Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.
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(28-04-2024, 02:07 PM)Hornytamilan23 Wrote: If you can give 2 or 3 regular updates, with this kind of sensuality, I think people will get addicted to this thread.

The nuptial thread, that cool something something guy was also getting similar kind of response.

But he just suddenly vanished stating some bakwaas reasons.

Is he continuing that story in any other platform or site? Any idea xossipians?

That's the plan... i am committed to complete this story. I have hated other writers for leaving the readers hanging that's why i decided to write a story on my own.
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(28-04-2024, 10:23 PM)Suraj76626 Wrote: That's the plan... i am committed to complete this story. I have hated other writers for leaving the readers hanging that's why i decided to write a story on my own.
Thank you bro, All the best
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As usual, an amazing update.
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(28-04-2024, 07:12 PM)Suraj766 Wrote: she herself is a beauty at par with Shipra which readers will later learn.

As soon as Namrata got introduced in the story, i fell in love with her. I am happy to know that she will have some action in the story.
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Chapter 4: Echoes of Enmity: Unraveling the Past

A newly promoted Senior Manager, Alok took the charge of this Semi Urban branch falling under Pune Zonal office. Alok, aged 30, was well-educated, dedicated, and valued ethics and honesty highly. He is what some might call a bookworm or a nerd, excelling in studies. This expertise has helped him gain a deep understanding of the bank's policies and regulations, leading to his timely promotion.

He officially took over from Mr. Dhaval Toppo, who had completed his term at this branch and subsequently reassigned to another branch. Toppo's appearance was starkly at odds with the implication of his name, "The fair one." His complexion was dark, and his features bore the marks of a life less kind. He was a middle-aged man, with a stout and stocky frame that seemed to overflow with excess. His face, etched with lines of malice and deceit, betrayed the ugliness within. A receding hairline adorned his scalp, which he failed to conceal despite oiling. Yet, no amount of hair oil could mask the sinister intentions lurking behind his eyes, which gleamed with predatory desire. Toppo's looks were a reminder that people aren't always what they seem, especially when they hide dark intentions. Additionally, he boasted a prominent paunch, and his lips bore the telltale darkness wrought by years of smoking.

Toppo greeted Alok warmly, shaking his hand and introducing him to the rest of the staff. Over the next few days, he familiarized Alok with the branch's operations and condition. Toppo skillfully portrayed a rosy picture of his accomplishments, ensuring Alok was captivated by his flattering words.

Despite being intelligent, Alok lacked social awareness and struggled to read people accurately. Without thoroughly assessing the situation, he accepted the responsibility of the branch and relieved Mr. Toppo in the following days.

After several months had passed, Alok found himself confronted with a disconcerting realization: the extent of malpractices entrenched during Toppo's tenure had finally come to light. Toppo, over his span of three years at the helm, had orchestrated a systematic drain on the bank's internal funds, with lakhs of rupees surreptitiously siphoned away. Additionally, Toppo had wielded his authority to approve substantial loans for unworthy borrowers, all in exchange for substantial kickbacks and other financial incentives.

Toppo's unethical conduct extended beyond financial fraud, with rumors circulating about his alleged sexual assault  of the former officer, Aditi Sachdeva, prompting her resignation. Despite hearing these unsettling reports, Alok found it challenging to grasp the full extent of Toppo's depravity.

Alok's upbringing was characterized by strictness and overprotectiveness, with his parents sheltering him from the harsh realities of society. Raised in a cocoon of innocence, Alok's exposure to the world was limited to the sanitized narratives of cartoons and superhero movies, where good always triumphed over evil. As a result, he struggled to comprehend the true extent of malevolence lurking within individuals like Toppo. His naivety, nurtured by a childhood devoid of exposure to the darker aspects of human nature, left him unprepared to confront the deceit and corruption that Toppo embodied. Hence he didn't give the rumors much attention.

However, the grim truth surpassed even Alok's darkest suspicions. Toppo and his cronies orchestrated a sinister plot, meticulously ensnaring Aditi in their nefarious schemes. Through coercion and blackmail, they sexually exploited her, forcing her into submission. The situation escalated to unimaginable depths when Aditi became pregnant as a result of their unquenching lust, ultimately leading to her resignation in a desperate bid to escape the torment.

Nevertheless, despite his lack of worldly experience, Alok's upbringing ingrained within him a steadfast moral code. Hence upon discovering the malpractices, Alok directly confronted Mr. Toppo, urging him to confess or face the consequences of being reported to higher authorities. Toppo was astonished at how a newly promoted individual had uncovered his misdeeds. Underestimating Alok, Toppo's prior charm failed to sway him. Fearing the repercussions, Toppo implored Alok not to escalate the matter to higher-ups, promising to reimburse the entire sum within a few months. However, driven by his unwavering ethics and integrity, Alok remained steadfast in his decision to report the fraud. 

Realizing his unsuccessful attempts, Toppo resorted to a final gambit: he attempted to intimidate Alok. He reminded Alok of his failure to report the events upon joining and warned that if Alok reported him now, he would ensure Alok was also implicated in the fraud, potentially resulting in disciplinary action against him.

Despite the threat, Alok remained undeterred. He acknowledged the error of his earlier trust, lamenting his own naivety, but now, in the face of danger, he was resolute in his decision to report Toppo, regardless of the potential consequences.

After meticulously gathering all the evidence, Alok bravely reported the fraud, expecting a significant uproar in response. However, to his astonishment, the matter was dealt rather quietly by the management. This surprising turn of events was attributed to Toppo's influential connections within the union and his political affiliations.

Instead of facing severe consequences, Toppo was merely transferred to an administrative role under strict supervision, effectively stripping him of any financial authority and autonomy he once enjoyed at the branch. As he quietly returned all the money he had siphoned causing no monetary loss to bank, despite the gravity of his actions, Toppo managed to evade substantial punishment, receiving nothing more than a warning letter.

Contrastingly, Alok found himself on the receiving end of scrutiny. He was issued a cautionary letter, criticizing the delay in reporting the fraud and raising questions about his involvement in the incident. The stark contrast in treatment left Alok deeply disillusioned and disheartened, causing him to question his life choices. 

Reflecting on the injustice he had witnessed, he came to the realization that his talents were being squandered within the confines of the banking system. Determined to pursue a path where integrity and fairness held greater sway, Alok resolved to chase his long-held dream of becoming a civil servant. This pivotal moment marked the beginning of a new chapter in Alok's life, one driven by a fervent desire to enact positive change from within the corridors of power.

On the flip side, rather than expressing any remorse for his actions, Toppo was fuming with humiliation and rage at Alok's actions, Toppo sought solace in confiding his disgrace to his accomplice, Patode, the mastermind behind all their corrupt practices. In their clandestine meeting, Patode counseled Toppo to exercise caution and patience, advising him to lay low until the storm blew over. However, he assured Toppo that their thirst for revenge against Alok would be quenched in due time.

Toppo bided his time, patiently waiting for the opportune moment to exact his revenge. Gradually, he resumed his typical tactics of flattery and ingratiating himself to regain favor with the management. As a year passed, Toppo's patience wore thin, his eagerness for retribution growing with each passing day. However, his hopes were dashed when he learned of Alok's resignation from the bank to pursue a career in civil services. Toppo felt a sharp pang of defeat as he realized that his chance for revenge had slipped through his fingers.

Now, Toppo shifted his focus to advancing his own interests. Leveraging his political connections and the extensive bootlicking he had engaged in over the past year, he successfully secured a promotion that propelled him to greater heights within the bank's hierarchy. Empowered by this newfound authority, Toppo orchestrated his resurgence, strategically positioning himself as the head of Human Resources.

With his new position of power and the unwitting assistance of his accomplice, Patode, the mastermind behind the scenes, Toppo initiated a campaign of exploitation, leveraging his position to target young female employees. Under the facade of professionalism, he exploited his power, using promises of desirable job placements and early promotions to prey upon certain

compliant women. In other cases where Coercion was necessary, he resorted to threats of termination or disciplinary actions, leveraging any lapses made by them during the discharge of their duties to intimidate them into submission.

His machinations were subtle, his movements calculated to avoid detection. Not a whisper of scandal tainted his reputation, nor did rumors dare to speak of his depraved intentions. In the shadows of the bank's corridors, Toppo lurked, a silent predator, his thirst for power and pleasure driving him ever forward.

Toppo and Patode reveled in the depraved satisfaction of corrupting and tarnishing the innocence of their targets. Patode, in particular, derived a perverse pleasure in mirclessly fucking loyal married women, savoring the contrast between their initial reluctance and their eventual enthusiastic involvement. The sound of their loud carnal moans of pleasure along with the sight of their conflicting expression - a mixture both guilt and satisfaction as he brought them waves of orgasm one after the other through his 9 inch fat cock only fueled his intense sexual gratification.

As Toppo savored the privileges of his recent promotion, thoughts of revenge against Alok drifted from his mind. However, fate intervened one fateful day when a roster of incoming transfers crossed his desk. While scanning the employees' biodata with a predatory gaze and malicious intent, he stumbled upon Shipra's information. Just as he was about to shift his attention to another employee, his keen eyes landed on the husband's name, ALOK ANAND. Gradually, he grasped the opportunity that fate had presented him. A malevolent grin crept across Toppo's face as he savored the delicious irony of the moment. This was no mere coincidence; it was a sign—a sign that his long-awaited opportunity for retribution had finally arrived. He phoned his secretary, asking not to be disturbed, and promptly turned on his PC. As he browsed the internet in search of Shipra's social media accounts, he began to experience an unusual sexual arousal in his groin. Given his expertise in online sleuthing, it didn't take long to find her on Facebook and Instagram. He was pleased to discover that her Facebook page was not private, unlike her Instagram handle.

As he navigated through Shipra's profile, he found himself entranced by her stunning beauty, which seemed to transcend the digital screen. Her features were exquisite, her smile captivating, her skin radiant and her allure undeniable. It was as if she possessed a magnetic pull that drew him in deeper with each passing moment. With each photo he examined, he couldn't help but marvel at her perfection. From glamorous selfies to candid snapshots, every image showcased her radiant charm and undeniable appeal. His vengeful emotions were eclipsed by a consuming jealousy directed at Alok, who had the privilege of being married to such a seductive goddess, readily available for his desires whenever he pleased. She was not only the most exquisite woman he had ever seen, but she also had the most sensual figure he had ever laid eyes on.  He couldn't help but linger over each picture, his gaze hungry as he zoomed in on every inch of her physical form, mentally undressing her with a lascivious intensity.

He couldn't help but feel a surge of gratitude towards fate. It has given him the best possible way to extract revenge on Alok he could imagine, by tarnishing his loyal wife's chastity and wrecking their marriage. 

In the following days, under Patode's guidance, he meticulously gathered every shred of information on Shipra. Discovering that Shipra had applied for a promotion and successfully passed the exam, he saw a golden opportunity to ensnare her. Employing all his resources and connections, he succeeded in reclassification of Shipra's former branch, shifting its status from rural to urban. This strategic move allowed him to delay Shipra's promotion by approximately six months on the ground of non completion of rural service. Fully aware of Alok's unemployment and their heavy financial burdens, he understood the immense significance of this promotion to them.

With their intricate plan set in motion and every detail accounted for, they waited with bated breath for the moment when their devious machinations would come to fruition. Little did Alok and Shipra suspect the looming threat that would soon engulf their lives, forever altering the course of their destiny.

End of Chapter 4: Echoes of Enmity: Unraveling the Past  thanks
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First thought was "ASUSUAL" "NOTHING NEW" "SCRIPT OF INDIAN MOVIE ABOUT VILLIAN" " ANY ONE COULD HAVE GUESSED "

I agree that, for the flow of the story this chapter is important. As it establishes the conflict between the trio and the motive behind toppos actions.

But really amazed about your use of language and carefully selected words which transcends the exact emotions.

If this is your original work, then kudos. Waiting to see how you take this story forward.

A hint of surprise will be good.
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what a best way to write an erotica...
each and every episode opens up about the characters in detailed
the relationship, the motive, and what to expect

loved it bro

kepp rocking

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(30-04-2024, 11:01 AM)Hornytamilan23 Wrote: First thought was "ASUSUAL" "NOTHING NEW" "SCRIPT OF INDIAN MOVIE ABOUT VILLIAN" " ANY ONE COULD HAVE GUESSED "

I agree that, for the flow of the story this chapter is important. As it establishes the conflict between the trio and the motive behind toppos actions.

But really amazed about your use of language and carefully selected words which transcends the exact emotions.

If this is your original work, then kudos. Waiting to see how you take this story forward.

A hint of surprise will be good.

Thanks man, the story is 100% original, some characters are inspired by real life people.
I am trying to add some thrills and surprises in the upcoming chapters.
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(30-04-2024, 07:41 PM)Suraj76626 Wrote: Thanks man, the story is 100% original, some characters are inspired by real life people.
I am trying to add some thrills and surprises in the upcoming chapters.

I appreciate your efforts behind every update. Eagerly waiting for the next bro.
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Great start and dope narration.Waiting for update
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(02-05-2024, 09:27 AM)Younus1999 Wrote: Great start and dope narration.Waiting for update

Next update on sunday almost finished.
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Chapter 5: The transfer.

Perched atop the wooden desk, Shipra reclines her body gracefully leaning back at a tantalizing angle of 60 degrees. With the upper body supported by her elbows, she breathes deeply, her chest rising and falling with each labored breath. The scattered files and office supplies pushed to the side bear witness to the urgency of making space for her. Beads of sweat glisten on her firm, succulent breasts, threatening to escape her disheveled bra. Her kurti torn from the helm lay in tatters along with her crumpled skirt pooled at the ground  near the desk. The fabric, once smooth and elegant, now bears the telltale marks of being hastily discarded. Its folds and creases betraying the hurriedness of its descent. Her eyes filled with anticipation were looking downwards fixated on the thick fat cock dangling between her thies approching her twitching fanny. Her face etched with uncontrolled and relentless craving, devoid of any hint of remorse or inhibition, as if driven by an insatiable lust that consumed her entirely. Biting her lower lips she spread her long, silky legs wide, inviting the impending pleasure.

Toppo triumphantly remarked," I knew you'd take me up on my offer soon enough. I have a knack for recognising a bitch in heat when i see one."Guiding his black cock with his left hand, he slid it vertically across the slit of her pussy, over the flimsy fabric of her pink panties. The desk was the perfect height for him to thrust into her.

"But your eagerness to spread your legs for me was unexpected. Judging by the sizeable wet patch on your panties just by the mere thought of getting your faithful married pussy rammed by this thick meat i can surely tell that Alok is a wimp incapable of satisfying you in bed. Am i right, Shipra? He playfully teased her while his right hand carassed her navel, slowly and sensually making his movement upwards as he grabbed her bra tugging it downward freeing her swollen breasts struggling for freedom. Her erect, light brown nipples, screaming out for attention. 

Shipra consumed in lust failed to answer Toppo.  Her mouth fell agape, her lips forming a perfect circle as she felt his cock sliding between her thies over her wet love hole and his hand playing with her over sensitive boobs. She clutched her fist, her body moved forward involuntarily, as she closed her eyes surrendering to the bliss of physical pleasure, a soft moan left her lips.

Toppo laughed and said," I'll take that as an Yes." He smirked as he with deliberate slowlness traced the edge of her small panties, pulling the soft fabric to the side using his right hand revealing her clean shaved pussy glistening with wetness forcing her thies to spread even wider.

Toppo commented "What a beautiful love hole you have, the best cunt i have ever seen." As he rubbed his cock on her bare pussy directly.

"Hmmmm....Aaaahhhhhh... Oh God..Fuck!!!!" Shipra ,unable to control the shocks of ecstasy reaching down her core, let out a loud moan,the sound echoing throughout the cabin as her tender pussy lips were parted by the throbing hard cock.

"Pleaseeeeee..... " she cried for more as she lifted her soft plum ass off the desk. 

"What a slutty bitch, Alok really doesn't know what a whore her prim and proper wife is.", Toppo insulted her further. He stopped rubbing his cock and placed it at her sex ready to impale her. His hand gripping her curvaceous hips tightly. The foreskin peeled back as he pushed the bulbous purple head of his cock into her sloppy wet cunt.

Shipra let out a breathy moan, the sound of pure desperation and need. She clawed at the wooden desk beneath her as she felt Toppo's thick cock stretching her walls, inch by glorious inch. "Oh fuck, yes!" Shipra gasped. "Give it to me! Fill me up with that big, black cock!"

Suddenly the door of his cabin flung open, standing there was Alok, his face contorted with rage and humiliation as he shouted..... "Shipraaaa!!!"

"Shipraaaa!!!"

"Shipra"

"Shipra, wake up dear" as Alok slowly and gently careessed her head.

Shipra snapped back to reality from the vivid and erotic dream slowly regaining her senses. She struggled to comprehend that it was merely a dream, feeling overwhelming embarrassment and guilt as she found Alok, her husband, standing before her.Her eyes teared up unable to draw a line between dream and reality. She immediately hugged Alok in a tight embrace trying to get back to the present moment.

Alok was suprised by her sudden reaction upon waking, he enquired her in confusion, "What's wrong, Shipra? Were you having a nightmare?"

Shipra remained silent for a moment, consoling herself that it was just a dream,  she reassured herself that such a thing could never come to pass. Finally, she meekly responded, "Yes, Alok, I had a nightmare," forcing a smile.

Alok relaxed a little, "Do you want to talk about it?" he asked gently, reaching out to hold her hand.

"May be later, I am okay now with you by my side", she whispered softly as she leaned on his shoulder. 

"Now go get freshen up, i have made a delicious breakfast for you", Alok kissed her forehead as he excitedly conveyed his accomplishment trying to cheer her up.

Shipra nodded and rose making her way to the bathroom. She splashed cold water on her face, hoping to wash away the remnants of the haunting images that still flickered in her mind. She couldn't shake off the disturbing thoughts that had been implanted in her mind, and she cursed Namrata for inadvertently instilling such perverse images in her subconscious. 

Shipra took the next few days off from work in order to spend some quality time with Alok and Aarav, before facing the uncertainty of her upcoming transfer. It was needed to take her mind off from the nightmare she had experienced a few nights prior and more importantly to reclaim a semblance of the simplicity she craved amidst all the turmoil not only just in the last few days but also in her life in general. Last 3 years of her life had been a continuous struggle. She failed to remember when was the last time she had such a pleasure of doing nothing. Reflecting on her life she was amazed how unexpected things have turned up.

Shipra had always admired Alok's ambition, his drive to excel in everything he did. However, over the past three years, that ambition had taken a toll on their relationship. Alok's relentless pursuit of success overshadowed Shipra's desire for a simple, content life. Despite Shipra's unwillingness, Alok pushed her to accept promotions and progress in her career, disregarding her desire for spending more time with their son and himself, knowing that the added responsibilities which come with the promotion might not allow for it. Then there was the incident with Toppo which made Alok increasingly frustrated with his job, he made the unilateral decision to resign, manipulating Shipra into thinking that it was their combined decision but infact it was shame of getting a caution letter and a blot on his impeccable career that made him take this decision, concealing the truth to maintain his perfect image in her eyes. Shipra unwillingly accepted all these decisions imposed on her and many more believing in her husband. As a women she was regularly torn between her family's obligations and career causing her life a daily struggle. Her feelings, her needs both physical and emotional, her mental peace all sidelined as she march forward on a path for achieving an ideal,flawless and materially abundance life envisioned by Alok.

Shipra herself was never really an ambitious girl. Her heart found contentment in life's simple pleasures, far away from the pleasures of materialism. Except from the time in her past relationship with Viresh, which left her feeling betrayed and almost stripped of her dignity, she never really exhibited such yearnings to act solely on her personal desires not giving a fuck about rules of society that bound women. Perhaps it was because of this bad experience that led her to devote herself to Alok without giving preference to her own desires and wishes. 

And just like that the week passed filled with tranquility and love totally devoid of any future worries. Shipra sat at the dining table, basking in the warmth of a peaceful week spent with her family. It had been a rare moment of calmness midst the recent choas. Just then a Watsapp notification pinged on her phone. Someone had shared the transfer list in one of the office group. Shipra with a fearfull curiosity went through the list searching for her Name and there it was

Shipra Sharma - Senior Manger- transferred to Kasegoan branch.

Shipra was disappointed to learn that the Kasegoan branch was at a distance of about 300 km from Pune where they presently reside which meant she had to leave Alok and Aarav that too for 6 months. Alok sensing her disappointment consoled her reminding how important this promotion was for them and it was only a matter of 6 months. Shipra gave a mild smile and started gathering more information about the branch, it's business and area. 

Kasegaon was a small village with mere basic facilities which fell under Amruj district which itself was a backward area. The branch was underperforming due to lack of business opportunities in the area and was running on a skeleton staff of 1 clerk, 1 officer, 1 field officer and the manager. The branch had garnered a reputation for underperformance, with dismal quarterly reports painting a bleak picture of its prospects. Shipra realised that this branch is going to be a headache but nothing she could not handle. And with that she started her preparation to take charge at the branch but before that she had to share the news with her BFF. Without wasting a moment, she reached out to Namrata, her closest friend and confidante. 

"Hey,i got my transfer order today", Shipra told Namrata.

"So, you'll not be taking Toppo's offer after all," Namarata joked.

"Don't remind me of that Namarata," Shipra said sternly and continued,"I'll be leaving tomorrow, come meet me at the station."

"I have an idea, Shipra! Why don't I tag along? I'm in between jobs, and I'll be working from home anyway. Plus, I've never experienced village life. It could be fun! What do you think? You will also have a company, just like old times." Namrata suggested excitedly.

"What's the catch? That's not like you. Are you avoiding your boyfriend or something? Spill the beans," Shipra prodded.

"It's nothing like that yaar, i just wanted to apologise for our last meeting, i shouldn't have said all those thing, it's my way of saying sorry, And hey, we won't be stuck there permanently; we'll still be around on weekends," Namrata explained apologetically.

"Apology accepted, no backsies now!!!, i'll see you at the station tomorrow" Shipra said in excitement.

"What's all this excitement about," enquired Alok. 

"Namarata is coming with me tomorrow, she'll help me settle there," Shipra explained.

"Is that a good idea Shipra, given it is a backward and conservative region, unlike Pune," said Alok delicately pointing out his reservations about Namrata and her modern thinking and ways.

"Alok, i know you don't like her, but i'll be needing someone, and since you cannot leave your preparation and come with me, i think it will be quite helpful to me if she comes," said Shipra a little frustrated at Alok.

Alok didn't like Namrata one bit. He had always despised her free spirit, defiant nature and most all that her closeness to Shipra. From Alok's perspective, Namrata's influence on Shipra was troubling. In his view, she always tried to convince Shipra in  following her heart and pursuing personal desires contradicting his own beliefs, which emphasized caution, practicality, and adherence to societal norms.

"Fine, just be careful around her," he cautioned, conceding to Shipra's decision.

End of Chapter 5: The transfer. thanks
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#33
A complete package... I think you read the pulse of readers.

Kindly Continue brother
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#34
wow, now with namrata near her, she can be pushed to enjoy her life for 6 months
wondering how the village is going to invite her

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#35
The story is getting better. But extramarital relations with Shipra should only be with a man. Whoever comes to Shipra and fucks her like a whore will destroy the realism of the story, which the writer should be careful about. Many good stories have become unreal because of this.
Best of all, since Shipra is transferring to a rural area, it is better if she has an affair with a lower class person in that rural area. Shipra can build another family behind her husband there. She can give birth to more children in rural family. She is only thirty-three years old. Shipra will give birth to many children if she gets a good strong majdoor husband.
But I know you will end up disappointing too like many writers by making Shipra a whore of many men. That's the problem with xossipy's authors. They can't write adultery erotica stories, they write only whore stories.
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Two is better than one as Namrata is going to join Shipra in the forced infidelity in the village! 
Amazingly crafted story! Hats off to the author of the story. The author is correctly depicting the real-life corporate scenarios along with rural exploitations. The flow of erotica would be absolutely real life when Shipra would be blackmailed and forced to be a whore of the rural branch officers and rural head-strong politicians of the gram panchayat. Namrata would also be dragged into this by blackmail. 
Eagerly looking forward to seeing both Shipra and Namrata being sexually used together on the same bed by the low-class rural men and later impregnated by those rural low-class people. 
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Eventually, Shipra's 'deja vu' of sexual intercourse with Toppo would become true. It would be interesting to see how, later,  Toppo would sexually exploit Shipra to pleasure Toppo's bosses to climb the corporate ladder. 
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It would also be interesting to see how free-minded Namrata would regret her decision to accompany Shipra to be blackmailed to accept forced sex in the village and how Shipra handles the conflicting emotions of having the pleasure of forced sex with multiple low-class village men and then city people alongside her high moral values.
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It is going to be one of the best erotica stories of all time.
All the best to the author. Carry on the awesome writing.
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#37
Nice update bro
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(04-05-2024, 01:28 AM)Henry Wrote: The story is getting better. But extramarital relations with Shipra should only be with a man. Whoever comes to Shipra and fucks her like a whore will destroy the realism of the story, which the writer should be careful about.  Many good stories have become unreal because of this.  
Best of all, since Shipra is transferring to a rural area, it is better if she has an affair with a lower class person in that rural area.  Shipra can build another family behind her husband there. She can give birth to more children in rural family.  She is only thirty-three years old.  Shipra will give birth to many children if she gets a good strong majdoor husband.
But I know you will end up disappointing too like many writers by making Shipra a whore of many men. That's the problem with xossipy's authors. They can't write adultery erotica stories, they write only whore stories.

Arey Lord henry apni..boss , forum er ekjon nami lekhok hoye apni golpotir prosongsa krchen , darun.. , bes valo likchen suraj , enake support korai uchit
& Yes Shipra should not turn into a cheap slut for multiple men , we agree..
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(04-05-2024, 01:28 AM)Henry Wrote: The story is getting better. But extramarital relations with Shipra should only be with a man. Whoever comes to Shipra and fucks her like a whore will destroy the realism of the story, which the writer should be careful about.  Many good stories have become unreal because of this.  
Best of all, since Shipra is transferring to a rural area, it is better if she has an affair with a lower class person in that rural area.  Shipra can build another family behind her husband there. She can give birth to more children in rural family.  She is only thirty-three years old.  Shipra will give birth to many children if she gets a good strong majdoor husband.
But I know you will end up disappointing too like many writers by making Shipra a whore of many men. That's the problem with xossipy's authors. They can't write adultery erotica stories, they write only whore stories.

Thanks man, I hear you.
I have been on this platform for a long time as a reader and have seen many a good stories getting ruined solely because they turn their main protagonist into a whore. I am not inclined on doing so. My story is about Shipra's ordeal, her feelings and emotions, not just chapter after chapter of mindless sex just for the readers to shag and forget. I cannot assure if there will be only a single person in Shipra's life but I will try not to make her a slutty character like other stories.
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(04-05-2024, 02:25 AM)neelchaand Wrote: Two is better than one as Namrata is going to join Shipra in the forced infidelity in the village! 
Amazingly crafted story! Hats off to the author of the story. The author is correctly depicting the real-life corporate scenarios along with rural exploitations. The flow of erotica would be absolutely real life when Shipra would be blackmailed and forced to be a whore of the rural branch officers and rural head-strong politicians of the gram panchayat. Namrata would also be dragged into this by blackmail. 
Eagerly looking forward to seeing both Shipra and Namrata being sexually used together on the same bed by the low-class rural men and later impregnated by those rural low-class people. 
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Eventually, Shipra's 'deja vu' of sexual intercourse with Toppo would become true. It would be interesting to see how, later,  Toppo would sexually exploit Shipra to pleasure Toppo's bosses to climb the corporate ladder. 
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It would also be interesting to see how free-minded Namrata would regret her decision to accompany Shipra to be blackmailed to accept forced sex in the village and how Shipra handles the conflicting emotions of having the pleasure of forced sex with multiple low-class village men and then city people alongside her high moral values.
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It is going to be one of the best erotica stories of all time.
All the best to the author. Carry on the awesome writing.

Thanks bro, will try to make it one of the best.. cheers
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