23-01-2025, 06:44 PM
When can we expect the next update?
(22-01-2025, 07:37 PM)amirrulezmir Wrote: Very nice update , as patode is about to release I will request the author just involve the mangalsutra in the cumshot. Either let Shipra go and pick it up before release and tie it on his tool or let patode once cum on the mangalsutra this time asked by Shipra and let her wear it as his victory over her or if he releases inside then let her cover it herself with his cum. Mangalsutra is the key element of this story I will repeat it once again, irrespective of who Shipra sleeps with. It's a symbol of her submission.
I hope for early update.
All the best
(24-01-2025, 01:16 PM)nerogolden Wrote: what would be interesting is now that Patode has taken control of Shipra, he should pimp her out and Namratha is against that. reversal of roles. where shipra becomes the teaser and Namratha the disinterested party. In fact, Namratha breaks out of the stupor and leaves the village and Shipra ends up entirely in Patode's control
(22-01-2025, 02:30 PM)damien123456 Wrote: The update was fantastic. I read the chapter as soon as you updated it, and after reading it, I felt compelled to reread the entire story from the beginning. It was spectacular. I have one request: please update the index page. Another point is that your writing style is the best this forum. The way you handle every word and slowly build the story is superb. I have two requests for you: one is my curiosity about whether there is any possibility of you starting a spinoff of this story with Aditi and Rakhi, whom you mentioned at the beginning of your story. The other is whether Shipra will be involved with men other than Patode
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One more thing, I dislike reading this after the chapter of Shipra's taming. Since that update, the story has entered the main part, and you have started missing deadlines. I understand it is due to your work-related commitments, but the number of comments makes it even worse. When re read it, there are one or two pages full of comments, which disrupts the flow. You leave readers with high expectations, but for me, the comments are a disturbance as I want to read the story continuously. pages full of comments made me feel uneasy.
This is my personal one: Aryan1234 in this forum, writing in Hindi, is the only competitor to you if he writes again or shares his story of a shemale and housewife in English.