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Eager to see Vimal implementing his plans successfully, Trap Sukanya then give her such a pleasure that she forgets her husband and enjoy sex without thinking of consequences, Make her a concubine of him and share with his friends.
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That's a great update bro
The game is very interesting
what is going to happen in the story is all in 5 day's period of her husband returns
Keep rocking like this
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May be my comment will make you angry Rahul. I can request only one think. Please make minimum Justice to victims in this story. Sukanya one of victim here because vimal is not innocent. He become villain for this story. Because personally i like the charactor of sukanya. Her guilty concious is the main culprit to make her adultery. yes she is intrested in exhibitionism and teasing too. But main culprit is guilty. Rahul bro, its ur story, ur the captain, again as a reader, please consider the minimum justice.
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Umm....the characterization of Vimal has taken a sudden u-turn....from a late-teen / early-twenties, unsure college lad, economically dependent, who has a family and reputation to protect, into a scheming hardened criminal, who probably has blackmailed a young widow into submission and debauchery......quite unbelievable and unrealistic if you ask me.
It is the author's call at the end and I respect his thoughts and creation.....however, in my mind, this single character assassination has brought down this story to the level of, "just one among the many" that's there in this forum.
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what happened..???
how vimal and meena in action and meena got to know about vimal and sukayas relationship...
did i miss anything after fight in the kitchen..????
it is ceating so much confusion...
your girl is not your property!.. why do you stop your girl from sitting on my lap facing me and getting lost looking deep in to my eyes... FREE HER..Right Now..
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Just two things, i may have difference of opnion in how this story turned out.
I appreciate #Rahulishere commitment to the story, somehow he is managing to take the story forward. Finish, what you have started. #All the best.
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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Awesome plot and narration. Waiting for next update. Author Saab, pls post the next episodes