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Absolutely riveting update.
Raw and Pure Domineering sex. That's how one needs to write,explaining the psychology of characters.
Please post an early update.
This is the best story here.
Continue the great work and keep writing such awesome erotica.
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Excellent way of surrendering after witnessing the real performance live.
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Great going. Finally shipra has surrendered.
Waiting to see her in action.
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29-12-2024, 09:17 AM
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There are another way to excite shipra, Make her sit on cock, but Patode holding her still but Shipra desperately want to move up and down Patode should then ignite the feeling of cheating Alok in Shipra and humiliate her husband through words and this will further excite Shipra to cheat her poor husband, And Shipra should beg Patode to fuck and treat her as a whore and destroy her married cunt.
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No words... just amazing update
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make sipra pregnant and make her kept of patode .he can use her in his every need.
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No pregnant pls
First destroy her character, Arrogance beauty and then pregnant
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Quote:There was no stopping Patode now. His hunger had reached a breaking point, and with a primal growl, he lunged forward. His hands grasped the delicate fabric of Namrata's dress, and in one sharp motion, he tore it apart with an audible rip.
This is hot,this is the essence of the story.
What a great story,told in a sexy way.Bring in some sweaty sex,it will be complete.
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(27-12-2024, 03:54 PM)Suraj76626 Wrote: Patode never intended to share Shipra with Salim on the very first encounter. It was strategic step taking them to the dhaba which served it's purpose.
Will Salim get a piece of Shipra that remained to be seen.
I agree... but you r a magician of the pen.. nothing is impossible for u.. Plz plan the intimate episodes of SHIPRA and SALIM soon..
God bless you..
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Great update...
I wish SALIM was also present there.. my hopes are still alive..
God bless u..
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(29-12-2024, 07:43 PM)Vikramvines Wrote: I agree... but you r a magician of the pen.. nothing is impossible for u.. Plz plan the intimate episodes of SHIPRA and SALIM soon..
God bless you..
Exclusivity of Shipra to just one guy is what makes the sex taboo and hot.
If she becomes available to every tom,dick and harry in the story,the magic of this story gets lost.
Let her be a reluctant participant,aroused by circumstances,in the sex episodes.
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Vro I have never commented here but I am so engrossed in this erotica that I couldn't refrain myself of commeting your story is epitome of erotica and should definitely be bestowed with honour one thing I want to add is to make story's sexual escapades more thriller just like you did in previous chapters like Namrata dozed off and wake up in the morning witnessing shipra's escapade more feral than she could ever think off and hear the juicy details from her own perspective that will spice it up and please don't make it a cuckold story it's shipra's ordeal so let her enjoy this odyssey.
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(29-12-2024, 08:26 PM)erotichorny71 Wrote: Exclusivity of Shipra to just one guy is what makes the sex taboo and hot.
If she becomes available to every tom,dick and harry in the story,the magic of this story gets lost.
Let her be a reluctant participant,aroused by circumstances,in the sex episodes.
Totally agree with u
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Finally Patode won and Shipra lost
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There are so many possibilities for this story.That's how good and hot this story has been.
Please continue with this and dont let this magical story end.
Make it the largest story this forum has ever seen.
Waiting for the next big update.Hope it gets published soon.
And please retain the original character of Shipra,make her exclusive and dont let her slide into a 'common whore' zone that all these stories tend to send their main characters into.
Psychological aspects of its characters are its main strengths,not the sex.
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Namrata has openly challenged Shipra. Will she take this and outbeat her friend. Waiting to watch.
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