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Very nice update , as patode is about to release I will request the author just involve the mangalsutra in the cumshot. Either let Shipra go and pick it up before release and tie it on his tool or let patode once cum on the mangalsutra this time asked by Shipra and let her wear it as his victory over her or if he releases inside then let her cover it herself with his cum. Mangalsutra is the key element of this story I will repeat it once again, irrespective of who Shipra sleeps with. It's a symbol of her submission.
I hope for early update.
All the best
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After doing everything with shopra patode should spit on shipra tired face after fucking and mangalsutra to shw his dominance and worth of shipra after this
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When can we expect the next update?
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what would be interesting is now that Patode has taken control of Shipra, he should pimp her out and Namratha is against that. reversal of roles. where shipra becomes the teaser and Namratha the disinterested party. In fact, Namratha breaks out of the stupor and leaves the village and Shipra ends up entirely in Patode's control
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(22-01-2025, 07:37 PM)amirrulezmir Wrote: Very nice update , as patode is about to release I will request the author just involve the mangalsutra in the cumshot. Either let Shipra go and pick it up before release and tie it on his tool or let patode once cum on the mangalsutra this time asked by Shipra and let her wear it as his victory over her or if he releases inside then let her cover it herself with his cum. Mangalsutra is the key element of this story I will repeat it once again, irrespective of who Shipra sleeps with. It's a symbol of her submission.
I hope for early update.
All the best
I like this one
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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(24-01-2025, 01:16 PM)nerogolden Wrote: what would be interesting is now that Patode has taken control of Shipra, he should pimp her out and Namratha is against that. reversal of roles. where shipra becomes the teaser and Namratha the disinterested party. In fact, Namratha breaks out of the stupor and leaves the village and Shipra ends up entirely in Patode's control
And this one too
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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I would also like Shipra and Namrata tag teaming and draining patode's balls. They seem to make patode's balls goes blue.
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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Awesome update. Namrata and patode won their mission making shipra beg for patode cock.
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25-01-2025, 06:46 PM
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Mission Accomplished !!! Operation Bitch Shipra is now huge success for Patode ! Another pussy added to his cock.
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Just fucking a girl or making her ur bitch doesn't mean mission accomplished... Her character shd be changed..reputation need to be damaged..her interest on her body and character shd be abolished... Next time when some guy sees her they shd nt have any sex interest on her... Then we can say mission accomplished
That's y guy's who fuck a woman make them pregnant or make them gain weight, have big ass and make them look like fat pig... This is wat real completion of a woman by a man is ....
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When can we expect the next update?
Please respond so that we can be ready.
At least,a tentative date.
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(22-01-2025, 02:30 PM)damien123456 Wrote: The update was fantastic. I read the chapter as soon as you updated it, and after reading it, I felt compelled to reread the entire story from the beginning. It was spectacular. I have one request: please update the index page. Another point is that your writing style is the best this forum. The way you handle every word and slowly build the story is superb. I have two requests for you: one is my curiosity about whether there is any possibility of you starting a spinoff of this story with Aditi and Rakhi, whom you mentioned at the beginning of your story. The other is whether Shipra will be involved with men other than Patode
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One more thing, I dislike reading this after the chapter of Shipra's taming. Since that update, the story has entered the main part, and you have started missing deadlines. I understand it is due to your work-related commitments, but the number of comments makes it even worse. When re read it, there are one or two pages full of comments, which disrupts the flow. You leave readers with high expectations, but for me, the comments are a disturbance as I want to read the story continuously. pages full of comments made me feel uneasy.
This is my personal one: Aryan1234 in this forum, writing in Hindi, is the only competitor to you if he writes again or shares his story of a shemale and housewife in English.
Thanks my friend.
As for your requests
1. I will only be able to work on a prequel or a spin off after finishing this story due to the limited time I have being in a 9-5 job. I have some ideas and I have also mentioned before about writing a prequel.
2. For Shipra to get involved with someone other than Patode at this point of time, that too willingly is not on the cards. But having said that we all know Toppo is just waiting to extract his revenge from Alok, in which Patode will definitely help him, the two being accomplices. Any other details right now will spoil the story.
So keep reading the story is only halfway done.
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(24-01-2025, 05:34 PM)Hornytamilan23 Wrote: I like this one
I think I have given enough weightage to the mangalsutra for now.
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Next update most probably on Tuesday. I have written 70% of the next part will try to complete it by Monday.
Stay tuned.
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The story is going awesome. I wish patode made shipra tie the mangalsutra around his dick while giving the blow job and finally cum on the mangalsutra humiliating her marriage fully.
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25-01-2025, 10:53 PM
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(25-01-2025, 09:28 PM)Suraj76626 Wrote: I think I have given enough weightage to the mangalsutra for now.
Just use it as tissue paper to wipe the cumshot... by either Shipra or patode...
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(25-01-2025, 09:28 PM)Suraj76626 Wrote: I think I have given enough weightage to the mangalsutra for now.
Just use it as a tissue paper to wipe the cumshot .. either by Shipra or patode
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Super update. Bring more thrill making shipra talk to Alok while patode fucking her and she moans out loud. Namrata sharing the intimate pictures of shipra without revealing the face to Alok and keep him guessing.
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