[drillhot]

Excellent bro

[Vettaiyyan]

Saad men should kill Alok to bring shipra under their control. Some twist needed here. Marvelous

[hotandluking]

When is the next update?

[Sarran Raj]

I think next update will make Shipra a complete woman and she will started hating her wimp husband and wimp child born to him from bottom of her heart.

[babu_2020]

hello author @Suraj76626, if you don't mind my asking:

1. do you have future plans for this story ? for an example, how many chapters are you going to write ?

2. will you kindly update the index in page 1 ?

Thanks again.

[Joseph Rayman]

Awesome friend

[Mookuthee]

So Good

[Thangaraasu]

Nice one

[erotichorny71]

Cant wait to read the next update.

[Prabhas Rasigan]

Wonderful update

[Losliyafan]

Very hot update in the waiting.

[neelchaand]

Chapter 28, Part 2: Another Epitome of Erotica!
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More one read this chapter, more one get engrossed in it!
Amazing narration of build up of a Cyclonic Series of Non Consensual Erotica we are expecting in the upcoming next chapters!
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Shipra's ultimate surrender reminds us of the ancient battles for capturing the Formidable Forts:
Patode with his strong army of most cunning carnal desires, lust, kinky processes was kept waited so long by Shipra outside her strong Fortress of principles, values and strong will.
Eventually Shipra's Fortress now has fallen to the cunning and meticulous assaults of carnal desires as she has given in completely to Patode.
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As the ancient invading generals use to rampage a fallen Fortress and used all its possessions in the most brutal and savage ways, it would be interesting to see how the winning invading general Patode now uses all possessions of Shipra including her her body and her soul to complete Shipra's Surrender along with the added on beauty Namrata!
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We are all eagerly looking forward to how savagely Patode now materialises his ultimate statements domination with long impact "You are mine, Shipra"; "All mine" to use and to utilize all the guarded possessions of Shipra's body and soul to satiate his own lust and the lust of other men for his own benefit.
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As the author always exceeds all expectations in some gem of chapters...
Again we are waiting and expecting eagerly for some Raw, Carnal, Non Consensual and Kinky Utilization of the Heavenly Beautiful bodies of Completely Submitted Shipra and Namrata first by Patode and then eventually by Salim, Saad and other Sturdy Village Men to take 'Shipra's Ordeal' to a new Higher Peak!

[Suraj76626]

hello author @Suraj76626, if you don't mind my asking:

1. do you have future plans for this story ? for an example, how many chapters are you going to write ?

2. will you kindly update the index in page 1 ?

Thanks again.

 1. Definitely my friend, I intend to finish the story. No. of chapters are not in my hand. When I started the story I though I will end it in 20-25 chapters but if we count parts within each chapter we are way over 50 i think. So not sure maybe  another 30 odd chapters.

2. If will update the index for sure when I have some extra free time. It's a boring task

[Suraj76626]

When is the next update?

Most likely on Saturday or Sunday this week.

[Suraj76626]

Saad men should kill Alok to bring shipra under their control. Some twist needed here. Marvelous

 No such drastic and tragic twist in such story my friend. But sure there will be some delicious twist for readers soon.

[Suraj76626]

Superb bro...one suggestion...next update, let shipra say how much she is devoted to patode...

Anyway I am sorry..I never expected u will put update...ur update was fantastic

No issue bro.. keep reading

[Suraj76626]

Can you write above story in Hinglish or Hindi ?

I am afraid I don't have luxury of free time friend. Maybe my next work will be in Hinglish.

[Suraj76626]

Hi Suraj,
You're all mine??? Isn't he going to lend her to others for his gains.

She isn't going to wake up from this, like Namrata Shipra made her choice.

There is no foul play from patode, he is direct, he never said he loves any of the two. Its all about sex. The three enjoying each other's company.

A bank manager falling for drivers BBC, I think this story is inspired by some real life incidents. Head mistress falling for PT sir. The fact is it happens.

Toppo, is the guy who started everything. And will they get to know the malicious intentions of the guys, or they are going to be the half minded beauties like desi movies heroins.

Well, he can't share her with others if she's not his completely.

Stick around to find out. 

[iCuby]

Most likely on Saturday or Sunday this week.

Then the wait will be too long, more than one week.... Try to give update earlier....

[iCuby]

If the update came on Saturday or Sunday this week, Then the wait will be too long, more than one week.... Try to give update earlier....