraj

Koi nai bro.. Take your time.. Lets see how Toppos fortune turns out... as he is desperately waiting for Shipra...

[iCuby]

I have a nice idea for the story. It's just a suggestion. Toppo should apologise for his earlier behaviour to Shipra and as a good gesture grant her leave. Then toppo should come with Shipra as visiting faculty or something. Toppo then stay at hotel. Toppo should play good. Then Patode should convince Shipra as a good gesture Shipra should invite toppo to stay with her as Namrata leaving the place so one room is empty. All the while toppo showing good manners. So Shipra invites toppo to stay with her. Slowly toppo manipulating Shipra into sex by supporting her and making her comfortable... It is just a suggestion... As a author you can consider this

[Victorjohnson]

I have a nice idea for the story. It's just a suggestion. Toppo should apologise for his earlier behaviour to Shipra and as a good gesture grant her leave. Then toppo should come with Shipra as visiting faculty or something. Toppo then stay at hotel. Toppo should play good. Then Patode should convince Shipra as a good gesture Shipra should invite toppo to stay with her as Namrata leaving the place so one room is empty. All the while toppo showing good manners. So Shipra invites toppo to stay with her. Slowly toppo manipulating Shipra into sex by supporting her and making her comfortable... It is just a suggestion... As a author you can consider this

I dnt think this will be a good idea bro... Shipra is an intelligent woman.... Patode was able to use her and manipulate her was not because he was more intelligent than her... It was due to situation and also due to involvement of namrata... To be more precise it was namrata who made her to sleep with patode hitting her ego and playing with words...

If again shipra gets carried away by toppo's words then we shd have to consider her  as dumb woman which i dnt think she is...

[iCuby]

I dnt think this will be a good idea bro... Shipra is an intelligent woman.... Patode was able to use her and manipulate her was not because he was more intelligent than her... It was due to situation and also due to involvement of namrata... To be more precise it was namrata who made her to sleep with patode hitting her ego and playing with words...

If again shipra gets carried away by toppo's words then we shd have to consider her  as dumb woman which i dnt think she is...

But now she is in a different spelling. She is now emotionally heightened condition and in kind of situation clearity about thought process is not possible. It doesn't mean she is dumb. There's a sentence that "he/she is not thinking straight", that doesn't signify anyone as dumb. We normal people made silly mistakes when we're in sexually heightened condition. So why not Shipra. You're reading the story, not in her shoes... so it is difficult for you to understand. I give the one liner idea, the author has to build up on the idea gradually. He is a genius. He can make the idea believable. When a woman in sexually liberated then her thinking also change, don't forget.

[iCuby]

People can always, be it men or women, carried away in sex related subjects. It is always happening, in real life. Intelligent people act dumb in these things. Kings, queens, princess in history did these kind of things. The famous people, celebrities did many carried away things (in your word dumb things). In real life, real people intelligent people, be it teachers, doctors, engineers, bankers, housewives can always get carried away or make mistakes, because they in in sexually vulnerable position, emotionally heightened condition, not because they are dumb.

[iCuby]

As Namrata leaving the town, and if a man other than Patode stays in the same house with Shipra, it will become very interesting. Because Shipra is already in sexually vulnerable condition. She possibly cannot be thinking straight always not possible. So it will become easy to manipulate and seduce her in sexual acts. A man in close proximity of a woman who recently got taste of adultery is dangerous.

[Victorjohnson]

But now she is in a different spelling. She is now emotionally heightened condition and in kind of situation clearity about thought process is not possible. It doesn't mean she is dumb. There's a sentence that "he/she is not thinking straight", that doesn't signify anyone as dumb. We normal people made silly mistakes when we're in sexually heightened condition. So why not Shipra. You're reading the story, not in her shoes... so it is difficult for you to understand. I give the one liner idea, the author has to build up on the idea gradually. He is a genius. He can make the idea believable. When a woman in sexually liberated then her thinking also change, don't forget.

First thing first... Author had won ppl's heart because just for my one msg u have spend ur time to give 3 paragraph reply... Really hats off to author for that...

Secondly coming to ur point, shipra is not sexually addicted woman... She was manipulated by namrata...i cant give credits to patode as it was namrata who played with words....

Basic attitude of a woman is that they dont do mistake alone... Girls do mistake when they are tempted... Girls working in spa or brothel ask them, they will say my friend  introduced me to this profession... They wont do things on their own... So here namrata was main reason for shipra downfall to patode... Shipra is not a slut... If shipra gets manipulated with toppo her characterization will be a joke