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I grabbed every piece of badminton equipment and left. After a long moment of waiting, Shetty Sir came out of another room. We spoke briefly as we made our way back to the court, and he continued to go over some fundamental badminton regulations with me and offer some advice.

Dad showed me how to play after we arrived at the court, and then, shockingly, mum and Latha aunty joined us. Unexpectedly, we all played together, with two of us on each team, and had a great time laughing and fighting. It was such a wholesome experience for me like having real fun and not some gimmick like in games. Since I was playing outside for the first time in years, I was naturally more exhausted than Sir and my father.
After a while it was getting late. Also, we all were very tired so we returned back.

Dad: So, what do you think, Chinna? Did you like badminton?


Me: Oh yes! It was so nice. It’s way harder than playing video games. Every shot was unpredictable, which made it really interesting! But I definitely get tired too quickly, and I’m not as good as you both!

Dad: Come on, you were pretty good for your first time, son.

Me: That’s because I’m gifted by our family’s powerful genes! Or else I would have been even worse.

[Everyone bursts into laughter, the sound echoing through the evening air.]

Aunty: [giggling] Heheh… oh my stomach hurts… hehe! What happened to you, Chinna? First you joined us, played with us, and now you’re killing us with your jokes!

Sir: Seems like Mumbai air did some magic on him!

Me: [pouting] Stop it! Why are you all laughing? This wasn’t any joke! I’m serious! First, you take my breath away playing for so long, and then you laugh at me like morons!

[The laughter erupts again.]

Mom: [smiling lovingly] Oh, my poor baby! Don’t worry, sweetie! Mama will punish them for laughing at my baby!

Me: [trying to sound serious] I am NOT any baby! I’m taller than most of you! Sure, I may be younger, but I definitely isn’t a baby! Babies don’t come out this big, not anymore!

[Their laughter rings out even louder, and I cross my arms in irritation. They look like they’re about to burst into more laughter.]

Me: [huffing] Okay, fine! You all want to laugh?

Me: [under my breath] Unbelievable...

After a while they all came and joined me in the pool.



Aunty: [from the distance, still chuckling] Looks like someone needed a cool down!


Sir: [laughing harder] Don’t worry, Chinna, the jokes will always be here waiting!

 
Me: Dad, when will I be as good as you? How long will it take?


Dad: It all depends on how much time and effort you put into it. Just remember not to stress too much; it’s a sport, and you should be enjoying yourself.


Me: Yeah, but I really want to be as good as you!


Dad: You have the talent, Chinna. You're a gifted child in our family. Whatever you dedicate yourself to, you excel at to a level that others can rarely match. Like with video games — you loved it and became so skilled that you competed in world tournaments, things many adults can only dream of. So I'm confident that anything you pursue, you’ll excel in.


Me: Sir, can you teach me how to defend against those powerful shots my dad was sending your way?


Sir: Of course, Chinna! But first, you need to work on your forearm strength. You see this part of your arm? You need to build some muscle there.


Me: Hmm, but I want to have big muscles like yours — in my arms and chest, I want to look strong.


Sir: Haha! Sure thing, Chinna, but not at your age. Lifting weights now might affect your growth!


Aunty: Oh, come on, Rahul — he’s already tall enough! How much bigger does he need to be?


Me: No way, I want to be taller than Dad and my uncle too!


Aunty: Hehe, are you listening, Bawa? Your son seems to be sizing you up as his competitor!


Dad: Let him be! I want him to achieve everything he desires.


Sir: Chinna, I’ll show you some exercises that will help you build strength and muscle. After that, we can work on your agility and endurance.


Mom: Oh my gosh, why all this? My baby might get hurt! Why apply so much pressure?


Dad: Jyothi! It’s his passion; he wants to pursue something, and we shouldn’t hold him back
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Aunty: Yes, Akka, Bawa is right. Rahul has plenty of experience with workouts, and he’ll guide him carefully.

Dad: "Chinna, can you do me a favor? It's getting late, so please start packing your bags and make sure you don't leave anything behind."


Me: "Why, Dad?"


Dad: "We’re leaving tomorrow morning for our flight. So, it’s best to pack early and get to bed so you can wake up on time."


Me: "But we just arrived yesterday. Why are we leaving so soon?"


Mom: "Your father has some urgent work to attend to, Chinna. It’s important that we leave as early as possible."


Dad: "I’m really sorry, Chinna, but don’t worry—our next vacation will be here before you know it, and I’ll make sure it’s something special.”


Me: "No, Dad. Let Aunty plan it. She’s great at this kind of stuff. This place has been amazing, and I bet she can organize even more exciting trips."


Latha Aunty: "Oh, Chinna! (feeling emotional) Thank you for saying that. You’re so kind. I’ve realized that you’re the strongest link in our family. Your father was right; you are the best thing that ever happened to us. Please keep being this wonderful—talk to us, play with us. We might be older, but..."


Me: "No, Aunty, you’re all very strong and fun. You're not old; you're beautiful and amazing."


Aunty: "Oh my gosh, Chinna, you think I’m beautiful?"


Me: "Yes, but not as much as my mom. She's even more beautiful than you."


Aunty: "Haha, yes, you’re absolutely right! Your mom is really beautiful. I love you, Chinna. Thank you for saying that." (She gives me a hug.)


Mom: "Looks like my little baby has grown up to be quite wise, hehe."


Aunty: "He’s not just your baby; he’s our baby—everyone’s pride and joy."


After exchanging a few more words, I retreated to my room but soon chose to lurk in the living room instead, eager to overhear their conversation and gather the latest details about the crime.


“Aunty, I can't believe I'm already crying!”


“Embrace it, dear,” replied Sir. “These are the best moments of our lives. Just enjoy it!”


“Children truly are a gift from God. I was so broken this morning, filled with guilt. But then he came into my life and everything changed. I forgot all my worries—I laughed, cried, and felt everything,” Aunty said, wiping her tears away.


“That's my son,” Mom chimed in. “But what guilt are you talking about?”


“Don’t change the subject. Chinna isn’t just your son—he’s my son too. You won’t distract me from that!” Aunty insisted.


Mom chuckled softly, while Dad interjected, “Okay, Rahul, what did security management say?”


“They assure us that there’s nothing to worry about. Everything is under control,” said Sir.


“What about the attack? Have they found any evidence, or identified who is responsible?” Dad pressed.


“Not really. It seems they’ve concluded it was just a gang fight, like you said. The security officer have stepped back, and now they’re trying to erase any evidence. Since this happened outside their building in an upscale area, everyone wants to keep it quiet so it doesn't damage their business reputation.”


Dad shook his head. “That’s what happens when you get involved in crime. You lose even basic rights!”


“Let it go; why dwell on it? Have they figured out what he did?” Mom asked.


“Not much. Most villas don’t have cameras for privacy, so they only have limited footage of him leaving,” Sir replied.


“That’s better. Then why are we wasting time? We can leave tomorrow!” Mom exclaimed.


“Jyoti! Don’t fret so much. We’re all here together,” Dad reassured her.


“W…What?! No, I’m not worried at all. In fact, I’m relieved that God has punished him for his misdeeds. It’s just that I don’t feel safe here—the security is terrible, and I’ll never forgive them for not stopping him before he entered this villa.”


“Akka, what’s wrong? Is everything okay?” Aunty asked, sensing Mom’s distress.


“Y-yes, w…what? I…It’s just... I get horrified thinking a criminal could enter and leave without any consequences. Why are we wasting our time discussing about him? We can leave as quickly as possible before anyone finds out. A…Also what if other gang members come back for revenge?” Mom stammered.


“Madam is right. Regardless of what they say about our safety, we need to be cautious and leave tomorrow,” Sir agreed.


“Let’s get out of here as soon as we can,” Aunty added.


“Alright, let’s do this. Jyoti, call Chinna to sleep with us, and you two can rest in his room. It’s still early, so everyone starts packing your things. In the meantime, I’ll reach out to management for extra security and order some food,” Dad instructed.


After hearing from dad everyone walked to their room. I too came to my room with much relief that I will not be jailed. Oh man! I don’t want him! This was crazy! What ever it is inside me, I can’t say it to anyone. Was that myself, like evil myself? Oh, I don’t want to think about it! Let’s just say all happened for good but I’m certainly never letting it out again. From today there will no more Chinna, only Aditya.


Yeah, Chinna is most pampered that’s why he is weak, weakest among us. From today I will take control of us. There will be no more weak-ass nor monsters, only Aditya.


While thinking and applauding my plan I packed all my stuffs. Not going to lie this place gave me many bad memories, some I didn’t wanted but enjoyed it while I hated few too. Still, I couldn’t forget that all of this made me a man. 


After a while mom called me for dinner and we all had it together than we went to sleep like my dad ordered. 


Next day I was woken up by mom and she asked me to get freshened quickly or we will be late for flight. We all got ready and took taxi for airport. 


At the airport I was scared and worried because being an international airport there were lot of security officer and security personnel's. I was mostly scared of those commandos. While checking in I got very nervous as it was for first, I had committed something that intense. So, no matter how strong will I had when I came before commandos all my confidence drowned and I began shaking in fear and anxiety as what would happen if they know about me. They will surely put me in jail. 


Because of all that fear, I began sweating and one of security personnel saw it. 


What happened, what you sweating so much? Are you alright?


Mom - sorry sir, actually he little afraid of flights. That too we made sudden plan so he might have gotten tensed. 


“Ohh, hahhah! Nothing to worry about beta. Look how fearless and beautiful your mother is. Hahaha! You’re very pretty madam!! Where are you from?”


As soon I heard this, again something happened in me, something inside me snapped. An unknown rage creeping above my fear like waiting to burst. My heart beat rose swelling my veins pumping me for some war.


Me - My father is just behind. I suggest you focus on your job rather than hitting on someone’s wife.


My mom immediately held my arm and tried to pull back but I was out of that zone. I felt anger towards him. 


Let me out…. let me….


Stop!


“What happened beta? I was just trying to make you and your mother comfortable dear.”


Let me handle it like a man! Let me out!


No! I can handle better than you. You stay away!


Me - what!!! What did you say?


Mom - Chinna!! Stop Chinna!!!


Me - Do you think I’m stupid or you trying to think I’m weak and dumb that you say anything to my mom in front of me. 


HUFF****HRRR***HUFF****


Beta, you’re unnecessarily getting angry and sweating so much. You shouldn’t treat elders this way!!! Just calm down beta!!


Me – HRRR…Why the hell should I care about you being elder!!!(shouted loudly) ERKK…...I will rip your elder throat apart and bath in your blood. Do you hear me!!!


Dad - Chinna what is going on? 


“Dad, he made a disrespectful comment about Mom! Don’t let him get away with it!”


“Chinna, stop! What’s going on, Jyoti? What’s the matter, sir?”


Mom - please take Chinna from here. He is over reacting!!!


Me: “What?! That guy is making offensive comments about you, and you’re just standing there? I’m not overreacting; I’m addressing the problem!”


Me: “What did you say to my mom?” What did you say to her? Speak!! (I moved towards him, fuelled with anger)


Him: “I only said she was beautiful; I swear I didn’t mean any harm, sir!”


Me: “What?!


HRRR…. ERKK…...How dare you say that again?!


URKK……Do you even know, who I’m?


(In a burst of rage, I grabbed his collar, shoving him sideways, causing him to stumble while my dad rushed to stop me)


HHRRR…HRRR… I’ll tear you apart!” YEEE…...KRR…


(As I was again the zone of high temper and with my adrenaline kicking. My blood rushing to veins as if forcing me to act violently. I lost myself and held his arms tightly against his shoulder, making him defenceless to my attack. I wanted to snape his neck but my dad caught me so I dragged him sideways towards the wall thereby he slipped and came on his knees. While all this I didn’t realise that my dad fell down)


Caught up in my fury, I lost all reason and only wanted to unleash my wrath on whoever was in front of me. Suddenly mom came in front of me in tear eyes as she was thinking I was getting attacked by the security personal. She began pleading to let me go. At that instance I could feel myself easing, my mind slowly getting to sense and I left his arms not wanting to create a doubt in my mom’s mind.


Suddenly, a sharp slap jolted me back to reality. It was my dad, gripping me firmly. Looking deep into my eyes, he shouted for me to apologize to the guard. Though I managed to calm down, I still felt a flicker of anger and my mind unstable.


Me – NEVER!!!! HRRR…... (deep growl) …


(Dad flinched in surprise and stepped back a little)


Dad – Stop it chinna why are you this angry? I will tell you what was your mistake later but for now accept your mistake for raising hand upon an elder and ask sorry.
“Leave it sir, he is just a kid. It was all my mistake. I shouldn’t have talked about his mother that way. I’m sorry ma’am. 


(Shetty sir and Latha aunty arrived on the scene, with Sir quickly trying to shield me.)


Sir - what happened Anna


Dad – Chinna, say sorry now!


(Mom looking in my eyes) Please sorry to him chinna. Let’s go from here.  


Me - I’m sorry!


Dad - where is the respect, this isn’t the way I taught you, son. Aditya don’t do it, go ask him sorry like you mean it!!!


Aunty - leave it Bawa!! Chinna asked sorry already! I’m sorry sir, he is just a child. He is tired from waking up too early that’s why he reacted this way but I promise he is a sweet child. 


Mom - yes sir, my son doesn’t indulge in anything like this. He is not himself today. Please forgive him. 


“It’s okay madam. I understand, it was all my mistake” I’m sorry beta, I’m sorry for disrespecting your mother!!”


“You are very lucky madam to have such a strong and protective son. Now a days kids don’t care about their parents but your little son just stood up to fight for you without even thinking twice. I wish, I had a son like him”


Mom - yes sir, he actually loves me a lot. Also, we are from Hyderabad and right now we are living in Bangalore. 


“Nehi...nehi madam don’t say such things your son doesn’t like it.


What are you planning to get beaten by him or what? Hahahah!!”


Mom - Aiyoo no sir, he is just a child. Forgive him for his silly mistake.


While mom and dad were having conversation with other security and few commandoes even due to people gathering. So, aunty quickly caught my hand and walked me out of there. while my dad didn’t look happy as my act did get lot of attention and people kept looking at us. 


After a while, we boarded our flight, and once again, aunty sat beside me. She began to explain things, emphasizing that while some people appreciate certain behaviours, it doesn't mean they're being negative; rather, it shows kindness. As she continued talking, my attention shifted to my parents, who were engaged in a serious discussion about me.


Dad said, “Did you see how he reacted?”


Mom replied, “Yeah, what happened so suddenly? He’s never like this. I was really scared.”


Dad responded, “He’s inherited this from our family—my father… Abahhh… this is concerning, Jyoti. It’s not good. Did you notice his bloodshot eyes filled with rage? He was so strong; he pushed me aside effortlessly and dragged that full-grown adult like a rag doll!”


Mom interjected, “No, don’t say that. It was an accident. He’s still my baby, and he’s so young.”


Dad acknowledged her, “I get that, Jyoti. He is our son, but this isn’t normal. We can’t just overlook this. That strength and rage? He got them from my father.”
Mom argued, “What’s so wrong with that? Besides, he’s nothing like your father. Mama Garu (father-in-law) is not only strong but also ruthless. He’s hurt many people and wrestles to get what he wants. Our son is different. He’s always ignored the outside world and immersed himself in games. Now that he’s seen more of it, it’s natural for him to react strongly.”


Dad insisted, “I’m not just talking about that. His eyes were bloodshot; I saw that rage in him. It was frightening and just like my father’s.”


Mom retorted, “He probably hasn’t slept well, which could explain the redness. Did you even notice his eyes before the incident?”


Dad answered, “No, but his strength was alarming. He tossed me aside like I was nothing and pulled that big man—who must weigh at least 80-90 kg—around like a rag doll. Did you hear his heavy breathing and grunts? It was as if he wanted to hurt him badly.”


Mom scolded him, “Stop talking about my son like that. You’re overthinking it. He didn’t push you; he loves you too much to do that. You tripped and fell. And he didn’t drag that guard; the man walked alongside him because he understood he was just a child. Don’t ever compare my baby to your father again.”


Dad sighed, “Hmm, maybe you’re right. I could be overreacting. Let’s try to get some rest.”


After a while my mom looked back and asked me to take rest. I nodded and smiled.


I needed a privacy so I went to washroom in the plane. I looked in the mirror:


I told you not to interfere, then why did you?


I had to; Still it was all you, I didn’t do much.


No! As I told earlier there would be no Chinna nor a monster. I’m enough capable to handle both sides.


HRR..What?! Who are you to decide that? Did you forget, you were born out of distress and anger like me?


No, I was born out of great reason. I’m perfect! Why don’t you look at me? I’m more strong, more capable than Chinna. While I’m less violent and monstrous than you. I fill every gap!


You’ll need me!


I don’t think so! I’m enough capable to handle whatever society will throw at me. Remember I’m far superior than chinna. I’m Aditya. But I can still behave like chinna for a while, then it’s only Aditya.


What?! You’re about to subdue our original self?!


Yes! HAHAHA!! I can and I will!


HRR…When? When I will be revived back?


Hmm…Let’s see, if situation arises


HRR…What?!


HAHAHAH!! See you both!!


Now you both go to an eternal sleep!!


Aditya wipes his face and takes a deep breath, shaking off the conversation. He steps back out into the aisle, eyes landing on Latha aunty, who is seated nearby, radiating a warm presence.


‘Ahh what a beauty she is! She was wearing a nice tight fitting yellow salwar and red leggings'


(He pauses, realizing the potential danger of his thoughts)


But chinna liked her very much so, if I will think about her, this might trigger it. Okay so let’s move on from her.

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END OF CHAPTER 4

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I am waiting more to explore and explode in Latha. Latha is gem which Chinna has to enjoy as a Man tearing apart her red leggings without his father's knowledge.
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Very nice update
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Nice story
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Wonderful update.
So, Aditya (Chinna's new alpha self) has basically conquered his old self and his dark side.
Or am I just a little confused here?
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Chinna is a cuck, how can he become alpha.
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(18-12-2024, 04:57 PM)Blackdick11 Wrote: Wonderful update.
So, Aditya (Chinna's new alpha self) has basically conquered his old self and his dark side.
Or am I just a little confused here?

Thanks bro

I understand your confusion. I will try to explain briefly.

chinna is a boy, a character of this thread. He has two names Chinna is nickname while Aditya is college name or good name. In the thread he goes through a lot of trauma in few hours forcing his mind to adapt the ongoing scenes. by trying to adapt all this, chinna being a innocent one, his mind is in lot of pressure to accept or revolt. Early childhood trauma, placed him at risk of developing dissociative identity disorder or multiple personality disorder.

In story towards end of part 2, chinna love of life, Latha aunty accused him of being "Weak and unattractive". This forced Chinna mind to become something that would please her. So that's how Aditya personality was created, a strong will with good presence of mind and everything that chinna dreamed of while playing games.

In Part 3, as the thief tries to force upon his mother who he loves and cares the most was traumatizing for him. He desperately tries everything but fail. So another personality creates to adapt the situation. It was the monster, which was evil, unpredictable, inhuman abilities and strength.

Now Aditya comes out champion of them both as he is much suited. He made everyone happy and cared about them. While monster was extreme and chinna is too introvert to show his feeling. This made Aditya (a personality) as supreme of them all. 

Now Aditya, which is just a personality has taken over as, while chinna or Aditya, the main personality is subdued. 
I hope this clears your doubt!
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(14-12-2024, 07:27 PM)Rakul1985 Wrote: I am waiting more to explore and explode in Latha. Latha is gem which Chinna has to enjoy as a Man tearing apart her red leggings without his father's knowledge.

Big Grin Big Grin seems you really liked Latha character.
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Oh Man i really like that Chinna and Aditya Twist , I am more interested in that element rather than eroticism lol . though i think Aditya should have saved his mom and should not have engage in coitus with his mother , but its still good .
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(25-12-2024, 02:08 PM)Mortalbeast Wrote: Big Grin Big Grin seems you really liked Latha character.

Absolutely. You have made very interesting and exciting. Waiting for more fun as expected.
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(25-12-2024, 07:00 PM)DeanWinchester00007 Wrote: Oh Man i really like that Chinna and Aditya Twist , I am more interested in that element rather than eroticism lol . though i think Aditya should have saved his mom and should not have engage in coitus with his mother , but its still good .

Thanks a lot brother! I'm glad that your taking interest in the story. #Comment of the day

There is going to more Aditya and Chinna twist!

Now for your Queries as, why Aditya didn't save his mother and engaged sexually with her?!

So, In story you must have read during fight between thief and monster. After monster went out, Aditya couldn't over-power the thief. It was only the monster, that was capable of defeating the thief. So Aditya being the smartest one choose to follow the thief's order and he tried to deceive the thief by trying to be friend with him. But When none of his plan worked out he had to do what that thief ordered him. 

Aditya was very cunning to not get hurt by the thief. While monster's sole purpose is to not let anything happen to his mother or their mother, no matter what happens to him.

So, if Monster had stayed for more duration during fight, all that wouldn't have happened. But it was Aditya, so he choose to do as the thief said and handled the matter his way considering his safety.

I hope this helps you to understand the situation. 
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Chapter – 5


Beginning Of Promising Tale….


We arrived in Bangalore, and time seemed to pass quickly. My dad and a Shetty sir taught me more about badminton, and before long, I became quite skilled at it. During my junior college years in Bangalore, I also took up swimming and joined a gym with Shetty sir, who guided me through some effective workout routines.
 
Engaging in sports, academics, workouts, and various dramas allowed me to suppress the part of me represented by Chinna, ensuring it never resurfaced. I didn't desire for it to resurface either. I perceived him as weak; while Chinna might have found some success in his career, he struggled in his personal and social life. It puzzles me why he never seemed to make friends. He was always chasing after Latha Aunty. Perhaps he was afraid of forming friendships. And as for relationships, well, that's a different story altogether.
 
Chinna was weak and unattractive, I can't allow him to take control. What would happen to our family’s reputation? I’ve made Mumma and Dad proud, I truly have! I’m the best among us. I should always be in charge. There’s no room for Chinna—only Aditya!
 
After completing my college, I secured a spot at a prestigious institution in Hyderabad for my BTech degree. Because of this, my parents decided to move to Hyderabad with me, as my mom expressed that she couldn’t bear to be away from me. I began commuting to college from our joint family, and my parents surprised me with a Harley bike, which perfectly matched my personality. I made a number of friends during this time, and while everything was going well, I couldn’t shake the feeling that my life was missing something without sports.
 
So, in evening, I wore a tight vest and shorts and headed towards our college badminton court. 

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I took my racket and walked past few courts to find better opponents. As I was walking, suddenly my eyes fell on a girl who seemed very impressive and talented in the game. The way she was hitting the smashes surprised me as well impressed me for her balanced shots. As I went further closer to the court, I couldn’t take my eyes off her. 

Wow what a beauty queen she was. She didn’t look that tall must be around 5’1”-5’2”. But what a figure she had. She was in a sports T-shirt and trousers but my naked eyes just kept scanning her body outline. She had Indian dusky skin tone with slightly small but amazing shaped tits that dangled every time she jumped to smash. Then there was her butt, wow such a tight butt shape, like I have never seen such perfect shape in my life. Perfect line and down thighs that clearly indicated her commitment to fitness.

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I don’t know how long I kept staring her but I didn’t care. All I cared was to look her closer or see her face. What’s it like!!

So, I walked towards her court where she was playing with another girl maybe her friend, but I didn’t care about anyone than her. My heart kept beating faster as I got nearer to her. Slowly I was able to hear her sweet voice, her high-pitched scream whenever she hit smash. 

Aditya!!! Re Aditya!!! Listen rah, Aditya!!!

I realised someone was calling me. 

Sai (my friend) - Aree Aditya, what are you looking at like that bro. Are you even listening to me?!

Me - Han, yes what happened!!

Sai - Our admin has called for quick meeting in cafeteria. Come quickly! what happened bro? You seemed almost frozen. Watching chicks Hun!

Me - Nah..nahhh but is it emergency to go now. I mean can I come later after few minutes maybe. 

I tried to stay at the court for a while but he didn’t listen and dragged me to cafeteria. Still while walking or in meeting my whole mind kept on thinking about her. But stupidly I couldn’t see her face. How dumb can I be?

Me - Aree Sai, do you know every girl of our campus?

Sai - Every girl or that one in red top at badminton court. That same girl that you were drooling over.

Me – Ahhh! Did I look so obvious that I was staring?

Sai – HAHAH! Bro… you seem totally lost man! But were you honestly looking at that girl?

Me - y…yess her, please I want to know her, I…

Sai- bru…bru chill for a moment and then forget about her. This will be my final and only opinion!!

Me – What?! why? Is something wrong with her?

Sai - yes, that girl is fire. She is kind of an orthodox type like never date anyone, only get married kind of!!! Okay how about I give you another one option?

Me – What option?

Sai – You see, while you were staring at that badminton court chick, I saw another girl was looking at you. From her look I might guess that she must have been interested in you. So why not avoid this badminton one and go towards much shuttle option with high success rate.

Me – What?! Another girl was looking at me?

Sai – Yes! She looked cute too.

Me – MHhh!!! No! I want to stick with her. I don’t know but the moment I saw her, I feel strange connection towards her. So, let’s forget about this other girl and focus only on her.

Sai – Bro that girl was very fair. She looked calmer than her. While this one is an orthodox and violent one.

Me – Okay, how did you know she is orthodox?

Sai - The other day, a friend of mine tried to talk to her. He is good looking, got everything going but she rejected to even talk with him. Even warned that she will whoop his ass if he performs any stunt in front of her.

Me - ohhh hahahaha!!! That's hilarious!!! She sounds like a strong, talented woman!!

Sai - Wait!!! Did you even hear what I said? What the hell were you laughing about??? Man, you’re so difficult to understand!!!

Me- Nah Sai, it’s ok! Do you know anything about her? Can you get me any information about her?

Sai - I will try but it’s risky job. But one thing I couldn’t understand is why are going after her. This is too dangerous. There is a chance you might not succeed.

Me - There is a chance I might succeed. See I like her and I’m serious about her. I’m not fooling around so I’m sure once she sees it, she will appreciate it.

Sai - okay whatever lover boy but don’t bring my name if anything happens okay. I don’t want to get hit by any girl in first year of my college.
 
Me - "Alright, come on, help me out, please!"

After the meeting, I hurried to the badminton court. On my way, I noticed a girl trying to get my attention, perhaps wanting to speak with me. I chose to ignore her and continued running, but unfortunately, she was gone.

Days passed, and it was odd that she didn’t show up at the court. One evening, I went to play and saw a few people already on the court, so I decided to join them. As I was playing, a stunning girl approached me and introduced herself.

Girl - hi, myself Anjali. I’m from CSE branch.

Me- Hello, myself Aditya I’m from CSE branch too. 

Actually, we both were different group. There were 4 CSE groups. Then we had game and unluckily she didn’t come or I didn’t see her at court or ground. I cursed myself for being unlucky!!

But somehow, I became friends with Anjali and I could sense that she had something for me. She would keep appreciating my gameplay, my physique, my look and all. But it seemed like I didn’t feel the same way. Still, we both had good vibe among us. 

Few days went by and one evening while we both were playing; I heard a sweet voice “hey Anjali”. I swear it felt very familiar like it was her. 

Anjali- hey pal, where were you all these days? 

While these two were having some conversations, I was jumping in joy to see her. Today she was in a sports blue T-shirt and matching tight track pants that looked awesome on her. I looked at her from front. She has such a cute and childish face that matched her petite body. 

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Anjali- pal, this is my friend Aditya. And Aditya, this is my bestie, pal, my psycho friend. You should play a game with her. 

Me - yeah, I have seen, she is very impressive. Her smashes are perfect and very hard for her opponent to read it. She is awesome!

Pal - so you were the one that kept stalking us on that day!!

Me - Huh!!!

Anjali- Aree mental what are you talking about. This isn’t the way to talk to someone. He is a good guy!!!

Pal - whatever I don’t care!!!

Me - Hi, myself Aditya, I’m from CSE branch. 

Pal - hmm... okay!!!

Anjali- Aiyoo mental, introduce yourself. This isn’t the way to talk idiot!! Learn some social skills!!

Pal - okay understood…Myself Pallavi!!

Me - That’s a very unusual name. 

Pallavi - what!!! What did you say about my name!!!

Me - I mean Pallavi suits for baby you know because it means new or fresh but you seem too old for that name!!!

Pallavi- Are you out of your mind! Huh!!! I’m only 19!!

Me - really that’s so great!!!

Pallavi- oh!! So, you did all this stunt to get my age, huh!!!

Me - No, what are talking about? 

Pallavi - so you’re a trickster, a smart one!!

Me - Thanks but I have to say that many of my friends think you’re very cute!!!

Pallavi - huh!!! Okay! What do you think??

Me - I think they are over exaggerating you. Now that I have seen you, I can confidently say you’re mid or nah type.

Pallavi - what did you say? Did you hear Anjali what he said about me?

Anjali - please stop it Pallavi, it’s his opinion!!

Pallavi- why would he be so rude to me?

Me - I wasn’t rude it’s just that I’m honest and I speak on face and not someone’s back. Actually, I was overhyped by everyone that you’re very pretty but now that I have seen you…

Pallavi- maybe because I’m in a sports outfit, sweating and all. I don’t think you’ll have the same opinion once you see me in regular outfit. 

Me - well then how about dinner at a restaurant. You can show me how pretty you really are.

Pallavi – Oh my gosh, you tricked me again! I can’t believe I fell for it twice.
 
Me - Maybe because I’m special!!

Pallavi- okay are you here to play or flirt with me. Let’s get this clear first?!

Me - I can do both!!

Pallavi- oh really!? you know I can even play or use this racket to beat someone…Like really badly!!!

Me - That’s great; I love strong women. They attract me a lot!!

Pallavi - Urrhhh…Anjali, I’m telling you this guy is going to be a headache. He is just wasting his and my time. He has no interest in game!!

Me - You seem very overconfident about yourself. How about a match between us?

Pallavi- That’s better, bring it big boy!!!

Me - eeerrhhh…you stink!!! Don’t you use any deodorant?

Pallavi - That’s enough!! I have heard enough from you!!!! I swear I’m going to break you head!!!

Me - oh my god!!! I’m sorry!!! Please don’t run after me, let’s play our game.  

Anjali: (laughing) Wow, you really know how to push her buttons!

Pallavi: (smirking) Just wait till the match starts. You won’t be laughing when you’ll get hit by my smash!

Me: Challenge accepted! Just remember, it’s all in good fun... and maybe a little flirting!

Pallavi: (grinning) We'll see about that. Now, get ready to lose!

Me: Bring it on!

During our match, I could tell Pallavi was attracted towards me. Her eyes and focus weren’t much on the game rather on me. It seemed as if she was testing me for her. I knew she wasn’t the type of girl to fool around and I was serious about her too.

Pallavi was kind of an attacking player so her smashes and direction were pretty deadly, due to which she won first round. But in second round she went easy on me, which I did notice but Anjali didn’t. As if she wanted me to win that round. This gesture melted my heart even more for her. Like she wasn’t kind of showing off that she cared about me but her actions spoke her feelings.

In second round I won, thanks to her, but she gave credit to me. Then slowly we had few conversations about our family and classes. Day- by- day slowly she started to open herself in front of me. I could tell she felt safe around me as well trusted me the most.

One day in class……  

Sai - reh Aditya, I met this girl at cafeteria.

Aditya – Wow! Did you ask her out or what? What’s her name?

Sai – First listen rah! She wasn’t there for me. She was there for you.

Aditya – What? Who?!

Sai – I assume it’s that same girl that was looking at you in the badminton court.

Aditya – Oh! Ahmm...leave it! I’m not interested.

Sai – Okay, just hear what she said.

Aditya- What?!

Sai – She said, she likes you a lot and has been trying to reach you, but failed every time. Then she asked your phone number.

Aditya – What?! You didn’t give her my number nah?!

Sai – yeah! I didn’t but she seemed very good person and now that I saw her up close, she is very beautiful and fair skin. Honestly bro, she can put actress to shame with her beauty.

Aditya – Yeah! Whatever! Who is this girl? Where is she from?

Sai – I didn’t ask that but she seemed from north India from her complexion. Actually, I forgot to say she is sifting to her home state due to family issue so she wanted to meet you immediately.

Aditya – What?! Why would I do that?

Sai – Aree, I think you should at least meet her. She seemed to have fallen in love with you and seemed very desperate about you.

Aditya – But I’m desperate about her.

Sai – Who?! Oh my god! Are you still on that wild chick dude? Man, I’m telling you this girl is better looking than her.

Aditya – Everyone has their own unique beauty, and what truly matters to me is character—that’s what connects you to someone. I’ve already fallen for her, so I don’t want to create any unnecessary drama.

Sai – Wow! Okay lover boy whatever you say. But I would recommend to at least meet this girl and appreciate her love for once or else she would be heart broken. Her name is P...

Aditya – Stop it Sai! I don’t want to hear any of this. I’m in no mood to go a place to meet some girl. Leave it, eventually she will forget me. She must be attracted to me that’s it so, ignores her.

 Sai – Okay! Well, I got some information about your tigress. But this wasn’t easy after all so I definitely deserve a party for all this. Here I know her name is...

Me - Pallavi, she is from Hyderabad. Her father’s name is Venkata Reddy. This is her phone number!!! This is her photo, when we went out on a date!!!

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Sai - what!!! How?? How did you? Did you talk to her???

Me - yeah, a lot!!! Every day! She is wonderful, like the best of the best.

Sai - Are you really serious about her?

Me - Absolutely! Who wouldn't feel that way? Sai, Pallavi is incredible once you really get to know her. She's so kind-hearted. She's become so attached to me in love that she struggles to sleep unless I video call her to help her drift off. She won't eat if I haven't eaten first. I can already sense that she's the one for me.

Sai- Alright! So, it sounds like you two have gotten really close and developed a strong bond. I'm happy for you, Aditya, but to be honest, do you really think this will work out?

Me - I hope so!!!……


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Just Wonderful.

But...Aditya! Pallavi! The badminton court!

Why do those names sound so familiar? could these be the teenage versions of Aditya and Pallavi from Badminton Court Challenge Led to Unexpected Wife Swap? they’re friends here, but in the future, they end up as a married couple.

What if we somehow connect Naked Eyes and Badminton Court Challenge Led to Unexpected Wife Swap? Imagine the possibilities! What do you think—wouldn’t that be a cool twist?
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(26-12-2024, 03:59 PM)Bakchod Londa Wrote: Just Wonderful.

But...Aditya! Pallavi! The badminton court!

Why do those names sound so familiar? could these be the teenage versions of Aditya and Pallavi from Badminton Court Challenge Led to Unexpected Wife Swap? they’re friends here, but in the future, they end up as a married couple.

What if we somehow connect Naked Eyes and Badminton Court Challenge Led to Unexpected Wife Swap? Imagine the possibilities! What do you think—wouldn’t that be a cool twist?

Yeah doesn't it sound familiar?! I too think I have heard Badminton court, Aditya, Pallavi somewhere. But where?! Big Grin Smile 

I would suggest to read naked eyes again you will understand Idea

As said, something ending only marks the beginning of another!
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(26-12-2024, 03:59 PM)Bakchod Londa Wrote: Just Wonderful.

But...Aditya! Pallavi! The badminton court!

Why do those names sound so familiar? could these be the teenage versions of Aditya and Pallavi from Badminton Court Challenge Led to Unexpected Wife Swap? they’re friends here, but in the future, they end up as a married couple.

What if we somehow connect Naked Eyes and Badminton Court Challenge Led to Unexpected Wife Swap? Imagine the possibilities! What do you think—wouldn’t that be a cool twist?

Bro, the idea sounds great, but there’s one thing you might be overlooking—here, aditya’s character suffers from multiple personality disorder, while in the other story, aditya is perfectly normal. It’s merely a coincidence that the characters in both stories have similar names. both stories are based on entirely different themes.
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