Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.
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Very very repeatating now. It's now like an arrangement. Exchange of work kind of thing. No in the moment things... Adultery, cheating, manipulation nothing. It's now kind of planned arrangement kind of thing. This story had potential to become the best story but it loses its charm. The main character Shipra felt so different from first 10 chapters and recent chapters. Why she is so edgy.... I don't understand. My favourite story I'm always waiting for to read become boring. That's why I am frustrated
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I think very less number people interested in detail description of namrata sex... So don't waste your efforts in namrata sex scenes.
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The story is great, keep it up, lots of people are interested in the story.
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(10-10-2024, 06:39 AM)iCuby Wrote: I think very less number people interested in detail description of namrata sex... So don't waste your efforts in namrata sex scenes.

yes please..
Interested in Shipra only...


But allow the writer some time... I hope we will be satisfied... We should be waiting for Upcoming chapters
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Wating Sunday dost

Or hard ho rahi he stories
Enjoy life?Long struggle in life with success your foot 
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Me wating har movment pe kar raha hu

Ki patode

Se pahle shrip 

Tope se chudai kare

Ky asea magic app kar sakte ho dost
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Lovely update
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Very nice
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waiting for update
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Waiting log fuking update 

Sunday
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(07-10-2024, 12:10 AM)qazmlp Wrote: Awesome writing dude. Great sexual tension n energy.
All the Best going ahead.
A question though ,the side story, is that Saad goimg to be the Super-Villain in this story? Dont keep the suspense for long. Integrate the 2 story lines together soon enough.
And whats with Toppo? Bring him in too if possible.

The stories will merge in next couple of chapters.
Toppo will also come into picture soon along with Bhiva
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(10-10-2024, 03:28 AM)Nutcraker40 Wrote: I've noticed the author does not respond to my comments But responds to everyone else's So I guess I don't wanna piss the author off For whatever reason so I won't comment

I have nothing against you brother but I don't get your comments. They are very confusing. If you have suggestions please write them in an organised way just like this comment of yours. I will surely consider. Thanks for following the story
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(10-10-2024, 06:39 AM)iCuby Wrote: I think very less number people interested in detail description of namrata sex... So don't waste your efforts in namrata sex scenes.

Noted
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(10-10-2024, 06:37 AM)iCuby Wrote: Very very repeatating now. It's now like an arrangement. Exchange of work kind of thing. No in the moment things... Adultery, cheating, manipulation nothing. It's now kind of planned arrangement kind of thing. This story had potential to become the best story but it loses its charm. The main character Shipra felt so different from first 10 chapters and recent chapters. Why she is so edgy.... I don't understand. My favourite story I'm always waiting for to read become boring. That's why I am frustrated

Sorry mate... I hope next few chapters are as per your expectation.
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Next update on Sunday.
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(11-10-2024, 08:35 PM)Suraj76626 Wrote: Next update on Sunday.

Wating hardly 


Am am incent in real life 

And my dic hard to this stories
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Hi suraj,
You are getting some rave comments bro. It is like whole universe wants to fuck Shipra and somehow she gaurds herself. Being a mother her basic instincts are not to get fucked. Thats understandable. All the sexual relief is giving by Namrata, meanwhile the plot is also evolving. Which is good.

But the tempo is down for quite sometime. Shipra consciously can't act like a whore, perhaps her weakness is getting intoxicated. Bring back the intensity.

You tried with Namrata and patode, Shipra came on top. Why can't a lad try to get between her legs. Or some old swine. Wanna see how she reacts to those advances. Curious to see who gets into her vagina first. For this, sympathy might be the trump card.
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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This is getter more hotter. How long shipra can resist her inner desires. expecting a threesome of patode, saad and shipra and namrata join for foursome.
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