Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.

[Ajay Kailash]

Wonderful

[Luca Modric]

Great going...
Please keep shipra reluctant and non- consensual

[tomdickharry2024]

Awesome update.. the internal struggle for both Shipra and Alok etched out beautifully!

[Dinesh Raveendran]

Marvelous update

[drlund]

Great story..

[xbiilove]

Alok is jobless, strengthless, mindless, useless, worthless idiot. He does not deserve a beauty like Shipra. Guess his friends too have an eye on her. If they get a chance, they will fuck her in front of Alok.

[maharsha25]

This chapter was fantastic and really well done. I could see some elements of suspense in Chapter 8 and 9 in this one. I would suggest you could add some detailed description of sexual activity while they are going at each other. Shipra should be fucked not only in her pussy but also her arse cos she deserves some ass fucking. (Im a fan of pierre woodman porn who sodomizes virgin ass amateur women until they scream and cry) It would be great if toppo could fuck Shipra while alok is in the vicinity in some other room making him a cuckold. In the later stages, toppo could possibly have a threesome with Namrata and Shipra. Just imagine Toppo having wild fuck with Shipra and fucking her ass until she painfully submissively gives in to the pleasure and sobs. Imagining old pierrre woodman as toppo would be a great character match. you guys should watch pierre woodman porn. the old man as fucked so many women in the ass and is a legend in porn.

[Luca Modric]

Eagerly waiting for next update..

Requesting writer to try 02 updates in a week please.

[Pundit77]

You are the DUDE.......master of storytelling....
Can't wait for more....

[tweeny_fory]

wow bhai.... with alok getting worried and unattended phone with moans coming from the next room? where is Shipra???

[tweeny_fory]

with every episode update you keep us on the edge of the seat bahi.. erotic n thriller and connect..
lovely writing.. fantastic was of narration...

[masochist]

I have just found out your story, read all in a single sitting. Amazing writing!!

[xboard1986]

Plz update

[Luca Modric]

Eagerly waiting for next update please

[maharsha25]

Please update if possible. Thanks

[critic_honest]

Dear Author, 
Kudos to your writing skills. The intriguing twists and thoughtfulness in the story shows the effort you've put into it. 
The narrative is engaging, and you clearly have the potential to make this story an epic.

However, I have a few suggestions & viewpoints that I hope you’ll consider positively:
1(a) In the first sex episode, I think you went overboard.  For instance, letting that guy Atul smooch Shipra was understandable but taking Shipra to bedroom just because he shared the same name as her husband seemed a bit far-fetched. Given Shipra's level of intoxication, this scenario felt somewhat implausible. It could have been avoided. 

1(b) Later, Shipra’s behavior of rubbing her pussy while Pataode was fucking Namrata seemed out of character. It gave an idea that Shipra after all is not that hard to break, which gives disappointment and gives a feeling that Shipra would open her legs if things go even a bit raunchy in future. Thankfully her Mangal sutra saved her. That was actually innovative, I must say


2. In the beginning, Shipra and Atul were portrayed as a deeply connected couple, which was central to the story. Now, it appears that their relationship is losing its authenticity, as if their love is fading or was never truly there. This shift is disappointing and makes their earlier bond seem less credible. It has started sounding as if they both hide their true feelings from each other which is not good.
Shipra was shown to be a mature and understanding woman but after confronting with Namrata, she like a naïve dumb person got so easily manipulated that she actually feels that Atul tries to control her.

Atul on the other hand, just because Shipra didn't answer his phone calls or message like an immature will surely heighten seeds of suspicion on her wife. Moreover, Shipra now would be unavailable for the weekend and this surely would fuel Atul's suspicion and will eventually lead to some fight which will further worsen the relationship of husband and wife.
Shipra assuming lack of support from husband would eventually make her weak and it would lead to break her resolve. This all looks so predictable & thus boring, if it happens this way.

I would request author to avoid creation of unnecessary tension and bitterness between Atul and Shipra. Their love is the core essence of the story, and maintaining a strong, genuine connection between them would be more compelling.
Real fun would be if the couple is actually in love and still Patode tries to woo Shipra in some way.


Creating rifts between a couple may not add excitement to the story. Instead, focusing on the genuine emotions and the depth of the couple's relationship will enhance the overall appeal and keep readers more engaged.

The plot is strong and the story is logically structured. It just doesn't revolve around sex. The more emotional it will be, the more readers will get attached to it.

Thanks

[Suraj76626]

Hi suraj, so the plot got thicker. Its shows the amount of time you spend to makes us entertained. I am proud that I vouched for the right author.

I think this is where the real ordeal begins

Thanks mate

[Suraj76626]

Quite a cliffhanger! I assume she's just bathing
Manipulating alok was a nice touch, so much conspiracy around the couple,
You're making the base of the story very strong
Waiting for more!!

Thanks man, What's the fun without some thrills for the readers.

[Suraj76626]

Eagerly waiting for next update..

Requesting writer to try 02 updates in a week please.

Appreciate your eagerness buddy, But it's quite exhausting and time taking to write even a single chapter in a week. I wish had more free time. I can give short updates but that would ruin all the fun. Keep reading.

[Suraj76626]

I have just found out your story, read all in a single sitting. Amazing writing!!