20-12-2024, 08:30 PM
Be tuned
Adultery Spicy Red Chillies (Completed)
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20-12-2024, 10:46 PM
Make her son involve when they were actually doing the act in her bedroom & suddenly aarav calls her Sweet Loving Mumma from outside to know why his Mom is crying like a Whore!
21-12-2024, 07:53 AM
Super update
Let bashir spit on the ornament and ask Roma to talk bad about her husband, humiliate him.
21-12-2024, 03:35 PM
Why would Roma still interested in the mangalsutra having known that it is not valued anymore. As a matter of bashir being the new owner, he can give her tatoos in her body with his names like Rahim tatood the junior wimp aarav. Waiting to see that more this bitch gonna do the destroy the family completely.
21-12-2024, 06:15 PM
Nice one
21-12-2024, 08:57 PM
thanks for keep updating
21-12-2024, 08:58 PM
(21-12-2024, 03:35 PM)Vishal Ramana Wrote: Why would Roma still interested in the mangalsutra having known that it is not valued anymore. As a matter of bashir being the new owner, he can give her tatoos in her body with his names like Rahim tatood the junior wimp aarav. Waiting to see that more this bitch gonna do the destroy the family completely. tattoo incident was unique and hot
21-12-2024, 11:27 PM
Please continue
22-12-2024, 06:40 AM
The story is slowly sliding to the darker world. Hope there is more and more hardships for Raj and Arav.
22-12-2024, 10:35 AM
I think Roma will next take the juices of bashir from her well fucked pussy and add to milkmaid and feed her wimp son. She has no love towards her husband/child anymore.
22-12-2024, 02:39 PM
Very nice
22-12-2024, 03:50 PM
Basir should get Mona a tattoo in Urdu that says "Basir's Whore," something she can shamelessly flaunt, constantly reminding her who she belongs to and who her real Master is.
23-12-2024, 08:11 PM
My sincere humble apologies to my dear readers, but I have to take my words back regarding posting two updates a week. I would comfortably stick to just one a week for two specefic reasons -
1) Time constraints and a busy schedule which is mandatory above all. 2) In my opinion, a hurried update may affect the quality of the whole script and I am sure as a reader, you wouldn't want that too. Lastly, all I can say is that, I would have loved to gihe two a week, but as the author, I am entitled to my own comfort and convenience. Update will show up every Friday evenings. Be tuned.
23-12-2024, 08:21 PM
It should be above her shaved, bald pussy
23-12-2024, 11:12 PM
Oh Man , this is dark , Killing characters like a fly . But as writer said its gonna be dark and gritty but i hope the writer add something in favor of husband so it makes story little balancing., Right now there is total domination of Goons , there was one character who could have stood against them was the sister but she died too soon , the husband is too weak he cannot fight back against the goons . I wish there should be a character who could become their savior just to give some balance to the story . Apart from the story is really good i really like this dark tone of story no mercy . Keep writing bro .
24-12-2024, 11:06 AM
Thanks for the information.
Best Regards
25-12-2024, 11:00 AM
Very good
25-12-2024, 12:16 PM
LET BILAL KILL RAJ AND CASE BE CLOSED AS LOCKUP SUICIDE.
LET BASHIR MAKE NIRMALA WHORE AND SELL HER TO RED LIGHT AREA. LET SAJIDA SELL THE WIMP CHILD TO CHILD TRAFFICKING. ROMA SHOULD ANNOUNCE HER FAMILY THAT SHE IS OFFICIAL WHORE OF BASHIR.
26-12-2024, 12:36 AM
Dear writer plz make possible sex between ROMA and RAHIM the most brutally.. It will be a mile stone for the story..
26-12-2024, 07:29 AM
(25-12-2024, 12:16 PM)Losliyafan Wrote: LET BILAL KILL RAJ AND CASE BE CLOSED AS LOCKUP SUICIDE. This will be dark, but as a crime story will be awesome After all there will be no comeback for Roma so some where there must be a conclusion, Bashir can now not only make Roma official whore but also his crime in partner as Bashir make her start doing cold blooded crimes so that Killing Rajesh will make her excited. |
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