14-08-2024, 03:41 PM
Waiting bro
Adultery Heavenly angel: deceived by trust by duckhunter
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16-08-2024, 02:46 PM
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17-08-2024, 11:06 PM
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18-08-2024, 02:18 AM
Chapter - 118
On Friday evening , Devika was all busy in arranging everything, so she can leave to Chaami’s place in early morning itself. Earlier today she had received a call from a disciple of chaami and informed her of the location of the puja. It is a remote location in the forest area. Thats where chaami is and all the arrangement for the puja is done in a temple inside the forest. She was told to reach at a place she will be picked from there and will travel to this temple in the forest. She has to reach the bus stand at 5 am in the morning, from where she will be picked and it is a 5 hour journey from there to chaami’s place. She was instructed to wear comfortable clothing, as they have to walk through the forest for 2 hours. Devika called Vishnu and made sure he will come to pick her up early morning tomorrow. She packed extra pair of dress as they could only return back on Sunday. The puja is set to happen on Saturday night. Devika took Adi to her parents house and dropped him there for one day. She lied to her parents by saying that she has a teachers training and would be coming back only on Sunday. After coming back home, she tried calling Venki one more time but without any success. She was little surprised to see that Harilal has not contacted her after that incident with Ganapati. Whatever the reason she is okay with that. She wanted to complete this puja and she had full belief that after the puja is done, everything in her life would be okay and she could live happily with her family after that. Her belief in god is something no one could change. After dinner, she went to puja room and prayed for half hour and asked god to be with her and family all the time. She went to bed early and even though she tried to sleep , she couldn't and all incidents happened on her life came to her mind one by one. And she could not believe how quickly her life changed, after joining this college. But she made her mind to believe, everything to become alright after tomorrow. She slowly drifted to sleep at some point in the night. Chapter - 119 Vishnu and Devika reached the bus station at 5 am itself. Vishnu came to her house and left his bike there. And from there they took an Uber to reach the bus stand. Devika was wearing a black churidar with red dupatta as she has to walk through the forest. She has taken a back pack with her to carry the extra clothes and other things. Within 5 minutes after they reached the bus station. A jeep came and stopped infront of them. And the driver, while sitting inside itself spoke to them Driver - are you devika? Devika - yes Driver - hi , my name is Rangan. I was sent by chaami He was a dark middle aged guy with beard and mustache. There was big scar on his forehead. Devika - okay, hello He looked at Vishnu with doubtful eyes and Vishnu also stared back at him with no expression Rangan - who is this boy? Devika - This is Vishnu, he is coming with me Rangan again looked at Vishnu from head to toe and signed both of them to get inside. Vishnu went and sat on the front seat. While Devika got to the backside of the jeep. And soon they started their journey. Vishnu as he dont exactly know what is chaami’s plan, tried to engage in conversation with Rangan to understand what their plan. But Rangan did not speak much Vishnu - So bhaiya, where exactly is the temple Rangan - its far away Vishnu - how long we have to travel Rangan - 3 hours through road and 2 hours walking through forest Vishnu - but what is the name of the place Rangan - i dont know, i will leave you guys after the forest check post and there will be someone there to take you to the village in the forest Vishnu again few other question but Rangan did not reply to those. A little after 8 am , they crossed the forest check post and the forest area began from there. After traveling 5 kms, Rangan turned the jeep to a narrow mud road. Only one vehicle can go through that road. After going through that road for maybe 2 kms, they reached a dead end and it was thick forest in front of them. The jeep came to full stop. Rangan - you guys can get down here. Vishnu and devika took their bag and got down from the jeep. Devika was little tensed seeing the dense forest and there were no houses nearby. She looked at Vishnu and he was equally worried Vishnu - madam, are you still sure that you go there. We can still return back Devika - no vishnu. I have to do this puja, that's my last hope. God will be there with me Vishnu - okay Soon they heard someone coming to them from inside the forest. They looked and saw it was a tribal man. He was wearing animal skin around his waist and was bare chested. He had a long bamboo stick on his right hand Rangan - this is veerapa. He will take you to the village in the forest. He knows this forest by heart and will lead you. He is mute and he cannot speak. So follow him Devika looked at veerapa, he smiled and folded his hand and greeted both vishnu and devika Rangan - So i will meet you here at the same place tomorrow morning at this time. And will take you guys back to the city Saying that Rangan , got into the jeep and drove off. Veerapa took devika’s bag on his shoulder and signed them to follow him and walked right into the dense forest. Devika and Vishnu took a deep breath and followed Veerapa. Devika immersed in thoughts of completing the puja. While Vishnu, knew that he is walking right into the unknown trap set by cunning Chaami for devika. He has to be vigilant and save his beloved teacher at any cost and spoil chaami’s plan. **********************
18-08-2024, 07:53 AM
Nice thiril....
18-08-2024, 07:59 AM
Waiting for your next update. Please update early
18-08-2024, 10:50 AM
will the story end without devika losing her chastity. why this is adultery story in that case. Where is the cheating and unfaithfullness here. she is believing everyone deceiving her and still helped by them, every update is like a disappointment with story not moving to the next step.
18-08-2024, 11:19 AM
Nice narration but something expect big
Anyway take ur time and entertain us
18-08-2024, 06:44 PM
(18-08-2024, 10:50 AM)NovelNavel Wrote: will the story end without devika losing her chastity. why this is adultery story in that case. Where is the cheating and unfaithfullness here. she is believing everyone deceiving her and still helped by them, every update is like a disappointment with story not moving to the next step. Did I mention anytime, that there is going to be cheating and unfaithfulness in the story. I wanted the story to be this away. Unfortunately my character keeps getting deceived. You have every right not to read my story and find hundreds of stories in the platform with sex from the first page itself
18-08-2024, 08:02 PM
good going.. pls update
18-08-2024, 08:44 PM
(This post was last modified: 18-08-2024, 08:46 PM by krishkj. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Donot mind about them dude....
your story was very different and good tempo with super thrill feel so keep rocking... This portion was very nice buildup and nice way of lead... Vishnu think to save but chaami traps are nice Waiting to see a thrilling episodes between vishnu and chaami
18-08-2024, 08:59 PM
18-08-2024, 09:17 PM
18-08-2024, 09:37 PM
Please continue
18-08-2024, 10:07 PM
(18-08-2024, 06:44 PM)Bookkeeper Wrote: Did I mention anytime, that there is going to be cheating and unfaithfulness in the story. I wanted the story to be this away. Unfortunately my character keeps getting deceived. You have every right not to read my story and find hundreds of stories in the platform with sex from the first page itselfDon't think other, write this story with your writting. Waiting for big thrilling update. Try to update as early as possible. Can't wait for you next update
18-08-2024, 10:35 PM
(18-08-2024, 02:18 AM)Bookkeeper Wrote: Chapter - 118 ************************
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19-08-2024, 11:42 AM
Story is getting interesting.
It seems like Chaami set-up a great trap. Can Vishnu's unexpected arrival makes Chaami change his plans? Waiting for big update.
19-08-2024, 11:54 PM
Nice updates bro.. waiting for next update.
We want devika to be more free with Vishnu like if she is topless also she should worry and can roam infront of Vishnu or can hig him freely like she has dress. Let chami try to make her nude or half nude and Vishnu should be with her as per her condition and what ever chaami wanted to touch or grope should be done by Vishnu only. Only chaami can get chance to see her nude. Devika should complete Puja and goes home and next episode start with escaping from harilal in erotic way. |
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