22-09-2024, 07:43 PM
The clifhanger ahhhhhhhhhhh
Very good update as always
Very good update as always
Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.
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22-09-2024, 07:43 PM
The clifhanger ahhhhhhhhhhh
Very good update as always
23-09-2024, 06:50 AM
Fantastic story so far you write well my friend shipra might have to sleep her way out this One more characters and character growth Build them to break them how about a big boat cruise getting gang bang
Have her Help them seduce other women as a slut hero journey Tell me if I can help you make a great sonarika bhadoria story or saga as a request
23-09-2024, 08:59 AM
It would have been better if used a gif
23-09-2024, 11:32 AM
Kudos to the master, the story is getting better and better. With each new story you surprise us more and I expect a new surprise in the next update. Keep it up, well done.
23-09-2024, 09:09 PM
I would like more interface Play Included You could flash back To her parents when she was young at temple To where she is now ***** girls are the most clean the way they keep themselves their house and their cooking So it's no wonder given the right circumstances and push it right direction it would be the best at So it's no wonder given the right circumstances and push it right direction they would be the best at sex in bed as well high class rich and cultured woman needing to be dominated make her wear a burqa and go to the slums make her leave her husband willingly for sex also would love more physical description from who's black to who's Indian light skin and dark would love a hardcore boob sucking topples nipple play and the greatest wishes is try been fetishes try blowjob secret under a desk and straight from one of my favorite eruo erotica mami is with Lauren antonelli have someone remove her panty in secret while in a letting or dinner that would be great thank you I love your story keep it up lets make more
23-09-2024, 10:02 PM
The first night of Shipra with real man is over. Waiting to see the details of what happened.
24-09-2024, 07:10 PM
(This post was last modified: 24-09-2024, 09:55 PM by Nutcraker40. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
(23-09-2024, 09:09 PM)Nutcraker40 Wrote: I would like more interfaith Play Included You could flash back To her parents when she was young at temple To where she is now ***** girls are the most clean the way they keep themselves their house and their cooking So it's no wonder given the right circumstances and push it right direction it would be the best at So it's no wonder given the right circumstances and push it right direction they would be the best at sex in bed as well high class rich and cultured woman needing to be dominated make her wear a burqa and go to the slums make her leave her husband willingly for sex also would love more physical description from who's black to who's Indian light skin and dark would love a hardcore boob sucking topples nipple play and the greatest wishes is try been fetishes try blowjob secret under a desk and straight from one of my favorite eruo erotica mami is with Lauren antonelli have someone remove her panty in secret while in a letting or dinner that would be great thank you I love your story keep it up lets make more
25-09-2024, 03:24 AM
The story is a masterpiece, my favourite right now. ButYou're dragging.... It's just repeatating.....
25-09-2024, 06:37 PM
(25-09-2024, 03:24 AM)iCuby Wrote: The story is a masterpiece, my favourite right now. ButYou're dragging.... It's just repeatating..... Yeah I feel the same.... But I can't help it ... When I start writing it keeps getting lengthier... I guess that's my writing style... I am pretty new at writing so lot's of room for improvement...... I'll try and make it crisp from Chapter 22 though... Next chapter will be lengthy one as well. Thanks
25-09-2024, 06:39 PM
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26-09-2024, 12:44 AM
(25-09-2024, 06:37 PM)Suraj76626 Wrote: Yeah I feel the same.... But I can't help it ... When I start writing it keeps getting lengthier... I guess that's my writing style... I am pretty new at writing so lot's of room for improvement...... I'll try and make it crisp from Chapter 22 though... Next chapter will be lengthy one as well. Bro, kb tak expect kre next update?
26-09-2024, 10:00 AM
(25-09-2024, 06:37 PM)Suraj76626 Wrote: Yeah I feel the same.... But I can't help it ... When I start writing it keeps getting lengthier... I guess that's my writing style... I am pretty new at writing so lot's of room for improvement...... I'll try and make it crisp from Chapter 22 though... Next chapter will be lengthy one as well. When is the next update coming bro...? Desperately waiting man...
26-09-2024, 02:37 PM
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The rural setting can be utilized in up coming chapters remember how kids from the community blatantly checked shipra out because she easily stood out being in a slum setting can be used like I said have her in a burqa visiting the poor parts of her community would be interesting have her body displayed to poor men or get involved in gang war fear perhaps she can be forced to be a mule for a drug don made into a part time stripper without much choice or options also describe more about what she wears and her body and other characters descriptions you're doing great love your work I will dm you
26-09-2024, 08:08 PM
Hope the update is coming...
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