12-07-2024, 07:36 PM
Nice writing
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12-07-2024, 08:10 PM
The story has murders in the beginning to show the antogonist character. Rahim hitting a man and Roma looking that without any fear or pity towards the man shows, she loves being cruel inside. It must be the true self of her. Boxes containing drugs? How bashir will make Roma hate her husband? showing photos of him with a whore? Death of her husband or child will not affect her when she found a man that can fulfil her desires. waiting to see how the story gonna revolve.
13-07-2024, 01:51 PM
Soon Roma will start hating her son with the thought that her son will be a wimp like her husband. In future her wife has to open her legs to another muscle man.
13-07-2024, 10:38 PM
I did not enjoy the last update with Roma hating the violence shown in the news and enjoying the same in reality.
14-07-2024, 06:42 AM
why would rahim ask water to her and Being a brahmn lady, she is giving in jar knowing it he has just cut meat and touching the jar with the same hands and smell. is he cutting only animal meat or human meat as well. how cruel roma is turning now. a chill run the spine what is going to happen to raj and aarav. will these monsters cut them like meat and feed the meat to roma and make her eat that?
14-07-2024, 02:18 PM
The story is turning more erotic and cruel.
15-07-2024, 05:56 AM
Your updates are very short....waiting for a complete week for only 2 paragraphs...atleast try to give lengthy updates if u are updating weekly
17-07-2024, 06:37 AM
(This post was last modified: 17-07-2024, 06:38 AM by Mintu08. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
So once again, thank you everyone for liking the story so very much. What I am aware of, is the fact that my updates are not lengthy enough to fill up for a week, but strangely I am not very apologetic about it, but if I get a scope of additional time, I might make certain updates longer in the future.
Untill then, equate my chapters with short episodes of a long unpredictable serial! Next update will come by Saturday. Be tuned!
17-07-2024, 11:55 AM
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Thanks hope it will be a lengthy one
17-07-2024, 11:56 AM
18-07-2024, 10:48 PM
(17-07-2024, 06:37 AM)Mintu08 Wrote: So once again, thank you everyone for liking the story so very much. What I am aware of, is the fact that my updates are not lengthy enough to fill up for a week, but strangely I am not very apologetic about it, but if I get a scope of additional time, I might make certain updates longer in the future. Thanks bro for your regural update Can I Ping You In Google chat rahul7575patil; my id please when you are free |
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