Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.
Ok...
I forbid myself from jumping to conclusions..

Will this be like

1.Shipra desperately wants to help kasargoan women.
2. She loves Alok and she want a normal with her child.
3. But inorder to survive in this male dominant, politically driven society, her only leverage is her body.
4. Patode, is he enough for Shipra to Overcome all her struggles.
5. Namrata, her nature is like that. And you answered my question, she is not a villain rather a scapegoat.
6. Shipra hasn't fucked anyone. There are so many characters. If Shipra is gonna suffer, so called Ordeal.
7. Till now she haven't showed any weekness. I can't guess how this will pan out. Because now it is like a love story between patode and Shipra.
8. Without a strong antagonist, you can't elevate your protagonist.
9. Is this story going to be like, how she falls for patode or
10. It will be like shipras ordeal one by one.
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(26-09-2024, 09:43 PM)Suraj76626 Wrote: हाँ हाँ हाँ... यह अध्याय पिछले अध्याय के साथ न्याय नहीं करता है, लेकिन धैर्य रखें, अध्याय का अगला भाग लगभग तैयार है। इसे रविवार को पोस्ट करूँगा।

अध्याय बहुत लंबा हो रहा था, इसलिए इसे दो भागों में विभाजित किया गया।

Ok dear
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(27-09-2024, 07:30 PM)Hornytamilan23 Wrote: Ok...
I forbid myself from jumping to conclusions..

Will this be like

1.Shipra desperately wants to help kasargoan women.
2. She loves Alok and she want a normal with her child.
3. But inorder to survive in this male dominant, politically driven society, her only leverage is her body.
4. Patode, is he enough for Shipra to Overcome all her struggles.
5. Namrata, her nature is like that. And you answered my question, she is not a villain rather a scapegoat.
6. Shipra hasn't fucked anyone. There are so many characters. If Shipra is gonna suffer, so called Ordeal.
7. Till now she haven't showed any weekness. I can't guess how this will pan out. Because now it is like a love story between patode and Shipra.
8. Without a strong antagonist, you can't elevate your protagonist.
9. Is this story going to be like, how she falls for patode or
10. It will be like shipras ordeal one by one.

It's not only about the women of Kasegoan. There are many reason for current situation of Shipra. 
A. Alok's unemployment putting tremendous pressure on Shipra for getting a promotion for maintaining their ever increasing expenses.
B. Kasegoan being a very difficult branch which cannot become performing by sole effort of Shipra, hence she is inadvertently dependent on Patode to make that happen.
D. And then there is the cause of the exploited and cheated women whom she wants to help for which she is again dependant on Patode.
C. And at last there is her own suppressed desires which is flared by the presence of Namrata and advances of Patode.

All this has led her to do something she wouldn't have done in normal circumstances. But still she is trying to delay the inevitable and is fighting for control.

Namrata is a villain of not is a matter of perspective.

Shipra's ordeals have already started. She is not doing all this of her own will, yet. She never wanted to repeat what had happened with her with Viresh but fate has some other plans for her.

Other than this for everything else you'll have to wait. 
Shipra and Patode's relationship is totally mutually beneficial. There is no spark or emotional connect as of now. Just be patient Patode will show his true colors soon.
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(27-09-2024, 09:07 PM)Suraj76626 Wrote: It's not only about the women of Kasegoan. There are many reason for current situation of Shipra. 
A. Alok's unemployment putting tremendous pressure on Shipra for getting a promotion for maintaining their ever increasing expenses.
B. Kasegoan being a very difficult branch which cannot become performing by sole effort of Shipra, hence she is inadvertently dependent on Patode to make that happen.
D. And then there is the cause of the exploited and cheated women whom she wants to help for which she is again dependant on Patode.
C. And at last there is her own suppressed desires which is flared by the presence of Namrata and advances of Patode.

All this has led her to do something she wouldn't have done in normal circumstances. But still she is trying to delay the inevitable and is fighting for control.

Namrata is a villain of not is a matter of perspective.

Shipra's ordeals have already started. She is not doing all this of her own will, yet. She never wanted to repeat what had happened with her with Viresh but fate has some other plans for her.

Other than this for everything else you'll have to wait. 
Shipra and Patode's relationship is totally mutually beneficial. There is no spark or emotional connect as of now. Just be patient Patode will show his true colors soon.
Patience is a virtue. Tongue for a steamy update.
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Sort of the most hottest things that has happened Was alok Sneaking into Shipra's room to feel her ass and finger her pussy Having access I think he should set up some cameras to catch her In the bathroom in the shower And in her bedroom Naked Maybe maybe have a telegram group with some friends Also being a boy from the streets of the poor community Never seeing or even dreaming of Possession Spend more Spend more time describe it Relishing her beauty How her ass fell How he His finger along her ass crack All his thoughts he must have been feeling Everything Ever dreamed of Fighting his dark thoughts with his humanity
Several things that I liked about it is that Something happened to her pussy Without her knowledge or knowing As well as the teacher student kind of relationship like a mother and younger sibling fetish as well as the Voyeur of it all shipra plump juicy pussy at the center of attention I also liked how she started to circle Her clit and play with herself Having her body betray her Is it a great theme Hope to be explored more
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Suraj,

Off late from your comments, I came to know that this is your first story, but let me tell you, I didn't feel so impressed by any other story till now, you have great engagement and writing skill, request you not leave the story in between in near future. Created account today specifically to comment and thank you for your efforts in this story . Thanks mate !!!
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(26-09-2024, 09:43 PM)Suraj76626 Wrote: Yeah yeah yeah... The chapter doesn't do justice to the last one but be patient next part of the chapter is almost ready. Will post it on Sunday.

The chapter was getting very lengthy hence bifurcated it.

Waiting one day
Enjoy life?Long struggle in life with success your foot 
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Good one
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Amazing
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Its not just patode, but many men waiting to shove their dick in the holes of shipra.
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(27-09-2024, 10:00 PM)Nutcraker40 Wrote: Sort of the most hottest things that has happened Was alok Sneaking into Shipra's room to feel her ass and finger her pussy Having access I think he should set up some cameras to catch her In the bathroom in the shower And in her bedroom Naked Maybe maybe have a telegram group with some friends Also being a boy from the streets of the poor community Never seeing or even dreaming of Possession Spend more Spend more time describe it Relishing her beauty How her ass fell How he His finger along her ass crack All his thoughts he must have been feeling Everything Ever dreamed of Fighting his dark thoughts with his humanity
Several things that I liked about it is that Something happened to her pussy Without her knowledge or knowing As well as the teacher student kind of relationship like a mother and younger sibling fetish as well as the Voyeur of it all shipra plump juicy pussy at the center of attention I also liked how she started to circle Her clit and play with herself Having her body betray her Is it a great theme Hope to be explored more

You'll see more of Alokk soon
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(27-09-2024, 01:52 AM)iCuby Wrote: The problem was the acts of one night we are reading for over a whole month.... But the core story is masterpiece.... Really it gives all the right kind of sensations...

The night will end in the next chapter
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(26-09-2024, 10:38 PM)RCF Wrote: Perfectly being written every chapter..do not bother about the impatient readers..this is how a story should be written. Once the high is gone there is nothing to look forward. Love the anticipation and suspense. We know they did not fuck but lot of foreplay..The story is going to be a master piece.

Exactly
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(28-09-2024, 04:52 PM)bittu0211 Wrote: Suraj,

Off late from your comments, I came to know that this is your first story, but let me tell you, I didn't feel so impressed by any other story till now, you have great engagement and writing skill, request you not leave the story in between in near future. Created account today specifically to comment and thank you for your efforts in this story . Thanks mate !!!

Appreciate it bro, will definitely take the story to conclusion. I wanted to post another story but it will hamper regular updates to this one and mess both of them hence for a while this will be sole offering from my side.
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Suraj brother...reps added...
Will be waiting for update...

Just tear apart Shipra's arrogance.....
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(28-09-2024, 09:45 PM)olumannan Wrote: Its not just patode, but many men waiting to shove their dick in the holes of shipra.

True. Right now there are just three.
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(28-09-2024, 09:54 PM)Luca Modric Wrote: Suraj brother...reps added...
Will be waiting for update...

Just tear apart Shipra's arrogance.....

I Don't see her as arrogant.  But a true sanskari bhabhi type. And with patode she's trying to maintain a professional relationship, a balanced one. She may come up on top even.
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Though this story and the author have become my most favourite because of the fantastic plot and outstanding writing, now I with great disappointment I have to say that the story is losing its charm and becoming a bit boring because of its monotonous long conversations and a regular cliff-hanging of keeping everyone waiting at the end of each chapter for the real action of Shipra's sexual ordeal along with Namrata's ordeals.

A Big Chapter 21 is almost over and we are yet to see the physical ordeals of Shipra!

The theme of the ordeal is yet to start after 21 very big chapters!

So many actions and ordeals (By Saad, the real stud; by the village politicians, by the village elders and the village youngsters etc.) could have been written by the amazing sensual writing skills of the author which could have glued the whole Xossipy Community to this story!
Alas, nothing is happening and the disappointment is growing amongst us, the readers!

However, the plot still lingers, with the conflict between Shipra's characteristic principles and Patode's persuasions.

I am afraid that keeping the avid readers waiting and disappointing so much for the theme of the ordeal will make this story lose its valuable fan base and the story may become a stagnant one and eventually lose all its charm and attraction!

I hope the author would pay attention to the expectations of the avid fans of this story and come up with some outstanding plots of ordeals for both the high-class urban ladies in the hand of rural misogynist dick-head males!

As a super fan of the author and the story, I'll keep waiting for the updates to start the ordeals for both the urban ladies in the awesome signature style of the author.
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Fantastic
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(26-09-2024, 09:43 PM)Suraj76626 Wrote: Yeah yeah yeah... The chapter doesn't do justice to the last one but be patient next part of the chapter is almost ready. Will post it on Sunday.

The chapter was getting very lengthy hence bifurcated it.

(29-09-2024, 01:15 AM)Armani007 Wrote: I Don't see her as arrogant.  But a true sanskari bhabhi type. And with patode she's trying to maintain a professional relationship, a balanced one. She may come up on top even.

To me shipra is definitely arrogant... She knows only patode lift her up from the situation..  If she was sanskari she would never compromise and lie on bed...
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