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She couldn't resist desai before also desai couldnt keep himself away from her and now we are back again to square one but where the story ends now where they wouldn't see each other ever . What a joke , atleast she could have shown some restraint against desai but no she is too weak to do that . Our hero was so all and mighty in last chapter and here he becomes the same old guy couldn't control himself . I mean they both keep losing control and now they are planning to raise a child . What the hell . I doubt she would have ever called him ever if she was not pregnant.
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09-02-2025, 05:31 PM
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I must say, I am utterly disappointed.
Threesome at this psychological crisis? Meera could decide the moment Desai suggested Krish to watch. Shame on her.
Only DNA test can confirm fatherhood. Pre-cum can contain sperms to make a woman pregnant.
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Oh she just returned because she got pregnant otherwise she would have moved forward like she always had
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Yes this suppose be the ending to previous one I liked it though happy desai changed !? Am not sure about that this story remains all time favourite one am gng take break for this sight now peace ✌️✌️✌️✌️
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09-02-2025, 05:55 PM
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Just completed reading the final chapter and my honest first reaction is --------- ITS FINALLY DONE!
I am just gonna share the things I liked and some criticism from my part regarding this story. So here you go.
POSITIVES
1. DESAI BECOMING THE CUCKOLD
I actually forgot the hidden "cuckold" kink that has been inside Desai for far long that I always overlooked it. Now its makes sense , while my mind was obsessed regarding the "manipulation" sife of Desai I actually never noticed that there was a bit of cuckold kink in him too. After all he did watch as another man screwed Ananya , and he also shared his wish of cuckolding with Krish have both of them watch Meera screw another guy. But most importantly I really liked the idea of how much you explored Desai's "obsession" with Krish. He always craved to be Krish , to be the heart and mind of Meera in all the ways by wanting to be Krish. He was obsessed with being Krish to the point that he himself evolved to become a cuckold. At the end Meera was right , Desai was not exactly better future for her , because Desai ended up being Krish but with more money and age. In a way this also showed Desai the person he has become. To some extent I absolutely loved how Desai was handled in the ending. The man who fell victim to his kinks.
2. MEERA GAINING CONTROL AND PUTTING HER FOOT ON THE GROUND
Meera showed in this chapter why she was the focal point of the story. At first she was ready to accept Desai as her future because she actually believed Desai has changed and that she might find some peace even though her feelings for Krish still remained. Even in the duality of her feelings , she held onto Krish hoping that he will pull her back but she realized Krish was never going to change. And when Desai showed his true colors , Meera immediately took charge , sending the men hurling back. She had the right to be upset because both of her expectations were broken tonight , Desai by showing his cuckolding kink and Krish by never abandoning his cuckolding kink. She just had enough with both the men treating her like a sex object and she threw them both out showing them that their kinks have reduced their own identities. Meera desperately wanted Krish to stop the act but she also saw the cuckold in him can never be gone and she believed it was best to leave him so maybe Krish can change. But the truth is , Meera can never live without Krish , he is forever her life and she cannot think of a life without him.
3. KRISH THE LUCKIEST MAN IN THE WORLD!
Talk about "hitting the target" , if it wasn't for Desai's obsession of becoming Krish , Meera would've probably ended up pregnant with Desai's child at that moment. Seeing Meera enjoying Krish seemed to bother Desai which resulted in him wanting to switch places which resulted in not only impregnating Meera by Krish cumming inside her but also giving her a powerful orgasm. Desai's own obsession paved the way for Krish to understand his kink had no role in his life anymore. Now Krish's cuckolding nature is still not clear yet but I am tempted to believe that this new family life will shift his focus from his kinks to other important aspects. Also I like the insinuation of an open ending with the final sentence.
SOME STORIES END. OURS SIMPLY TURNED THE PAGE.
NEGATIVES
1.DESAI THE SAINT
A part of me want to accept the character ending author chose for Desai because unlike Sekhar and Das , Desai actually goes through some changes in his life. Maybe it was the "manipulative" Desai trope that I wanted to be seen as a reality more that I never considered a "cuckold" Desai would've been a much better blowback to the character. However , he got the easy way out with no manipulation game or any "reaction" to his actions in the past. Just Desai accepting his mistakes and moving on and hoping to improve on himself. And just like Sekhar and Das he left the story with no more involvement. Considering how much this character has impacted other's lives , I wanted some pay off and a part of me feels I don't get that with this ending. In this regard I prefer the original ending where Nidhi exposes Desai and his true face is shown. However , this character arc is one thing I am not a fan of.
2. LACK OF KRISH-MEERA ROMANCE.
A part that I have always never liked regarding part 3 is the complete lacking of Krish and Meera romance and that also resonated in the final chapters and at the ending of the story. The part where Krish and Meera reunited after finding out their pregnancy and got intimate , it was once again ended in quick words. It just feels like the story wants the readers to connect more to the "cuckolding" sex rather than the actual real intimate sex between lovers. That is something I completely dislike in this ending , in my opinion their reunion deserved a passionate sex session. But as usual , it was once again reduced in some few words. Though I can understand why the author chose it and the reason is my third point in the negatives.
3. KRISH's CUCKOLDING KINK STILL IN QUESTION.
Once again the author has insinuated the duality of whether Krish is cured of his kink or not. Because even after this story ended , Krish's nature is still left unanswered. And I believe that is the reason why the Krish-Meera reunion extended sex sequence was left out. Because Krish's own nature is still confusing. If he not a cuckold anymore? or like the Author said , There is no such thing as a ex-cuckold. I get the feeling that the need to have an open ending for the story kind of made this decision to not give a definite answer to his kinks anymore. In a way its been left to the readers to decide. Is Krish really cured? Or will there be a part 4? After all the last line did say stories end but this one only turned a page. I understand the author's mindset regarding this but I personally wanted a definite answer which sadly the story never really answers. I guess the author wants to keep the possibilities of exploring this series further in the future but honestly this is the factor that I am most disappointed yet.
Now to finish my assessment , is the ending better than the last one?
In simple words , the answer is both , yes and no. The original ending did somethings better and the new ending did somethings better as well. If we weaver both the endings together maybe we can make our own perfect ending to this story with our own headcannons. But regardless I wanna thank you all for this incredible journey that krish_999 tooks us with this story. I wholeheartedly wish him all the best for the future.
Now I am gonna act a little selfish here and give you guys the link to my own story I've started on the site. I can assure you I am not as good of an author as krish_999 but he has inspired me to do this and a closure in this story helps me focus on mine. Thank you Krish for this wonderful experience and I cordially invite all readers to my own story below to start a new experience.
With Love.
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(09-02-2025, 05:31 PM)manasi Wrote: I must say, I am utterly disappointed.
Threesome at this psychological crisis? Meera could decide the moment Desai suggested Krish to watch. Shame on her.
Only DNA test can confirm fatherhood. Pre-cum can contain sperms to make a woman pregnant.
manasi Nah , its definitely Krish's child considering he came a lot and Meera orgasmed from his cumming alone.
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Okay, so both were cuckolds, so Meera had a threesome with both cuckolds, and left both of them...and came back to Krish because she became pregnant by one of the cuckolds...lol...it was pretty funny..
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09-02-2025, 06:35 PM
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This chapter and ending is wrong on some levels...It has blockbuster first half and weak second half. It progressed naturally as it should but the underlying essence is lost. Hope I will get time to read one more time today to give my thoughts in detail.
Over all I am glad that Krish_999 finished it and got relieved from this burden. Thanks for this series...Both endings this one and previous one left it with many unanswered questions.
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Thank you krish for the wonderful episode, it was pretty good how it went with the flow and ended rightly... As I said earlier i dint not want to login and comment this time just read the ending and pull down shutter to this story and website. One humble request from my side , krish and meera are at peace now don't disturb them , let them live their life happily... Part 3 let it end here you have done ur best let ur pen settle down for krish and meera part.
As far as ending is concerned many people have many thoughts and will not be happy if ending does not go their way. Since this story is urs it should end how you want it to be so u have done that. Many people might disagree so let it be.
Finally the summary of story I don't want to drag much , Krish has done an outstanding job to make us glued to this story. The comman on writing is commendable. I wish you could turn this story into a book. All the very best krish for ur relaxing future , take some gap enjoy ur personal life before starting anything.
Coming to story what I felt was like as name suggests it was journey to know himself , his wife meera but in course of journey they made desai to know about himself also. The journey to varanasi and dip in Ganga was like remorse of what all he had done in his life washing that away , burn the cuckold nature of his as last ritual and wash it's remains in ganga to be free from it. End should symbolise that , if again the story starts then there is no meaning to it. Many readers may think differently and don't agree with me but it's ok they might have different point of view at the ending.
Finally a good bye to all the fellow readers , this website has entertained me much but I feel I need a detox from it so going away... Like wise starting a new journey to find new me.
Final thanks to Krish , thank you very much bro , some one told to end this 7 year long journey then only I felt it was 7 long years of this story, I read almost all of your story , scolded you many times during the 2 stories NODAS and this one very much sorry for that, it was all for the story nothing personal. Good bye krish all the very best for your future... Let the peace prevail.......
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The most disappointed ending, I thing there should be a part or an epilogue with in the Meera’s view, if I am right otherwise the story willnot complete,
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Krish you can start a new chapter after the baby birth. Believe me with the new person and the with the title of mother. Oh it will be hotter bro
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09-02-2025, 07:23 PM
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Thanks for writing this story krish.May be because of high expectations it didn't match that.
Couple sticking together even when desai is perfect (I liked angelisation of desai for this) would have been a great ending I feel.
Any epilogue?
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Thank you Krish for a wonderful ending. I always felt Meera belongs with Krish and you made it happen. I can now die with peace ? Thanks again for this wonderful story series. You are the master.
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As usually last repeat the pathetic ending anyhow but your skill is too good but in the end same happened
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Don't see the point of it , penultimate episode was great ,this episode seems like the penultimate episode never happened .
Very hasty ending - Nothing was actually resolved in this episode ,they are back to square 1 . I am not even sure whose child is Meera carrying and why did she not take the pill knowing that 2 men had sex with her .
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Dear xossipians,
This story is ahead of its time. Its not for those who like desi masala b grade movies.
For me it is the perfect ending. Its the ending I had in my mind. Intimacy and being comfortable with your partner is v.v.special. Look it from their point of view.
As i said, if meera plays her card well, and if meera shows the level of intimacy she has with Krish to desai. He will walk out.
Read between the lines, Meera seems to sorted out. She knows both the men, their strength and weaknesses. And she got what she wanted.
First of all nothing will change all of a sudden, all three played their part. No one is innocent and it's consensual.
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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Finally, the chapter everyone was waiting, the grand finale is here and many were disappointed. To an extent I was too but I read the update again and I this time feel it could have been better on certain aspects.
The main problems I have with this rewritten version, esp. the last chapter are the following things:
1. Desai’s as masked cuckold theory.
Last ending we saw Desai was a rapist and hated for it and sent home, Krish_999 changed it to make him a better person this time but he was turned into a cuckold. Apart from last chapter, there were few signs before where he only impersonated Krish but at that time the chapters were written with words that show meaning as if he was trying to impersonate Krish as he is jealous of him because Meera loves him, and he ultimately as a person who was seeking her love wants to be as Krish when he is in bed with Meera so he can feel that love. So how did that turn into a cuckold theory? Ok let’s say in the past Ananya was made to sleep with his friend and he enjoyed the power in doing it and enjoyed watching it, but he is not a cuckold for doing it because he didn’t own Ananya as his wife or lover. She was only his conquest so him making her to sleep with other is truly not a cuckold theory if that is being portrayed as a cuckoldry and only sign in his life then I don’t know I feel its forced plot. Even in this last chapter, Desai asked Krish to be in the room and participate to only show Meera that Krish did not change so it would be easy for him to claim her eventually...that was his plan, and it was not him being cuckold. I do not know why he switched places with Krish and let him fuck her…that truly did not resonate with his personality, Old Desai would make Meera orgasm and let Krish fuck her mouth based on his past aggressive, dominating personality and show Meera that Krish is that cuckold but he can claim her…The way he swapped places with Krish seems out of his character forcibly put so Meera can tag him with Krish.
In explanation, Author added a twist that Desai left Ananya because she regretted after she slept with his friend and now, he is looking for Meera because she is already some one who sleeps with others, so he was pursuing her to be his partner, so she won’t regret once she sleeps with the men, he chooses…whattttt?
“You and Meera were different. And I saw that as one of the many qualities that made Meera special. The bond you two had—I wanted that too. If she were to join me, I know I would have made her sleep with men of my choosing. And she wouldn’t regret it. I wouldn’t want her to regret it—that’s the point.”
Desai only knew her to sleep with others around chapter 40 or 41 when she revealed about Jai…he didn’t know anything about her before that chapter, but he carried her pic in his purse even before she revealed about Jai.…something is not right and not conveyed correctly in this plot. Desai being cuckold is a weak plot with many loopholes and very few convincing signs which make it hard to believe it.
2. The bond that Krish saw between Desai and Meera.
“I watched, amazed at how their conversation was unfolding. At the start, Meera had made it clear that there was no chance of them being together. But by the end, her gaze lingered on Desai more, her eye contact deepening, as if silently acknowledging the sincerity of his affection. It was clear to me now that, despite her words, something in her was responding to him.“
We have been hammered with chemistry between Desai and Meera since chapter 43 when she first time lays eyes on Desai again after he left, there was undeniable longing in him and his longing was unnerving Meera irrevocably and it kept on and on until they both couldn’t take it and committed adultery on concert night, then continued with Krish’s permission in second bedroom then again in alpine heights...this bonding that Krish saw in rewritten chapters was not there before and even if it was there, it never exceeded the levels beyond an affair…but Meera clearly felt comfortable, alive, responding to his bodily needs and yet there was a familiarity between them that we have never seen her have it with any of her past lovers over the 3 part series, and exactly for this reason Krish wanted to separate and want Meera to be with Desai because he saw that bond has developed so much that they could have a life together with out his fantasies and Meera would be happy, so this last chapter did not explain Meera’s feelings well, Maybe Meera in her mind has clarity on who she belongs to and who is just a temporary lover for her but that clarity is lacking in Krish in the first place before this chapter began but it was not resolved by end of it and it did not get resolved yet by the end of this story as well. So does that mean tomorrow if Krish let’s say pushes her towards Ashish or some one with no fantasies and genuinely loves Meera, it’s a given that she will fall for them…as she did for Desai. If not for Desai’s cuckoldry she would have gone with him for 2 weeks and she also rejected Krish and accepted that he won’t come back to her.
"Yeah, I know." Meera raised her hand as if to stop me and continued. "I know I'm done chasing you, done trying to make amends. It's time I…"
"I was just telling him I’m done resisting you. There’s no point in that anymore, right? It’s time I stop and really look at you – to see where your heart is."
Even the act of spitting was turned into nothing so there is no need for explanation.
If it was only kink...why would she suggest in the past that it only belonged to my Krish and why would she say in last chapter that Desai became special for her when she did it...I feel like author took an escape route here lol...This whole chapter skipped explaining her feelings for Desai, This gesture too is part of it, author conveniently made its value 0.
So why would author skip explaining her stand towards Desai whether he is cuckold or not? End of the day it doesn’t matter if Desai is cuckold or not…last ending she chose Krish even before it was revealed that Desai is bad, this chapter she pushed both out of the house…but the bond she shared with Desai was conveniently skipped with out clarity to Krish.
3. Glorifying Meera and leaving Krish out to the dust.
The previous chapter was like Avengers: Infinity war, it has such an emotional connection, love poured between the couple and sacrifices were seen, hearts were heavy.
This chapter is not Avengers: end game…Plot was twisted and lost its way. Krish is the one who sacrificed his happiness as he knew his weakness, he knows he will make her sleep with other men if she stays with her, he was ready to leave everything for her, yet in the process of making Desai cuckold, Krish was brought back as a cuckold and his weakness was shown to us all. So, if correct parameters were set, situations arise, Meera is game then cuckold Krish never dies…He is always there lingering around in dormant state. Meera is parting with Krish, Krish is leaving Meera, Desai is the only one who should rejoice…but all three of them had sex…joyfully. I don’t know how dicks rise when people are losing their loved ones so unrealistic. I don’t know what Meera meant by this:
“It’s not that I wanted to change you, Krish. But I’ve always hoped to see you stand up for what you initiate. You made me sleep with other men, allowed me to play with my emotions, and then you began experimenting with it. I knew I would falter, but instead of hiding in the background, watching where I was heading, I would’ve preferred you to be a part of it—guide me, bring me back when I lost my way. I've never attached myself to anyone the way I have with you. But with Susheel, you pushed me too far. The threat of leaving me—it was too much. At one point, I even thought it was just a game between the two of you. But when I realized it was real, I prayed that it was just a game."
The whole point is for Krish not to initiate it again and again something where she is hurt. Yes he made her sleep with men, he experimented but at the same time she never says no but she has regret later so Krish is trying to do the only solution that is available to him that is to let her go so she will be at peace and question for her to falter and him bringing her back is not the solution…I thought she understood that in previous chapter and hence she said yes but here looks like she did not get it. She calls him heartless person; says he deserves to watch her and Desai…what the hell…You can’t even see a person and his sacrifice for you? Now suddenly it becomes Krish’s fault for inviting Desai? What happened to her fucking bond with Desai? If not for that…Krish would have accepted her like other million times when she came back from having sex with others like Das, Shekar, Ashish with out emotionally connected. He would have supported her and brought her back like she wanted in the above dialogue.
He did not because he saw you cross a line with Desai and he hoped you would find happiness with him..…now she says that Krish threatening that he will leave her is too much for her. Damn it…what have you made Meera in this chapter…its portrayed as if no fault of her but the only sacrifice that Krish did was at a fault here?…Why this glorification of Meera? It would have been a perfect ending instead if she explained to both men what her feelings towards them are and choose Krish or maybe go separate ways. Maybe Krish will realize it and claim her back…this whole Desai cuckoldry is a forced plot which did not give ample space for couple to shine for their love.
“I realized then that this night wasn’t about the union of two souls – it was purely about the union of two bodies. Desai hardly made an effort to talk about anything meaningful; he was more focused on teasing, turning every moment into a game of seduction.”
Even if we keep the Desai cuckoldry, it should have been Krish who sees his nature and bring Meera back before she commits to his nature. He was seeing signs all this chapter how he was not aiming for her heart but going for her body…he was getting excited when Meera was reaching out to him and enjoying it. We read so many instances like that but ending glory again went to Meera…only because she must realize that Desai is a cuckold to let him go out of her system.
4. Using pregnancy for reunion.
This is my biggest gripe in this chapter. Why? Why pregnancy? It just sucked the emotion out rather than showed it as a compromise.
Would Meera called Krish and tried to bring him back to her life with out Pregnancy?
Her last statements are below:
“I’m done with both of you fuckers,” she shouted again. “I’m done with this life with you. I’m done with the friendship with you, Susheel fucking Desai.”
“You fucker, Krish. You said you weren’t good for me because you’d make me fuck other men. You said this moron would be the one for me.”
“You may believe I’m the one for you, but I believe you’re no better than Krish. You’re two sides of the same coin. Equal in weight. Equal in value. Equal in your twisted fantasies. . .And I’m not going to be a victim of your games anymore. I want to end it, damn it! Oh my God, what have I become?”
“You and I are not made for each other. Like Krish, you too deserve a woman who has the determination to say no to you when you come up with fantasies like this. If you don’t want such a partner, then go find someone else. I don’t want to be that partner.”
After saying all this and determining that she wanted a life with out games, fantasies and never want to be with the one’s whom she threw out of her life, she came back to Krish…she says she loves him but she forget that Krish is just another side of Desai so just because she loves Krish , does that mean she is OK to be with him and play his games? Did you come back to him because you loved him or because you are pregnant?
I believe she loved him as I have this whole story and not for baby, but Krish is some one who is a cuckold so how is she OK with it now after blaming Desai and throwing him out…is it fair? Hence, I told this whole cuckold plot is weak.
I said earlier comment that first half is blockbuster and second half is weak…its because even if we keep this cuckold plot, if there was a way to show Krish changed convincingly and add lot of dialogues in depth about each other’s feelings and bringing back that lost bond between with the promises that she would say no and he would not be a cuckold then there would have been a way out at least for their future.
After the couple’s reunion is complete, both together finding out she is pregnant would have been better ending. Now the ending is shown as if even if they mess up again, they will find solution together so its like same as last ending with no solution for the fantasies problem. Maybe like the story said at the end, that its not an end but just a turn of a page.
Overall, the series is our favorite and epic and will always stay with us forever. It’s never easy to write for such a complicated plot and twists that went into this story. Krish_999 did a marvelous job in writing it so convincingly and making it a novel. I thank you myself and from all other readers for giving us this masterpiece. Hope you get much needed relief and rest from this writing.
~RCF
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Edit Reason: I think Desai Knew about Meera sleeping with other men way before chapter 40, when he placed recorder in Krish bedroom
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A Special Note to the Author, Krish_999
Before sharing my thoughts on the final chapter, I want to take a moment to express my deepest appreciation for the incredible journey you have crafted with "Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me as Well".
With all my heart, I truly admire the immense talent and dedication you’ve poured into this saga. The emotional depth, intricate character arcs, and thought-provoking storytelling have made this one of the most remarkable stories ever written on this forum - without a doubt! Your ability to captivate readers, evoke powerful emotions, and keep us eagerly engaged throughout is a testament to your brilliance as a writer.
This story has not just been a piece of fiction; it has been an experience - one that will stay with us for a long time. You deserve immense recognition for making this a grand success. Millions of hugs from all your readers! You have earned a place among the greatest, if not the best writer here.
Thank you, Krish_999, for this masterpiece. Your name will be remembered with admiration and respect!
My Thoughts on the Story
I find myself agreeing with several points raised by RCF and Harry Jordan regarding the narrative choices, especially in the final chapter…
I’ve read the final chapter, and while I initially felt disappointed, I wanted to reassess it with a more open mind. There are certainly aspects that could have been better executed, and some narrative choices feel forced rather than organic.
1. Desai’s Character Shift & Forced Cuckoldry Plot
The biggest issue for me is how Desai’s character was rewritten. In the previous version, he was a rapist and was rightfully hated, but here, he was restructured into a cuckold, which feels unnatural. The hints that he was envious of Krish and wanted to impersonate him were there, but that doesn’t directly translate into him being a cuckold. His past with Ananya, where he made her sleep with others, was about power and control, not cuckoldry.
Even in this chapter, his intention was to expose Krish’s unchanged nature, not to willingly allow Krish to be with Meera. So why did he suddenly swap places? That felt out of character, almost as if it was done just to label him as a cuckold. The explanation about him wanting a partner who wouldn’t regret being with other men felt weak and inconsistent with his past actions. Desai carried Meera’s picture long before he even knew she was sleeping with other men, so this twist doesn’t quite fit.
2. The Unexplained Bond Between Desai & Meera
Throughout the rewritten story, there’s been an increasing emphasis on the bond between Meera and Desai. While their affair was evident, this chapter tries to frame it as something deeper, something Krish himself recognized as a genuine connection. Yet, when the final confrontation happens, Meera’s emotions are never clearly explained.
Did she truly love Desai at some point? Was she simply caught up in the physical connection? If Krish saw their bond as something strong enough for them to be together, why was it dismissed so easily in the end? If Meera could fall for Desai because of the situation, what’s stopping her from falling for another man in a similar circumstance?
The entire arc of Desai and Meera was left unresolved emotionally. Instead of a well-defined choice, it felt like Meera was just reacting to Desai’s cuckoldry rather than addressing her own feelings. The spitting scene, which previously held significance, was reduced to nothing, further proving that her emotions towards Desai were not explored properly.
3. Krish’s Sacrifice Undermined & Meera’s Glorification
One of the most impactful parts of the previous chapters was the emotional depth of Krish’s sacrifice. He knew his own weaknesses, understood that staying with Meera would only lead to repeating the same mistakes, and made the heartbreaking choice to let her go. Yet, instead of this being acknowledged, the chapter turns it into a weakness.
Meera suddenly shifts blame onto Krish, calling him heartless, accusing him of making her sleep with other men and playing games. But didn’t she always have a choice? If Desai was just another man Krish pushed her towards, then why did she share a deeper bond with him? Why does the narrative now make Krish the villain when his actions were, at their core, selfless?
The chapter had so many moments where Krish could have been the one to recognize Desai’s nature and pull Meera back before she made a mistake, but instead, the focus was placed on Meera realizing Desai’s flaws herself. The final glory of realization went entirely to Meera, making Krish feel like an afterthought in his own love story.
4. Pregnancy as a Forced Plot Device
This was probably the weakest part of the ending for me. After all the powerful emotions and conflicts, why use pregnancy as the reason for Meera and Krish’s reunion?
If Meera was truly done with both Krish and Desai, would she have ever reached out to Krish again if not for the pregnancy? Her final words before finding out were strong: she was done with both men, with their games, with everything. Yet, suddenly, she comes back to Krish. Was it because she truly realized she loved him, or was it because of the baby?
I do believe Meera loved Krish, but the way this was handled made it feel like a compromise rather than a real emotional resolution. Instead of using pregnancy as the reason, the story could have focused more on Krish changing, Meera seeing that change, and both of them finding their way back to each other in a meaningful way. Then, after they reunite, they could have discovered the pregnancy, making it a moment of joy rather than a narrative crutch.
5. Lack of Consequences for Meera’s Actions
One of the biggest issues in this chapter is how Meera is absolved of any responsibility for her choices. While Krish is blamed for everything, Meera’s own actions - her willingness to engage with Desai, her decisions throughout the story - are never truly examined.
At various points, she made choices. Yet the final chapter treats her as if she was simply a victim of circumstance, reacting to the men around her rather than taking ownership of her actions. A stronger resolution would have been for Meera to acknowledge her mistakes and show meaningful personal growth, rather than shifting blame entirely onto Krish.
6. Underdeveloped Redemption Arc (or Lack Thereof) for Desai
If Desai was meant to be a reformed character, the story should have given us clearer moments of self-reflection and personal change. Instead, his transformation feels abrupt and contradictory. How does a man who once thrived on power and control suddenly embrace cuckoldry?
A more believable ending could have involved Desai recognizing his own toxicity, understanding that he was never capable of true love, and stepping away with a real sense of remorse. Instead, his shift feels like a forced twist rather than an organic evolution of his character.
7. A Missed Opportunity for a Stronger Ending
Rather than using pregnancy as a convenient reason for Meera and Krish to reunite, the story could have explored a more meaningful emotional resolution. If their love was truly meant to last, it should have been rediscovered through self-awareness, growth, and time - not through an external plot device.
Imagine an ending where Meera realizes Krish has changed, that he’s no longer the same man who made mistakes in the past. Imagine if their love rekindled not because of obligation, but because they genuinely found their way back to each other. The pregnancy revelation could have then been a moment of shared joy - rather than a narrative crutch forcing their reunion.
8. The Lost Depth of Secondary Characters
Another issue is the sidelining of other significant characters. Figures like Ananya, who played a major role earlier, disappear without much resolution. What happened to them? Did they have any lingering influence on Meera’s choices? Their absence makes the final chapter feel disconnected from the rest of the story.
A few additional scenes showing how these characters react to the resolution - perhaps Ananya confronting Desai or reflecting on her past - could have provided a more satisfying and complete ending.
Final Thoughts:
The first half of the final chapter was brilliant - raw, emotional, and filled with tension. But the second half lost its way. The forced cuckoldry arc, the rushed love triangle resolution, and the reliance on pregnancy as a plot device all weakened what could have been a powerful conclusion.
Rather than feeling like a natural ending to a beautifully complex story, this chapter felt contrived - as if it was bending characters to fit a predetermined outcome rather than allowing their natural evolution. Krish and Meera’s reunion needed more depth, more honesty, and more emotional resolution.
There were so many ways this could have ended better:
- Meera choosing to stand on her own, learning from her mistakes.
- Krish and Meera gradually finding their way back to each other based on love and growth.
- Desai having a genuine moment of self-awareness rather than an inconsistent personality shift.
Instead, what we got was a rushed and incomplete resolution that left many of the story’s core themes unresolved.
Would love to hear others’ thoughts - did anyone else feel this way? ☺️
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us desai ko marwa dete kisi flight crash wagarah main aur property meera aur krish ko de jata lol
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