Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.

[RCF]

Have been saying same, Lot of readers forced this submission if you ask me. I was expecting a phone call to distract Shipra but it did not happen. Disappointed was well!

Now enjoy non stop sex ..Lost half of the thrill.

[suryaspk]

Dear Suraj76626, big fan of your writing!

First of all, a big thank you for your dedication and continuous timely updates to the story. Truly commend worthy. I know you've worked so hard and have created this wonderful story and the passion I can feel it in your writing. You have outdone yourself!

After reading the previous update I must say I have some strong critiques -

I too had similar kind of thoughts. But we have to accept it's erotica a sex story. 
Shipra seems to be smart one but the moment she made the agreement sex became inevitable. It's a slipper slope, two people can't engage in oral sex and expect to maintain boundary for so long. At the end she too has needs.

And think which is better ordeal whether Shipra gets out of this with dignity or she trusts Patode, betrayed then gets out of it(I hope she gets out of this).

And patode is playing dangerous game, let's see how long he can manipulate both parties.

I still have hope on author he can still deliver something good.

[raja shri]

Hot update bro...this update is fucking awesome...maza aa gya padhkar ...patode ne shipra ke saath sex kar liya and namrata sab kuch bahar se sun rahi thi ..jo bahut hot tha ...ab inke threesome ka wait nhi ho rha bhai...bhai ho sake to shipra and namrata ka lesbo scene bhi dikhana ...tab hyada maza aayega ....let see what happen next....
Some people said he is disappointed by shipra character but i think jo is update me hua wo hona jaruri tha ..bcz yr ye ek erotic site bhi hai...and suraj bro This is your story bro... And you know tumhe is story ko kis direction me dikhana hai ....bs itna kahunga don't close it midway...yr bahut amazing likh rahe ho aap ... comments negative and positive aayenge ....bus likhte rahiye ...

[Suraj76626]

Nice update but the key character THE MANGALSUTRA is still missing even from this chapter. This locket is important as it was roadblock in Patode's pathway. ..... let's hope to see it  in the upcoming update. Kindly update midweek if possible.

It will come into play soon.... It's still too early for Patode to go for her Mangalsutra.... He doesn't want to do anything at present to ruin Shipra's downfall. The mangalsutra is the key factor here to make or break his efforts.

[Suraj76626]

Dear Suraj76626, big fan of your writing!

First of all, a big thank you for your dedication and continuous timely updates to the story. Truly commend worthy. I know you've worked so hard and have created this wonderful story and the passion I can feel it in your writing. You have outdone yourself!

After reading the previous update I must say I have some strong critiques -

Dear xossissippi,

Thanks for your continuous support and indulgence in my work. I really appreciate your attachment to the story and hence such a long detailed critique.

I will try to explain each and every point you have raised with the reasoning behind it.

How the things ended up with Shipra - Well from Chapter one it was clear how the things will end up with Shipra...It's an erotica...duhhhhh...... It took more than 6 months for me....40-45 chapter and almost if not more than 200k words to reach here. This situation did not fell out of blue, It was building up to it.

Don't judge Shipra's fall from a male point of view. Keep in mind Shipra's mindset as well. In the story so far we can deduct that
a. Shipra wanted a simple married life but was forced to bear all the family responsibilities by he husband without caring for her wishes.
b. Shipra was sexually frustrated. Due to Alok.
c. She was stressed about getting a promotion, which she didn't wanted. Yet again due to Alok.
d. She was constantly being instigated against Alok by Namrata ever since she joined her in Amruj.
e. She was attracted towards Patode. She admitted herself.
f. Patode was constantly making sexual advances towards her.
g. She felt alone, not being supported by her husband. Patode provided that support.
h. She was aroused seeing Namrata and Patode's affair.
i. Patode had already done everything with her beside having sex.

But all the above points are not the reason for Shipra's behavior. They are just building blocks for what came next.

To understand it better let me explain it with an example-

Irrespective of the gender how does strong people act when they are too much stressed with constant troubles of our life, feel alone, frustrated and constantly made to do a work they hate (Like me doing my job  ) ?
They soldier through with a smile and keep doing it..... until they had enough.
And once their limit is breached, it only takes a small vulnerable moment for their strong outward appearance to crumble.

This is what happened to Shipra in that particular moment of the night when Patode and she kissed. The molestation at hands of Alokk was her breaking point. She had enough. Enough of being at the receiving end of troubles. For her Patode was her savior,  he not only saved her but also saved Sanju. He not only cared for her but supported her. He was the male in her life which understood her. And thus she lowered her guards for him. For her Patode was an escape from all her troubles and person with whom she felt safe and valued. She never intended to have sex with him but in spur of moment things went out of her hands which I have explained in detail in the chapter.

I think it covers point 1 to 3 of your critique.

For point 4 - Alokk and Hitesh - They are rowdy young village boys -  What mastermind plan could they conjure? Alokk was never able to seduce Shipra unlike Patode. He was just lucky that Shipra was drunk and his name was same as her husband.

Shipra's readiness for sex - On the contrary to what you said, it was the molestation which proved the breaking point for Shipra as mentioned above. She never planned in her mind to have sex with Patode..Never.... But what Patode had done that day, the way he supported her, the way he made her trust him and assured her of her safety made Shipra obliged to thank him. So she decided to give him the reward of the morning but as I have explained above it was a very vulnerable moment for Shipra. A series of reasons mentioned above clubbed with her growing affection towards Patode led one to another and she allowed Patode to go all the way.

Difference between Shipra and Namrata - Wait for next few chapters to find out.

iv) v) -  It doesn't need a explanation -  It but obvious all these things are happening in the background I cannot go in such details or this story will have 100 more chapters.


vi) See the timeline of the story my friend it has been only a few days not even a month has passed.

vii) You have answered it yourself -  Not important. -  Not all old men in an erotica are pervert.

The story is about Shipra's ordeals not Patode's ordeal or Toppo's ordeal -  So it was bound to happen but the story is not finished so tables can turn.

You're the first one to think that the story has dwelled to much on sexual interactions so thanks. Someone in the comment even call the story non erotic. I don't know what people want from an erotica...

Anyway your comment is welcomed and I hope you stick around as the story has lot to give still. Many twist and turns in the waiting. Cheers.

[Suraj76626]

Have been saying same, Lot of readers forced this submission if you ask me. I was expecting a phone call to distract Shipra but it did not happen. Disappointed was well!

Now enjoy non stop sex ..Lost half of the thrill.

Stick around with the other half... you might find the story getting interesting after a couple of chapters.

[iCuby]

Please let the story move forward... Shipra should not regret this... Instead it should make her more sexually awaken...

[Vikramvines]

Hii Suraj...Its my humble request and suggestion as well..
Plz let the theme of this story b remain constant just as it is heading through...The story is taking an intresting turn... Any serious tampering will destroy the original flow of the story... Therefore, write the story on the basis of what you hv woven for... Don't get influenced by people who want this fabulous story according to their way..
And also give update early...
Folks r waiting eagerly ?

[Rajeshcfnm]

Is there any forced nudity,exhibitionism,cmnf scenes in this story. Going to read it tonight ! That's y asking .

[shashank13]

super update at

[shake chilli]

Waitinnight 



And Suraj tack your time boss 

And update

[chellaporukki]

Super update

[Ganesh Gaitonde]

Bro update?

[shake chilli]

This Sunday hard waiting biss

[Suraj76626]

Sorry dear readers, the update is ready but needs some editing to be done. I didn't get the time due to some personal work. Will complete the editing and post the update tomorrow.

[Nutcraker40]

Alot of these readers never had a real girl shipra is a slut more then her friend they just had different lives and circumstances Narmata should come out on top out smarting shipra with experience street smarts that gets what she wants with a ruthless nature. shipra should go down willingly losing everything she once was to a new her the real her she's kept hidden patobe role is to break her that's what should happen no more uptight attitude she should be more willing to fuck now get involved in gangbang webcam strip clubs I don't want her to fight anymore that time has passed I want her pussy be the object of many desire no more husband narmata saw to that and all you need sometime is a little push or spark for everything to blow up one lie one loose link one monkey wrench all it takes and its over she should go full slut drop jaws drop bombs drop a gem never trust a bitch need more interfaith degrade her more we don't want her married or a mother have her forget to check on her family because they represent the old her the lie she had of a dream and old life have her find out better ways in making money as a online whore and gloyholes some interesting cocks to choose from

[xossissippi]

Have been saying same, Lot of readers forced this submission if you ask me. I was expecting a phone call to distract Shipra but it did not happen. Disappointed was well!

Now enjoy non stop sex ..Lost half of the thrill.

I know RCF, most of the time we think a lot alike.

I too had similar kind of thoughts. But we have to accept it's erotica a sex story. 
Shipra seems to be smart one but the moment she made the agreement sex became inevitable. It's a slipper slope, two people can't engage in oral sex and expect to maintain boundary for so long. At the end she too has needs.

And think which is better ordeal whether Shipra gets out of this with dignity or she trusts Patode, betrayed then gets out of it(I hope she gets out of this).

And patode is playing dangerous game, let's see how long he can manipulate both parties.

I still have hope on author he can still deliver something good.

You made some very good practical point, agreed you can't maintain in just oral sex. Waiting to see how the story plays out.

Dear xossissippi,

Thanks for your continuous support and indulgence in my work. I really appreciate your attachment to the story and hence such a long detailed critique.

I will try to explain each and every point you have raised with the reasoning behind it.

How the things ended up with Shipra - Well from Chapter one it was clear how the things will end up with Shipra...It's an erotica...duhhhhh...... It took more than 6 months for me....40-45 chapter and almost if not more than 200k words to reach here. This situation did not fell out of blue, It was building up to it.

Don't judge Shipra's fall from a male point of view. Keep in mind Shipra's mindset as well. In the story so far we can deduct that
a. Shipra wanted a simple married life but was forced to bear all the family responsibilities by he husband without caring for her wishes.
b. Shipra was sexually frustrated. Due to Alok.
c. She was stressed about getting a promotion, which she didn't wanted. Yet again due to Alok.
d. She was constantly being instigated against Alok by Namrata ever since she joined her in Amruj.
e. She was attracted towards Patode. She admitted herself.
f. Patode was constantly making sexual advances towards her.
g. She felt alone, not being supported by her husband. Patode provided that support.
h. She was aroused seeing Namrata and Patode's affair.
i. Patode had already done everything with her beside having sex.

But all the above points are not the reason for Shipra's behavior. They are just building blocks for what came next.

To understand it better let me explain it with an example-

Irrespective of the gender how does strong people act when they are too much stressed with constant troubles of our life, feel alone, frustrated and constantly made to do a work they hate (Like me doing my job   ) ?
They soldier through with a smile and keep doing it..... until they had enough.
And once their limit is breached, it only takes a small vulnerable moment for their strong outward appearance to crumble.

This is what happened to Shipra in that particular moment of the night when Patode and she kissed. The molestation at hands of Alokk was her breaking point. She had enough. Enough of being at the receiving end of troubles. For her Patode was her savior,  he not only saved her but also saved Sanju. He not only cared for her but supported her. He was the male in her life which understood her. And thus she lowered her guards for him. For her Patode was an escape from all her troubles and person with whom she felt safe and valued. She never intended to have sex with him but in spur of moment things went out of her hands which I have explained in detail in the chapter.

I think it covers point 1 to 3 of your critique.

For point 4 - Alokk and Hitesh - They are rowdy young village boys -  What mastermind plan could they conjure? Alokk was never able to seduce Shipra unlike Patode. He was just lucky that Shipra was drunk and his name was same as her husband.

Shipra's readiness for sex - On the contrary to what you said, it was the molestation which proved the breaking point for Shipra as mentioned above. She never planned in her mind to have sex with Patode..Never.... But what Patode had done that day, the way he supported her, the way he made her trust him and assured her of her safety made Shipra obliged to thank him. So she decided to give him the reward of the morning but as I have explained above it was a very vulnerable moment for Shipra. A series of reasons mentioned above clubbed with her growing affection towards Patode led one to another and she allowed Patode to go all the way.

Difference between Shipra and Namrata - Wait for next few chapters to find out.

iv) v) -  It doesn't need a explanation -  It but obvious all these things are happening in the background I cannot go in such details or this story will have 100 more chapters.


vi) See the timeline of the story my friend it has been only a few days not even a month has passed.

vii) You have answered it yourself -  Not important. -  Not all old men in an erotica are pervert.

The story is about Shipra's ordeals not Patode's ordeal or Toppo's ordeal -  So it was bound to happen but the story is not finished so tables can turn.

You're the first one to think that the story has dwelled to much on sexual interactions so thanks. Someone in the comment even call the story non erotic. I don't know what people want from an erotica...

Anyway your comment is welcomed and I hope you stick around as the story has lot to give still. Many twist and turns in the waiting. Cheers.

Hi Suraj, thank you very much for taking time out to respond i truly appreciate it. In love with this beautiful world you've created. My last suggestion is you have the talent to make the story complex and intricate and with lot of suspense. Go for it! Good luck!

[Hornytamilan23]

Hi suraj,
I wonder, how you are able to convince every guy? So patient also verbally Skilled. You Stand by your thoughts no matter what.

No wonder patode made Shipra to open her legs with his sweet talk. He has traits of you.

Eagerly waiting for your next update, one suggestion bro, keep this thing between Shipra and patode as an episode. The timeline of the story is mere weeks I think. So many more things to come, I expect many guys will be involved with Shipra, keep it as one guy per episode before you go bang bang.

I know that you will never be influenced, some are thinking that you are getting pushed for sex scenes. But the thing is no matter what, you will do what you wanna do.

[Hornytamilan23]

Also we must give due credit to suraj for not making this story as forced sex or ₹ape, both Namrata and Shipra willingly got laid with patode. It took 6 months, but worth.

[Vikramvines]

Sorry dear readers, the update is ready but needs some editing to be done. I didn't get the time due to some personal work. Will complete the editing and post the update tomorrow.

No issues bro.. Take ur time.. Apart from being a good writer u r a nice person too... Good night.