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Superb bro...one suggestion...next update, let shipra say how much she is devoted to patode...
Anyway I am sorry..I never expected u will put update...ur update was fantastic
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What an amazimng story and jaw dropping ecstasy built up so superbly.
No Suggestions needed. You are your own MASTER.
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WOW! that was an amazing update! truly a master story teller. The only problem is I cant get enough of your story!! I am impatient for the next update
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Left it exactly at a place where everyone gets excited while reading a story.
Very unfair,please provide the next update soon.
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Can you write above story in Hinglish or Hindi ?
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Can you write above story in Hinglish or Hindi ?
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Hot and great sexy update
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Wht an update.. truly amazing...the concept of motivating Shipra to surrender completely through seven question was out of this world.. now we can't even imagine how brutally Shipra will be fucked next... it seems like Shipra is going to become Patode's personal slut..
But friend you didn't do the right thing by just only making Toppo and Salim masturbate in the name of Shipra.. Plz quickly give them an opportunity to enjoy SHIPRAS blazing curvy body to the fullest..
G.B. U
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hi bro awesome update the questions and her surrender is simply super this is the difference between you and most writers in the forum the power play between a officer woman and the men in the lower designation then her, a women who hides herself in the name of modesty and other traditional values and a man who just want to not only enjoy her but de grade her in all means that she holds to herself one request brother that do not let shipra to open her legs to others she remains in spell of patode and at the correct time she come out of it and take revenge and show patode that he may be a good fucker but not intelligent as he think.
namratha she isn't want to shipra to embrace her trueself but also she wants to ruin shipra too even though they are friends she is the perfect in that
this story is going in the direction of phone call between shipra and her husband while she is fucking patode and she avoids husband to fuck patode and etc....like that
but shipra should awake from patodes spell and show him his place using her brain not only patode namratha too
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Hi Suraj,
You're all mine??? Isn't he going to lend her to others for his gains.
She isn't going to wake up from this, like Namrata Shipra made her choice.
There is no foul play from patode, he is direct, he never said he loves any of the two. Its all about sex. The three enjoying each other's company.
A bank manager falling for drivers BBC, I think this story is inspired by some real life incidents. Head mistress falling for PT sir. The fact is it happens.
Toppo, is the guy who started everything. And will they get to know the malicious intentions of the guys, or they are going to be the half minded beauties like desi movies heroins.
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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Looks like the story is going in the direction of making Shipra into a slut for Patode,please incorporate some dirty sex into it,like spitting and such humiliating stuff.
Other than that,you are the best writer on this forum.
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I wish something similar is written about sonarika bhadoria coming out as an hslut story would be so hot but only an author like yourself can do true justice what do you say?
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Finally Namrata and patode have convincingly bedded shipra. Similiarly they should make Alok father a bastard child.