10-10-2024, 03:28 AM
I've noticed the author does not respond to my comments But responds to everyone else's So I guess I don't wanna piss the author off For whatever reason so I won't comment
Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.
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10-10-2024, 03:28 AM
I've noticed the author does not respond to my comments But responds to everyone else's So I guess I don't wanna piss the author off For whatever reason so I won't comment
10-10-2024, 06:37 AM
Very very repeatating now. It's now like an arrangement. Exchange of work kind of thing. No in the moment things... Adultery, cheating, manipulation nothing. It's now kind of planned arrangement kind of thing. This story had potential to become the best story but it loses its charm. The main character Shipra felt so different from first 10 chapters and recent chapters. Why she is so edgy.... I don't understand. My favourite story I'm always waiting for to read become boring. That's why I am frustrated
10-10-2024, 06:39 AM
I think very less number people interested in detail description of namrata sex... So don't waste your efforts in namrata sex scenes.
10-10-2024, 08:35 AM
The story is great, keep it up, lots of people are interested in the story.
10-10-2024, 12:26 PM
(10-10-2024, 06:39 AM)iCuby Wrote: I think very less number people interested in detail description of namrata sex... So don't waste your efforts in namrata sex scenes. yes please.. Interested in Shipra only... But allow the writer some time... I hope we will be satisfied... We should be waiting for Upcoming chapters
10-10-2024, 12:38 PM
Wating Sunday dost
Or hard ho rahi he stories
Enjoy life?Long struggle in life with success your foot
10-10-2024, 01:00 PM
Me wating har movment pe kar raha hu
Ki patode Se pahle shrip Tope se chudai kare Ky asea magic app kar sakte ho dost
Enjoy life?Long struggle in life with success your foot
10-10-2024, 10:05 PM
Lovely update
11-10-2024, 07:05 AM
Very nice
11-10-2024, 04:03 PM
waiting for update
11-10-2024, 04:38 PM
Waiting log fuking update
Sunday
Enjoy life?Long struggle in life with success your foot
11-10-2024, 08:25 PM
(07-10-2024, 12:10 AM)qazmlp Wrote: Awesome writing dude. Great sexual tension n energy. The stories will merge in next couple of chapters. Toppo will also come into picture soon along with Bhiva
11-10-2024, 08:30 PM
(10-10-2024, 03:28 AM)Nutcraker40 Wrote: I've noticed the author does not respond to my comments But responds to everyone else's So I guess I don't wanna piss the author off For whatever reason so I won't comment I have nothing against you brother but I don't get your comments. They are very confusing. If you have suggestions please write them in an organised way just like this comment of yours. I will surely consider. Thanks for following the story
11-10-2024, 08:32 PM
11-10-2024, 08:34 PM
(10-10-2024, 06:37 AM)iCuby Wrote: Very very repeatating now. It's now like an arrangement. Exchange of work kind of thing. No in the moment things... Adultery, cheating, manipulation nothing. It's now kind of planned arrangement kind of thing. This story had potential to become the best story but it loses its charm. The main character Shipra felt so different from first 10 chapters and recent chapters. Why she is so edgy.... I don't understand. My favourite story I'm always waiting for to read become boring. That's why I am frustrated Sorry mate... I hope next few chapters are as per your expectation.
12-10-2024, 04:39 AM
(11-10-2024, 08:35 PM)Suraj76626 Wrote: Next update on Sunday. Wating hardly Am am incent in real life And my dic hard to this stories
Enjoy life?Long struggle in life with success your foot
12-10-2024, 09:27 AM
(This post was last modified: 12-10-2024, 11:40 AM by Hornytamilan23. Edited 3 times in total. Edited 3 times in total.)
Hi suraj,
You are getting some rave comments bro. It is like whole universe wants to fuck Shipra and somehow she gaurds herself. Being a mother her basic instincts are not to get fucked. Thats understandable. All the sexual relief is giving by Namrata, meanwhile the plot is also evolving. Which is good. But the tempo is down for quite sometime. Shipra consciously can't act like a whore, perhaps her weakness is getting intoxicated. Bring back the intensity. You tried with Namrata and patode, Shipra came on top. Why can't a lad try to get between her legs. Or some old swine. Wanna see how she reacts to those advances. Curious to see who gets into her vagina first. For this, sympathy might be the trump card.
-Pickup, drop, escape.
12-10-2024, 10:02 AM
This is getter more hotter. How long shipra can resist her inner desires. expecting a threesome of patode, saad and shipra and namrata join for foursome.
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