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Romance ప్రేమ గాట్లు - Completed
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20-08-2024, 08:29 PM
20-08-2024, 08:45 PM
20-09-2024, 12:12 PM
ఎక్కడా ఆపకుండా పనులన్నీ పక్కన పెట్టి చదివించావుగా, బాగుంది చివర మద్యలో వదిలేసినట్లు అనిపించింది, ఏది ఏమైనా బాగా రాశావు , రాస్తూ ఉండు మిత్రమా
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26-10-2024, 01:06 AM
(This post was last modified: 26-10-2024, 01:09 AM by meeabhimaani. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Hi Haran, I didnt see this story for quite long time as it has only 6 pages, some how I opened it from one of you comments. After started reading it really I felt like "how I missed it for so long".
Its really marvellous story and writing style , I read it continuously for 3 days and found it has ended pre-maturely. But now I know why. Like many readers expressed, it has got some gaps and the sex scenes are too long and too much detailed, normally it would be good when somethings are left for the imagination of readers. But really I like it. please request you to start the continuation when you have the time. At the same time next time dont post too many updates in a single page please. Thanks a lot once again. ??
26-10-2024, 01:08 AM
Can you please upload and share PDF link, thanks
26-10-2024, 07:47 PM
26-10-2024, 07:48 PM
(26-10-2024, 01:06 AM)meeabhimaani Wrote: Hi Haran, I didnt see this story for quite long time as it has only 6 pages, some how I opened it from one of you comments. After started reading it really I felt like "how I missed it for so long". Thankyou so much meabhimani garu.
25-01-2025, 02:30 PM
అద్భుతమైన స్టోరీ బ్రదర్.... చాలా బాగారాసారు... 3days కదలకుండా చదివాను... but అందరూ అంటున్నటు చివరిలో కొంచం తొందరగా ముగించినటు అనిపించింది..... మరో అద్భుతమైన కథ తో మళ్ళీ రావాలని కోరుకుంటున్నాను...
14-02-2025, 07:34 PM
05-05-2025, 08:16 AM
On second thought, no continuation of this story.
12-05-2025, 11:03 PM
19-06-2025, 09:37 AM
(This post was last modified: 04-01-2026, 07:34 PM by Haran000. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Happy Birthday Kajal
06-01-2026, 12:32 AM
Bro, Hats off to you man.
I read your previous work "Krishna Kavyam" and fell in love with your writing skills. When exploring your other works, I landed on this Gem. I don't know why others didn't like this story (the one that starts in marriage and layers reveal the story in flashbacks and current). I madly searched for it after just finishing it and couldn't find it. You don't know how much joy that would've given me to know in the last 5 chapters to actually know that Kajal is Parvathi instead of now knowing Kajal is Parvathi and just keep eternally waiting for Shiva to call her as his Parvathi. I craved a lot for Shiva to call Kajal as "Parvathi" and literally (Quite literally) cried when he did. I know you didn't fill in some plot gaps due to loss of interest from audience (I know what it can do to creative minds like yours). I really wish that it wasn't the case but I am satisfied with the way you closed it. You know beggars like me can't be choosers. You wouldn't believe, I slept less than 3 hrs this last 4 days to make time to read this master piece. I kept explaining the greatness in your story plot line to my wife like I am Newton and have just discovered Gravity. I saw a story writer in you with Krishna Kavyam but I am now seeing an Story writer, Dialog writer, Screenplay writer & directory in you with this work. You shaped how I would imagine this story in my head. Sai and Deepa's story can also be drawn to an natural conclusion of an happy ending. Aaron & Rudhra's ending can also be drawn to an conclusion with Ganga's actions. They won't mess with the lot anymore. I love how you concluded Chankya's mystery. I can derive that Dhanush's ending will eventually be a happy one as he has both Leela and Shiva in his corner. Once more, asalu Krishna Kavyam lo & ikkada nuvvu include chesina academic & intellectual details ki once more "Hats off". I loved how you included the Moon's 27 wifes, portable nuclear reactor (& much more). Your unapologetic inclusion of Grameena Telangana yasa is just chefs kiss. I was born and early days were spent in the state. It's good to see the representation. Although some of my Andhra friends might find it hard to understand some words in the beginning, I am sure they'll catch on using the contextual references. End of the day nenu cheppedi enti ante, nuvvu ilage rayali, nenu ilage chadavali. Always count me in as a permanent reader of your works going forward. Ignore the rest, kindly keep doing what you are doing. I know its not courtesy to ask this in this forum, but would you mind sharing me your real world profession with me in reply or PM? I am really curious to know (just that and nothing else about you).
07-01-2026, 01:14 PM
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