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06-06-2024, 12:11 AM
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Nice update bro.
Now I understood why it's husband mistake. He will not listen what sukanya wanted to say but gives some answer which will lead her to different path.
But what happens between sukanya and vimal between them only. Don't reveal to others.
Sukanya become nude while video call is erotic bro. Add these type of scenes also. Let sukanya completes all her fantasies with vimal but in limit and not exposing to whole world.
Fantasies are of raghav and implementation with vimal.
Waiting for next adventures
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Raghav can easily contest for the 'most stupid & idiotic husband' title....
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(06-06-2024, 04:48 PM)Pundit77 Wrote: Raghav can easily contest for the 'most stupid & idiotic husband' title....
haha, same applicable for Sukanya also..
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Superb update please continue soon....
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Hi Rahul, start with giving responses to the comments.
Weekends are near.
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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good,,,,,,waiting for next
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07-06-2024, 10:32 PM
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-Pickup, drop, escape.
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Does sukanya love her husband still? Interesting turns.
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Waiting for weekend update bro.
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This story is very interesting there is something in this story that makes it to read again and again May be I think the thrill of cheating by Sukanya may not be in full scale but Poor Raghav don't know that his wife Sukanya giving blowjob and getting her boobs sucked regularly by Vimal adds to the excitement in reading the story.
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(04-06-2024, 04:11 PM)Abhi T Wrote: Nice update keep going bro bus agla update thoda jaldi Dene ki koshish Karna please
Thank you bro. I'm trying my best. Just that I'm busy at office.
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(04-06-2024, 05:04 PM)me.you Wrote: Bro, i can say only one think. Dont degrade the sukanya charactor. She is not dump , bz she is thinking Raghav is encouraging her to make afffair with Rahul. Thats what she is thinking?? Then she is an dump person. Pls dont make her like that. Lets continue her as bossy
I respect your opinion bro.
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(04-06-2024, 07:07 PM)3sivaram Wrote: The day he came back. Raghav saw completely transformed bitch sukanya, files divorce and took half of his money, and enjoy with lovers.
We never know what the future holds bro.
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(04-06-2024, 08:37 PM)Dhanapal Wrote: There should be conflict in her mind about faithfulness to her husband abd infidelity and finally she choosing infidelity will be great.
Of course bro. But she also has some unfulfilled wishes. She might not have thought about it if her husband didn't encourage.
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(04-06-2024, 09:33 PM)xavierrxx Wrote: Super update
Thanks dude
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(04-06-2024, 11:19 PM)Muralimm Wrote: Ultimate story telling bro
Working on this type of story telling is appreciated
Keep rocking like this
Thank you so much bro
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(05-06-2024, 12:45 AM)wackthu Wrote: Nice to see frequent updates but I feel the story digressing a lot away from the original theme. The games with the husband, teasing etc. were the highlights. Seems to be like the story is quickly devolving into a love story, which if it leads to something more isn't bad but I don't see any signs leading to that..great effort nonetheless.
I appreciate your feedback, but this is not what it looks to you.
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(05-06-2024, 01:23 AM)redarc Wrote: wow, amazing update, let it be vimal on the door, and want to take her on shopping and a lunch date, i wish vimal take suk in a sexy dress in her home so great update... so sexy thanks for the update bro, keep raising our expectations haha
Thank you for your ideas bro.
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(05-06-2024, 02:55 AM)Hornytamilan23 Wrote: Hi Rahul,
First of all you are among few authors who is really committed to the story. With regular updates and through responses you are winning hearts. Keep it up bro.
Initially thought of waiting till next update, as Sukanya is going to open the door, without knowing what will happen next I should not comment.
But few things I have to share, your best updates are meena and Sharat's play before Sukanya, then the first theater blowjob with a stranger, ragavhan sending Sukanya to terrace with bedsheet, and raghavan exhibiting Sukanya unknowingly to Vimal at the balcony. In all these incidents Either Raghavan or meena were present, so dont sideline them.
Also I agree with @wackthu @me.you and @dhanapal. They have a point. But if you continue with husband out of town and Vimal saga, by few calls to ragahavan Sukanya will elope with Vimal. Or ragahavan will witness Vimal banging Sukanya at her marital bed. And what @3sivaram said will happen.
You developed this story in such a way that it has scope to evolve into something bigger, don't stick to Vimal, I know he is your favourite.
You are the captain of the ship, you know better than us, your decision is final. Waiting for next update.
Appreciate your inputs bro. I wish I had more time, but unfortunately I have very less time to write. I still try to use every spare minute. Just believe that this is not a routine adultery love story.
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