08-05-2024, 10:40 PM
They are not even having some kinky hot conversation. What interest would it create between both. Poor husband has the fate to read that too. :)
(08-05-2024, 07:57 PM)Hornytamilan23 Wrote: My conclusions are
1.What happened in balcony is a nightmare. Because in latest episode she is still discussing the matter of Vimal with her husband..
2. For past few weeks Sukanya and Vimal are chatting and nothing else happened physically.
3. Sukanya was taking Raghav's approval, hence she obliged for vimals requests.
4. Sukanya is not cheating yet but Vimal has lot of interest in making her, his girlfriend.
5. The chats settings of whatsapp are like it disappears after 7 days.
6. So in last 7 days nothing suspicious except that they are chatting 24/7. And she is sending him selfies.
7. She is limits, as she didn't respond for the text Darling. Hence the reply thanks for the help.
8. So again she was chatting the next morning, but you didn't reveal. But his demands did disturb Sukanya.
9. So what happened in chats and it how it all started are clear.
10. Now she has a developed sympathy or a genuine feel for him. Last para is very clear that she has feelings for Vimal.
Or am I missing something, can someone clear this?
(08-05-2024, 08:01 PM)Hornytamilan23 Wrote: And My bro, you are giving lots of ideas to flatter women. I can really make use of this idea. They say in tamil that Akka akka nu pakka panirvaan pola. Hope you understand the last line.
One thing your simple use of language, and as I am from south I can easily connect with the story.
(08-05-2024, 10:40 PM)Gajakidost Wrote: They are not even having some kinky hot conversation. What interest would it create between both. Poor husband has the fate to read that too. :)
(09-05-2024, 12:53 AM)redarc Wrote: wow what a great update, very well, smooth flow maintained, i wish vimal actually take her for a date as a girlfriend, and let sukanya feel as a real girlfriend, and why don't her husband goes for tours for 5-7 days or to some conference, and let sukanya get a real bf gf feel
(09-05-2024, 05:46 AM)srajat11rs Wrote: I hope this story contains contains threesome sex between sukanya Meena and the guy who fucks Meena, somehow Meena get sukanya involved in threesome and then guy fucks Meena also starts to fuck sukanya at her home when raghav is in office. Sukanya will get feelings for vimal and then they will first start with kissing then slowly leads to sex. And Vimal's father Rajeskar catch sukanya adultery and start blackmailing her for sex. Rajeskar also comes to sukanya home to fuck her and sometimes call her to his flat. And these guys also start taking sukanya at their place for nice fuck. But don't make sukanya looks like a slut, she will just enjoy the sex. And also the guy who fucks Meena will introduce sukanya to his friend and share sukanya with him. This will make the story very hot.
Author are you planning any of these??
(09-05-2024, 03:52 PM)rahulishere Wrote: I understand the line. And thank you bro. Please use the ideas if they'll help you. Please do let me know if you succeed.
(09-05-2024, 04:28 PM)Hornytamilan23 Wrote: Hi bro,
I wanted to discuss this in private.
But i prefer xossipy more than literotica because of this comment feature. We can easily share our thoughts with authors and fellow xossipians.
So I am going to share in comments section.
Do u really believe that you can write an Erotica, which can be really close to reality?
Can you ever justify adultery?
I really don't know how many husband's can digest the fact that her wife swallowed a strangers semen at a public place?
And do you really think this plot of married women being a college boys girlfriend is new to xossipy, read Nandhinii Aryans thread in tamil section?
You are taking this story at very slow rate, do you think at this rate will you be able to complete the story by any means?
What about the parents, siblings, family of Raghav and Sukanya?
Why they are not planning about childrens?
What about the sheer pressure you get from our society being not able to conceive?
And after all these debauchery, do you think couples cab lead a normal life there after?
What about the mental trauma they have carry to their grave?
When Sukanya is making all the moves? What happened to Raghav and meena angle?
After all Raghav is not a cuck, so why can't he have his fun?
Why Raghav is suddenly feeling guilty or jealous about what Sukanya is doing?
Isn't he wanted Sukanya to get bolder, so he can have fun? Isn't raghav a bad boy?
Why this sudden transformation in him?
One thing cheating is not that easy, in reality there will be lot if inner struggle, you can never be a caring wife while cheating, after years of relationship, partner will easily find out this.
Rahul will understand, purusana yum paakanum, mattavanukku pundaiyum virikaanum na epdi bro. Rusi Kand poonai summa vidadu nu solra mari, pundaiya virucha kadasi vara elattukum virikka vendiyadhu dhan.
And many more logical questions can be asked, if this happens in reality.
But if this is fiction or fantasy, then anything is possible.
As I have said this many times before, and I will say this again,
Keep the plot simple, write for the readers satisfaction, write fictional story with a pinch of reality, and you will be a hit.
Even Legends Such as Krish, mouni, seenufromdubai, failed to satisfy all sections of readers.
Thanks Rahul for keeping me hooked.