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Now.. Viresh has also came as a brand new Superintendent of security officer at Ambruj.. and from this the last hope of SALIM and TOPPO to bang SHIPRA is also came to an end..
Cheers...
G.B.U
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E.P.I.C
Well done.
Who ever doubted you, will bow to you after this update.
Nothing to comment, hands are busy. Lol
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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Excellent update. These two are like prostitutes for free for patode.
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That is a great finish to a great scene.
Awesome description and Great Erotica.
Please give the next update a bit faster,it has become torture to wait for this hot story's update.
Even to think about the possible scenarios between Patode and Shipra,is a sweet yet torturous endeavour.
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Best part in ur story is the way u stop it... Because it creates an excitement for the readers and wait for next update...hats off
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Great update with sexy gif keep it up
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At last shipra spoke out the truth and humiliated her husband. There is no turn back from now on. Hope Patode will convincingly make them turn their husbands to cuckold and impregnate these woman and make their husband father the child. It is the sweet revenge they can give their wimp husbands for not satisfying them. Awesome one
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You outdid yourself with this entire update.What a hot story this has been man.
Take a bow,for writing this awesome story and Thanks a lot for giving so many readers joy and a lot of.....you know.....
Please give early updates,that is my only request.
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If can tattoo patode name on shipra boobs or pussy..it will be like registering authority on her
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The update was fantastic. I read the chapter as soon as you updated it, and after reading it, I felt compelled to reread the entire story from the beginning. It was spectacular. I have one request: please update the index page. Another point is that your writing style is the best this forum. The way you handle every word and slowly build the story is superb. I have two requests for you: one is my curiosity about whether there is any possibility of you starting a spinoff of this story with Aditi and Rakhi, whom you mentioned at the beginning of your story. The other is whether Shipra will be involved with men other than Patode
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One more thing, I dislike reading this after the chapter of Shipra's taming. Since that update, the story has entered the main part, and you have started missing deadlines. I understand it is due to your work-related commitments, but the number of comments makes it even worse. When re read it, there are one or two pages full of comments, which disrupts the flow. You leave readers with high expectations, but for me, the comments are a disturbance as I want to read the story continuously. pages full of comments made me feel uneasy.
This is my personal one: Aryan1234 in this forum, writing in Hindi, is the only competitor to you if he writes again or shares his story of a shemale and housewife in English.
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cant wait for an early update.
Wonderful story.
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Very nice update , as patode is about to release I will request the author just involve the mangalsutra in the cumshot. Either let Shipra go and pick it up before release and tie it on his tool or let patode once cum on the mangalsutra this time asked by Shipra and let her wear it as his victory over her or if he releases inside then let her cover it herself with his cum. Mangalsutra is the key element of this story I will repeat it once again, irrespective of who Shipra sleeps with. It's a symbol of her submission.
I hope for early update.
All the best
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After doing everything with shopra patode should spit on shipra tired face after fucking and mangalsutra to shw his dominance and worth of shipra after this