Adultery A husband's mistake
(07-07-2024, 09:51 PM)me.you Wrote: Even if it is small update, story is moved way forward. Most of adultery stories just struck in fuck and fuck only. But atleast this story move to plot as novel. as I requested, need some minimum justice for victims. I can hope for that from you. Because u also like your character sukanya. You will not ruin that.

Thank you for your comment. Please expect an update today.
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(07-07-2024, 10:13 PM)Muralimm Wrote: Good update with more answers. to one question?

Take time for your self then we get best answers

Keep rocking like this

Thank you bro.
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(07-07-2024, 11:51 PM)magneticpersonality Wrote: The effort taken by you is highly appreciated.
Please don't rush to finish the story. I sense that very soon Sukanya will start to get blackmail, if that is the case then kindly include some dare, kinkiness & exhibitionism.
Take your own time & come up with some creative out of the box content, no hurry at all.

Thank you bro. I will not rush. Also I will not drag.
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(08-07-2024, 09:54 AM)Dhanapal Wrote: Flow is good, But point here is Sukanya is not pleasured fully, There is a huge scope still left in the story, Sukanya should be enjoyed fully and in the process focus should be on giving her more sexual pleasure, so that she can also enjoy it and have no regrets while cheating her foolish husband. There is also a prospect of group sex and Sukanya can get maximum pleasure in it.Explore more ways to give sexual pleasure to Sukanya which her foolish husband fail to give, I have an opinion that the ending of this story should be such a disaster for Sukanya and her husband that how some foolish actions of her husband result in eventual debauchery of Sukanya and that will enhance the essence this story's title. Also happy ending of this story will be just filmsy ending and a disastrous ending for Raghav and Sukanya will be more realistic and enjoyable to read.

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(08-07-2024, 11:10 AM)sexycharan Wrote: Awesome update. Both woman are sluts and slept with another man. What difference this is gonna make.

Thank you bro.
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(08-07-2024, 01:26 PM)bananna123 Wrote: Awesome update although it is short. Don't rush dear author, take your time. This is one of the best stories I read in recent times. Worth the wait.

Thank you brother. Hope you will like the upcoming update too.
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(08-07-2024, 01:59 PM)Yesudoss Wrote: Raghav is cuckold. He is happy when his wife open her legs to another man. Sukanya also knows this. Meera is a cock hungry bitch who want to experience different dicks after death of her husband. Even if he is alive, she would have done something suk is doing.

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(09-07-2024, 06:13 AM)Unclekol Wrote: Update please

Update coming in today
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(09-07-2024, 12:06 PM)andhratochennai Wrote: yes.. my doubt about meena and vimal is cleared now... 
thanks for update..
please post update soon

Please expect an update today
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(09-07-2024, 12:09 PM)andhratochennai Wrote: hi.. how do you manage to imagine and write this story while u r very busy with ur office work.. and do you enjoy writing more than  reading others stories or watching some porn..??? any way that benefits us a lot.. u made characters alive in our brains.. good writing.. 
thanks...

Thank you for your kind words bro. I enjoy reading a lot, but since I do not have much time, I can only read or write. I can't do both. As I have committed to you for sharing periodic updates, I have to keep the promise. Hope I'll read a few stories when I get time after writing the story.
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(09-07-2024, 12:12 PM)SanjuR Wrote: Nice update bro. Few requests from my side and you can add if this helps ur flow.
1) don't make it blackmail story. If did also starting it should be like that later situation should come to sukanya hands before that you can make concepts like exhibitionism, or any other concepts.
2) don't add to many characters or make her prostitute directly. If want she can enjoy herself like she started with Vimal.
3) Meena should take the help of sukanya to get rid of vimal. They both together make a plan to help Meera. In this scenario sukanya can seduce vimal and Meena spends time with raghava for the gratitude of sukanya help.
4) don't make raghava cuckold instead make him like to give kinky ideas and ask sukanya to do it. Like he tells her to expose or make her half nude like topless or bottom less and send her to terrace to bring clothes or hide and item under the tank then tell her to bring.
Or
Both raghava and sukanya goes outside/ secluded place or even terrace and there raghava grope her and tempt her there which will be seen by some other person. Here sukanya becomes bold and daring then new story starts and she also becomes dare to show.
Like this u can do bro

Don't worry bro. I'll try my best not to disappoint you
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(10-07-2024, 06:34 AM)Ragasiyananban Wrote: There is nothing to lose for sukanya or meena. why worry then?

Thank you for your comment bro.
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(10-07-2024, 06:54 AM)Dumeelkumar Wrote: Nice update

Thanks
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(12-07-2024, 07:06 PM)sivasn Wrote: Last 2 updates are not acceptable ,
Harrshment on woman is big violance never did real and stories tooo

I agree with you that harassment  is big violence. I don't justify it. Just Like I don't justify, theft, murder, cheating, telling lies, betrayal, etc. This is a story and nobody justifies, nor shall justify it. Rest assured.
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(12-07-2024, 07:31 PM)Gitaranjan Wrote: Nice writing.

Thanks
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(09-06-2024, 04:15 PM)rahulishere Wrote: Aunty: Stop crying dear. It’s not your mistake. You also have been manipulated. You can correct your mistakes. It’s not too late dear.
Meena: I can’t go to security officer. It will end up in a mess as I will also be held accountable for deceit and Rohan’s future will be spoilt. I don’t know who could help me.
Aunty: Don’t worry dear. Let’s think and we will find a solution. I’ll come to you immediately.
Meena: (Suddenly a realization dawned on her) I know what to do.

on what a turn of events...

i know i am too lated . but loved till now bro..... ever to know what next...
let suki and meena enjoy but they should also have to some level of control....

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(13-07-2024, 11:01 AM)Unclekol Wrote: Just keep refreshing this page, hoping for an update

Thank you for your interest.
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(13-07-2024, 09:18 PM)tweeny_fory Wrote: on what a turn of events...

i know i am too lated . but loved till now bro..... ever to know what next...
let suki and meena enjoy but they should also have to some level of control....

Thank you for your comment. Update coming up.
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Sukanya, although, may have decided to meet Vimal once and finish the affair once and for all, but she was speculative about meeting him after such an incident. She felt lonely and helpless. She could think of only one person in such difficult times, but she is hesitant to call that number. She was fighting an internal battle for a long time. Her heart says that she should clear all the mess, but her mind warns her to be cautious. She concluded that she did not have an option, but to see it through. However, she did not want to go out with Vimal as it might cause a problem for her if someone spots them together. She also did not want to invite him to her flat as she feared it could end in disaster. As her friendship with Meena had flourished, they occasionally had some chat on WhatsApp. Incidentally Meena asked if they can meet outside for a coffee and snacks as she was getting bored. Vimal proposed that they can take advantage of that and meet at a common public place without arousing suspicion. She received a message on WhatsApp.
Vimal: I’m waiting for you.
Vimal: As planned, Meena akka is waiting in the parking to pick you up. I’ll meet you there like a coincidence.
Meena invited Sukanya for a coffee and snacks at the Writer’s café which is a silent place for a private talk. Vimal proposed Sukanya that they can use the opportunity for a quick talk.
Vimal: I promise I’ll not open up about our relationship in front of her. I’ll talk to you privately for five minutes only. I need to look into your eyes when we talk, after which we shall split ways.
Sukanya did not respond. She walked to the mirror and looked at herself. She looked gorgeous despite no make-up. She deliberately decided to appear simple, but she couldn’t avoid being beautiful. She picked the flat keys along her handbag and walked towards the door. As she held the door knob, she suddenly halted. She was tempted to drop the plan. She contemplated for a few seconds. Then with a sense of determination, she took a deep breath and decisively turned the knob and opened the door.
 
Meena was standing in the parking lot beside her car. She had handed over Rohan to Mrs. Nair and requested her to take care of him until she return. She leaned on the car and cursed herself for being the root cause of all the problems. If she had not fallen in Vimal’s trap, all these problems would not have arisen; if she had not been Sukanya’s friend; if she did not agree to help Vimal; if she had sorted the issues with her mother-in-law; if she had a moral support. The cunning bastard had convinced Sukanya to invite her for a dinner and made her believe she had manipulated Meena. She recalled her conversation with her mother-in-law.
Meena: I have done many mistakes. I don’t deserve forgiveness. Please don’t forgive me.
Mother-in-law: Don’t talk like that Chellam. I blame myself for all your suffering. I had put you in this situation. If I had not been so cruel to you, you wouldn’t have been in such a situation.
Meena: No, please don’t say that amma.
As soon as Meena called her ‘amma’, she began to cry.
Mother-in-law: I really wish to hear you call me amma. When you call me like that, I feel like my son forgave me. Please call me once again.
Meena: Ammmmaaaa (She wept, so did her mother-in-law)
Mother-in-law: Please come to me dear. I don’t care whatever mess you are in. I’ll stand with you. We’ll fight it together.
Meena felt as if the dark clouds that were hovering around her were blown away in just one blow. She felt a sense of confidence with her words. She became brave.
Meena: Give me just one day amma. I’ll come to you forever.
After a short pause.
Meena: If something happens to me, please take care of Rohan.
Mother-in-law: Don’t say that. You stay where you are, I’m coming to you.
Meena: Please trust me amma. I have to do this alone. I promise I’ll come to you.
Mother-in-law: I trust you dear. Be careful.
Meena suddenly didn’t fear for Rohan. If she had this confidence earlier, she would have broke Vimal’s balls when he first tried to exploit her. But right now, Sukanya’s life is at stake. She had to be careful. Her thoughts were disturbed by the sound of Sukanya’s anklets. Meena turned towards her and she was tunned at how beautiful she looked despite no makeup. She wore a simple black cotton saree with a red border and a red blouse. She had a simple hanging earring and a small bindi. She had her hair tied in a pony tail. It looked like she cared little about getting ready. She admired her resolve to put an end to this, but she also feared the evil nature of Vimal. She was ready to do whatever in her power to foil the plan. She has an accomplice.
As Sukanya approached her, Meena smiled at her and opened her arms to embrace her. She then opened the car door. She started the car and drove out of the parking onto the road. As she entered the road a bike started to follow her car. Meena noticed the bike following her. She ensured that she had a track on the follower and maintained a reachable distance. As she kept driving, she tried to keep Sukanya engaged.
Meena: It is good to meet occasionally and go out with friends. Isn’t it?
When she mentioned the word ‘friends’ she wondered if she really deserved to be called one.
Sukanya: Yes (She gave a succinct reply with a customary smile.)
Meena was finding it difficult to think. She inconspicuously dropped her down.
Meena: I have left Rohan with Nair aunty. I hope he is not troubling the poor couple. I need to check if he is doing fine.
She acted like she was searching for her phone.
Meena: Can you please give me your phone? I’ll check where my phone is.
Sukanya picked her phone from her handbag, unlocked her it and gave it to Meena who took the phone from her. She quickly opened the WhatsApp and send herself live location from Sukanya’s phone and then deleted the message. She the quickly dialed her number. The phone began ringing from near her feet. She picked her phone while she disconnected the phone.
Meena: I just dropped it right here. Thanks.
She returned the phone to Sukanya, but she seemed to have lost in thoughts. Meena knew the reason. She took the phone and put it back in her handbag. They reached the destination in a few minutes. She parked the car and they both walked into the café. She picked isolated corner seats and ordered two coffees. As they waited for the coffee, she initiated the conversation.
Meena: You might be wondering why I have invited you here.
Sukanya gave a questioning look.
Meena: Well. I need to discuss something private.
She narrated her whole family background and her conversation with her mother-in-law. As she narrated her the events, she had tears in her eyes which was genuine. Sukanya tried to console her.
Meena: I wanted you to know everything as you are my friend. I also wanted to discuss many more things with you.
Just then the waiter arrived with their coffee and placed them on their table. Just as he left, one person walked towards their corner aiming for the bookshelf behind them. As he was walking past them, he tripped on Sukanya’s seat but just saved a fall in the nick of time.
Sukanya: Careful. Hope you are fine.
As Sukanya looked at him and made sure he was fine, the person supported his hand on the desk and in a quick second dropped a pill in Sukanya’s coffee.
The person: I’m fine thank you. Sorry for troubling you.
He steadied himself and walked away. Meena looked at him with wide eyes. The person winked at Meena as he walked away. She remembered him. As she was trying to comprehend the situation, Sukanya had a sip from the coffee.
Sukanya: I’m sorry Meena. I know how hard life has been with you. Don’t worry, trouble are only temporary. You shall pass through. I’m always with you.
She felt comforted with her reassurance, but also felt guilty for misusing her trust. They both continued having their coffee while Meena searched for the guy and found him sitting adjacently a few seats away from them. She remembered him. His name was John. He was a friend of Vimal and part of the evil gang who have violated her femininity. He was a despo dog. She remembered how desperate he was to push his dick into her. He pushed away the other guy who was in line and he jumped on Meena. He was a beast who only cared about is pleasure. Everyone from the gang was the same, but this one is a pig. Even his gang members are disgusted with him that they put him last on the list. He was meddling with his phone.
Sukanya: Are you listening?
Meena shifted her focus to Sukanya. She was suddenly terrified of the consequence of her act.
Meanwhile John was typing something on his WhatsApp.
John: Wow man! This is an angel. A jackpot. An exquisite item. I can’t wait laying my hands on her naked beauty today.
Response: Hold your horses and don’t spoil the plan.
John: I promise I’ll behave. But I need her today. You can forget about the 8 lakhs loan you took from me. Just one chance.
Response: Just hold.
He put the phone down with a smile. He drifted into imagination of his wild encounter with the ethereal beauty. He mentally prepared himself to the divine experience. Without his knowledge, he was rubbing his dick while he imagined all the things. Meena looked at him disgustfully and incidentally his eyes met hers. He gave a naughty smile and pointed to his dick. She turned away.
Meena: Look my dear. I can’t explain everything. But can we leave now. We shall meet again another day.
Sukanya: Why? What happened?
Meena: I don’t know. I’m not feeling well.
Sukanya: Oh really? Can we go to the doctor?
She said, but she was herself feeling somewhat dizzy and felt hot blood rush through her veins.
Meena: No. Let’s first go home. We’ll think about it later.
She saw that Sukanya was swallowing saliva and was feeling restless. She had an inkling of some foul play.
Meena: Come on. Let’s go.
She said and stood up and just then she crashed onto John again who came to return the book at the book shelf. He spilled the coffee he had in his hand all over her.
John: Oh! I’m so sorry.
He picked his hand kerchief and tried to clean it on her shoulder. Meena was facing away from Sukanya and John, without a warning, held Meena’s right boob and squeezed it hard. Meena pushed his hand rudely and glared at him.
Meena: Get lost.
She shouted and turned towards Sukanya.
Meena: Let’s go.
Sukanya: Look, your saree got fully stained. And you got hot coffee spilled. Get yourself cleaned.
Meena half-heartedly began walking towards the washroom, still staring at John, who gave a dirty grin.
Meena: I’ll just be back in a minute.
Sukanya nodded and took her seat, but her pupil got dilated and she felt her blood was boiling. She continued to sip the coffee and unknowingly closed her legs tightly together and began rubbing each other. She bent her head and half closed her eyes. She felt her throat dry. She took another sip from the coffee. John smiled with the effect and slowly walked towards the washroom. Just then Vimal walked into the café and went straight to Sukanya with a subdued smile.
Vimal: Thank you for coming.
Sukanya: See Vimal… (She raised her finger)
Vimal: (Cutting her in middle) Before you say anything I want to apologize for my behavior.
He held her hands and bowed down to apologize. She kept silent. He gradually increased his pressure on her hands and her grip became loose. He understood that his plan was working. Suddenly she yanked her hands off.
Sukanya: What are you doing? Now leave. Meena may come anytime.
Vimal: If she comes, we can see her from here. We can have a casual conversation. It’s not going to hurt.
Sukanya: Tell me.
Vimal: Before I speak, please tell me you have forgiven me.
Sukanya did not respond. Without a warning Vimal bend down and held her leg and asked for her forgiveness.
Vimal: Please forgive me. I shouldn’t have done what I did. It’s a big mistake, but I promise I won’t do it again.
Sukanya: Get up. What are you doing?
Vimal refused to leave her leg, but at the same time he applied some pressure on her calves. Sukanya gave up the resistance. He kept gently pleading, but then he started to slowly rub her calf which generated a lot of heat in her body. She started to swallow her saliva. Vimal detected her change and smiled to himself.
Sukanya: Ge… Get up now.
She slightly stammered. Vimal placed his hand on the table and got up. While he did that his hand slipped and fell on her thigh. Sukanya was already in vulnerable situation and his touches are making her situation worse. She took a deep sigh and held his hand. She slightly squeezed before she pushed his hand away.
Vimal: Sorry, the table is wet and my hand slipped.
Sukanya: I forgive you. You please leave now.
She said and had a sip of coffee from her cup.
Vimal: I have one request for you. One final one.
Meanwhile in the washroom John had intercepted Meena and tried to take advantage of her. He stood beside her and stared at her as she washed the coffee stains off her. As she held water in her palm and splashed it on her saree at her chest area, he gave a lustful moan. She stopped for a second and glared at him without turning towards him, and then again started cleaning the stains.
John: Do you remember the sweet moments we spent together?
Meena did not reply and continue to do her cleaning. Suddenly john put his hand on Meena’s left boob and rubbed it as if he was helping her clean the stains. Meena pushed his hand away and he laughed as he did not push onto him. She quickly done with the cleaning and was about to leave. He blocked her was and drooled.
Meena: Get out of my way.
John: Give me a kiss and I will go.
Meena: I said just get out of my way.
John: Are you feeling shy baby?
Saying this he hugged her tightly and sealed her lips not allowing her to make noise. He kissed her lips like a beast and pressed her boobs roughly. She tried to push him, but he did not allow. As the struggle happened, he got an alert on his phone. He left her and picked the mobile from his pocket. Meena used the opportunity and escaped from his grip. As she went to the table they were seated, she saw that Sukanya was missing. She ran to the table breathlessly and saw a tissue paper, with a message written by her lipstick.
‘Got to go dear. Will call you.’
As she picked the tissue paper, she saw a naughty devil emoji with her lipstick. She immediately thought of making a call, but her handbag was missing. She was unable to make the call, nor she could make the bill payment. She understood that Vimal has started his game.
She walked to the nearby table to borrow a phone from a guy and quickly made a call. She sadly went back to her table and sat down holding her head. Her efforts to save Sukanya turned futile.
 
Vimal took Sukanya on his bike claiming to take her to his college as he said that his college principal wanted to talk to someone in his family and he is going to introduce her as his anni (Bhabhi).
Vimal: Please understand. If I don’t get this sorted, I shall be rusticated from the college as I extremely very poor attendance.
Sukanya: Why don’t you take your parents, or your brothers?
Vimal: My parents would kill me if they come to know. And my brothers are not in town. You are my only hope.
Vimal: You do me this help and I shall not even walk in your path. Please I swear.
She understood his situation, but she was not able to put the pieces of information together to process the situation. She agreed to help him. As they started without informing Meena, she suddenly realized that she had abandoned her. She asked him to stop the bike.
Sukanya: I really don’t like leaving Meena like that.
Vimal: Me too, but it’s better she doesn’t know all this.
Sukanya: But won’t she be annoyed that we left without telling her?
Vimal: We put a message on the table. She will understand.
Sukanya: We could have easily told her in person.
Vimal: Alright, if you feel that you should tell her in person, call her.
Vimal stopped the bike and allowed Sukanya to make a call. She picked her phone and dialed Meena’s number. As Vimal had preplanned the call went unanswered. She tried again, but it still went unanswered, but got a message saying, ‘I’m driving dear. Will call you back in sometime.’
Sukanya read the message and put the phone in her handbag. She felty edgy, but she was not in a stable mind to make a decision. Vimal would not let her delve in her thoughts. He was careful in avoiding her time to think.
Vimal: Let’s go. We’re getting late.
She gave up thinking as her mind was clouded. Vimal rode the bike steadily, while also looking at Sukanya through the rear mirror. He observed her facial expressions. As they rode for a distance, they saw the road being blocked by a bridge damage.
Vimal: Oh shit. The road is blocked. Looks like the bridge collapsed. We need to take a short route.
It was a small bridge of twenty feet which was placed above a narrow channel. But the bridge was broken more than a week ago. Since Sukanya was not aware of the city geography and routes, he decided to exploit this opportunity. He wanted to take her though a rough road and he couldn’t do it without a genuine excuse. Now he has. Now he took a diversion into an offbeat road. The road was so rough and he gleefully applied brakes at his will and Sukanya could not complain. She had to hug him tight to avoid a fall. As she hugged him, her body temperature raised. Every time he applied brake, her boobs crushed on his back. He observed her expressions which turned slightly horny. He was playing his game well. He increased his speed and the frequency of the brakes. Every time she bumped onto him, her grip on his shoulder tightened. It was not a reflex out of fear but lust. He decided it was time. As he rode the bike, he turned off the fuel knob and kept driving. After a short distance his bike stopped moving. The bike stopped, but Sukanya was still hugging him. He smiled to himself. He waited for her to understand the situation, because he enjoyed her tight hug. She had her eyes closed and her hands clutched his shoulders. After a few moments, she opened her eyes and quickly removed her hands.
Sukanya: Wh… What happened?
Vimal: The bike stopped working.
Sukanya: What? We are stuck in the middle of nowhere.
Vimal: Don’t worry, there is a friend’s farmhouse nearby. We can borrow his vehicle and go.
Sukanya: Please do it fast. I feel scared.
Vimal: Don’t worry dear. I’m with you.
Sukanya did not notice him calling her dear and he knew that. She’s totally in his spell now. She was putting up a brave fight to the sexual urges stimulated by the drug she was administered to her, but we don’t know how long it will hold up. Vimal had already set things up at the farm house. The location of the farmhouse was extremely beautiful with Gulmohar tress scattered all over the place and multi-colored flowers adorned the landscape. The melody of the cuckoos added to the appeal.
The scenic pleasant atmosphere is a mere façade for a deadly conspiracy. Innocently Sukanya followed Vimal, but she did not know what’s in store for her. She was walking into a trap. Vimal held her hand and walked victoriously towards the place that is bound to change their fates.
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