06-02-2025, 10:50 PM
Great updates
Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.
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06-02-2025, 11:12 PM
Brilliant update... I wish she shd take mangalsutra and go off because shipra might be unfaithful wife but not a bad mom... ( atleast for time being)... A woman can fizzle but nt the mother...
However in future patode will break tat as well and tat will be her end... She will be worthless after tat... Lets see wat is in author mind...
06-02-2025, 11:28 PM
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The conversations between Patode and Shipra are becoming very repetitive. The story needs to move.
07-02-2025, 01:11 AM
Super going...The tension is so carefully and masterfully maintained.
07-02-2025, 06:52 AM
Nice update I dont remember reading shipra thinking about the child or talking to child or trying to understanding the needs. The child is completely taken care of by others. She is never a good mom. Now she is a cock hungry slut. She will throw the mangalsutra in the trash and get naked before joinging patode.
07-02-2025, 11:54 AM
07-02-2025, 12:30 PM
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What excellent update!
Patode is a master manipulator and tactician. He has managed to break Shipra's senses and make her feel like she is hiding her self. Patode is the only one who can make feel alive and be herself. He wants her to come back to him after spending time with family, making her feel that she belongs to him only, not with her family. request: please do not stop the next update as you did this one. Readers' expectations are soaring high. I suggest writing the next update, "The Illusion of Escape Part 2," in its entirety, without halting like this one. when is the next update
07-02-2025, 05:54 PM
One of the best story found in this site, hope it's remain completed at the end.
08-02-2025, 08:00 AM
Another reason why Shipra should leave immediately is that it will prolong the suspense whether Patode has really succeeded in manipulating her.
08-02-2025, 08:21 AM
Awesome update. Now shipra started hating her husband completely and patode has almost won the battle.
08-02-2025, 05:53 PM
The conversations are very repeatative. I have no problem with conversations, but the line of the conversations are same and Patode talking non stop.
08-02-2025, 05:56 PM
The whole idea in this update is great but it could be more crispy and the story should move forward more. Just for the sake of making the story longer don't drag. You're dragging too much just to make the story long. Rather the sexual parts should be longer and kinky.
08-02-2025, 06:00 PM
I have one request don't make it a cuckold story, don't involve humiliation of Shipra's husband or Shipra having sex in front of her husband or Shipra's sex videos send to her husband. Her husband should oblivious of her excapades and he should think that Shipra as loving wife.
08-02-2025, 06:01 PM
Your last update was not masterbateble, so please give a masterbateable update very soon
08-02-2025, 06:03 PM
This is my all-time favourite story... So I commented. Don't feel otherwise.
08-02-2025, 06:53 PM
08-02-2025, 07:26 PM
What an amazing update..First let me tell something about the story..Your understanding towards human psychology is nothing just commendable.. Each and every scene in this story is amazing in itself.. And the dialogue between the characters of story seems absolutely real and erotic as well.. Now lets come to this recent update..Although sex was missing in this update.. But it was very important for the story to move forward in the best way...and yes lets see how Toppo tames Shipra and rides her on all possible poses of Khajuraho..
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