[Santhosh Stanley]

Harry, you have gone mad. It is high time for you to stop reading this story.

[Harry Jordan]

Harry, you have gone mad. It is high time for you to stop reading this story.

Nah I was randomly surfing the net when I ran into this discussion. I am currently enjoying Don 2 right now , the Hrithik disguise scene is happening right now , guess I got carried away seeing the movie LOL 

[Saradagaa]

 I am surprised that Kunal haven't made the decision to murder Esha at this point. Even after all of her betrayal ,

I know a real life situation where the husband on accidentally catching his wife with his own brother on bed, confronted them, but not able to do anything and out of exasperation shut himslef in to the next room and hanged himself.
Later when security officer started enquiry these things came into hushed tones gossip.

In such situations often people take hasty decisions which coumd end up in irreparable damage.
Our characters are showing remarkable resilience

[Harry Jordan]

I know a real life situation where the husband on accidentally catching his wife with his own brother on bed, confronted them, but not able to do anything and out of exasperation shut himslef in to the next room and hanged himself.
Later when security officer started enquiry these things came into hushed tones gossip.

In such situations often people take hasty decisions which coumd end up in irreparable damage.
Our characters are showing remarkable resilience

Yeah but in this story it is way worse. Because not only the wife cheats on husband , she literally gets pregnant with another man and is refusing to divorce her husband for some reason. And to top that , even now after the divorce is finally happening , the wife still get a happy life with no consequence to her actions as she is getting her time to spend with her child she had with her husband while at the same time about to give birth to another child with another man and raise it as well. Even though society and people with brains will side with Kunal because he was a victim to many extent  , he is still becoming a looser in this whole scenario. Unless the character takes a route of improvement and moving on from his wife , I don't see the point of his character arc. Its basically pointless to put him in this story right now because in many ways, the story insinuates that Kunal is a failure in every sense. Indirectly the story is setting up Kunal to become the male chauvinist that Priya claims him to be. And that in my eyes is total character assasination. A bigger fumble than Jon Snow in Game Of Thrones.

[Santhosh Stanley]

Mr. Harry you have made four times posts than the author. Therefore, the author should respect, appreciate and make your dream come true. You have been a marketing team for some of the stories. By replying to each comment, you have ensured the story to be on top most of the time. The authors of these stories are indebted to you.  clp); yr):

[Harry Jordan]

Mr. Harry you have made four times posts than the author. Therefore, the author should respect, appreciate and make your dream come true. You have been a marketing team for some of the stories. By replying to each comment, you have ensured the story to be on top most of the time. The authors of these stories are indebted to you.  clp); yr):

Thanks I guess. But I am a storywriter myself as well and I have already started my story in this site. And I am just doing my good duty of appreciating talent , clearlover is a brilliant writer and should be recognized and acknowledged in this site more for this really well designed story. Its also the reason why I have started my stinct in storywriting myself. You can check it out below if you want.

https://xossipy.com/thread-66982.html

[Speedy21]

I wonder how esha justify herself when truth unfold

[Saradagaa]

I wonder how esha justify herself when truth unfold

Quite often people react in ways which could never be anticipated. Particularly when it involves heart.
Esha, if she turn around her feelings and heartfully accept Kunal,  there is always a chance for Kunal to accept her as what she is.
There are two facets to Esha. Esha who was attracted fir physical pleasures and That part of Esha which found Aniket as a companion other than a person who can physically satisfy her.

That emotional bond, if broken byl any future revealations, could pave way for her as well as Kunal to take the things in a different perspective and start to build a new trust. 
It's not a comparison, but there are many real-life situations where victims of sexual abuse like Ape ( first letter omitted), are accepted by their future husband's because the emotional bond is at a different level.
There are many ifs and buts. Like in cenemas, any thing could happen. If writer decides that Kunal succeeds in understanding Priya's manipulations and corelates with the reactions of Esha and confronts all stake holders leading to an emotional whirlwind, followed by emotional trauma. That could potentially lead to Esha getting sick and losing the pregnancy. In such a scenario, Aditya could be a game changer as given an option he
would choose Kunal over Aniket and influence his mother and father
Our writer is creating space for him self to manipulate the characters with subtle hints. 
Let's see what lies ahead.

[Harry Jordan]

Quite often people react in ways which could never be anticipated. Particularly when it involves heart.
Esha, if she turn around her feelings and heartfully accept Kunal,  there is always a chance for Kunal to accept her as what she is.
There are two facets to Esha. Esha who was attracted fir physical pleasures and That part of Esha which found Aniket as a companion other than a person who can physically satisfy her.

That emotional bond, if broken byl any future revealations, could pave way for her as well as Kunal to take the things in a different perspective and start to build a new trust. 
It's not a comparison, but there are many real-life situations where victims of sexual abuse like Ape ( first letter omitted), are accepted by their future husband's because the emotional bond is at a different level.
There are many ifs and buts.
Our writer is creating space for him self to manipulate the characters with subtle hints. 
Let's see what lies ahead.

The only way I see it happening is when Esha finds out the real truth , she will realize her attraction towards Aniket wasn't organic or natural but rather manipulation and coercion. That could be a conventional way to bring Kunal and Esha eventually together. That Esha's attraction and romance to Aniket was partially manipulation and not at all geuine considering Aniket too seeked Priya's help to seduce Esha. Aniket's stance in this cannot be considered the actions of a good man but partially supporter of manipulation. But Kunal and Esha fell in love with each other organically , there was no Priya to push them to each other , Esha seeked Kunal and Kunal seeked Esha and they came together as an organic and loving couple. What happened between Esha and Aniket isn't LOVE. It is just attraction between bodies frustrated from lack of sexual satisfaction and drawn to each other. 

But then again , LOVE is a big fat joke in this story.

But judging by how much this story has developed with even the couple now almost in the brink of a divorce. I don't think a union between Kunal and Esha is ever happening unless there is unexpected character deaths. For now , I strongly believe there is no future for Kunal and Esha as a couple , both will suffer from their fates.

This story will definitely have a DARK ENDING!

[Saradagaa]

The only way I see it happening is when Esha finds out the real truth , she will realize her attraction towards Aniket wasn't organic or natural but rather manipulation and coercion. That could be a conventional way to bring Kunal and Esha eventually together. That Esha's attraction and romance to Aniket was partially manipulation and not at all geuine considering Aniket too seeked Priya's help to seduce Esha. Aniket's stance in this cannot be considered the actions of a good man but partially supporter of manipulation. But Kunal and Esha fell in love with each other organically , there was no Priya to push them to each other , Esha seeked Kunal and Kunal seeked Esha and they came together as an organic and loving couple. What happened between Esha and Aniket isn't LOVE. It is just attraction between bodies frustrated from lack of sexual satisfaction and drawn to each other. 

But then again , LOVE is a big fat joke in this story.

But judging by how much this story has developed with even the couple now almost in the brink of a divorce. I don't think a union between Kunal and Esha is ever happening unless there is unexpected character deaths. For now , I strongly believe there is no future for Kunal and Esha as a couple , both will suffer from their fates.

This story will definitely have a DARK ENDING!

I edited my post

[Harry Jordan]

I edited my post

What you suggested is an interesting scenario. But I am afraid I don't think that will be what will happen considering how much Esha is protective of this new life. Sure a natural miscarriage from trauma of the revelation could be an interesing dynamic but I don't think it will happen anytime soon. Plus the turmoil of Esha's mind plays the key here , last part showed her mind to be struggling from her actions , her duality is there. She is completely enamored and lost in her attention to Aniket that she still shows any compassion or remorse towards her betrayal to Kunal. She is for some reason justifying her actions and not seeing the flaws.

In my eyes , I believe the perfect approach will be to have Kunal investigate and find out the truth and then expose it to Esha. But after that Kunal completely deletes her from his life , completely disconnects from her life and is forced to give Aditya more time with her. That will be Esha's punishment , she will live the rest of her life haunted by her mistake and raise Aditya as a co-parent and continue living with Aniket and this new child because her parents would've already abandoned her , just kill off her father to solidify the magnitude of her consequences.

Then have Kunal live a happy life with someone else and raise kids from that relation/marriage. Then have the final epilogue be an old Kunal and old Esha meeting each other reminiscing the life they had after the choices Esha made. Have Aniket turn out to be a terrible parent and have the child be a miserable one (After all ,the child is concieved from an affair) , let Aditya become a successful man thanks to the good parts of Kunal and Esha in him. And then show Kunal actually had a wonderful life with another woman who unfortunately died of cancer few years ago but lived a happy life with him. Kunal would then forgive Esha for her actions and tell her that without her mistakes,  he would've never found this new woman who would spend such a fullfilling life with him. 

But somewhere deep in my mind , I kinda want a happy ending for Kunal and Esha , but I am afraid that would mean compromising one character over the other and thus resulting in one character getting somewhat ruined. I don't know , a small part of me want their happy ending but unfortunately for me right now , I don't see the possibility one bit. 

[RCF]

The only way I see it happening is when Esha finds out the real truth , she will realize her attraction towards Aniket wasn't organic or natural but rather manipulation and coercion. That could be a conventional way to bring Kunal and Esha eventually together. That Esha's attraction and romance to Aniket was partially manipulation and not at all geuine considering Aniket too seeked Priya's help to seduce Esha. Aniket's stance in this cannot be considered the actions of a good man but partially supporter of manipulation. But Kunal and Esha fell in love with each other organically , there was no Priya to push them to each other , Esha seeked Kunal and Kunal seeked Esha and they came together as an organic and loving couple. What happened between Esha and Aniket isn't LOVE. It is just attraction between bodies frustrated from lack of sexual satisfaction and drawn to each other. 

But then again , LOVE is a big fat joke in this story.

But judging by how much this story has developed with even the couple now almost in the brink of a divorce. I don't think a union between Kunal and Esha is ever happening unless there is unexpected character deaths. For now , I strongly believe there is no future for Kunal and Esha as a couple , both will suffer from their fates.

This story will definitely have a DARK ENDING!

Harry, my friend, your analysis is driven out of sympathy for Kunal and anger for Esha..keep those out and you will get clarity that Esha's affair is not just an affair and it clearly has lot of depth more than physical relationship.
She is totally invested into it with heart and though she misses her old Kunal from college and lot of those memories will definitely haunt her as the life imagined together is ruined now but her life with Aniket is not inorganic or unnatural.It would have been if Aniket is only seeking her physically but that was not the case so far so I believe she will be fine long term unless she loses the baby or Aniket in future, so your wishes to see her suffer and realize her mistakes might not be a big deal at the end, Yes when she understands Priya's manipulation she might regret her choices, which she also does now so nothing different.

As for Kunal, he will try to manipulate Priya now and needs to be beat her in her own game. That's main objective for him, while taking care of Aditya. He will lose custody and has to co parent Aditya with Esha so he will be forced to keep his anger in check and I can see eventually he will come to see her choices in a better way and probably makes peace with her cheating. This would happen soon when he realizes that Esha is just a pawn in Priya's game.

That's the happy path but there could be twists..

~RCF

[Saradagaa]

Harry, my friend, your analysis is driven out of sympathy for Kunal and anger for Esha..keep those out and you will get clarity that Esha's affair is not just an affair and it clearly has lot of depth more than physical relationship.
She is totally invested into it with heart and though she misses her old Kunal from college and lot of those memories will definitely haunt her as the life imagined together is ruined now but her life with Aniket is not inorganic or unnatural.It would have been if Aniket is only seeking her physically but that was not the case so far so I believe she will be fine long term unless she loses the baby or Aniket in future, so your wishes to see her suffer and realize her mistakes might not be a big deal at the end, Yes when she understands Priya's manipulation she might regret her choices, which she also does now so nothing different.

As for Kunal, he will try to manipulate Priya now and needs to be beat her in her own game. That's main objective for him, while taking care of Aditya. He will lose custody and has to co parent Aditya with Esha so he will be forced to keep his anger in check and I can see eventually he will come to see her choices in a better way and probably makes peace with her cheating. This would happen soon when he realizes that Esha is just a pawn in Priya's game.

That's the happy path but there could be twists..

~RCF

I agree with you in that part where Esha and Aniket have emotional bonding developed to a max extent. She took the decision to continue with pregnancy after careful consideration about her options and what she is is doing. 

The fact that The love and bonding between her and kunal from college days till Aniket was given a toss when she considered her current position is an indication of how deep the relationship developed between her and her new charm.

Moreover, if the writer wishes to end like... Ok, after some time Esha got divorce, a boy with a big dick ( even for a baby boy) born with all charms of both parents and Priya got what she wanted.. , he can end it up in the next few paragraphs. But we see a lot of story is still to unfold.

Let's await some twists

As of now she has crossed a point of no return, but let's see how "Time" the biggest facilitator/ manipulatir and healer of many wounds will impact their lives

[Saradagaa]

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[Harry Jordan]

Harry, my friend, your analysis is driven out of sympathy for Kunal and anger for Esha..keep those out and you will get clarity that Esha's affair is not just an affair and it clearly has lot of depth more than physical relationship.
She is totally invested into it with heart and though she misses her old Kunal from college and lot of those memories will definitely haunt her as the life imagined together is ruined now but her life with Aniket is not inorganic or unnatural.It would have been if Aniket is only seeking her physically but that was not the case so far so I believe she will be fine long term unless she loses the baby or Aniket in future, so your wishes to see her suffer and realize her mistakes might not be a big deal at the end, Yes when she understands Priya's manipulation she might regret her choices, which she also does now so nothing different.

As for Kunal, he will try to manipulate Priya now and needs to be beat her in her own game. That's main objective for him, while taking care of Aditya. He will lose custody and has to co parent Aditya with Esha so he will be forced to keep his anger in check and I can see eventually he will come to see her choices in a better way and probably makes peace with her cheating. This would happen soon when he realizes that Esha is just a pawn in Priya's game.

That's the happy path but there could be twists..

~RCF

This is the first time I completely disagree with you , even if I take away my feelings towards these characters. I cannot help but see the bigger wrong on what Esha has indeed done and I believe she deserves worse consequences for her actions. If we are seriously going to gift her a good future for the cruel adultery she did then this story is nothing more than just a blatant MISANDRY porn.

I can accept your perspective of the end of the story as long as there is a bright ending for Kunal's character as well like a new life partner or a family of his own , because lets face it from the start , if you consider all the events, he is the one that has been taking loss after loss. First his wife cheats him , then he is being blamed for her cheating , despite not being his fault he pushes for change in himself and tries his best to be a better partner for Esha , and despite all of his attempts to bring more love in their relationship Esha still chose Aniket to the point she became pregnant , and to top that she wasn't willing to divorce Kunal claiming she "isn't choosing" but her action says otherwise. Now when the divorce is happening , Aditya is now being part of a co parenting plan which means Kunal will have to live the rest of his life close to Esha and see her be happy and joyous with her new partner and raise a new child with him. Just tell me genuinely RCF , you really think this is fair for Kunal's character? To endure all of this and now have to be close with a woman who no longer loves him or cares for him.

And now if what you sujjest does happen and Kunal plays this game and gets his revenge on Priya and exposes her to Esha. And even after that Esha chooses Aniket over him. Would that be justification for Kunal in any way? 

However I must say I am definitely not a fan of Kunal being written as such a cliche in this story. He is often showcased as an honest family man with morals and values , like this part is like forcing the instance that he is an all in all good guy , to be frank I hate when male characters are written that way , some flaws are definitely needed. And to be honest now I kind of like his arc because the good guy act is done since Kunal's actions are driven by hate , rage and hurt. Which is why I believe even if he gets his revenge and ends Priya for good , he deserves a life after it. Maybe he completely walks away from Aditya and Esha's life , that will be an interesting consequence where then Esha will have to bear the burden of raising Aditya on her own and the child's turmoil on not seeing his father again. In my opinion the best happy ending will be when Aditya grows up he permanently leaves Esha's side and goes to Kunal as he will learn that his mother wasn't fair to his dad. That can bring a wonderful epilogue that Esha despite having a happy life with Aniket and this new child will never earn the respect from Aditya because after learning the truth growing up he can never forgive Esha for her actions..

Like I said I can accept the ending as long as Kunal's character gets a pay off , if not then this becomes another product for Masochism lovers.

[RCF]

This is the first time I completely disagree with you

This is the first time I completely disagree with you , even if I take away my feelings towards this characters. I cannot help but see the bigger wrong that Esha has indeed done and I believe she deserves worse consequences for her actions. If we are seriously going to gift her a good future for the cruel adultery she did then this story is nothing more than just a blatant MISANDRY porn


Actions do not necessarily define consequences all the time. In reality consequences for cheating is not punishable by law...it's between couples how to deal with it. Kunal already threw her out of his life, and she lost the life that they planned together due to her immaturity in seeking pleasures externally rather than working it out with her husband. She has to share her time with Aditya and will be without him half of the time. To top this, eventually her parents will know about this and they will hate her, What more consequences do you need for a cheater? This isn’t movie where someone will rage bait and kill her lol

I can accept you perspective of the end of the story unless there is a bright ending for Kunal's character as well like a new life partner or a family of his own , because lets face it from the start , if you consider all the events, he is the one that has been taking loss after loss. First his wife cheats him , then he is being blamed for her cheating , despite not being his fault he pushes for change in himself and tries his best to be a better partner for Esha , and despite all of his attempts to bring more love in their relationship Esha still chose Aniket to the point she became pregnant , and to top that she wasn't willing to divorce Kunal claiming she "isn't choosing" but her action says otherwise. Now when the divorce is happening , Aditya is now being part of a co parenting plan which means Kunal will have to live the rest of his life close to Esha and see her be happy and joyous with her new partner and raise a new child with him. Just tell me genuinely RCF , you really think this is fair for Kunal's character? To endure all of this and now have to be close with a woman who no longer loves him or cares for him.

Not all stories are written to show you that lead male hero needs redemption, if yes then you are in wrong site…This is an erotica section that means sex happens only when some one cheats some one close when it comes to lovers or couples. In that case not always Husband will be the winner and at least you should be happy Kunal is not a cuckold, and he has scope to reveal truth for us about Priya and he is getting more footage than Aniket outside of bed, still you feel Kunal is at a loss here? Husbands will be at a loss with respect to partners always in stories in this portal otherwise there won’t be a story of sex to tell. No one will read if Kunal and Esha have sex all the time and there is no cheating.
 What’s going on right now is a phase for Kunal, he has been cheated by his wife and he is going through a divorce.....let the story unravel and we can predict the ending based on that…I feel you are always driven by a need to get justice for the victim men and I get that aspect but not everything that unfolds here needs to be driven by solely that motive.


And now if what you sujjest does happen and Kunal plays this game and gets his revenge on Priya and exposes her to Esha. And even after that Esha chooses Aniket over him. Would that be justification for Kunal in any way?

Esha choosing Aniket is not a loss for Kunal at this point, he is already divorcing her…or might divorce in future…at this point if Esha chooses Kunal, it will be inorganic or unnatural…or other way round Kunal forgiving Esha is also out of question in terms of keeping it close to reality. Esha and Aniket are going to end up with each other unless we see a twist on someone dying or Aniket is playing a game rather than loving Esha sincerely. What will happen with Kunal’s life is irrelevant to the story but he will be happy at the end for sure…He will get rid of his cheating wife and be happy with Aditya for the time he can get him…. He might find new love at the end but am saying its irrelevant for the story…should be an epilogue thing if at all that happens.

Maybe he completely walks away from Aditya and Esha's life, that will be an interesting consequence where Esha will have to bear the burden of raising Aditya on her own and the child's turmoil on not seeing his father again. In my opinion the best happy ending will be when Aditya grows up, he permanently leaves Esha's side and goes to Kunal as he will learn that his mother wasn't fair to his dad.

Kunal will never leave his son and walks away nor we can expect his son walking away from his mother……he is too young to do that and understand what happened here. We do not know the ending, but my prediction is everyone accepts the reality of what happened and settles down in their life and moves on. 

There is a similar story from Game40it…where husband throws wife out and divorces her and she settles down with her lover and marries him at the end, but she loses her child in that story, it is not written that mother goes to court for custody of her child rather shown as if she regrets and leaves her child to be with father. We do not get to see angle of child and him missing his mother there…that is not close to reality. 
In reality mother will never leave her child like that and will fight for him even though mistake is on her end which is exactly what Esha is doing right now.

~RCF

[a2011]

most stories here are of loser husbands who are cucks or psuedo cucks, this has the potential to be different, I hope it is...but honestly don't see that happening...

[Harry Jordan]

~RCF

I see your perspective , and I can understand some of your reasoning. 


I am glad you brought up game40it , because one of my favorite story in this site was from him called "My Wife , Why Did She Betray Me". The character of Saravanan in that story in my opinion was hands down one of the best written husband characters in stories like this. Because in the end he was the one who got the last laugh and he got to have his happy ending. Compared to the never ending pile of "WIMP" husbands this site keeps on shitting out over and over again. 


As for consequences for Esha , I do believe there is enough for her now. After all , her new relation was built on the ashes and damages of her former marriage. And despite a possible happy life that Aniket provided along with his child , she would still have their sorrows and traumas because of her mistakes and the eventual distance of her son Aditya spending time with his father Kunal. And the epilogue can draw a parallel where Esha despite living a life with Aniket and her new child could never be completely happy , Kunal on the other hand gets to live a happy life with another woman with love and understanding. In a way Esha can be called by Society as a Gold Digger considering she is moving in with Aniket who much richer than Kunal. That would add another insult in society to her character. Esha's father dying from her actions would be an icing on the cake of her sufferings.  


Which is why I propose the idea that the epilogue should feature a meeting between old Kunal and old Esha reminiscing their lives with each other where they disclose that Esha had to live a conflicting life of happiness and pain while Kunal ends up finding true love and finally forgives Esha saying to her that he is happy that Esha abandoned him because if she didn't , Kunal wouldn't have found his new love and lived a fullfilling life. That would be the best ending. His last lines to Esha should be.


"Thank you for abandoning me Esha , because that way , I was able to find and experience true LOVE and COMPANIONSHIP!"

[Santhosh Stanley]

Esha will thank Priya for pushing her to Aniket
Aniket will thank priya for helping to get Esha
Kunal will thank Esha for dumping him
Kunal will thank priya for manipulating and playing a pimp for his ex wife
Kunal will thank Aniket for showing his place in the society
Aditya will thank kunal for giving him a great father in form of Aniket.
Priya will thank Kunal for help winning her revenge.

[Santhosh Stanley]

When is the next update likely to be posted ???????????????????????