Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.

[drlund]

Very good narration

[xboard1986]

Wonderful

[neelchaand]

Hat's off to the author for creating such an outstanding erotica plot for the story.
Always keeping some sense of dignity and reluctance in Shipra who would be eventually blackmailed into forced sex and become a forced whore along with her friend Namrata for the village's low-class but influential people would spice up the story and would take the story to the next level of all time best erotica.

[Suraj76626]

Chapter 9: The 9 inch Magic Wand: Part 1

It was way past midnight, but Alok laid wide awake in his bed. His mind kept replaying the steamy moments he had shared with Shipra. He could feel the tantalizing scent of her perfume still lingering in his nostrils, the heat of her body against his and the thrill of her submission. If only he had had ten more minutes, he could have had that slutty MILF naked, squirming beneath him as he drove his cock into her wet, willing cunt. Every time he closed his eyes he could taste her tantalizing rosy lips, feel the softness of her juicy breasts squeezed by his palms. The memory of her fleshy, round buttocks, the way they had fit perfectly in his hands and the warm sensation that his cock felt as it rubbed between her legs against her sex sent shivers of lust coursing through him.

Frustrated he cursed Namrata and Patode for for ruining what could have been the best fuck of his life. As he lay there, unable to shake off the vivid memories, a thought struck him. He hadn't heard any noise or movement outside that would suggest that Patode had left. A prickle of suspicion crept over him, mingling with his arousal and frustration. Determined to find out what was going on, Alok slipped out of bed and moved silently towards the first floor.

It was around 1:30 AM when he quietly ascended to the first floor. As he reached the top he witnessed an empty courtyard littered with beer bottles and cans.  His eyes scanned the scene, settling on a pair of shoes carelessly discarded in the sitting area. They belonged to Patode, which confirmed his suspicion about him not leaving. He stood there for a moment trying to consider the implications of Patode spending the night. His dirty mind started weaving scenerios of a possible threesome. His imagination ran wild, painting a picture of Namrata and Shipra, their naked bodies intertwined on bed, moaning and gasping as Patode fucked them one by one. The mere thought of the two women, naked and writhing in pleasure, quickened his pulse, and his cock twitched wildly at these vulgar thoughts. He figured that Patode must be in the room of one of these two bitches.

He slowly tiptoed his way to Shipra's room, his heart pounding with a mix of anticipation, arrousal and anxiety. The encounter earlier in the day had stirred something deep within him, a desire for Shipra that burned with an intensity he hadn't felt before. He wanted her exclusively for himself.  The thought of anyone else touching her, enjoying her curvy body, was unbearable. He needed to confirm that Shipra was alone, that she belonged to him. The mere possibility of Patode being inside filled him with a possessive jealousy. As he approached her door, he paused, trying to hear any sounds from within. The room was silent, broken only by the gentle continuous hum of the ceiling fan circulating above.

With a deep breath, he reached out to grasp the doorknob. To his delight the door was not locked, he gently twisted the knob trying to suppress any sound. He pushed it open slowly, the hinges barely making a sound, careful not to disturb the silence of the night. As he stepped into the room, the faint light from the window cast a soft glow, revealing Shipra's silhouette on the bed. His eyes adjusted to the dimness, and he felt an overwhelming sense of relief wash over him at the sight of her alone. He inched closer, his movements cautious and deliberate, wanting to get a clearer view without waking her.He made sure to pull the door shut behind him, leaving it slightly ajar—a precaution in case he needed to make a quick escape.

Stepping into the room with a soft steps, he found himself in the same spot where he had stood just yesterday. The memories of their passionate encounter from the evening flooded his mind, filling his eyes with lust. Sleeping on her left side, Shipra's thighs were parted wide, revealing the intimate area between her legs. Her right leg, bent at the knee, formed a perfect 90-degree angle with her straight left leg, causing her shapely buttocks to jut out. This posture emphasized the enticing natural curves of her body, highlighting the gentle arch of her lower back and the soft, inviting swell of her hips. 

To his surprise, Shipra was no longer wearing the kurti she had on earlier in the evening. Instead, she was dressed in Namrata's pink top. The sight was unexpected and intriguing. Alok's mind raced with questions: When had she changed? And why she only changed the top not her leggings which she still wore?. A tantalizing thought crossed his mind: was she wearing a bra beneath that borrowed top? With deliberate slowness, he lifted the hem of her top, revealing her smooth, silky back. His breath caught in his throat as his suspicions were confirmed she wasn't wearing a bra. The sight of her bare skin, and her soft side boobs so inviting and exposed, sent a wave of lust crashing over him. 

Alok's heart pounded as he savored the moment, the soft curves of her body igniting his senses. lgnoring the questions and doubts that lingered in his mind, Alok let his hands glide over her silky smooth back. His hands traveled further south, caressing her delicate skin. When he reached her hips, he paused to feel the softness of her supple ass. He softly squeezed her fleshy cheeks through the flimsy fabric, taking his time to enjoy the sensation. The sheer intimacy of the moment sent a rush of adrenaline through him. He glanced at her face, noticing she was deep in slumber, her breathing even and peaceful. Encouraged by her lack of reaction, Alok decided to make bolder moves. He gently slipped his hands inside her leggings, sliding them under her panties from behind. His fingers traced the warm crevices of her butt crack, exploring the intimate territory with a sense of forbidden thrill. His middle finger inched towards her love hole, and he felt the heat radiating from between her legs. The warmth and the wetness drove him wild with desire. Within seconds, he had his finger deep inside her cunt, feeling the slickness of her arousal. The realization that she was so wet, so ready, made his heart race even faster. As he moved his finger inside her, feeling her walls contract around him, Shipra's body involuntary reacted as a soft moan left her mouth. He withdrew his hand not wanting her to wake up, his finger glistening with her love juices. Bringing his hand to his face, he sniffed his fingers, the musky scent of her sex filling his senses. The intoxicating aroma almost made him cum in his pants.

"What a fucking slut," Alok muttered to himself, his voice a mix of arousal and contempt. "Her cunt keeps leaking even in her sleep."  His eyes were fixed on Shipra with a predatory intensity, his body aching with the desperate need to fuck her. The anticipation was almost unbearable, and he knew he couldn't wait any longer. His hands trembled with excitement as he slid his boxers down, freeing his painfully erect cock.

Just as he was about to make his move, a sudden noise from outside shattered the silence. His heart leapt into his throat, and a surge of panic coursed through him. He couldn't afford to get caught, not now, not like this. Thinking quickly, Alok grabbed his boxers and dove for cover, sliding under Shipra's bed. He pressed himself flat against the cold floor, his pulse pounding in his ears. Holding his breath, he listened intently to the sounds outside. He heard footsteps approaching the room. His mind raced as he tried to process what was happening. The footsteps grew louder, and he could see the shadows moving under the door. The knob turned slowly, and the door open slowly. Alok's heart pounded in his chest as he strained to see who it was. In the faint light filtering through the curtains, Alok's eyes widened in shock as he realized it was Patode standing in Shipra's room. What made it even more unsettling was that Patode was stark naked, his muscular form glistening with sweat and his breath was ragged. Alok slid a little further under the bed to get a better look.

Patode remained at the same spot where Alok stood moments ago, his imposing figure dominating the room. In his hand, he held something that Alok couldn't quite make out in the dim light. He was rubbing his abnormally large cock with it furiously. He was staring at Shipra's body and was murmuring something in his slurried voice. Alok carefully tried to listened to his words.

"Almost had you today, Manager sahiba," Patode muttered, his voice thick with a vile mixture of desire and arrogance. "You shed your bra today for me. Next time, you'll drop your panties and beg me to fuck your married cunt." He tossed Shipra's bra aside, the delicate fabric landing perilously close to Alok's face as he moved closer to Shipra's potruding butt.

Seeing Shipra's dark blue bra in front of him  Alok's heart raced, his mind a whirlwind of disbelief and anger. Alok's mind struggled to comprehend the situation. How had Patode gotten hold of Shipra's bra? What did he mean by 'almost had you today'? And why was he standing there naked, sweat glistening on his muscular body? Alok's thoughts raced as he tried to piece together the events of the night. Had there been an encounter between Patode, Shipra, and Namrata that he was unaware of? The questions swirled in his mind, each more unsettling than the last. He couldn't fathom the sequence of events that had led to this moment, but the implications were clear: something sexual has transpired between the three of them  in a way that made his blood boil with jealousy and rage.

Just then, to Alok's surprise, Namrata appeared at the door, her silhouette stark against the dim light. She wore Patode's shirt, its buttons all undone, revealing her naked body beneath. The fabric parted with each step, and the faint light from the outside illuminated the space between her thighs, casting a tantalizing outline of her engorged, wet pussy lips. Her posture was casual, almost relaxed, but her eyes were fixed intently on Patode's naked frame."She is not going to fall for your cock, Patode. She is happily married and faithful to her husband," Namrata said, her voice dripping with disdain. She took another step into the room, the shirt fluttering open further, revealing more of her curves.

"I almost had her today," he retorted, a twisted grin playing on his lips. "The way she stared at my dick, I know she wants it badly." Patode's grin widened as he rubbed his cock between Shipra's parted thighs.

Namrata moved closer, her hips swaying slightly, her presence both commanding and provocative. "You’re delusional, Patode. Just because she looked doesn’t mean she’ll give in. She was intoxicated, don't expect anything even close to that in future from her. You just got lucky." she said with a little smile, her voice a mix of challenge and derision.

"We'll see about that," Patode said with a cunning smile, his gaze shifting to Namrata. "And what about you, Namrata? It seems my nine-inch wand has cast a spell on you. You can't get enough of it, can you?" he teased, his voice dripping with arrogance and lust. In one swift motion, Patode gripped Namrata by the waist and pulled her towards him. The open shirt fluttered as their bodies collided, and his thick, rigid cock slid between her thighs, rubbing against her naked sex. The friction elicited a gasp from Namrata, her eyes widening in a mix of surprise and pleasure.

"Well, unlike Shipra, I take what I want. I don't kill my desires and wishes just to satisfy my self-righteousness and societal norms," Namrata spoke, her eyes fixed on the thick meat between her thighs. The sight of Patode's erection, glistening with anticipation, made her breath catch in her throat. "And right now, what I want is to get rammed by this thick, long dick of yours once more," she continued, her voice heavy with lust. She bit her lower lip seductively as she reached down to grab Patode's cock, her fingers curling around its impressive girth.

Patode's eyes gleamed with satisfaction as he felt her grip tighten. "But we are out of condoms," he said, his tone teasing as he sought to tempt her resolve. Shifting his hands from her waist to her ass, he gave her cheeks a tight squeeze before parting them giving a direct view of both of her holes to Alok who desperately trying to control his urge to stroke his cock. "We can try the backdoor entry if you like," Patode suggested cunningly, his finger tracing the sensitive rim of her puckered hole. 

The touch sent a jolt through Namrata, making her squirm with a mix of discomfort and illicit thrill. Namrata's reaction was immediate. She pushed Patode gently, stepping out of his embrace. "No chance, Milind ji. I don't think I can take that monster in my ass," she flatly rejected, her voice firm but breathless from the arousal coursing through her veins. Patode's expression shifted to one of playful disappointment, but his eyes still burned with desire. "Although," Namrata continued, her tone turning horny and desperate, "if you promise to cum outside, I'll let you go bareback."  She winked at him, her eyes filled with mischief, as she made her way to her room, signaling for him to follow her.

Patode's grin widened at her words as he watched the mix of desperation and lust on Namrata's face. He had seen that expression countless times in numerous women he had bedded. Women like Namrata, who had experienced his prowess in bed, his stamina, his techniques, and most of all, his nine-inch cock, often became addicted to him. The heights of pleasure he gave them, with the innumerable orgasms they experienced, left them completely surrendered to him. The same was happening to Namrata.

Although she had her fair share of experience with men, the pleasure Patode had given her over the last hour and a half of non-stop fucking was an eye-opener. She had never known such intense, unrelenting ecstasy. Her body craved more, and now, she was desperate to fill her twitching fanny with his cock again.

Patode gave a final look to Shipra and left the room following Namrata. Alok laid below the bed in a mix of emotions with the events he just encountered. He was not only shocked and frightened but also was very aroused. He waited a few minutes and slowly rose from below the bed. He was furious at Patode and his vile wishes to defile Shipra. He slowly made his way out towards Namrata's room grabbing Shipra's bra along with him.

Alok got near the room and through the window he cautiously peeped inside. Inside the room the scene had turned erotic. Namrata now completely naked had  positioned herself on the bed on all fours, her knees sinking into the mattress and her upper frame supported by her elbows as she presented herself to Patode. Alok had a clear sight of her bare, glistening sex, exposed and ready, sending a surge of heat through him.  Patode stepped closer, his eyes locked on the inviting view. He  moved behind her, his cock throbbing with anticipation, "Are you ready?" he asked Namrata slowly rubbing his cock between her wet glistening folds, a testament to her arousal. 

"Yes, please don tease me, just ram it in," Namrata desperately called out.

Patode pleased with her submission gripped her hips, positioning himself at her entrance. Namrata let out a soft moan as she felt the head of his cock press against her, the sensation sending shivers of excitement through her body. With a slow, deliberate thrust, Patode entered her, his thick cock stretching her walls as he buried himself deep inside her. 

Namrata gasped, her fingers digging into the sheets as she adjusted to his size. "Oh god, Oh fuck, Mmmmmm. Uh, fuck....fuck....oh right there....fuck.....that's it....give it to me Patode!" Namrata screamed as every nerve of her body was washed with pleasure. The feeling of being filled so completely sent waves of pleasure through her, and she began to move her hips, matching his rhythm. 

Patode set a steady, relentless pace, each thrust driving Namrata closer to the edge. "You are loving it don't you? I don't think you had such a mind blowing orgasm before. You boyfriends have not stretched you enough you are still very tight." Patode boasted as his increased his tempo. Namrata's swollen breasts swayed rhythmically with each powerful thrust, their movement accentuating the intensity of the moment. Every pump sent them undulating back and forth. Her nipples, hard and sensitive, brushed against the cool sheets beneath her, each contact sending shivers of pleasure through her body. Patode's hands roamed over her body, caressing her back, squeezing her ass, and teasing her nipples.

Namrata's response was almost immediate, her voice breathless and filled with ecstasy. "Yesssss... I am loving it... please don't stop... Keep going," she hollered, her voice echoing through the room. She matched his rhythm, thrust for thrust, her body reacting instinctively to the intense pleasure coursing through her. Her eyes rolled back in her head as a powerful orgasm washed over her. As she reached her climax, her hips thrust back with even more vigor, meeting Patode's relentless tempo. Her orgasm hit her like a wave, her entire body convulsing with pleasure. Her arms gave out, and her upper body slumped into the bed, arching her hips further and giving Patode deeper access.

Patode reveled in the control he held over her, his growl low and feral. "Cum for me, bitch, cum on my nine-inch dick," he commanded, his grip on one of her ass cheeks tightening while he raised the other hand up giving a tight spank on the other ass cheek.

"Ahhhhhhhh...... fuck!!!!," Namrata moaned, the pleasure and pain together taking her over the edge. She came again for the nth time that night, it felt as though she'd reached a new point of sexual delight with Patode's cock buried deep inside of her. Namrata held her breath as his giant organ continued to drill her, it felt like every part of her body was on fire as a monumental orgasm continued to rock her body.

Alok's hand involuntarily slipped inside his boxers, his fingers wrapping around his manhood as he watched the raw, erotic scene unfolding before him. The intensity of the moment, the sounds of their passion, and the sight of Namrata's body moving in sync with Patode's thrusts overwhelmed his senses.

Namrata finally let out a shuddering breath as her orgasm subsided, her body trembling with the aftershocks of pleasure. Patode was far from being done as his cock snaked out of her, the sudden emptiness made her gasp. Before she could fully recover, he pushed her down into the bed, pushing her onto her stomach. Now lying prone, Namrata felt the cool sheets against her flushed skin, a brief and stark contrast to the heat of their intense encounter. Her body, exhausted and overwhelmed, began to relax into the soft mattress. But Patode was relentless, giving her no chance to recover. Swiftly he climbed on top of her, pinning her down with his weight. His knees pressed firmly on either side of her thighs, his crotch resting heavily on her well-rounded buttocks. He slowly slipped his cock between her ass crack inching towards her pussy. Her mouth fell open in a silent gasp as she felt his erection pressing against her entrance once more, a promise of the relentless pleasure to come.

Patode leaned over her, his chest brushing against her back as he whispered into her ear, "I’m not done with you yet. You belong to me tonight." His voice was a mix of command and dark promise. With a swift, powerful motion, he re-entered her, eliciting a sharp moan from Namrata.

"Ohhh.. God!!!!," her scream echoed in the room. Namrata's body responded instinctively, her hips lifting to meet his rhythm. She was completely at his mercy, the sensations overwhelming her. Each thrust drove her closer to the edge, the pressure building within her once more. Patode's grip tightened on her hips, his pace quickening, each movement precise and powerful.

The sound of their flesh slapping together filled the room. Namrata's moans grew louder, her body writhing with pleasure as she lost herself in the sensation. Patode's stamina was unmatched, and he maintained his powerful rhythm, driving her wild with every stroke.  

As Namrata felt another climax approaching, her entire being focused on the release she so desperately craved. Patode, sensing her imminent orgasm, abruptly halted his thrusts. The sudden pause left her gasping in frustration, her body aching for completion.

"Nugghhhhh..." she moaned, the sound filled with desperate need.

"You want me to continue, bitch?" Patode growled, his voice dark and commanding.

"Yes... Yes.. fuck me.. please," Namrata begged, her body craving the release that only he could provide. An evil grin spread across Patode's face, satisfaction gleaming in his eyes. He knew he had her completely addicted, her desire now under his control.

 "Will you help me get Shipra?" he asked, his question laden with immorality. Namrata remained silent for a moment, her mind struggling to comprehend the situation as she was lost in her pleasure. Patode, sensing her hesitation, began to slowly pull out his cock, the motion making her squirm in frustration.

"Okay... I'll do it... I'll do anything... just let me cum," Namrata finally surrendered, her voice filled with desperation as she gave in to her desires.

"That's my girl," Patode overjoyed with her response resumed his powerful thrusts, each one driving her closer to the edge once more. Namrata's moans filled the room as she succumbed to the overwhelming sensations, her body moving in perfect sync with his. 

"God, you're so BIG... ugh... your cock is so DEEP in my pussy! Fuck me harder... faster," Namrata cried out, her incoherent pleas spurring Patode to increase his pace. He pummeled into her with renewed vigor, each thrust more intense than the last. Grabbing a handful of her hair, he pulled her head back, forcing her to arch her back and intensifying the pleasure for both of them.

They groaned simultaneously, losing themselves in the mutual pleasure. Patode's powerful movements grew more frenzied, driven by the sight and  sound of Namrata's intense moans. Finally, he withdrew his dick, releasing strings of his virile seed across her ass and back, marking her with his climax. Namrata's own orgasm rippled through her, her body trembling as they both came as their 3rd fuck session of the night ended. 

The lewd, primal scene inside the room was too much for Alok to handle. Outside the room in the shadows, his hand moved faster inside his boxers, mirroring the rhythm he had been watching. The intensity of the voyeuristic experience overwhelmed him, and he came hard, his legs wobbling as he struggled to maintain his balance. The force of his climax left him breathless and on the verge of fainting, the raw eroticism of what he had witnessed impronted itself into his memory. 

Slowly, Alok came to his senses, the aftershocks of his climax leaving him feeling drained and disoriented. He took a few deep breaths, trying to steady himself as he gathered his scattered thoughts. The intensity of what he had witnessed and experienced left him feeling both exhilarated and jealous. With trembling legs, he carefully made his way back down, ensuring he remained undetected.

Inside the room, Patode rolled off Namrata, turning onto his side and dbanging one of his large, muscular arms over her. They lay together in the sweat and cum-soaked sheets, their bodies glistening in the dim light. The aftermath of their passionate encounter left them both exhausted but satisfied as they both drifted off to sleep.

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Monday Morning 6:00 AM

Shipra woke up, her head pounding with a huge hangover. Slowly, she sat up in bed, rubbing her eyes as she tried to get her bearings. She winced at the brightness, her body felt heavy protesting every movement. With great effort, Shipra swung her legs over the side of the bed and stood up as she made her way to the washroom. Upon reaching the sink, she leaned heavily against it, staring at her reflection in the mirror. She turned on the tap and began splashing cold water on her face, hoping to wash away some of the haze. As she did, her eyes caught sight of the pink top she was wearing. The sight of it triggered a flood of memories. The scenes from the previous night flashed through her mind. Her eyes welled up with tears as the full weight of her actions settled over her. The series of bad decisions she took and the shameful things she had done filled her with regret.

She stared at the mirror recalling the events of the night struggling to comprehend what had made her behave so recklessly........

End of Chapter 9: The 9 inch Magic Wand: Part 1

[satankama]

Interesting developments....
Eager to know what happened to Shipra and how it will be revealed

[Luca Modric]

Excellent

[tweeny_fory]

wow one of the best updates bro... patode has proven an he got into namrata multiple times
so shipra is now only left

eagerly knowing what is going to happen....
so wil patode have his way or the kiddo alok will gett into his dreams?

[Hornytamilan23]

Hi bro how are you?

I like your title, so this is going to be a cat and mouse game between Shipra and patode. An emotional turbulence inside Shipra and patode carefully moving his coins. But I really enjoyed how you explained the sex scenes, and delaying an women's orgasm eventually made her to submission.

A lot to tell, now I am in a hurry, continue posting suraj

[Suraj76626]

wow one of the best updates bro... patode has proven an he got into namrata multiple times
so shipra is now only left

eagerly knowing what is going to happen....
so wil patode have his way or the  kiddo alok will gett into his dreams?

Thanks bro... Next update on Sunday.

[Suraj76626]

Hi bro how are you?

I like your title, so this is going to be a cat and mouse game between Shipra and patode. An emotional turbulence inside Shipra and patode carefully moving his coins. But I really enjoyed how you explained the sex scenes, and delaying an women's orgasm eventually made her to submission.

A lot to tell, now I am in a hurry, continue posting suraj

Great bro... Thanks

[Younus1999]

Well paced and one of the better stories I have read on this site.

[Hornytamilan23]

Hi suraj,
Narmata is a bitch, she is there to transform Shipra as a cock hungry women.

On the other side Shipra is righteous, so dont make her fall so easily. Let Shipra enjoy what all the naughty things happening around her.

Also this Alok, play with the similarity between the names. Let this Alok and patode play cat and mouse game with Shipra. Let's see who wins her.

In the mean time entertain us with narmata for next few updates. She has the potential to be a slut. Let patode use her to place his plan.

Shipras saga with her ex boy friend , a flashback can bring hotness to the story. As we want to see how shipra behaves when she is thoroughly fucked. Also this wont hurt the present timeline.

Make patode lend narmata to his colleagues or party leaders so he can gain monetary or political gains.

[LustyLeo]

Awesome

[Rangushki]

Nice update

[critic_honest]

Dear Author,

I stumbled upon your story by chance, and I must say, it looks quite promising. I've just finished Chapter 3, and while I'm unsure of what lies ahead in the subsequent chapters, I'm filled with curiosity and excitement to discover more.

One aspect I truly appreciate about your storytelling is your slow and steady pace. Rather than rushing into explicit scenes, you're focusing on building the narrative—a crucial foundation. Till now story sounds quite realistic.

I hope the gradual development continues, the way you're doing. However, I do have a few suggestions, if you're open to them:

1. While I understand this is your story, I've always believed that erotica with a realistic approach have the potential to become epics. Remember, you're writing an erotica, not some porn video script. Take your time, and let intimacy unfold organically, avoiding illogical leaps just to satisfy certain readers' demands to see Shipra getting fucked.

2. Many inexperienced authors resort to clichés like taking the excuse of wife cheating on her husband or indulging in sex with some other guy on the pretext of her husband not sexually competent or weak at sex or may be things have turned boring in bed. Please don't take the same path in your story. 
                                                  Its always more exciting when a couple is madly in love and are happy with each other, even in bed. Seducing a loyal, strong character woman is the ultimate challenge & fun rather than a woman who is easy  and can be manipulated to have sex just because she is desperate.

3. I would suggest to stop sharing your future ideas of the story witn readers. Like I went through one of your comments where you confirm that Shipra has some hidden slut in her and also revealing about Shipra's ex bf a bit. Why do this ? It would simply take away the charm because most of the readers will have set their minds that Shipra has slutty character hidden in her.
This is directly attacking on her character which you are still building up. Once her character is soiled, nothing would be left in the story.

4. It's essential to maintain Shipra's integrity as a character. Please don't turn Shipra in some betraying slut who starts opening her legs easily in future. Surely, there would be sex episodes of her but they should happen with logic which makes sense and sounds realistic. If Shipra gets fucked once, doesn't mean she would open her legs easily next time for anyone. Never turn her into a slut character. Her character should still remain the same i.e hard to get. Hopefully you wouldn't take the route of blackmailing either as it would simply kill the buzz.

5.  Looks like Toppo is looking for some revenge. Now its up to you if he actually gets the complete revenge or Shipra is smart enough to outwit him in his own game and never gets to lose her dignity completely even after getting fucked. Use ideas where its always hard for Toppo or anyone to actually get what he wants. Keep readers on the brink of excitement and never make it too obvious for readers. Always give room for some twists in the story.

Your story holds immense potential, and the current plot is captivating. Here's hoping it evolves into a substantial narrative, transcending the clichés often found in similar works.

Love

[xboard1986]

Amazing

[Pundit77]

The story behind the pink top swap.....eagerly waiting....

[Dark Horse]

Starting was stunned but when u included two young kids and with them by u made a erotic scene then your story is so cheap. I don't know which perspectively you did it but it's completely so ridiculous. I hope you will not includ that's kids with our's heroine. Because u created a strong woman character and now u are using her cheaply. It's disappointed matter. You had submissived her so early and what about her boss? Man, firstly you should be plotted your story properly and later then you will write it.

[Suraj76626]

Hi suraj,
Narmata is a bitch, she is there to transform Shipra as a cock hungry women.

On the other side Shipra is righteous, so dont make her fall so easily. Let Shipra enjoy what all the naughty things happening around her.

Also this Alok, play with the similarity between the names. Let this Alok and patode play cat and mouse game with Shipra. Let's see who wins her.

In the mean time entertain us with narmata for next few updates. She has the potential to be a slut. Let patode use her to place his plan.

Shipras saga with her ex boy friend , a flashback can bring hotness to the story. As we want to see how shipra behaves when she is thoroughly fucked. Also this wont hurt the present timeline.

Make patode lend narmata to his colleagues or party leaders so he can gain monetary or political gains.

Ok will keep your suggestions in mind.

[Suraj76626]

Dear Author,

I stumbled upon your story by chance, and I must say, it looks quite promising. I've just finished Chapter 3, and while I'm unsure of what lies ahead in the subsequent chapters, I'm filled with curiosity and excitement to discover more.

One aspect I truly appreciate about your storytelling is your slow and steady pace. Rather than rushing into explicit scenes, you're focusing on building the narrative—a crucial foundation. Till now story sounds quite realistic.

I hope the gradual development continues, the way you're doing. However, I do have a few suggestions, if you're open to them:

1. While I understand this is your story, I've always believed that erotica with a realistic approach have the potential to become epics. Remember, you're writing an erotica, not some porn video script. Take your time, and let intimacy unfold organically, avoiding illogical leaps just to satisfy certain readers' demands to see Shipra getting fucked.

2. Many inexperienced authors resort to clichés like taking the excuse of wife cheating on her husband or indulging in sex with some other guy on the pretext of her husband not sexually competent or weak at sex or may be things have turned boring in bed. Please don't take the same path in your story. 
                                                  Its always more exciting when a couple is madly in love and are happy with each other, even in bed. Seducing a loyal, strong character woman is the ultimate challenge & fun rather than a woman who is easy  and can be manipulated to have sex just because she is desperate.

3. I would suggest to stop sharing your future ideas of the story witn readers. Like I went through one of your comments where you confirm that Shipra has some hidden slut in her and also revealing about Shipra's ex bf a bit. Why do this ? It would simply take away the charm because most of the readers will have set their minds that Shipra has slutty character hidden in her.
This is directly attacking on her character which you are still building up. Once her character is soiled, nothing would be left in the story.

4. It's essential to maintain Shipra's integrity as a character. Please don't turn Shipra in some betraying slut who starts opening her legs easily in future. Surely, there would be sex episodes of her but they should happen with logic which makes sense and sounds realistic. If Shipra gets fucked once, doesn't mean she would open her legs easily next time for anyone. Never turn her into a slut character. Her character should still remain the same i.e hard to get. Hopefully you wouldn't take the route of blackmailing either as it would simply kill the buzz.

5.  Looks like Toppo is looking for some revenge. Now its up to you if he actually gets the complete revenge or Shipra is smart enough to outwit him in his own game and never gets to lose her dignity completely even after getting fucked. Use ideas where its always hard for Toppo or anyone to actually get what he wants. Keep readers on the brink of excitement and never make it too obvious for readers. Always give room for some twists in the story.

Your story holds immense potential, and the current plot is captivating. Here's hoping it evolves into a substantial narrative, transcending the clichés often found in similar works.

Love

Thanks for your detail comment bro.

I agree with your points bro and is trying to make the story as realistic as possible with logical explanation for every event. Will definitely keep you points in mind in the future. Cheers.