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Looks like the story is going in the direction of making Shipra into a slut for Patode,please incorporate some dirty sex into it,like spitting and such humiliating stuff.
Other than that,you are the best writer on this forum.
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I wish something similar is written about sonarika bhadoria coming out as an hslut story would be so hot but only an author like yourself can do true justice what do you say?
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Finally Namrata and patode have convincingly bedded shipra. Similiarly they should make Alok father a bastard child.
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11-01-2025, 06:51 PM
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Saad men should kill Alok to bring shipra under their control. Some twist needed here. Marvelous
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I think next update will make Shipra a complete woman and she will started hating her wimp husband and wimp child born to him from bottom of her heart.
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hello author @Suraj76626, if you don't mind my asking:
1. do you have future plans for this story ? for an example, how many chapters are you going to write ?
2. will you kindly update the index in page 1 ?
Thanks again.
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Cant wait to read the next update.
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Very hot update in the waiting.
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13-01-2025, 01:44 AM
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Chapter 28, Part 2: Another Epitome of Erotica!
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More one read this chapter, more one get engrossed in it!
Amazing narration of build up of a Cyclonic Series of Non Consensual Erotica we are expecting in the upcoming next chapters!
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Shipra's ultimate surrender reminds us of the ancient battles for capturing the Formidable Forts:
Patode with his strong army of most cunning carnal desires, lust, kinky processes was kept waited so long by Shipra outside her strong Fortress of principles, values and strong will.
Eventually Shipra's Fortress now has fallen to the cunning and meticulous assaults of carnal desires as she has given in completely to Patode.
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As the ancient invading generals use to rampage a fallen Fortress and used all its possessions in the most brutal and savage ways, it would be interesting to see how the winning invading general Patode now uses all possessions of Shipra including her her body and her soul to complete Shipra's Surrender along with the added on beauty Namrata!
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We are all eagerly looking forward to how savagely Patode now materialises his ultimate statements domination with long impact "You are mine, Shipra"; "All mine" to use and to utilize all the guarded possessions of Shipra's body and soul to satiate his own lust and the lust of other men for his own benefit.
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As the author always exceeds all expectations in some gem of chapters...
Again we are waiting and expecting eagerly for some Raw, Carnal, Non Consensual and Kinky Utilization of the Heavenly Beautiful bodies of Completely Submitted Shipra and Namrata first by Patode and then eventually by Salim, Saad and other Sturdy Village Men to take 'Shipra's Ordeal' to a new Higher Peak!
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(12-01-2025, 12:11 PM)babu_2020 Wrote: hello author @Suraj76626, if you don't mind my asking:
1. do you have future plans for this story ? for an example, how many chapters are you going to write ?
2. will you kindly update the index in page 1 ?
Thanks again.
1. Definitely my friend, I intend to finish the story. No. of chapters are not in my hand. When I started the story I though I will end it in 20-25 chapters but if we count parts within each chapter we are way over 50 i think. So not sure maybe another 30 odd chapters.
2. If will update the index for sure when I have some extra free time. It's a boring task
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(11-01-2025, 11:13 PM)hotandluking Wrote: When is the next update?
Most likely on Saturday or Sunday this week.
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(11-01-2025, 06:51 PM)Vettaiyyan Wrote: Saad men should kill Alok to bring shipra under their control. Some twist needed here. Marvelous
No such drastic and tragic twist in such story my friend. But sure there will be some delicious twist for readers soon.
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