15-09-2024, 07:37 PM
Thanks boss
Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.
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15-09-2024, 07:37 PM
Thanks boss
15-09-2024, 11:55 PM
Wow I am desperately waiting for next update please try to quickly update it's my big big big request to you bro please quickly update please please
16-09-2024, 02:28 AM
Disappointed with the update. After so many days of waiting for an update, this update is really disappointing. So many dialogues, but so little actions.... The story didn't forward at all....
16-09-2024, 11:40 AM
Fantastic update.. even though there is no sex scene still I am satisfied how it's progressed.
I have a suggestion to the author. Right now so much is stacked against Shipra. Arrangement with patode won't hold. If Shipra doesn't dance to his tune, he won't hesitate to break this deal to show who is the real boss here. Also there is no actual motive for him to betray Sahid Hassan. Shipra is destined to fail. Hope you bring some support for Shipra to balance the power struggle here.
16-09-2024, 08:33 PM
Hi Suraj,
I am reading your stories from long time. They are the best in the site without a doubt. The character arc of Shipra is excellent. Sometimes i want to wait for few months & then come back to read multiple updates at a time but i wasn't able to hold back myself, great writing my friend. i'M WAITING FOR ENTRY OF BHIVA. Then the friend's circle and at ast may be Alok and her ex-boyfriend.
17-09-2024, 01:37 PM
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I think you are too early with Shipra and Patode sex, the story had a lot of promise but I think it will come down to the usual stories about domination, submission and making a whore out of Shipra. Up to 18 chapters the story was very promising with great dialogues but after the fake bet loss, it was reduced to the usual dominance story of which there are a million on this site. I'm sorry that you rushed with Shipra and Patode's sex. That's my opinion of course, thanks to the author for the answers to our comments.
17-09-2024, 09:19 PM
This is like Indian inception with all these flashbacks great writing and build up but is smiles character really written out? Look at Indian with with Goldman story gave great background to the wife before sex so ever little detail can be imagined this story is good but doesn't do well with imagination seems little rushed might not be the word as its long at about dam time for something to happen but with that said do we care what's happening as much as we should after so long and so many chapters? Instead of adding we feel spread thin like butter I'm just trying to help I much rather you make a sonarika dhadroria story I want interfaith play and other fetishes like bdsm has anyone squirted yet?what's the motivation is it only sex or is it something deeper perhaps patobe or someone else done this before has a history or a problem that would work better I want some hardcore sex break child's make her embarrassed have a nude pussy or ass pic float around... Ps I'm serious about the sonarika story cm me I can help even PayPal can be involved I know you're like me with not as much time as you wish lets work together after you finish this story meta make the best sonarika story to blur reality
19-09-2024, 09:55 PM
Bro next update app kab tak doge please bata do
Koi force nahi he
20-09-2024, 09:26 PM
20-09-2024, 09:27 PM
(17-09-2024, 09:19 PM)Nutcraker40 Wrote: This is like Indian inception with all these flashbacks great writing and build up but is smiles character really written out? Look at Indian with with Goldman story gave great background to the wife before sex so ever little detail can be imagined this story is good but doesn't do well with imagination seems little rushed might not be the word as its long at about dam time for something to happen but with that said do we care what's happening as much as we should after so long and so many chapters? Instead of adding we feel spread thin like butter I'm just trying to help I much rather you make a sonarika dhadroria story I want interfaith play and other fetishes like bdsm has anyone squirted yet?what's the motivation is it only sex or is it something deeper perhaps patobe or someone else done this before has a history or a problem that would work better I want some hardcore sex break child's make her embarrassed have a nude pussy or ass pic float around... Ps I'm serious about the sonarika story cm me I can help even PayPal can be involved I know you're like me with not as much time as you wish lets work together after you finish this story meta make the best sonarika story to blur realityAakhir kehna kya chahte ho?
20-09-2024, 09:28 PM
(15-09-2024, 11:50 AM)amirrulezmir Wrote: nice update. May be in upcoming chapters
20-09-2024, 09:29 PM
20-09-2024, 09:30 PM
20-09-2024, 09:31 PM
(16-09-2024, 02:28 AM)iCuby Wrote: Disappointed with the update. After so many days of waiting for an update, this update is really disappointing. So many dialogues, but so little actions.... The story didn't forward at all.... Try reading it... Skipping just to the erotic part will give you similar feeling.
20-09-2024, 09:32 PM
(16-09-2024, 11:40 AM)suryaspk Wrote: Fantastic update.. even though there is no sex scene still I am satisfied how it's progressed. Her support will come after a couple of chapters.
20-09-2024, 09:33 PM
(16-09-2024, 08:33 PM)violetviolent5 Wrote: Hi Suraj, Thanks man, Bhiva will make appearance soon. |
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