24-01-2025, 05:18 PM
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Adultery Spicy Red Chillies (Completed)
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24-01-2025, 05:18 PM
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24-01-2025, 09:15 PM
Good finish, but many questions
1. Why did he not kill sajida who is responsible for his current state 2. What is the need for him to kill himself rather than escaping after so much planning 3. Who is sneha, is he santhosh daughter? 4. Why did santhosh tell the story of Roma to sneha. Is that a correct approach to tell the bad past to new person. 5. Rahim is still waiting to fuck sneha when Aarav take her to his home. ha ha
25-01-2025, 06:05 PM
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That was a dramatic finish. You killed all the characters.
He should of shot bashir in the head after cutting off his dick and saved two bullets for Sajida and Rahim. ![]() Waiting for the epilogue
25-01-2025, 07:19 PM
Good finish. Thanks for the story.
25-01-2025, 10:54 PM
Super ending. Happy that you did not finish Rajesh as cuckold or sissy.
26-01-2025, 12:04 AM
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Man , To be Honest . I like the ending . You should have add one more chapter to show the build up , The planning phase and the training phase of Husband in Jail . It felt rushed but I understand your reasoning behind it . Never Mind I loved .
And the twist in the END , SNEHA . Man , The Kid though He is man now still in danger. I guess sajida and Rahim is alive so they might go after him . I hope , Santosh had already prepared the Rajesh's kid to handle these SCUM . Waiting for your Next Story !
26-01-2025, 06:12 AM
(26-01-2025, 12:04 AM)DeanWinchester00007 Wrote: Man , To be Honest . I like the ending . You should have add one more chapter to show the build up , The planning phase and the training phase of Husband in Jail . It felt rushed but I understand your reasoning behind it . Never Mind I loved . Having known the full story of Rajesh, Santhosh should have prepared Aarav to face sajida and rahim type of people. Definitely he is not like his father and he has a well toned body that is strong enough to fuck the brains out of any woman. Hope the epilogue explains it better rather than ending this man as a loser. ![]()
26-01-2025, 06:48 AM
Never thought sneha will be another Roma
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26-01-2025, 09:25 AM
Fantastic finish
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26-01-2025, 10:39 AM
Tragic ending
26-01-2025, 09:15 PM
Very nice finish
27-01-2025, 01:32 AM
27-01-2025, 01:36 AM
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(26-01-2025, 06:12 AM)Yesudoss Wrote: Having known the full story of Rajesh, Santhosh should have prepared Aarav to face sajida and rahim type of people. Definitely he is not like his father and he has a well toned body that is strong enough to fuck the brains out of any woman. Hope the epilogue explains it better rather than ending this man as a loser. Hahaha , Yes , Santosh knew the risk and these people . Aarav is definitely better than his father , so this time He might be the one who is gonna put Spicy Red chillies in their Asses ![]()
28-01-2025, 10:10 PM
Thanks for completing the story
29-01-2025, 06:28 AM
Story ended like my id - kill the cheats
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30-01-2025, 06:43 AM
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This story is great. But you can consider posting an alternative ending even now, different from this very bollywood ending, where Bashir and Roma continue. The mother-in-law may be killed. And Sajida said something about bringing company to Bashir's bed.
03-02-2025, 06:51 AM
Why did you left sajida and rahim unharmed.
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